Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8Z5N54D0WNDS6ASQMD6WDR

Run Details

Duration:
10.2s
Cost:
$0.002803
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate of Richmond Park shrieked against the frost. Aurora pulled her coat collar tight against the bite of the midnight air, the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant pressing a cold line into her throat. She stepped over the threshold, the manicured grass giving way to something denser, something that smelled of wet loam and rot. Her flashlight beam cut a weak yellow path through the fog, failing to reach the twisted limbs of the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Grove. Why did I think this was a good idea? The silence felt heavy, a physical weight pressing against her eardrums. Normally, the park lived with the scuttle of nocturnal wildlife or the distant hum of London traffic. Here, the world died. Her boots crunched on dry stems that shouldn't have been in bloom this late in the year. The wildflowers at her feet stood rigid, their vibrant colors muted by the gray moonlight, looking less like plants and more like jagged teeth jutting from the earth. She checked her wrist, tracing the crescent scar with a thumb. It burned, a ghost sensation of the childhood accident that had never truly faded. She kept moving, deeper into the pocket where time folded on itself. Every step echoed, a rhythmic thudding that sounded like it originated from behind her rather than beneath her boots. She stopped. The thud followed a heartbeat later, a deliberate imitation of her own pace. Did you bring the payment? The voice didn't come from the air. It vibrated in her marrow, thick and textured like grinding stone. Aurora spun, her beam slicing through the mist, illuminating only bark and shadow. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, spindly distortion behind the largest oak, tall as a man but with limbs that unfolded too many times at the joints. She exhaled, her breath blooming into a thick plume of vapor. I don't play games with ghosts. Show yourself. Her fingers flew to the pendant. It hummed against her skin, a frantic, rhythmic heat that seeped into her chest. The Heartstone cast a sickly crimson light. The ground tilted. The trees seemed to lean inward, their gnarled branches weaving together to seal off the sky. The familiar geography of the grove splintered; the path back toward the gate had dissolved into a thicket of thorns that bled black sap. Something wet slapped against the grass off to her left. A slow, rhythmic tapping began—the metallic click of claws against stone. It circled her, a hungry sound, patient and precise. She turned in a tight circle, her flashlight trembling. She saw it then, pinned against the dark silhouette of a standing stone. A shape shifted, liquid and wrong, mimicking the human form but with too much slack in the skin. The creature stood upright, its eyes two pits of shadow that reflected no light. You have something that doesn't belong to your world, girl. The entity stepped forward, and the air turned frigid. Aurora backed away, the pendant now radiating a searing, agonizing heat. Her palm blistered as she gripped the stone, trying to tear the chain from her neck, but the silver link held fast. Her breath came in ragged, jagged hitches. The Grove began to moan, the ancient oaks swaying without the touch of a breeze, their leaves rattling with the sound of dry bone. Take it. Just leave me be. The creature moved not by walking, but by flickering through the negative space between her blinks. One moment it stood at the edge of the clearing, the next it loomed three paces away. It smelled of ozone and stagnant water. It reached out, fingers stretching like shadows caught in an oil slick, long and tapered into needles. The pendant’s crimson glow intensified, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to peel themselves off the trees, circling her like wolves. You think you were chosen, but you were merely hidden. The voice crawled inside her skull, cold and clinical. It looked at her wrist, then at the pendant, tilted its head at an impossible angle until her own neck ached sympathetically. The rustle of the trees grew to an insistent, thrumming roar. Underneath the noise, she heard the low, melodic hum of a portal beginning to thin, the fabric of the Grove tearing open to reveal a glimpse of a sky that burned with frozen, pale fire. I am not your vessel. She swung the flashlight, but the metal passed through the entity as if it were nothing more than solidified smoke. The creature didn't flinch. It inhaled, a long, rattling wheeze that dragged the warmth out of the air. She felt her skin turn numb, the capillaries in her fingers frosting over in seconds. The pendant pulsed violently now, a strobe of jagged light that revealed the faces of the oaks—faces twisted in permanent, wooden agony, eyes wide and hollow. The others in the Grove don't like trespassers who cling to borrowed treasures. Deep within the treeline, more shadows detached themselves. They were jagged, shifting silhouettes, tall and distorted. They moved in perfect unison, a dozen variations of the same hungry nightmare. They didn't