| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "chaotic" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "symphony" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "maw" | | 16 | "scanning" | | 17 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1337 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1172 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Dymas | 2 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 4 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 25 | | Fae | 4 | | Belphegor | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.433 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like powdered velvet" | | 1 | "sounded like honey poured over gravel" | | 2 | "looked like bloated eyes; the upward-flow" | | 3 | "sounded like a scream muffled by gold" | | 4 | "felt like a ceiling, pressing down on h" | | 5 | "table that seemed to stretch into infinity" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1337 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 25.71 | | std | 17.08 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 57 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 42 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 55 |
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| 95.14% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "were severed" | | 1 | "were fashioned" | | 2 | "were paved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "She gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip; the moonsilver remained ice-cold, a sharp contrast to the oppressive heat of the realm." | | 1 | "The water didn't wet her skin; it sank into her pores, leaving behind a sensation of sudden, intense hunger." | | 2 | "Roasts of meats Aurora couldn't name glistened with honeyed glazes; fruits shaped like stars bled violet syrup onto silver platters." | | 3 | "Small, pale hands—human hands—emerged from the obsidian table, scrubbing the surfaces with frantic, rhythmic motions." | | 4 | "The glowing grapes now looked like bloated eyes; the upward-flowing waterfall sounded like a scream muffled by gold." | | 5 | "It was no longer pulsing; it was vibrating, a frantic warning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1180 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.01864406779661017 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003389830508474576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.94 | | std | 5.63 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 49.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.36607142857142855 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 1 | "She walked forward, the Heartstone" | | 2 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 3 | "They descended a winding path" | | 4 | "They entered a grove of" | | 5 | "She reached for one, but" | | 6 | "She looked closer at the" | | 7 | "She stepped back, her boot" | | 8 | "He wore a coat of" | | 9 | "He didn't walk so much" | | 10 | "His voice sounded like honey" | | 11 | "He looked at the blade," | | 12 | "She lunged forward, slicing through" | | 13 | "She pivoted, her boot catching" | | 14 | "He didn't flinch." | | 15 | "He didn't even move." | | 16 | "He simply stood there, the" | | 17 | "She gripped the Heartstone Pendant." | | 18 | "It was no longer pulsing;" | | 19 | "They pushed deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 48.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the shimmering" | | 1 | "The air hit her lungs" | | 2 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 3 | "The sky burned a constant," | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice drifted like a" | | 5 | "Aurora ignored the warning." | | 6 | "She walked forward, the Heartstone" | | 7 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 8 | "They descended a winding path" | | 9 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 10 | "The water didn't wet her" | | 11 | "Aurora muttered, rubbing her wrist" | | 12 | "The Shade shifted, their form" | | 13 | "A distant chime echoed through" | | 14 | "They entered a grove of" | | 15 | "Roasts of meats Aurora couldn't" | | 16 | "Aurora stopped beside a platter" | | 17 | "She reached for one, but" | | 18 | "Nyx hissed, their violet eyes" | | 19 | "Aurora recoiled, her heart hammering" |
| | ratio | 0.823 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "To their left, a waterfall" | | 1 | "Whenever the wind stirred, the" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the shimmering distortion of the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt like powdered velvet." | | 1 | "Whenever the wind stirred, the branches collided, creating a chaotic, crystalline symphony that vibrated in Aurora's teeth." | | 2 | "The moonsilver hummed, the blade emitting a faint, pale light that sliced through the amber gloom." | | 3 | "The velvet soil turned to thick, viscous syrup, clutching at her ankles, dragging her down." | | 4 | "The Fae blade cut through the magical pull of the earth as if it were wet paper, the moonsilver leaving a trail of frost in the amber air." | | 5 | "It was a sprawling metropolis of gold and bone, built around a central maw that breathed fire and incense." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx hissed, their violet eyes glowing with a sudden intensity" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their form coalescing back into a humanoid shape" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "Aurora snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "the man observed (observe)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "the woman shrieked (shriek)" | | 7 | "Aurora barked (bark)" | | 8 | "the Shade noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |