| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1278 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1278 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "resonated" | | 12 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1273 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Scritch. Scritch. Scritch." | | 1 | "Scritch. Scritch. Scritch." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1259 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.48 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Aurora | 5 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a fingernail dragging against" | | 1 | "edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head" | | 2 | "felt like a closing throat" | | 3 | "felt like a needle piercing her eardrum" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.357 | | wordCount | 1273 | | matches | | 0 | "not the jasmine, but something old" | | 1 | "Not one of the ancient oaks, but a small, jagged rock" | | 2 | "Not toward the moon, but toward her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 30.31 | | std | 20.58 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 15 |
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| 99.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "A movement near the base of a twisted willow—a flash of something pale and spindly—darted behind a trunk." | | 1 | "It didn't have the give of soil; it felt spongy, almost fleshy, like walking across a layer of moss-covered skin." | | 2 | "The Heartstone’s heat was no longer a pulse; it was a steady, searing burn against her skin." | | 3 | "Their petals weren't soft; they were jagged, serrated edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head." | | 4 | "A scent drifted toward her—not the jasmine, but something old and stagnant." | | 5 | "Small, pale hands—too many of them—emerged from the dirt around her feet." | | 6 | "They didn't grab; they simply rested on the surface of the moss, the long, spindly fingers twitching in unison with the pulse of the pendant." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1268 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.028391167192429023 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012618296529968454 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 10.79 | | std | 6.66 | | cv | 0.617 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 29.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.2033898305084746 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 31.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the rhythmic, dull heat" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 40.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 1 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 2 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 3 | "They shouldn't have been blooming." | | 4 | "They swayed, though there was" | | 5 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 6 | "She spun toward the noise," | | 7 | "She took a step forward." | | 8 | "It didn't have the give" | | 9 | "It didn't belong to any" | | 10 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 11 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 12 | "She wiped a bead of" | | 13 | "Her hand shook." | | 14 | "She forced her legs to" | | 15 | "She needed to find the" | | 16 | "It sounded like a fingernail" | | 17 | "It came from above." | | 18 | "It was consistent." | | 19 | "She tightened her grip on" |
| | ratio | 0.448 | |
| 7.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood like" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between the two" | | 2 | "The heavy, humid warmth of" | | 3 | "The silence hit her first." | | 4 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 5 | "Richmond Park had been alive" | | 6 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 7 | "The crimson gem throbbed against" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 9 | "They shouldn't have been blooming." | | 10 | "They swayed, though there was" | | 11 | "Aurora gripped the strap of" | | 12 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 13 | "A movement near the base" | | 14 | "The silence deepened." | | 15 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 16 | "The sound was too sharp," | | 17 | "She spun toward the noise," | | 18 | "The crimson light of the" | | 19 | "She took a step forward." |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 95.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the height of" | | 1 | "To her right, the darkness" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 10.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the absence of sound, but a physical weight, a pressure against her eardrums that made her pulse thrum in her throat." | | 1 | "The crimson gem throbbed against her sternum, a rhythmic heat that bled through her thin shirt." | | 2 | "The scent of nectar intensified, turning cloying, mingling with a metallic tang that reminded her of a copper coin held too long in a sweaty palm." | | 3 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched, a sharp, stinging sensation that radiated up her arm." | | 4 | "The branches hung low, draped in thick, grey lichen that resembled hanging hair." | | 5 | "Their petals weren't soft; they were jagged, serrated edges that seemed to twitch whenever she turned her head." | | 6 | "It didn't have a face, only a suggestion of height and a stillness that felt unnatural." | | 7 | "Not one of the ancient oaks, but a small, jagged rock that sat perfectly upright in the middle of the path." | | 8 | "It wasn't a song, but a drone, a single, unending note that resonated in her teeth." | | 9 | "The heads of the blossoms tilted in unison, their serrated petals shivering, as if they were all watching her move." | | 10 | "In its place stood a wall of ancient, interlocking trunks, their bark bleeding a thick, translucent sap that shimmered like silver in the red light." | | 11 | "The pale hands in the dirt began to pull, the moss dipping and sighing as if the earth itself were inhaling." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |