| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.548 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1350 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "chaotic" | | 6 | "sanctuary" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "tenderness" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "synchronized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1343 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 929 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | London | 2 | | Lucien | 8 | | Moreau | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Avaros | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 0.8 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a weight pressing her into th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1343 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 40.7 | | std | 23.2 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 80 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 69 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 10 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes swept over him, noting the familiar, jarring contrast of his gaze—one amber, one black." | | 1 | "She remembered the last time she had seen him—the rain-slicked pavement of a different street, the taste of salt and copper, and the devastating silence that had followed his decision to prioritize the secrets of the underworld over the chaos of her life." | | 2 | "Eva’s flat was a chaotic sanctuary; every surface was crowded with stacks of ancient scrolls, leather-bound books, and frantic research notes." | | 3 | "He stepped closer, invading her personal space with a scent that reminded her of sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and something metallic—the scent of Avaros." | | 4 | "He wasn't the untouchable fixer right now; he was just a man—half-demon or not—who looked utterly lost." | | 5 | "The kiss was not gentle; it was a collision of months of resentment and desperation." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 941 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.026567481402763018 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011689691817215728 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 17.22 | | std | 10.39 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 48 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 43.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.34615384615384615 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she found Lucien Moreau." |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 33.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She expected the hallway of" | | 1 | "He looked as though he" | | 2 | "He wore a tailored charcoal" | | 3 | "He leaned slightly on an" | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 5 | "she said, her voice flatter" | | 6 | "His accent was a smooth," | | 7 | "He didn't smile, but the" | | 8 | "She didn't step back to" | | 9 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 10 | "She remembered the last time" | | 11 | "He had tried to protect" | | 12 | "He turned to look at" | | 13 | "He stepped closer, invading her" | | 14 | "he countered, his voice dropping" | | 15 | "He moved with a sudden," | | 16 | "He didn't touch her, but" | | 17 | "He was taller than her," | | 18 | "he said, his voice trembling" | | 19 | "She could see the fine" |
| | ratio | 0.466 | |
| 11.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled the heavy door" | | 1 | "She expected the hallway of" | | 2 | "He looked as though he" | | 3 | "He wore a tailored charcoal" | | 4 | "He leaned slightly on an" | | 5 | "Rory froze, her hand still" | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes swept" | | 7 | "The sight of him sent" | | 8 | "she said, her voice flatter" | | 9 | "His accent was a smooth," | | 10 | "He didn't smile, but the" | | 11 | "She didn't step back to" | | 12 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 13 | "Rory felt the crescent-shaped scar" | | 14 | "She remembered the last time" | | 15 | "He had tried to protect" | | 16 | "Rory said, though she finally" | | 17 | "Lucien entered the flat with" | | 18 | "Eva’s flat was a chaotic" | | 19 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, let" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled the heavy door open, the three deadbolts clicking back in a sequence that had become her nightly ritual." | | 1 | "He looked as though he had stepped straight out of a high-fashion editorial and accidentally wandered into a tenement building." | | 2 | "He wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit his lean frame with mathematical precision, and his platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a single strand out of p…" | | 3 | "She remembered the last time she had seen him—the rain-slicked pavement of a different street, the taste of salt and copper, and the devastating silence that ha…" | | 4 | "He stepped closer, invading her personal space with a scent that reminded her of sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and something metallic—the scent of Avaros." | | 5 | "Rory wound her fingers into the platinum blond hair at the nape of his neck, pulling him closer, as if she could merge their two broken histories into something…" | | 6 | "Lucien groaned softly, his hand leaving the counter to cup her jaw, his thumb brushing against her cheek with a tenderness that contradicted the intensity of th…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he countered, his voice dropping an octave" | | 1 | "Rory snapped, her cool-headedness fracturing" | | 2 | "he said, his voice trembling with a suppressed emotion" | | 3 | "he replied, a ghost of a smile finally touching his lips" | | 4 | "Lucien murmured, his amber eye shimmering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.903 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.387 | |