Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZH0GPDEKP71D1F9TV5T1E

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Duration:
9m 21s
Cost:
$0.001656
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Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance pulsed, casting rhythmic emerald shadows across the mahogany bar. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung heavy with the scent of cedarwood, spilled gin, and the damp residue of a London evening. Rory wiped a ring of condensation from the wood, her movements rhythmic and practiced. She adjusted the sleeve of her jacket, the fabric grazing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The bell above the door chimed. A gust of cold, rain-slicked air cut through the warmth of the bar. A woman stepped in, shaking a black umbrella. She paused, eyes scanning the dim interior where old maps and monochrome photographs clung to the walls like peeling skin. The light from the street filtered through the windows, catching the sharp line of a jaw and the expensive sheen of a silk trench coat. Rory froze. The rag in her hand went limp. "Rory?" The voice sounded like polished glass, stripped of the melodic Welsh lilt that had defined it in Cardiff. Rory leaned against the bar, her heart hammering against her ribs. "Eva." Eva crossed the room. Her gait lacked the frantic, bouncy energy that once characterized her every movement. Now, she moved with a measured, almost surgical precision. She sat on the stool directly in front of Rory, her posture a perfect vertical line. "You look... well." Eva smoothed the silk of her skirt, her manicured fingers catching the green neon glow. "I look like a delivery driver in Soho." Rory set the rag down and reached for a clean glass. "It suits you. The grit. The anonymity." Eva’s eyes, once bright and searching, remained steady and strangely hollow. She stared at a framed photograph of a foggy London street from the 1940s. "Is that what you wanted? To disappear into the fog?" Rory polished the glass, the squeak of the cloth the only sound between them. "I didn't disappear. I just stopped being visible to people who didn't matter." Eva’s lips thinned into a ghost of a smile. She reached for the menu, though her eyes never left Rory’s face. "The barrister's daughter, the pre-law prodigy. I remember telling everyone you'd be in Westminster by now. Running some firm, wearing power suits and taking names." Rory set the glass down with a sharp *thud*. "Law felt like a cage. Cardiff felt like a cage. Even the air there felt heavy, like it was waiting for me to trip." Eva traced the rim of her empty water glass. "I heard about Evan. Toward the end." Rory’s fingers tightened around the edge of the bar. The wood felt cold. "He's a memory. A bad one. Nothing more." "You didn't call when you moved. Not once." Eva looked up, and for a flicker of a second, the old Eva surfaced—the girl who had sat on the stone walls of Bute Park and promised they would never lose touch. Then, the mask slid back into place. "The move wasn't a vacation, Eva. It was an escape. I didn't have the luxury of checking in." "We were supposed to be the ones who made it out together." Eva’s voice dropped, losing its polished edge. "I made it out. I just ended up in a different kind of room." She gestured vaguely to her surroundings, to her clothes, to the stillness in her expression. Rory leaned forward, the dim light highlighting the dark circles beneath her blue eyes. "What happened to the girl who wanted to burn every rulebook in Wales?" Eva let out a short, dry laugh that didn't reach her eyes. "The girl who wanted to burn rulebooks eventually realized she needed the rules to keep the walls from falling in. Life gets complicated when you actually succeed, Rory. The stakes change. The people you meet... they aren't childhood friends." "They're business associates." Rory watched a bead of condensation roll down the side of a nearby bottle. "That's a lonely way to live." "It's a safe way to live." Eva straightened her shoulders, her gaze hardening. "And you? Delivering food to people who don't know your name? Living in a flat above a bar? It seems a bit... diminished." Rory felt the sting, but she didn't flinch. She had learned to embrace the weight of the Soho streets. "I know who I am here. When I wake up, I don't have to pretend I'm someone else's success story. I don't have to perform." Eva’s hand trembled, just once, before she gripped her handbag. "You always were too proud for your own good. Even back then." "And you were always too busy looking at the horizon to notice the ground beneath your feet." The silence returned, thicker than before. It settled over the bar, heavy and suffocating. Outside, a taxi hissed through a puddle, the sound muffled by the thick glass. Silas moved in the shadows of the back room, his heavy tread a distant, comforting rhythm. Eva looked away, her gaze drifting to the maps on the wall. "I saw your mother's name in a local paper once. A teaching award. She looked happy. Older, but happy." Rory swallowed hard. "She's fine. She doesn't ask about London. She doesn't ask about me." "Because it's easier that way." Eva’s voice held no judgment, only a profound, weary recognition. "If she knew, it would break her. And you wouldn't want to be the one to do that." Rory turned her back to the bar, grabbing a bottle of bitters to reorganize the shelf. Her movements were jerky, lacking their usual grace. "I didn't come here to talk about my mother." "None of us came here for the truth, did we?" Eva signaled the bartender, though Silas was occupied elsewhere. She tapped a rhythmic pattern on the wood, her rings clicking against the mahogany. "I saw your post. The one about the gallery opening in South Kensington. I almost commented. I almost reached out." Rory turned back, her eyes locking onto Eva’s. "But you didn't." "I didn't know what to say to a ghost." "I'm not a ghost, Eva. I'm just someone you used to know." Eva leaned back, the emerald light from the sign washing over her face, making her look like a statue carved from jade. "Is that all we are now? Relics of a version of ourselves that died in Cardiff?" Rory gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles turning white. "Maybe that's the only way to survive. To let the old versions die." Eva stared at her for a long moment, searching for something in Rory's expression—perhaps a hint of the girl she used to protect, or a spark of the anger they had once shared. She found neither. "You've become very good at that." Eva reached into her bag and pulled out a heavy, cream-colored envelope. She slid it across the damp wood. "I didn't come here to reminisce, Rory. I came to give you this. It belongs to you. It always did." Rory looked down at the envelope. It sat between them like a boundary line. "What is this?" "A reminder of what you left behind. And a way to ensure you never have to go back." Eva stood up, her silk coat rustling. She looked down at Rory, and for the first time, the polish cracked. A single, sharp line of grief etched itself around her mouth. "Don't wait for the world to catch up to you. It won't." Eva turned and walked toward the door, her movements no longer measured, but hurried. The bell chimed again as she stepped out into the London rain. Rory remained motionless, her eyes fixed on the cream-colored envelope.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"silk"
count3
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"measured"
count2
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"ensure"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"rhythmic"
2"warmth"
3"scanning"
4"silk"
5"lilt"
6"measured"
7"perfect"
8"traced"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"trembled"
12"silence"
13"comforting"
14"profound"
15"reminder"
16"ensure"
17"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"felt the sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1278
ratio0.001
matches
0"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
20.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount770
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Rory20
Eva20
Bute1
Park1
Soho1
Silas2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bute"
4"Park"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.201
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like polished glass, stripped of t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1278
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean15.98
std11.84
cv0.741
sampleLengths
071
119
253
39
41
518
611
71
842
93
1015
118
1211
137
1425
1510
1614
1713
1821
1925
209
2124
229
237
2413
258
268
2739
2818
2912
307
3114
3215
3314
3413
3512
3639
373
3814
396
406
417
4223
4319
4425
4510
4612
4717
4844
4912
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was occupied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
88.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences106
ratio0.019
matches
0"Eva looked up, and for a flicker of a second, the old Eva surfaced—the girl who had sat on the stone walls of Bute Park and promised they would never lose touch."
1"Eva stared at her for a long moment, searching for something in Rory's expression—perhaps a hint of the girl she used to protect, or a spark of the anger they had once shared."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount776
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cold, rain-slicked air"
2"heavy, cream-colored envelope."
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.029639175257731958
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006443298969072165
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean12.06
std6.74
cv0.559
sampleLengths
016
123
214
318
46
513
68
720
825
92
107
111
1218
1311
141
154
1613
179
1816
193
2015
218
2211
237
2411
2514
2610
2714
2813
299
3012
3125
329
3324
349
357
369
374
388
398
4032
417
4218
4312
447
4514
4615
4714
4813
4912
47.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2641509433962264
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners28
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then, the mask slid back"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences64
matches
0"She adjusted the sleeve of"
1"She paused, eyes scanning the"
2"Her gait lacked the frantic,"
3"She sat on the stool"
4"She stared at a framed"
5"She reached for the menu,"
6"She gestured vaguely to her"
7"She had learned to embrace"
8"It settled over the bar,"
9"Her movements were jerky, lacking"
10"She tapped a rhythmic pattern"
11"She found neither."
12"She slid it across the"
13"It sat between them like"
14"She looked down at Rory,"
ratio0.234
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences64
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory wiped a ring of"
2"She adjusted the sleeve of"
3"The bell above the door"
4"A gust of cold, rain-slicked"
5"A woman stepped in, shaking"
6"She paused, eyes scanning the"
7"The light from the street"
8"The rag in her hand"
9"The voice sounded like polished"
10"Rory leaned against the bar,"
11"Eva crossed the room."
12"Her gait lacked the frantic,"
13"She sat on the stool"
14"Eva smoothed the silk of"
15"Rory set the rag down"
16"Eva’s eyes, once bright and"
17"She stared at a framed"
18"Rory polished the glass, the"
19"Eva’s lips thinned into a"
ratio0.938
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Now, she moved with a"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8191%