| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1205 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1205 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "surreal" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "throbbed" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "churn" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1202 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Tap. Tap. Tap." | | 1 | "Tap. Tap. Tap." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1134 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like teeth, jagged and dark, bitin" | | 1 | "seemed densest" | | 2 | "felt like walking on something yielding" | | 3 | "looked like cocoons, heavy and grey, sway" | | 4 | "sounded like two stones grinding together" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.832 | | wordCount | 1202 | | matches | | 0 | "not the lilies, but something sharp" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 27.95 | | std | 19.75 | | cv | 0.706 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 67 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 56 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 |
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| 98.83% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the distant, rhythmic hum of London breathed—a low, metallic pulse of traffic and sirens—but as she drifted deeper into the shadows of the trees, that world withered." | | 1 | "They didn't look like landmarks; they looked like teeth, jagged and dark, biting into the low-hanging clouds." | | 2 | "The ground didn't feel like soil; it felt like walking on something yielding and vast, a carpet of something organic that breathed beneath her soles." | | 3 | "It didn't come from one direction; it echoed, bouncing off the stones, making it impossible to pin down the source." | | 4 | "A scent drifted toward her then—not the lilies, but something sharp and metallic." | | 5 | "The branches of the oaks didn't meet at the top; they twisted away from each other, creating a jagged, open wound in the sky." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1140 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "massive, silver-barked tree." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.031578947368421054 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010526315789473684 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 10.45 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 29.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.26956521739130435 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.16% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt thick, like wading" | | 1 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 2 | "She tapped the end of" | | 3 | "They didn't look like landmarks;" | | 4 | "She stepped between the oaks." | | 5 | "It was a vacuum that" | | 6 | "They didn't sway." | | 7 | "She spoke to the empty" | | 8 | "It came from the thicket" | | 9 | "It wasn't the frantic scuttle" | | 10 | "It was a slow, sliding" | | 11 | "She wiped her palms against" | | 12 | "She forced herself to move" | | 13 | "It was too tall for" | | 14 | "It moved with a sickening," | | 15 | "Her breath hitched, coming out" | | 16 | "They felt like a plea." | | 17 | "It didn't come from one" | | 18 | "She reached for her phone" | | 19 | "She didn't wait for a" |
| | ratio | 0.442 | |
| 7.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The gravel crunched beneath Aurora’s" | | 1 | "The darkness here held a" | | 2 | "It felt thick, like wading" | | 3 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 4 | "The screen’s glare felt violent" | | 5 | "She tapped the end of" | | 6 | "The silence rushed back in" | | 7 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 8 | "Aurora gripped the silver chain" | | 9 | "The crimson gem rested against" | | 10 | "The warmth matched the tempo" | | 11 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 12 | "They didn't look like landmarks;" | | 13 | "The wind, which had been" | | 14 | "She stepped between the oaks." | | 15 | "The transition hit her like" | | 16 | "The silence transitioned from a" | | 17 | "It was a vacuum that" | | 18 | "Wildflowers erupted from the forest" | | 19 | "Lavender, pale blues, and violent" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Even as she moved, the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem rested against her sternum, a sudden, rhythmic heat that bled through her thin cotton shirt." | | 1 | "The wind, which had been tossing the higher branches of the park's outer trees, died instantly." | | 2 | "It was a vacuum that sucked the breath from her lungs." | | 3 | "She spoke to the empty air, her voice sounding flat and truncated, as if the trees swallowed the vibrations before they could travel." | | 4 | "Dozens of them stood at the edge of the flowerbed, silhouettes of elongated limbs and too-wide heads, watching her with eyes that reflected no light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |