Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZEQZBTF64BKXN23EZ45GP

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.001188
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gravel crunched beneath Aurora’s boots, the only sound in the suffocating stillness of Richmond Park. Behind her, the distant, rhythmic hum of London breathed—a low, metallic pulse of traffic and sirens—but as she drifted deeper into the shadows of the trees, that world withered. The darkness here held a different weight. It felt thick, like wading through deep water. She pulled her phone from her pocket. The screen’s glare felt violent against the gloom. "I'm at the edge of the park, Eva. The streetlights end about fifty yards back. It's... it's pitch black." She tapped the end of the voice memo and shoved the device back into her jacket. The silence rushed back in to fill the void, heavier than before. The air tasted of damp earth and something sickly sweet, like crushed lilies left to rot in a vase. Aurora gripped the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant. The crimson gem rested against her sternum, a sudden, rhythmic heat that bled through her thin cotton shirt. It pulsed. One beat. Two. The warmth matched the tempo of her own racing heart, then began to drift, a slow, thrumming cadence that had nothing to do with her pulse. The ancient oak standing stones emerged from the mist. They didn't look like landmarks; they looked like teeth, jagged and dark, biting into the low-hanging clouds. As she approached the boundary, the air grew unnaturally still. The wind, which had been tossing the higher branches of the park's outer trees, died instantly. She stepped between the oaks. The transition hit her like a physical pressure in her ears. The silence transitioned from a lack of sound to a presence. It was a vacuum that sucked the breath from her lungs. Wildflowers erupted from the forest floor in a riot of impossible colors. Lavender, pale blues, and violent purples bloomed in the dead of night, their petals shimmering with an inner, bioluminescent light. They didn't sway. Even as she moved, the stalks remained rigid, as if the air itself had frozen solid. "Okay. Okay, Rory. You're here. You're in the Grove." She spoke to the empty air, her voice sounding flat and truncated, as if the trees swallowed the vibrations before they could travel. The Heartstone flared. The crimson light from the gem cast long, dancing shadows across the floral carpet, but the shadows didn't behave. When she moved her hand, the shadow of her arm lagged, a split second behind her actual motion, stretching toward the oaks like a reaching limb. She froze. A rustle broke the stillness. It came from the thicket of ferns to her left. It wasn't the frantic scuttle of a fox or the heavy thud of a deer. It was a slow, sliding sound, like silk being dragged over dry bone. Aurora turned her head, eyes scanning the periphery. The light from the flowers cast everything in a surreal, bruised hue. Nothing moved. The ferns remained still. "Who's there?" The question hung in the air, unanswered. She wiped her palms against her jeans, the friction a small comfort against the creeping chill. She forced herself to move forward, toward the center of the clearing where the light seemed densest. Every step felt wrong. The ground didn't feel like soil; it felt like walking on something yielding and vast, a carpet of something organic that breathed beneath her soles. A flash of movement caught her eye near the base of a massive, silver-barked tree. A shape, darker than the surrounding night, darted behind the trunk. It was too tall for a person, too fluid for an animal. It moved with a sickening, liquid grace that defied the physics of bone and muscle. She stopped. Her breath hitched, coming out in a thin, white plume. "I know someone's watching." The words felt foolish. They felt like a plea. The Heartstone began to vibrate against her skin. The warmth turned into a searing heat, a warning that throbbed in time with a new sound. From the darkness beyond the flowers, a rhythmic tapping emerged. *Tap. Tap. Tap.* It was the sound of something hard striking wood. It didn't come from one direction; it echoed, bouncing off the stones, making it impossible to pin down the source. She reached for her phone again, her fingers trembling. "Eva, if you get this... something is wrong. The stones, the flowers... the time feels wrong. I’ve been walking for ten minutes, but I feel like I've been in here for hours." She didn't wait for a response that wouldn't come. She turned to retreat, to run back through the oak boundary, but the path she had taken was gone. The wildflowers had shifted. They had grown, their luminous heads tilting toward her, crowding the space where the trail had been. They blocked the way with a wall of tangled, glowing stems. The tapping stopped. The silence that followed was worse. It was a predatory silence, the kind that precedes a strike. A scent drifted toward her then—not the lilies, but something sharp and metallic. Iron. Blood. It cut through the sweetness of the grove, making her stomach churn. She spun around, her back to the nearest oak. The bark felt cold and unnervingly smooth, like polished stone. A shadow drifted across the ground at her feet. It didn't belong to her. It was long, spindly, and possessed too many joints. It glided over the glowing petals, momentarily extinguishing their light as it passed, before the flowers flared back to life. The shadow didn't move like a reflection. It moved like a hunter. Aurora's eyes darted upward, searching the canopy. The branches of the oaks didn't meet at the top; they twisted away from each other, creating a jagged, open wound in the sky. Hanging from those branches were shapes. They looked like cocoons, heavy and grey, swaying in a wind she couldn't feel. One of the cocoons dropped. It didn't fall like a dead weight. It descended slowly, drifting through the air like a falling leaf, landing silently in the tall grass just a few feet away. It was the size of a human torso, draped in a translucent, skin-like membrane. She backed away, her heel catching on a protruding root. She stumbled, her hands slamming into the dirt. The earth felt warm. It pulsed. "Get away." The voice didn't come from her. It came from the dark, a wet, distorted rasp that sounded like two stones grinding together underwater. It was barely a whisper, yet it vibrated in her very teeth. The Heartstone turned a violent, angry red, the light bleeding out into the air around her in a frantic, stuttering strobe. In the flashes of crimson light, she saw them. They weren't just one. Dozens of them stood at the edge of the flowerbed, silhouettes of elongated limbs and too-wide heads, watching her with eyes that reflected no light. They didn't move closer. They simply waited, their presence a heavy, suffocating weight that pressed against her chest. The tapping started again. This time, it was closer. It was coming from the trunk of the oak directly behind her head. *Tap. Tap. Tap.* Something thin and sharp brushed against the nape of her neck.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"surreal"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"throbbed"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"churn"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"gloom"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"racing"
8"dancing"
9"silk"
10"scanning"
11"surreal"
12"chill"
13"searing"
14"throbbed"
15"echoed"
16"stomach"
17"churn"
18"whisper"
19"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords1202
ratio0.005
matches
0"Tap. Tap. Tap."
1"Tap. Tap. Tap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1134
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like teeth, jagged and dark, bitin"
1"seemed densest"
2"felt like walking on something yielding"
3"looked like cocoons, heavy and grey, sway"
4"sounded like two stones grinding together"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.832
wordCount1202
matches
0"not the lilies, but something sharp"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean27.95
std19.75
cv0.706
sampleLengths
060
115
219
347
458
552
65
733
851
99
1023
1148
122
1343
1426
152
1623
1746
1853
1912
204
219
2267
239
2432
2560
263
2717
2827
2919
3043
3112
3251
335
3443
3524
362
3735
3821
3956
4022
413
4211
98.83% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"being dragged"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences115
ratio0.052
matches
0"Behind her, the distant, rhythmic hum of London breathed—a low, metallic pulse of traffic and sirens—but as she drifted deeper into the shadows of the trees, that world withered."
1"They didn't look like landmarks; they looked like teeth, jagged and dark, biting into the low-hanging clouds."
2"The ground didn't feel like soil; it felt like walking on something yielding and vast, a carpet of something organic that breathed beneath her soles."
3"It didn't come from one direction; it echoed, bouncing off the stones, making it impossible to pin down the source."
4"A scent drifted toward her then—not the lilies, but something sharp and metallic."
5"The branches of the oaks didn't meet at the top; they twisted away from each other, creating a jagged, open wound in the sky."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1140
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"massive, silver-barked tree."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.031578947368421054
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.45
std7.01
cv0.67
sampleLengths
016
129
27
38
47
58
619
716
812
919
109
1118
122
132
141
1526
169
1717
1810
1916
205
2111
2211
2311
2412
2520
263
2716
289
2923
303
3119
3226
332
345
3510
3615
3713
388
3912
402
414
422
437
4416
4517
464
4725
4815
4911
29.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.26956521739130435
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences95
matches
0"It felt thick, like wading"
1"She pulled her phone from"
2"She tapped the end of"
3"They didn't look like landmarks;"
4"She stepped between the oaks."
5"It was a vacuum that"
6"They didn't sway."
7"She spoke to the empty"
8"It came from the thicket"
9"It wasn't the frantic scuttle"
10"It was a slow, sliding"
11"She wiped her palms against"
12"She forced herself to move"
13"It was too tall for"
14"It moved with a sickening,"
15"Her breath hitched, coming out"
16"They felt like a plea."
17"It didn't come from one"
18"She reached for her phone"
19"She didn't wait for a"
ratio0.442
7.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences95
matches
0"The gravel crunched beneath Aurora’s"
1"The darkness here held a"
2"It felt thick, like wading"
3"She pulled her phone from"
4"The screen’s glare felt violent"
5"She tapped the end of"
6"The silence rushed back in"
7"The air tasted of damp"
8"Aurora gripped the silver chain"
9"The crimson gem rested against"
10"The warmth matched the tempo"
11"The ancient oak standing stones"
12"They didn't look like landmarks;"
13"The wind, which had been"
14"She stepped between the oaks."
15"The transition hit her like"
16"The silence transitioned from a"
17"It was a vacuum that"
18"Wildflowers erupted from the forest"
19"Lavender, pale blues, and violent"
ratio0.905
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Even as she moved, the"
ratio0.011
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The crimson gem rested against her sternum, a sudden, rhythmic heat that bled through her thin cotton shirt."
1"The wind, which had been tossing the higher branches of the park's outer trees, died instantly."
2"It was a vacuum that sucked the breath from her lungs."
3"She spoke to the empty air, her voice sounding flat and truncated, as if the trees swallowed the vibrations before they could travel."
4"Dozens of them stood at the edge of the flowerbed, silhouettes of elongated limbs and too-wide heads, watching her with eyes that reflected no light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.4912%