run; they drifted, closing the circle until the heat of the Heartstone was the only thing standing between her and the suffocating dark. Her vision tunneled. The blue light of the artificial world—the neon, the noise, the memory of her flat above the bar—felt like a dream from a different lifetime. What do you want from me? A hand—cold, hard, and smelling of deep-earth burial—brushed her shoulder. She shrieked, the sound swallowed instantly by the hungry atmosphere of the Grove. The pendant flared bright enough to sear her retinas, turning the world into a monochromatic nightmare of deep red and black. She felt the ground vanish beneath her boots. The grass turned to ash, drifting upward into the void. You are the key, aurora. You are the lock. The creature didn't move in to kill her. It sat, unfolding its joints until it was nothing more than a dark mound on the forest floor, waiting. The portal behind it began to dilate, the edges curling like parchment in a flame. Every shadow in the Grove turned toward her, a collective, silent hunger that made her skin crawl. She looked at her wrist, the scar a pale, raised line against the darkening skin of her arm, and realized then that the pendant wasn't a gift. It was a beacon. I’m walking out of this. You hear me? She took a step toward what she hoped was the gate. The ground gave a sickening lurch, the soil liquefying to trap her ankles. She clawed at the air, clutching the pendant, and shoved it deep into her palm, the sharp points of the setting biting into her flesh. If she was the key, then she would be the one to turn it. The Grove shrieked, a high-pitched vibration that made her nose trickle with blood. She didn't look back. She leaned into the dark, forcing her legs to move against the thickening air, each step a violation of the reality the Grove tried to impose. The shadows reached, their fingers grazing the fabric of her coat, but she surged forward, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. Wait—the way you came is gone. The voice was closer now, right at her shoulder, a frigid breath against her neck that turned her sweat to ice. She focused on the feeling of the scar, the familiar ache of the old injury, and used the sharp, stabbing pain to ground herself. The trees crowded closer, their branches descending like fingers, but she pushed through the wall of thorns, the spikes tearing at her clothes, leaving thin, red lines stinging across her arms. She ignored the pain. She forced her eyes forward, pinning her gaze on a stray glimmer of streetlamp glow flickering through the density of the oak boundary. It was miles away, or perhaps inches, and the only thing that mattered was the sudden, sharp, and terrifying realization that the gate was no longer where it belonged.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:53:07.374Z" 5/10/2026, 12:53:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1368
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count3
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"lurch"
count1
15
word"impose"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"echoed"
4"rhythmic"
5"vibrated"
6"flicker"
7"familiar"
8"searing"
9"loomed"
10"warmth"
11"pulsed"
12"perfect"
13"beacon"
14"lurch"
15"impose"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
27.42% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"think"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1360
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1360
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Grove8
London1
Aurora3
You5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Grove"
3"Aurora"
4"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like it originated from behind her"
1"shadows that seemed to peel themselves off the trees, circling her like wolves"
2"felt like a dream from a different life"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1360
matches
0"not by walking, but by flickering through the negative space between her blinks"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean50.37
std40.76
cv0.809
sampleLengths
088
19
277
371
45
571
68
770
884
910
1073
116
1278
1310
1477
155
1679
1713
1882
196
2062
219
2290
238
24131
256
26132
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"were chosen"
1"were jagged"
2"is gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences99
ratio0.081
matches
0"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, spindly distortion behind the largest oak, tall as a man but with limbs that unfolded too many times at the joints."
1"The familiar geography of the grove splintered; the path back toward the gate had dissolved into a thicket of thorns that bled black sap."
2"A slow, rhythmic tapping began—the metallic click of claws against stone."
3"The pendant pulsed violently now, a strobe of jagged light that revealed the faces of the oaks—faces twisted in permanent, wooden agony, eyes wide and hollow."
4"They didn't run; they drifted, closing the circle until the heat of the Heartstone was the only thing standing between her and the suffocating dark."
5"The blue light of the artificial world—the neon, the noise, the memory of her flat above the bar—felt like a dream from a different lifetime."
