Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZAFXB5019W68S3CNSYRF4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.001263
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood like sentinels, their bark gnarled into the shapes of screaming faces. Aurora stepped between the two largest pillars, and the air changed. The heavy, humid warmth of a London night vanished, replaced by a sudden, biting chill that tasted of crushed jasmine and damp earth. The silence hit her first. It wasn't the absence of sound, but a physical weight, a pressure against her eardrums that made her pulse thrum in her throat. Richmond Park had been alive with the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of wind through leaves, but here, the world went mute. She reached up, her fingers brushing the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem throbbed against her sternum, a rhythmic heat that bled through her thin shirt. "Just a few minutes." Her voice sounded thin, swallowed instantly by the dense thicket of wildflowers. They shouldn't have been blooming. Even in the height of summer, the vibrant blues and sickly violets of the petals felt wrong under the pale, stagnant moonlight. They swayed, though there was no breeze to move them. Aurora gripped the strap of her delivery bag, the nylon digging into her shoulder. She kept her eyes on the narrow path, but the periphery of her vision flickered. A movement near the base of a twisted willow—a flash of something pale and spindly—darted behind a trunk. She froze. The silence deepened. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. The sound was too sharp, too loud, like a bone breaking in the dark. She spun toward the noise, her boots crunching on the unnaturally soft ground. "Who's there?" No answer came. Only the rhythmic, dull heat of the Heartstone, pulsing faster now. The crimson light of the gem cast long, distorted shadows across the path, turning the wildflowers into grasping hands. She took a step forward. The ground felt different under her feet. It didn't have the give of soil; it felt spongy, almost fleshy, like walking across a layer of moss-covered skin. The scent of nectar intensified, turning cloying, mingling with a metallic tang that reminded her of a copper coin held too long in a sweaty palm. A shadow stretched across the path ahead. It didn't belong to any tree. It moved with a fluid, predatory grace, sliding from behind a standing stone to the edge of the clearing. Aurora watched it, her breath hitching in her chest. The shadow was darker than the night, a void in the shape of something tall and impossibly thin. She blinked, and it was gone. She wiped a bead of sweat from her forehead, despite the chill. Her hand shook. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched, a sharp, stinging sensation that radiated up her arm. "Get it together, Rory." She forced her legs to move. She needed to find the center of the grove, to find whatever signal had drawn the Heartstone into this frantic rhythm. The trees seemed to lean inward as she progressed, their heavy branches knitting together overhead to choke out the sky. The moonlight struggled to pierce the canopy, casting the world in a bruised, monochromatic light. A soft, rhythmic scraping sound drifted through the trees. *Scritch. Scritch. Scritch.* It sounded like a fingernail dragging against bark. It came from above. Aurora stopped and looked up. The branches hung low, draped in thick, grey lichen that resembled hanging hair. Nothing moved in the heights, yet the scraping continued, moving from the tree to her left to the one directly in front of her. It was consistent. Deliberate. She tightened her grip on her bag, her knuckles white. The Heartstone’s heat was no longer a pulse; it was a steady, searing burn against her skin. The crimson glow bled out from the pendant, illuminating the immediate circle of her path. In that red light, the wildflowers looked different. Their petals weren't soft; they were jagged, serrated edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head. She stepped over a protruding root, and the scraping stopped. The sudden absence of the sound felt more violent than the noise itself. The stillness became a vacuum, pulling the air from her lungs. She stood perfectly still, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. A scent drifted toward her—not the jasmine, but something old and stagnant. It smelled of wet fur and cellar mold. She turned her head slowly. To her right, the darkness between two oaks seemed to thicken. A shape stood there, just beyond the reach of the pendant's red light. It didn't have a face, only a suggestion of height and a stillness that felt unnatural. It didn't breathe. It didn't shift. It simply existed in the space where the light failed. Aurora took a step back. Her heel hit something hard. She jumped, a small cry escaping her lips. She looked down. A stone. Not one of the ancient oaks, but a small, jagged rock that sat perfectly upright in the middle of the path. It hadn't been there a second ago. She looked back at the shape in the trees. It had moved. It was closer now, positioned halfway between the oaks, its silhouette slightly more defined against the gloom. It was too long, the limbs appearing to have extra joints that bent at impossible angles. "Stay in the light," she whispered, her voice cracking. She moved faster, her pace breaking into a near-run. The ground bucked beneath her, the spongy moss yielding in deep, sucking indentations. The trees seemed to shift their positions as she passed, the path winding and twisting in ways that defied the geometry of the park. The more she ran, the more the grove felt like a closing throat. The scraping started again. This time, it wasn't above her. It was beneath her. *Scritch. Scritch. Scritch.* The sound rose through the soles of her boots, vibrating in her bones. She skidded to a halt, her breath coming in jagged, shallow gasps. The Heartstone throbbed with a violent, blinding light, casting the clearing in a deep, blood-red hue. In the crimson glow, she saw them. Small, pale hands—too many of them—emerged from the dirt around her feet. They didn't grab; they simply rested on the surface of the moss, the long, spindly fingers twitching in unison with the pulse of the pendant. She stared at the hands, her vision blurring. The shadow she had seen earlier wasn't a shadow at all. It was a presence, a weight in the air that made the very atmosphere feel crowded. A low, melodic hum began to vibrate through the clearing. It wasn't a song, but a drone, a single, unending note that resonated in her teeth. The wildflowers began to turn. Not toward the moon, but toward her. The heads of the blossoms tilted in unison, their serrated petals shivering, as if they were all watching her move. She looked back toward the standing stones, the way she had come. The entrance was gone. In its place stood a wall of ancient, interlocking trunks, their bark bleeding a thick, translucent sap that shimmered like silver in the red light. The scraping sound moved closer, coming from directly behind her. She didn't turn. She couldn't. The heat from the Heartstone had become an agony, a localized sun against her chest. The humming grew louder, rising in pitch until it felt like a needle piercing her eardrums. The pale hands in the dirt began to pull, the moss dipping and sighing as if the earth itself were inhaling. A breath, cold and smelling of ancient dust, brushed against the nape of her neck.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:55:45.846Z" 5/10/2026, 12:55:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"throbbed"
count2
7
word"rhythmic"
count3
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"resonated"
count1
12
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"throbbed"
7"rhythmic"
8"flickered"
9"searing"
10"gloom"
11"resonated"
12"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
55.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1273
ratio0.005
matches
0"Scritch. Scritch. Scritch."
1"Scritch. Scritch. Scritch."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1259
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
London1
Park1
Heartstone6
Aurora5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places
0"London"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like a fingernail dragging against"
1"edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head"
2"felt like a closing throat"
3"felt like a needle piercing her eardrum"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.357
wordCount1273
matches
0"not the jasmine, but something old"
1"Not one of the ancient oaks, but a small, jagged rock"
2"Not toward the moon, but toward her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.31
std20.58
cv0.679
sampleLengths
049
152
229
34
449
547
62
737
82
933
1058
1159
126
1332
144
1562
1612
1712
1846
1968
2010
2137
2220
2361
2410
2541
2645
279
2859
294
3010
313
3241
337
3437
3535
3658
3741
3810
3920
4037
4115
99.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs196
matches
0"were inhaling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences118
ratio0.059
matches
0"A movement near the base of a twisted willow—a flash of something pale and spindly—darted behind a trunk."
1"It didn't have the give of soil; it felt spongy, almost fleshy, like walking across a layer of moss-covered skin."
2"The Heartstone’s heat was no longer a pulse; it was a steady, searing burn against her skin."
3"Their petals weren't soft; they were jagged, serrated edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head."
4"A scent drifted toward her—not the jasmine, but something old and stagnant."
5"Small, pale hands—too many of them—emerged from the dirt around her feet."
6"They didn't grab; they simply rested on the surface of the moss, the long, spindly fingers twitching in unison with the pulse of the pendant."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1268
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, blood-red hue."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.028391167192429023
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012618296529968454
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.79
std6.66
cv0.617
sampleLengths
015
111
223
35
423
524
613
716
84
912
105
1122
1210
1314
1415
1518
162
173
187
1914
2013
212
223
2311
2419
255
267
2720
2826
297
306
3119
329
3318
346
3512
363
3717
384
396
4021
4120
4215
439
441
451
461
478
484
495
29.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2033898305084746
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners24
31.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"Only the rhythmic, dull heat"
ratio0.01
40.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences105
matches
0"It wasn't the absence of"
1"She reached up, her fingers"
2"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
3"They shouldn't have been blooming."
4"They swayed, though there was"
5"She kept her eyes on"
6"She spun toward the noise,"
7"She took a step forward."
8"It didn't have the give"
9"It didn't belong to any"
10"It moved with a fluid,"
11"She blinked, and it was"
12"She wiped a bead of"
13"Her hand shook."
14"She forced her legs to"
15"She needed to find the"
16"It sounded like a fingernail"
17"It came from above."
18"It was consistent."
19"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.448
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences105
matches
0"The oak stones stood like"
1"Aurora stepped between the two"
2"The heavy, humid warmth of"
3"The silence hit her first."
4"It wasn't the absence of"
5"Richmond Park had been alive"
6"She reached up, her fingers"
7"The crimson gem throbbed against"
8"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
9"They shouldn't have been blooming."
10"They swayed, though there was"
11"Aurora gripped the strap of"
12"She kept her eyes on"
13"A movement near the base"
14"The silence deepened."
15"A twig snapped somewhere to"
16"The sound was too sharp,"
17"She spun toward the noise,"
18"The crimson light of the"
19"She took a step forward."
ratio0.905
95.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Even in the height of"
1"To her right, the darkness"
ratio0.019
10.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"It wasn't the absence of sound, but a physical weight, a pressure against her eardrums that made her pulse thrum in her throat."
1"The crimson gem throbbed against her sternum, a rhythmic heat that bled through her thin shirt."
2"The scent of nectar intensified, turning cloying, mingling with a metallic tang that reminded her of a copper coin held too long in a sweaty palm."
3"The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched, a sharp, stinging sensation that radiated up her arm."
4"The branches hung low, draped in thick, grey lichen that resembled hanging hair."
5"Their petals weren't soft; they were jagged, serrated edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head."
6"It didn't have a face, only a suggestion of height and a stillness that felt unnatural."
7"Not one of the ancient oaks, but a small, jagged rock that sat perfectly upright in the middle of the path."
8"It wasn't a song, but a drone, a single, unending note that resonated in her teeth."
9"The heads of the blossoms tilted in unison, their serrated petals shivering, as if they were all watching her move."
10"In its place stood a wall of ancient, interlocking trunks, their bark bleeding a thick, translucent sap that shimmered like silver in the red light."
11"The pale hands in the dirt began to pull, the moss dipping and sighing as if the earth itself were inhaling."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice cracking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
66.4355%