| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1368 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "lurch" | | 15 | "impose" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.42% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1360 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1360 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | You | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 58.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like it originated from behind her" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to peel themselves off the trees, circling her like wolves" | | 2 | "felt like a dream from a different life" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.735 | | wordCount | 1360 | | matches | | 0 | "not by walking, but by flickering through the negative space between her blinks" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 50.37 | | std | 40.76 | | cv | 0.809 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 84 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 73 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 77 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 79 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 82 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 90 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 131 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 132 |
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| 94.63% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "were chosen" | | 1 | "were jagged" | | 2 | "is gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, spindly distortion behind the largest oak, tall as a man but with limbs that unfolded too many times at the joints." | | 1 | "The familiar geography of the grove splintered; the path back toward the gate had dissolved into a thicket of thorns that bled black sap." | | 2 | "A slow, rhythmic tapping began—the metallic click of claws against stone." | | 3 | "The pendant pulsed violently now, a strobe of jagged light that revealed the faces of the oaks—faces twisted in permanent, wooden agony, eyes wide and hollow." | | 4 | "They didn't run; they drifted, closing the circle until the heat of the Heartstone was the only thing standing between her and the suffocating dark." | | 5 | "The blue light of the artificial world—the neon, the noise, the memory of her flat above the bar—felt like a dream from a different lifetime." | | 6 | "A hand—cold, hard, and smelling of deep-earth burial—brushed her shoulder." | | 7 | "Wait—the way you came is gone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1370 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.025547445255474453 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008029197080291971 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 13.74 | | std | 7.99 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 37.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.24242424242424243 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Normally, the park lived with" | | 1 | "Just leave me be." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 28.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 1 | "Her flashlight beam cut a" | | 2 | "Her boots crunched on dry" | | 3 | "She checked her wrist, tracing" | | 4 | "It burned, a ghost sensation" | | 5 | "She kept moving, deeper into" | | 6 | "It vibrated in her marrow," | | 7 | "She exhaled, her breath blooming" | | 8 | "I don't play games with" | | 9 | "Her fingers flew to the" | | 10 | "It hummed against her skin," | | 11 | "It circled her, a hungry" | | 12 | "She turned in a tight" | | 13 | "She saw it then, pinned" | | 14 | "You have something that doesn't" | | 15 | "Her palm blistered as she" | | 16 | "Her breath came in ragged," | | 17 | "It smelled of ozone and" | | 18 | "It reached out, fingers stretching" | | 19 | "You think you were chosen," |
| | ratio | 0.479 | |
| 12.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her coat collar" | | 2 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 3 | "Her flashlight beam cut a" | | 4 | "The silence felt heavy, a" | | 5 | "Here, the world died." | | 6 | "Her boots crunched on dry" | | 7 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 8 | "She checked her wrist, tracing" | | 9 | "It burned, a ghost sensation" | | 10 | "She kept moving, deeper into" | | 11 | "Every step echoed, a rhythmic" | | 12 | "The thud followed a heartbeat" | | 13 | "The voice didn't come from" | | 14 | "It vibrated in her marrow," | | 15 | "Aurora spun, her beam slicing" | | 16 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 17 | "She exhaled, her breath blooming" | | 18 | "I don't play games with" | | 19 | "Her fingers flew to the" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 52.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the threshold, the manicured grass giving way to something denser, something that smelled of wet loam and rot." | | 1 | "Her flashlight beam cut a weak yellow path through the fog, failing to reach the twisted limbs of the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of th…" | | 2 | "Aurora spun, her beam slicing through the mist, illuminating only bark and shadow." | | 3 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, spindly distortion behind the largest oak, tall as a man but with limbs that unfolded too many times at the joints." | | 4 | "It hummed against her skin, a frantic, rhythmic heat that seeped into her chest." | | 5 | "The familiar geography of the grove splintered; the path back toward the gate had dissolved into a thicket of thorns that bled black sap." | | 6 | "The creature stood upright, its eyes two pits of shadow that reflected no light." | | 7 | "You have something that doesn't belong to your world, girl." | | 8 | "The Grove began to moan, the ancient oaks swaying without the touch of a breeze, their leaves rattling with the sound of dry bone." | | 9 | "The pendant’s crimson glow intensified, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to peel themselves off the trees, circling her like wolves." | | 10 | "Underneath the noise, she heard the low, melodic hum of a portal beginning to thin, the fabric of the Grove tearing open to reveal a glimpse of a sky that burne…" | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed violently now, a strobe of jagged light that revealed the faces of the oaks—faces twisted in permanent, wooden agony, eyes wide and hollow." | | 12 | "The Grove shrieked, a high-pitched vibration that made her nose trickle with blood." | | 13 | "The shadows reached, their fingers grazing the fabric of her coat, but she surged forward, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird." | | 14 | "The voice was closer now, right at her shoulder, a frigid breath against her neck that turned her sweat to ice." | | 15 | "The trees crowded closer, their branches descending like fingers, but she pushed through the wall of thorns, the spikes tearing at her clothes, leaving thin, re…" | | 16 | "It was miles away, or perhaps inches, and the only thing that mattered was the sudden, sharp, and terrifying realization that the gate was no longer where it be…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |