Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Z2WYZ0RW02RMAKXPEFT8S

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Duration:
1m 9s
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DekaLLM

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station tasted of damp concrete and copper. It was a heavy, stagnant scent that clung to the back of Detective Harlow Quinn’s throat, refusing to be washed away by the rhythmic drip of water from a rusted pipe somewhere in the darkness. She stepped over a discarded piece of track, her boots crunching on grit and pulverized stone. Even in the dim, flickering light of the forensic team’s work lamps, the station felt cavernous, an empty ribcage of iron and brick waiting to be filled. Harlow adjusted her coat, her eyes scanning the perimeter with a military precision that had become second nature over eighteen years of service. Her gaze lingered for a fraction of a second on the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 02:14. The city above was sleeping, oblivious to the violation occurring in its bowels. “It’s a robbery gone wrong, Harlow. Plain and simple,” Sergeant Miller said, stepping into her line of sight. He was a man who preferred the comfort of a neat, closed file to the messy uncertainty of an open investigation. He gestured vaguely toward the center of the platform, where the yellow police tape fluttered in a phantom draft. “Look at the disarray. The victim was a local transient, likely carrying something worth stealing. Some drifter with a grudge or a thief looking for a quick score. It’s messy, it’s violent, and it’s exactly what we see in the East End every other week.” Harlow didn't answer immediately. She walked toward the center of the scene, her eyes narrowing. The victim lay sprawled near a rusted pillar, a pale shape against the grime-streaked floor. There was blood, yes—a dark, viscous pool that had begun to coagulate—but it didn't sit right in her gut. “A robbery doesn't leave a room feeling this cold, Miller,” Harlow said, her voice low and steady. “It’s an underground station in November, Detective. It’s supposed to be cold.” Harlow knelt beside the body, ignoring the protest of her knees. She didn't look at the victim's face first; she looked at the surroundings. The victim was a man in his fifties, his clothes tattered, his expression frozen in a mask of profound confusion rather than terror. That was the first discrepancy. A man being robbed, being beaten, usually shows signs of struggle, of a desperate attempt to protect oneself or flee. This man looked as though he had simply ceased to be mid-thought. She leaned closer, her brown eyes tracking the pattern of the blood spatter. “If this was a struggle, where are the defensive wounds? No bruising on the forearms, no lacerations on the palms. No signs of a fight. He didn't fight back because he didn't even see it coming.” “Maybe he was surprised,” Miller offered, leaning against a pillar. “A sucker punch. A quick strike to the temple. We'll find the weapon in the tunnels once the sweep is done.” Harlow reached into her pocket and pulled out a small, translucent evidence bag. Inside was a fragment of something she had found near the victim's hand. It wasn't a shard of glass or a piece of bone. It was a sliver of something that looked like obsidian but shimmered with an oily, iridescent sheen when the light hit it. “Look at this,” she commanded. Miller squinted. “Glass? Some broken bottle?” “It’s too heavy for glass. And it’s too sharp. It didn't shatter; it chipped.” She paused, her mind drifting back to the files she’d kept hidden in her desk—the ones concerning DS Morris. The way the light had died in the room during that final, unexplained moment in the warehouse. The way the air had curdled. She pushed the memory down, burying it beneath the cold logic of the present. “And look at the floor, Miller. Really look.” She pointed to the dust. The station was thick with decades of sediment, a fine grey powder that coated every surface. Around the victim, the dust hadn't been disturbed by footprints or the scuffle of a struggle. Instead, it had been swept away in a perfect, concentric circle, as if a heavy weight had been placed there and then lifted, leaving a void of cleanliness in a world of filth. “Wind currents from the tunnels?” Miller suggested, though his voice lacked its earlier conviction. “In a dead-end station with no ventilation? No.” Harlow stood up, her sharp jawline set. “The geometry is too precise. This wasn't a robbery. It was a ritual, or a byproduct of one.” She moved further into the shadows, toward the edge of the circle. Her eyes caught a glint of something tucked into a crevice between the tracks and the platform edge. She knelt again, her movements economical and controlled. Using a pair of tweezers, she retrieved a small object. It was a compass. The casing was brass, heavily tarnished with a thick patina of verdigris that suggested it had been submerged in something much more caustic than seawater. As she held it, the needle didn't point North. It spun erratically for a moment before trembling toward the darkness of the deep tunnel, pointing toward a section of the wall that seemed unnaturally solid. “A compass?” Miller walked over, peering over her shoulder. “Lost property? Maybe the thief dropped it.” “This isn't lost property,” Harlow whispered. She turned the device over. The face wasn't marked with cardinal directions. Instead, it was etched with intricate, swirling sigils—protective symbols that felt heavy with a purpose she couldn't name. “This is an instrument. It’s looking for something.” She felt a sudden, sharp prickle at the base of her neck. It was a sensation she had learned to recognize—the feeling of being watched by something that didn't have eyes. She looked up, scanning the dark arches of the station. The shadows seemed thicker here, more textured, as if they were composed of more than just an absence of light. “Detective, we should wrap this up,” Miller said, his tone shifting to one of impatience. “The forensics team is getting spooked. They’re claiming the temperature in this sector is dropping ten degrees every ten minutes. It’s a faulty heater or a draft, but it’s making the technicians jumpy.” “It’s not a draft,” Harlow said, her eyes fixed on the compass. The needle was vibrating now, a frantic, rhythmic tapping against the glass. “It’s a leak.” “A leak of what?” “Energy. Something broke here, Miller. Or someone opened a door that wasn't meant to be opened.” She thought of the rumors she’d heard in the corners of the precinct—whispers of a market that moved like a ghost through the city, a place where the impossible was bought and sold for the price of a soul. The Veil Market. It was a ghost story told by burnt-out informants, a myth to explain the gaps in the city's logic. But as she looked at the concentric circle of dust, the iridescent shard, and the compass that pointed toward nothingness, the myth felt uncomfortably close to reality. She stood, her mind already racing through the connections. The victim wasn't a transient; he was a waypoint. The "robbery" was a cover for a transaction that had gone sideways. And the compass—it was a tracker. Someone had been hunting something through these tunnels, something that didn't belong in the world of sunlight and concrete. “Get the forensic report on the bloodwork immediately,” Harlow ordered, her voice regaining its command. “I want to know if there are any traces of non-human proteins or chemical compounds that shouldn't be in a human body. And Miller?” “Yeah?” “Seal this sector. No one goes in or out without my personal authorization. Not even the CSIs.” “You think it’s a cult thing?” Miller asked, rubbing his arms against the chill. Harlow looked back at the dark mouth of the tunnel, where the compass needle continued its frantic, desperate dance. “I think it’s something much older than a cult. And I think we just walked into the middle of a crime scene that hasn't finished happening yet.” She turned away from the body, her hand brushing the leather of her watch. She could feel the weight of the compass in her pocket, a cold, heavy presence against her thigh. The hunt wasn't over; it had simply changed shape. The city was layered, a skin of normalcy stretched over a pulsing, dark heart, and Harlow Quinn had just found the first crack.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"swept away"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"normalcy"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"scanning"
2"fluttered"
3"profound"
4"shimmered"
5"swept away"
6"perfect"
7"weight"
8"glint"
9"etched"
10"intricate"
11"racing"
12"chill"
13"dance"
14"could feel"
15"normalcy"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1409
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1041
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow12
Quinn2
Miller7
Morris1
North1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
places
0"Morris"
globalScore0.924
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like obsidian but shimmered with a"
1"seemed unnaturally solid"
2"seemed thicker here, more textured, as if they were composed of more than just an absence of light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1409
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean42.7
std27.86
cv0.652
sampleLengths
092
155
2103
349
417
512
684
749
831
959
105
116
1278
1370
1414
1533
1648
1764
1816
1944
2061
2148
2227
234
2416
2588
2655
2739
281
2917
3014
3146
3264
63.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences76
matches
0"being robbed"
1"being beaten"
2"been disturbed"
3"been swept"
4"been placed"
5"been submerged"
6"was etched"
7"being watched"
8"were composed"
9"was bought"
10"was layered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was sleeping"
1"was vibrating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences93
ratio0.097
matches
0"There was blood, yes—a dark, viscous pool that had begun to coagulate—but it didn't sit right in her gut."
