Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Z0MY326ANT53F04N7JBDN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 36s
Cost:
$0.000731
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory yanked the third deadbolt back with a metallic snap. The door swung inward, letting in a draft of humid London air and the scent of fried garlic from the curry house downstairs. Lucien stood in the hallway. He looked as though he had stepped straight out of a luxury catalogue, draped in a charcoal suit that clung to his shoulders with mathematical precision. His platinum blond hair caught the dim light of the corridor, slicked back without a single strand out of place. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a void of black—locking onto hers. Rory froze. Her hand stayed clamped on the doorknob, her knuckles white. "The locks on this building are an insult to the profession of security, Aurora." "You aren't supposed to be here." Lucien stepped forward, invading her space before she could retreat. He didn't wait for an invitation. He moved past her into the cramped flat, his presence instantly shrinking the room. He paused to glance at Ptolemy, the tabby cat, who hissed from the top of a stack of ancient scrolls. "Still living in a library of chaos, I see." Rory slammed the door shut. The vibration rattled a shelf of research notes, sending a flurry of papers drifting toward the floor. She turned to face him, her chest heaving. "Eva didn't mention you were back in the city." "Eva doesn't tell me everything. Nor do you." He circled the small living area, the tip of his cane tapping a rhythmic beat against the hardwood. He stopped beside a table cluttered with tea stains and open textbooks, his amber eye scanning her face with a clinical intensity. "You look tired. The delivery job suits your spirit, perhaps, but not your complexion." "Get out, Lucien." "Now, where is the hospitality? I traveled from Marseille." Rory crossed her arms, her left wrist brushing against the crescent-shaped scar. The skin there prickled. Three years had passed since the night they had torn their shared world apart—a collision of secrets and half-truths that had left her breathless and broken in a rain-slicked alley. "I don't have tea for you. I don't have a guest room. I have a very short fuse and a mounting desire to push you back into the hall." Lucien paused. The mask of the polished fixer slipped for a fraction of a second. His jaw tightened, a small muscle leaping in his cheek. He stepped closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something metallic—like ozone before a storm—filling her lungs. "You blocked my calls for thirty-six months." "I did what I had to do to breathe again." "And yet, here we are. Both of us still gasping." He reached out. His fingers didn't touch her, but the heat radiating from his palm brushed her skin. Rory didn't move. She couldn't. The attraction was a physical weight, a gravity that pulled at her center, dragging her toward the very man who knew exactly how to dismantle her. "Why now?" "Information is a currency, Aurora. And I found something you cannot afford to ignore." "I stopped caring about your 'currencies' the moment you lied about the Avaros contract." Lucien's expression hardened. He gripped the ivory handle of his cane so tightly his knuckles turned grey. "I lied to keep you from becoming a footnote in a demon's ledger." "You decided for me. You played the protector while you were playing the broker." He laughed, a dry, mirthless sound. "You always did prefer the moral high ground. It provides a lovely view of the wreckage." Rory stepped into his space, her forehead nearly touching his chin. She could see the gold flecks in his amber eye, the predatory stillness of the black one. "I didn't want the high ground. I wanted you to be honest." "Honesty is a luxury for humans. I am only half." The tension snapped. Lucien dropped his cane. The ivory handle clattered against the floor, forgotten, as he grabbed her waist and hauled her against him. Rory let out a sharp gasp, her hands instinctively flying up to his chest, clutching the expensive fabric of his suit. He didn't kiss her immediately. He pressed his forehead against hers, his breath hot and ragged. "I spent a year searching for this flat," he whispered. "A year imagining if you'd changed the locks." "I changed three of them." "And yet you opened the door." His mouth crashed against hers. It wasn't a gentle reunion; it was a collision. It tasted of desperation and old grudges. Rory groaned into the kiss, her fingers digging into his shoulders, pulling him closer until there was no air left between them. The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the smell of curry, the looming threat of the supernatural underworld—ceased to exist. There was only the friction of his lips and the frantic beat of her heart against her ribs. Lucien backed her up, his movements fluid and urgent. He hit the edge of the table, sending a stack of books tumbling. Neither of them noticed. He lifted her, her legs wrapping around his waist, her back pressing against the cool plaster of the wall. "I hate you," she breathed against his neck, her teeth grazing his skin. "I know," he murmured, his voice a low vibration that echoed in her chest. "Tell me again while I remind you why you can't stay away." He shifted his grip, his large hands sliding under her shirt, his palms searing her skin. Rory arched her back, a shiver racing down her spine. The anger was still there, a simmering coal in her gut, but the desire was a wildfire, consuming everything in its path. He pulled back just an inch, his eyes searching hers. The amber one glowed with an intensity that bordered on hunger. "If I stay the night, I am not leaving until we settle this." "Settle what?" "The silence. The gaps in the story. The way you look at me like I'm a ghost." Rory gripped the back of his neck, pulling him back down. "Shut up and kiss me, Lucien." He obeyed, his tongue tracing the line of her lip before deepening the kiss. He tasted of salt and longing. As he pressed her harder against the wall, Rory felt the familiar, dangerous thrill of falling. She knew this was a mistake. She knew he was a fixer who dealt in lies and shadows. But as his hand slid lower, molding her to him, she decided that for one night, she didn't care about the truth. He broke the kiss to trail his lips down her jawline, his voice a rough velvet. "You still smell like vanilla and old paper." "And you still think you can charm your way into everything." "Is it working?" Rory pulled his head back up to look at him. A small, dangerous smile touched her lips. "Terribly." He groaned, a sound of pure surrender, and swept her off her feet, carrying her toward the bedroom while the tabby cat watched them with narrow, judgmental eyes. The door to the bedroom didn't click shut; it slammed, echoing through the small flat and shaking the remaining books from the shelves.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1207
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count2
3
word"desire"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"simmering"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"velvet"
count1
16
word"charm"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"scanning"
2"intensity"
3"desire"
4"weight"
5"tension"
6"looming"
7"echoed"
8"searing"
9"racing"
10"down her spine"
11"simmering"
12"silence"
13"tracing"
14"familiar"
15"velvet"
16"charm"
17"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount873
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Ptolemy1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory12
Lucien6
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.813
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean21.45
std19.02
cv0.887
sampleLengths
033
168
212
314
46
550
69
730
89
98
1040
1114
123
139
1446
1529
1642
177
1810
1910
2049
212
2214
2314
2417
2513
2614
276
2816
2928
3012
3110
3246
3316
3418
355
366
3781
3845
3913
4026
4148
4221
4313
442
4517
4611
476
4876
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences102
ratio0.059
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a void of black—locking onto hers."
1"Three years had passed since the night they had torn their shared world apart—a collision of secrets and half-truths that had left her breathless and broken in a rain-slicked alley."
2"He stepped closer, the scent of expensive cologne and something metallic—like ozone before a storm—filling her lungs."
3"It wasn't a gentle reunion; it was a collision."
4"The world outside—the noise of Brick Lane, the smell of curry, the looming threat of the supernatural underworld—ceased to exist."
5"The door to the bedroom didn't click shut; it slammed, echoing through the small flat and shaking the remaining books from the shelves."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01812004530011325
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007927519818799546
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.77
std6.71
cv0.57
sampleLengths
010
123
25
326
420
517
62
710
814
96
1010
116
1214
1320
149
155
1617
178
189
198
2018
2122
2214
233
249
2512
264
2730
2829
292
3013
3110
3217
337
3410
3510
363
3715
383
392
4026
412
4214
4314
443
4514
4613
4714
486
4916
41.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
13.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences66
matches
0"He looked as though he"
1"His platinum blond hair caught"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"Her hand stayed clamped on"
4"He didn't wait for an"
5"He moved past her into"
6"He paused to glance at"
7"She turned to face him,"
8"He circled the small living"
9"He stopped beside a table"
10"His jaw tightened, a small"
11"He stepped closer, the scent"
12"He reached out."
13"His fingers didn't touch her,"
14"He gripped the ivory handle"
15"He laughed, a dry, mirthless"
16"She could see the gold"
17"He didn't kiss her immediately."
18"He pressed his forehead against"
19"His mouth crashed against hers."
ratio0.515
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rory yanked the third deadbolt"
1"The door swung inward, letting"
2"Lucien stood in the hallway."
3"He looked as though he"
4"His platinum blond hair caught"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"Her hand stayed clamped on"
7"Lucien stepped forward, invading her"
8"He didn't wait for an"
9"He moved past her into"
10"He paused to glance at"
11"Rory slammed the door shut."
12"The vibration rattled a shelf"
13"She turned to face him,"
14"He circled the small living"
15"He stopped beside a table"
16"Rory crossed her arms, her"
17"The skin there prickled."
18"The mask of the polished"
19"His jaw tightened, a small"
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"He looked as though he had stepped straight out of a luxury catalogue, draped in a charcoal suit that clung to his shoulders with mathematical precision."
1"Three years had passed since the night they had torn their shared world apart—a collision of secrets and half-truths that had left her breathless and broken in …"
2"The attraction was a physical weight, a gravity that pulled at her center, dragging her toward the very man who knew exactly how to dismantle her."
3"Rory let out a sharp gasp, her hands instinctively flying up to his chest, clutching the expensive fabric of his suit."
4"Rory groaned into the kiss, her fingers digging into his shoulders, pulling him closer until there was no air left between them."
5"He shifted his grip, his large hands sliding under her shirt, his palms searing her skin."
6"He obeyed, his tongue tracing the line of her lip before deepening the kiss."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she breathed, her teeth grazing his skin"
1"he murmured, his voice a low vibration that echoed in her chest"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.171
71.1539%