Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Z53PS7QSDFQAHHR5W9ZYT

Run Details

Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.002357
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the asphalt, turning the Soho streets into slick, obsidian mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered the pavement, her rhythm mechanical, honed by eighteen years of pulse-pounding pursuit. Up ahead, the silhouette in the heavy wool coat darted around the corner of a rusted scaffolding, vanishing into the maze of back alleys that snaked toward Camden. Harlow didn't pause. She clutched the lapels of her trench coat, her lungs burning with the sharp, metallic tang of ozone and diesel. The suspect surged forward, leaping over a stack of sodden cardboard boxes. He possessed an unnatural fluidity, a grace that defied the treacherous footing. Harlow tapped the leather watch on her left wrist, checking the time against the fading light of the streetlamps. She saw the flash of silver at his throat—a Saint Christopher medallion—as he ducked behind a dumpster. Dammit, Herrera. Nowhere left to run. She vaulted the same obstacle, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull by the relentless deluge. She drew her service weapon, the steel cold and grounding against her palms. The alleyway narrowed, pinched by graffiti-stained brickwork and the stench of stagnant runoff. Herrera skidded to a halt in front of a boarded-up entryway that marked the entrance to the abandoned Tube station. He didn't look back, his shoulders bunching as he fumbled for something in his jacket pocket. You think that scrap of metal will save you from a formal charge, Tommy? Herrera turned, his face pale under the flickering yellow glow of a dying streetlamp. Blood seeped from a jagged tear in his sleeve, soaking his bandage, but his expression remained defiant, his warm brown eyes darting toward the darkness of the subterranean tunnel. He pulled a polished bone token from his coat, the white surface catching the glare of the rain. Harlow didn't need a forensic report to know what that was. The rumors about the Veil Market weren't just basement gossip anymore. They were a roadmap for everyone who wanted to vanish from the eyes of the law. She stepped forward, the hammer of her pistol cocked with a sharp, echoing click. Drop the bone, Herrera. We need to talk about the incident at the bar. I don't think you understand the currency of this place, Detective. You want answers about what happened in the Nest? Follow me down, or stay up here and drown in your own ignorance. He pressed the token against the heavy steel door near the subway entrance. A low, vibrating thrum resonated through the ground, a sound like grinding teeth surfacing from the bowels of the earth. The rusty lock groaned, and the heavy door creaked inward, revealing a staircase swallowed by an unnatural, violet fog. Harlow took a hesitant step toward the mouth of the tunnel. The air emanating from the depths tasted like copper and old memories, a phantom scent that clawed at the back of her throat, reminding her of the night Morris vanished. She stared into the void. The darkness didn't just loom; it pulsed, rhythmically contracting. If she crossed that threshold, she entered a space governed by laws that ignored the Metropolitan Police handbook. The suspect descended without a glance back, his boots clicking against the hidden iron stairs. Each echo sounded like a ticking clock. Harlow knew the protocol. She knew the risks of stepping into a crime scene that fell outside her jurisdiction. But the memory of her partner’s empty desk and the cold closure of the internal affairs file burned hotter than the wind-driven rain biting at her skin. She holstered the weapon, her sharp jaw set into a hard line of resolve. She didn't come this far to turn back because of a fairy tale about subterranean markets. If the monster lived in the dirt, she would dig him out. She slipped into the darkness. The atmosphere shifted instantly. The biting cold of the London rain vanished, replaced by a humid, sulfurous warmth that clung to her clothes like a second skin. She navigated the stairs, her hand skimming the slick, mossy bricks of the tunnel wall. Below, the space opened up into a cavernous expanse. The old Underground station lay transformed. Where rusted tracks once hauled commuters to their offices, stalls now spilled over with impossible wares. Glass jars containing flickering, trapped lightning sat beside stacks of books bound in skin that moved when touched. Figures cloaked in shadows moved between booths, their voices a low, discordant hum that sounded less like language and more like the shifting of tectonic plates. Herrera stopped at a stall draped in frayed velvet. He cradled his wounded arm, his face drawn. He looked at the shadows, then back at Harlow, who lingered on the periphery of a clearing, her gaze sweeping the chaotic, illicit bazaar. You brought a badge to a place that eats authority for breakfast, Detective. Why take the chance? Everything in this city has a price. I’m just here to audit the bill. She scanned the room, noting the absence of cameras or uniform law enforcement. There was only the market—the smell of old parchment, the hum of magic, and the quiet desperation of those who had nowhere else to turn. She watched Herrera slip behind a curtain of heavy, beaded strings. Harlow reached for her radio, then stopped. Static. Not just a dead zone, but a total blackout of signals. The market hummed with a frequency that blocked the world above. She was alone in the belly of the city with a man who knew exactly what happened to her partner, surrounded by strangers who would gladly watch her lose a limb to secure some black-market alchemy. She adjusted her coat, the leather watch ticking against her skin with heavy, rhythmic beats. The environment felt hostile, every shadow in the cavern of the abandoned station seemingly watching her progress. A merchant with eyes like polished obsidian leaned out from behind a stack of bone carvings, his gaze fixing on her with a predatory intensity. Herrera stood at the far end of the, waiting, a silhouette against a glowing, alchemical hearth. He wasn't running anymore. He was lure. The realization hit her like a physical blow—the ease of the chase, the distinct lack of true evasion. He led her here, deep into the heart of the Veil Market, where authority withered and the secrets of the dead were the only legal tender. She pulled her weapon again, ignoring the way the air shimmered around her. The crowd parted, silent, their movements fluid and predatory. She felt the weight of the station pressing down on her shoulders, the history of a thousand lost souls whispering through the concrete. Talk, Herrera. Before this place decides to make me part of its inventory.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:52:49.505Z" 5/10/2026, 12:52:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1129
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1129
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"mechanical"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"navigated"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"mechanical"
1"pulse"
2"pounding"
3"treacherous"
4"echoing"
5"resonated"
6"depths"
7"pulsed"
8"echo"
9"resolve"
10"warmth"
11"navigated"
12"velvet"
13"chaotic"
14"scanned"
15"rhythmic"
16"intensity"
17"shimmered"
18"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1125
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1125
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow8
Quinn1
Camden1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera8
Tube1
Tommy1
Veil2
Market2
Detective3
Nest1
Morris1
Metropolitan1
Police1
London1
Underground1
You3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
5"Tommy"
6"Market"
7"Morris"
8"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"Nest"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and old memories, a ph"
1"sounded like a ticking clock"
2"ndoned station seemingly watching her progre"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.889
wordCount1125
matches
0"Not just a dead zone, but a total blackout of signals"
85.37% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"think that scrap"
1"crossed that threshold"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean45
std23.77
cv0.528
sampleLengths
081
160
26
378
414
561
652
714
833
952
1073
1168
1242
135
1473
1544
1641
1717
1814
1949
2066
2157
2267
2345
2413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"wasn't running"
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences82
ratio0.049
matches
0"She saw the flash of silver at his throat—a Saint Christopher medallion—as he ducked behind a dumpster."
1"The darkness didn't just loom; it pulsed, rhythmically contracting."
2"There was only the market—the smell of old parchment, the hum of magic, and the quiet desperation of those who had nowhere else to turn."
3"The realization hit her like a physical blow—the ease of the chase, the distinct lack of true evasion."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1136
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02112676056338028
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007042253521126761
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.72
std7.31
cv0.533
sampleLengths
013
117
228
33
420
512
612
719
817
92
104
1116
1213
1313
1420
1516
1614
1714
1829
1918
2011
2111
2216
2314
244
2510
2611
279
2813
2913
3020
3119
3211
3330
345
359
3618
3715
387
394
4015
4127
4214
4316
4412
455
464
4723
4815
499
57.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3902439024390244
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners32
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Nowhere left to run."
ratio0.013
52.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences79
matches
0"She clutched the lapels of"
1"He possessed an unnatural fluidity,"
2"She saw the flash of"
3"She vaulted the same obstacle,"
4"She drew her service weapon,"
5"He didn't look back, his"
6"You think that scrap of"
7"He pulled a polished bone"
8"They were a roadmap for"
9"She stepped forward, the hammer"
10"We need to talk about"
11"I don't think you understand"
12"You want answers about what"
13"He pressed the token against"
14"She stared into the void."
15"She knew the risks of"
16"She holstered the weapon, her"
17"She didn't come this far"
18"She slipped into the darkness."
19"She navigated the stairs, her"
ratio0.418
42.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences79
matches
0"Rain lashed against the asphalt,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered"
2"Harlow didn't pause."
3"She clutched the lapels of"
4"The suspect surged forward, leaping"
5"He possessed an unnatural fluidity,"
6"Harlow tapped the leather watch"
7"She saw the flash of"
8"She vaulted the same obstacle,"
9"She drew her service weapon,"
10"The alleyway narrowed, pinched by"
11"Herrera skidded to a halt"
12"He didn't look back, his"
13"You think that scrap of"
14"Herrera turned, his face pale"
15"Blood seeped from a jagged"
16"He pulled a polished bone"
17"Harlow didn't need a forensic"
18"The rumors about the Veil"
19"They were a roadmap for"
ratio0.835
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"If she crossed that threshold,"
1"If the monster lived in"
2"Before this place decides to"
ratio0.038
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Up ahead, the silhouette in the heavy wool coat darted around the corner of a rusted scaffolding, vanishing into the maze of back alleys that snaked toward Camd…"
1"He possessed an unnatural fluidity, a grace that defied the treacherous footing."
2"Herrera skidded to a halt in front of a boarded-up entryway that marked the entrance to the abandoned Tube station."
3"Blood seeped from a jagged tear in his sleeve, soaking his bandage, but his expression remained defiant, his warm brown eyes darting toward the darkness of the …"
4"The air emanating from the depths tasted like copper and old memories, a phantom scent that clawed at the back of her throat, reminding her of the night Morris …"
5"If she crossed that threshold, she entered a space governed by laws that ignored the Metropolitan Police handbook."
6"The biting cold of the London rain vanished, replaced by a humid, sulfurous warmth that clung to her clothes like a second skin."
7"Glass jars containing flickering, trapped lightning sat beside stacks of books bound in skin that moved when touched."
8"Figures cloaked in shadows moved between booths, their voices a low, discordant hum that sounded less like language and more like the shifting of tectonic plate…"
9"He looked at the shadows, then back at Harlow, who lingered on the periphery of a clearing, her gaze sweeping the chaotic, illicit bazaar."
10"You brought a badge to a place that eats authority for breakfast, Detective."
11"She was alone in the belly of the city with a man who knew exactly what happened to her partner, surrounded by strangers who would gladly watch her lose a limb …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.4763%