1"She didn't look at the victim's face first; she looked at the surroundings."
2"“It’s too heavy for glass. And it’s too sharp. It didn't shatter; it chipped.” She paused, her mind drifting back to the files she’d kept hidden in her desk—the ones concerning DS Morris."
3"Instead, it was etched with intricate, swirling sigils—protective symbols that felt heavy with a purpose she couldn't name."
4"It was a sensation she had learned to recognize—the feeling of being watched by something that didn't have eyes."
5"She thought of the rumors she’d heard in the corners of the precinct—whispers of a market that moved like a ghost through the city, a place where the impossible was bought and sold for the price of a soul."
6"The victim wasn't a transient; he was a waypoint."
7"And the compass—it was a tracker."
8"The hunt wasn't over; it had simply changed shape."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02664129400570885
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009514747859181731
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.15
std8.79
cv0.58
sampleLengths
014
135
216
327
423
518
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713
818
921
1019
1145
124
1311
1415
1519
1617
1712
1811
1913
2023
215
2220
2312
2413
2536
2610
2721
2813
2913
3011
3122
325
332
344
3533
3617
376
3814
398
405
4116
4216
4333
4414
4515
4618
4712
4818
498
55.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners34
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, it had been swept"
1"Instead, it was etched with"
ratio0.028
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences72
matches
0"It was a heavy, stagnant"
1"She stepped over a discarded"
2"Her gaze lingered for a"
3"He was a man who"
4"He gestured vaguely toward the"
5"She walked toward the center"
6"She didn't look at the"
7"She leaned closer, her brown"
8"It wasn't a shard of"
9"It was a sliver of"
10"She paused, her mind drifting"
11"She pushed the memory down,"
12"She pointed to the dust."
13"She moved further into the"
14"Her eyes caught a glint"
15"She knelt again, her movements"
16"It was a compass."
17"It spun erratically for a"
18"She turned the device over."
19"She felt a sudden, sharp"
ratio0.375
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences72
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"It was a heavy, stagnant"
2"She stepped over a discarded"
3"Harlow adjusted her coat, her"
4"Her gaze lingered for a"
5"The city above was sleeping,"
6"Sergeant Miller said, stepping into"
7"He was a man who"
8"He gestured vaguely toward the"
9"Harlow didn't answer immediately."
10"She walked toward the center"
11"The victim lay sprawled near"
12"Harlow said, her voice low"
13"Harlow knelt beside the body,"
14"She didn't look at the"
15"The victim was a man"
16"That was the first discrepancy."
17"A man being robbed, being"
18"This man looked as though"
19"She leaned closer, her brown"
ratio0.861
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Even in the dim, flickering"
ratio0.014
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"It was a heavy, stagnant scent that clung to the back of Detective Harlow Quinn’s throat, refusing to be washed away by the rhythmic drip of water from a rusted…"
1"Harlow adjusted her coat, her eyes scanning the perimeter with a military precision that had become second nature over eighteen years of service."
2"He was a man who preferred the comfort of a neat, closed file to the messy uncertainty of an open investigation."
3"It was a sliver of something that looked like obsidian but shimmered with an oily, iridescent sheen when the light hit it."
4"Instead, it had been swept away in a perfect, concentric circle, as if a heavy weight had been placed there and then lifted, leaving a void of cleanliness in a …"
5"It spun erratically for a moment before trembling toward the darkness of the deep tunnel, pointing toward a section of the wall that seemed unnaturally solid."
6"Instead, it was etched with intricate, swirling sigils—protective symbols that felt heavy with a purpose she couldn't name."
7"Someone had been hunting something through these tunnels, something that didn't belong in the world of sunlight and concrete."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice low and steady"
1"Miller suggested, though his voice lacked its earlier conviction"
2"Miller said, his tone shifting to one of impatience"
3"Harlow ordered, her voice regaining its command"
53.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Miller suggested (suggest)"
1"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
2"Harlow ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.194
77.0077%