6"A hand—cold, hard, and smelling of deep-earth burial—brushed her shoulder."
7"Wait—the way you came is gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1370
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.025547445255474453
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008029197080291971
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.74
std7.99
cv0.581
sampleLengths
010
127
221
330
49
511
617
74
817
928
1011
1114
1212
1319
142
1513
165
177
1811
1913
2029
2111
226
232
246
2514
267
273
2816
2924
3010
3111
329
339
3413
3518
3614
3710
389
3911
4022
417
4224
432
444
4516
4617
477
4817
4921
37.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.24242424242424243
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners24
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"Normally, the park lived with"
1"Just leave me be."
ratio0.021
28.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences96
matches
0"She stepped over the threshold,"
1"Her flashlight beam cut a"
2"Her boots crunched on dry"
3"She checked her wrist, tracing"
4"It burned, a ghost sensation"
5"She kept moving, deeper into"
6"It vibrated in her marrow,"
7"She exhaled, her breath blooming"
8"I don't play games with"
9"Her fingers flew to the"
10"It hummed against her skin,"
11"It circled her, a hungry"
12"She turned in a tight"
13"She saw it then, pinned"
14"You have something that doesn't"
15"Her palm blistered as she"
16"Her breath came in ragged,"
17"It smelled of ozone and"
18"It reached out, fingers stretching"
19"You think you were chosen,"
ratio0.479
12.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences96
matches
0"The iron gate of Richmond"
1"Aurora pulled her coat collar"
2"She stepped over the threshold,"
3"Her flashlight beam cut a"
4"The silence felt heavy, a"
5"Here, the world died."
6"Her boots crunched on dry"
7"The wildflowers at her feet"
8"She checked her wrist, tracing"
9"It burned, a ghost sensation"
10"She kept moving, deeper into"
11"Every step echoed, a rhythmic"
12"The thud followed a heartbeat"
13"The voice didn't come from"
14"It vibrated in her marrow,"
15"Aurora spun, her beam slicing"
16"A flicker of movement caught"
17"She exhaled, her breath blooming"
18"I don't play games with"
19"Her fingers flew to the"
ratio0.896
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"If she was the key,"
ratio0.01
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount17
matches
0"She stepped over the threshold, the manicured grass giving way to something denser, something that smelled of wet loam and rot."
1"Her flashlight beam cut a weak yellow path through the fog, failing to reach the twisted limbs of the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of th…"
2"Aurora spun, her beam slicing through the mist, illuminating only bark and shadow."
3"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, spindly distortion behind the largest oak, tall as a man but with limbs that unfolded too many times at the joints."
4"It hummed against her skin, a frantic, rhythmic heat that seeped into her chest."
5"The familiar geography of the grove splintered; the path back toward the gate had dissolved into a thicket of thorns that bled black sap."
6"The creature stood upright, its eyes two pits of shadow that reflected no light."
7"You have something that doesn't belong to your world, girl."
8"The Grove began to moan, the ancient oaks swaying without the touch of a breeze, their leaves rattling with the sound of dry bone."
9"The pendant’s crimson glow intensified, casting long, frantic shadows that seemed to peel themselves off the trees, circling her like wolves."
10"Underneath the noise, she heard the low, melodic hum of a portal beginning to thin, the fabric of the Grove tearing open to reveal a glimpse of a sky that burne…"
11"The pendant pulsed violently now, a strobe of jagged light that revealed the faces of the oaks—faces twisted in permanent, wooden agony, eyes wide and hollow."
12"The Grove shrieked, a high-pitched vibration that made her nose trickle with blood."
13"The shadows reached, their fingers grazing the fabric of her coat, but she surged forward, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird."
14"The voice was closer now, right at her shoulder, a frigid breath against her neck that turned her sweat to ice."
15"The trees crowded closer, their branches descending like fingers, but she pushed through the wall of thorns, the spikes tearing at her clothes, leaving thin, re…"
16"It was miles away, or perhaps inches, and the only thing that mattered was the sudden, sharp, and terrifying realization that the gate was no longer where it be…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.9103%