| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.086 | | leniency | 0.171 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "desire" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "looming" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "simmering" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "charm" | | 17 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1201 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 873 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Lucien | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 21.45 | | std | 19.02 | | cv | 0.887 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 81 | | 38 | 45 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 76 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a void of black—locking onto hers." | | 1 | "Three years had passed since the night they had torn their shared world apart—a collision of secrets and half-truths that had left her breathless and broken in a rain-slicked alley." | | 2 | "He stepped closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something metallic—like ozone before a storm—filling her lungs." | | 3 | "It wasn't a gentle reunion; it was a collision." | | 4 | "The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the smell of curry, the looming threat of the supernatural underworld—ceased to exist." | | 5 | "The door to the bedroom didn't click shut; it slammed, echoing through the small flat and shaking the remaining books from the shelves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 883 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.01812004530011325 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007927519818799546 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 11.77 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 41.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.29411764705882354 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 13.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked as though he" | | 1 | "His platinum blond hair caught" | | 2 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 3 | "Her hand stayed clamped on" | | 4 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 5 | "He moved past her into" | | 6 | "He paused to glance at" | | 7 | "She turned to face him," | | 8 | "He circled the small living" | | 9 | "He stopped beside a table" | | 10 | "His jaw tightened, a small" | | 11 | "He stepped closer, the scent" | | 12 | "He reached out." | | 13 | "His fingers didn't touch her," | | 14 | "He gripped the ivory handle" | | 15 | "He laughed, a dry, mirthless" | | 16 | "She could see the gold" | | 17 | "He didn't kiss her immediately." | | 18 | "He pressed his forehead against" | | 19 | "His mouth crashed against hers." |
| | ratio | 0.515 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory yanked the third deadbolt" | | 1 | "The door swung inward, letting" | | 2 | "Lucien stood in the hallway." | | 3 | "He looked as though he" | | 4 | "His platinum blond hair caught" | | 5 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 6 | "Her hand stayed clamped on" | | 7 | "Lucien stepped forward, invading her" | | 8 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 9 | "He moved past her into" | | 10 | "He paused to glance at" | | 11 | "Rory slammed the door shut." | | 12 | "The vibration rattled a shelf" | | 13 | "She turned to face him," | | 14 | "He circled the small living" | | 15 | "He stopped beside a table" | | 16 | "Rory crossed her arms, her" | | 17 | "The skin there prickled." | | 18 | "The mask of the polished" | | 19 | "His jaw tightened, a small" |
| | ratio | 0.939 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked as though he had stepped straight out of a luxury catalogue, draped in a charcoal suit that clung to his shoulders with mathematical precision." | | 1 | "Three years had passed since the night they had torn their shared world apart—a collision of secrets and half-truths that had left her breathless and broken in …" | | 2 | "The attraction was a physical weight, a gravity that pulled at her center, dragging her toward the very man who knew exactly how to dismantle her." | | 3 | "Rory let out a sharp gasp, her hands instinctively flying up to his chest, clutching the expensive fabric of his suit." | | 4 | "Rory groaned into the kiss, her fingers digging into his shoulders, pulling him closer until there was no air left between them." | | 5 | "He shifted his grip, his large hands sliding under her shirt, his palms searing her skin." | | 6 | "He obeyed, his tongue tracing the line of her lip before deepening the kiss." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, her teeth grazing his skin" | | 1 | "he murmured, his voice a low vibration that echoed in her chest" |
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| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.086 | | leniency | 0.171 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |