Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZFFHW9Y5CW0A9C209MJ0M

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Duration:
2m 58s
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$0.000910
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Together

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden tasted of ozone and wet copper. Dust motes danced in the harsh glare of portable floodlights, illuminating peeling tiles and rusted girders. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a coil of severed cabling, her boots clicking against the grime-slicked concrete with military precision. She stopped at the edge of the perimeter tape, her brown eyes scanning the cavernous void of the platform. A body lay sprawled across the tracks. The victim, a man in a bespoke charcoal suit, looked like a discarded marionette with its strings cut. Blood had pooled around his head in a perfect, unnerving circle, defying the slight incline of the rails. Detective Sergeant Miller stood over the corpse, his notebook open. He looked pale under the fluorescent humming of the lights. "Entry was forced through the ventilation shaft. No signs of a struggle, just a sudden collapse. Likely a heart attack brought on by the climb, though the head wound suggests he hit the rail on the way down." Quinn didn't answer. She stepped closer, the worn leather watch on her left wrist ticking in the oppressive silence. She crouched, her sharp jaw tightening as she looked at the blood. "Heart attacks don't leave geometric patterns, Miller." Miller shifted his weight, glancing around the shadows of the tunnel. "The medics said the trauma to the skull matches the impact of the fall. He was out of breath, panicked. Maybe he was trespassing, looking for something." Quinn ignored him. She leaned in, her nose inches from the concrete. Small, translucent flakes littered the edge of the blood pool. They looked like salt, but they shimmered with an iridescent oil-slick sheen. She reached into her pocket for a pair of tweezers and lifted a single flake. It didn't cling to the metal; it hovered, vibrating slightly, before snapping back toward the body like a magnet. "Look at his hands." Miller peered down. "Clenched. Rigor setting in?" "Too fast." Quinn gently pried open the victim's right fist. There was no weapon. No wallet. Instead, a small, jagged piece of bleached bone rested in the palm. It was carved with a singular, weeping eye. "Some kind of cultist token?" Miller asked. "A key." Quinn stood up and scanned the wall of the station. To any other eye, it was a dead end of soot-stained brick and graffiti. But the light from the floodlights hit the wall at an angle, revealing faint, etched lines that didn't match the urban decay. They were sigils, worn thin by time and friction, blending into the grime. "The forensics team missed the residue on the brickwork." Miller frowned, stepping beside her. "I don't see anything but dirt, Quinn." "The dirt is moving." She pointed to a thin vein of black sludge seeping from a crack in the masonry. It didn't drip; it pulsed. Quinn felt a cold prickle at the base of her neck, a phantom echo of the day she had lost Morris three years ago. The air here felt thin, as if the room were inhaling. She moved toward the wall, her eyes tracing the pattern of the sigils. They formed a circle, interrupted by a single gap. She pressed the bone token into the void. There was no click, no mechanical sound. Instead, the air shivered. A ripple of distortion tore through the space, like heat haze on a summer highway, momentarily revealing a glimpse of a crowded bazaar filled with floating lanterns and hooded figures before snapping shut. Miller recoiled, nearly tripping over his own feet. "What the hell was that? Some kind of projection?" "A door." Quinn stepped back, her gaze returning to the body. She noticed a detail she had overlooked: the victim's shoes. They were expensive Italian leather, but the soles were caked in a strange, violet sand that didn't exist in London. "He didn't fall from the vents, Miller. He was pushed out from the wall." "That's impossible. The wall is solid brick." "It was solid until he had the token." She walked a slow circle around the corpse, her mind cataloging the discrepancies. The blood circle, the iridescent flakes, the violet sand, and the bone key. The crime scene wasn't a random accident in a derelict station. It was a botched transaction. "Check the victim's pockets again. Not for a wallet. Look for something small. Brass." Miller sighed, kneeling back down. He patted the suit jacket, grumbling under his breath, until his fingers caught on something in the inner lining. He pulled out a small brass compass. The casing had a heavy patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that seemed to writhe under the floodlights. "A compass? The needle isn't even moving." Quinn took the device. The moment her skin touched the brass, the needle snapped violently to the left, pointing not north, but straight down into the darkness of the tunnel, toward the depths of the city. "It's not pointing to a pole." "Then where is it pointing?" "To the rest of the market." Quinn looked back at the bone token. She remembered the reports of "ghost markets" and urban legends she had dismissed as police folklore. She thought of the unexplained void that had swallowed Morris, the way the evidence had vanished into thin air. "Seal the area," Quinn commanded, her voice cold and precise. "Tell the Super we have a contaminated scene. I want the forensics team out of here in ten minutes." Miller stared at her. "You're going to report this as a supernatural occurrence? You'll be laughed out of the precinct." "I'm not reporting it yet." She gripped the compass tightly, the metal biting into her palm. The needle continued to quiver, pulling her toward the dark. She didn't care about the precinct or the regulations. She saw the pattern now—the same shimmering residue, the same impossible geometry. "He was a courier," Quinn whispered, more to herself than Miller. "And he failed to deliver." She turned away from the body and began to walk in the direction the needle pointed, leaving the floodlights and the perimeter tape behind. The darkness of the tunnel swallowed her, the rhythmic ticking of her watch the only sound in the subterranean silence.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1041
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"oppressive"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"perfect"
2"oppressive"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"shimmered"
6"scanned"
7"etched"
8"pulsed"
9"echo"
10"tracing"
11"mechanical"
12"depths"
13"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
57.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1040
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount799
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Sergeant1
Miller9
Morris2
Italian1
London1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.812
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a discarded marionette with i"
1"looked like salt, but they shimmered with"
2"sigils that seemed to writhe under the floodlights"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.962
wordCount1040
matches
0"not north, but straight down into the darkness of the tunnel, toward the de"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.11
std20.94
cv0.906
sampleLengths
070
143
220
338
431
57
611
727
868
94
107
112
1234
137
142
1559
169
175
187
194
2056
2174
228
239
242
2539
2614
277
288
2942
3014
3154
327
3336
346
355
366
3742
3829
394
4016
415
4242
4316
4444
89.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"was carved"
1"were caked"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"were inhaling"
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences91
ratio0.033
matches
0"It didn't cling to the metal; it hovered, vibrating slightly, before snapping back toward the body like a magnet."
1"It didn't drip; it pulsed."
2"She saw the pattern now—the same shimmering residue, the same impossible geometry."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount803
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.0224159402241594
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008717310087173101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean11.43
std7.22
cv0.632
sampleLengths
015
116
220
319
47
518
618
710
810
938
103
1116
1212
137
1411
1527
163
179
1810
1912
2015
2119
224
233
244
252
268
274
282
2912
308
317
322
3310
3414
3522
3613
379
385
397
404
4116
425
4324
4411
4513
469
478
487
494
53.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3516483516483517
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Instead, a small, jagged piece"
1"Instead, the air shivered."
ratio0.031
53.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences65
matches
0"She stopped at the edge"
1"He looked pale under the"
2"She stepped closer, the worn"
3"She crouched, her sharp jaw"
4"She leaned in, her nose"
5"They looked like salt, but"
6"She reached into her pocket"
7"It didn't cling to the"
8"It was carved with a"
9"They were sigils, worn thin"
10"She pointed to a thin"
11"It didn't drip; it pulsed."
12"She moved toward the wall,"
13"They formed a circle, interrupted"
14"She pressed the bone token"
15"She noticed a detail she"
16"They were expensive Italian leather,"
17"She walked a slow circle"
18"It was a botched transaction."
19"He patted the suit jacket,"
ratio0.415
13.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Dust motes danced in the"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
3"She stopped at the edge"
4"A body lay sprawled across"
5"The victim, a man in"
6"Blood had pooled around his"
7"Detective Sergeant Miller stood over"
8"He looked pale under the"
9"Quinn didn't answer."
10"She stepped closer, the worn"
11"She crouched, her sharp jaw"
12"Miller shifted his weight, glancing"
13"Quinn ignored him."
14"She leaned in, her nose"
15"They looked like salt, but"
16"She reached into her pocket"
17"It didn't cling to the"
18"Miller peered down."
19"Quinn gently pried open the"
ratio0.892
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"To any other eye, it"
ratio0.015
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a coil of severed cabling, her boots clicking against the grime-slicked concrete with military precision."
1"But the light from the floodlights hit the wall at an angle, revealing faint, etched lines that didn't match the urban decay."
2"The casing had a heavy patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that seemed to writhe under the floodlights."
3"She thought of the unexplained void that had swallowed Morris, the way the evidence had vanished into thin air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn commanded, her voice cold and precise"
1"Quinn whispered, more to herself than Miller"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.071
78.8043%