| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1374 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1374 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "complex" | | 10 | "symphony" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "cascading" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "dancing" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1371 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1189 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Rory | 18 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Ahead | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.743 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "shape that seemed to drink the little light that remained" | | 1 | "runes that seemed to writhe if Rory looked at them too directly" | | 2 | "looked like oil on water—a shimmering, ir" | | 3 | "seemed more solid here, their shadow-form absorbing the ambient light like a sponge" | | 4 | "hum that seemed to vibrate in her teeth, accompanied by the distant, crystalline tinkling of something like glass wind chimes" | | 5 | "something like glass wind chimes" | | 6 | "quite birdsong, and it wasn't quite the wind" | | 7 | "quite the wind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1371 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 40.32 | | std | 24.31 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 78 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 70 | | 21 | 67 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 74 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 82 | | 33 | 13 |
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| 77.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been trapped" | | 3 | "were lost" | | 4 | "were made" | | 5 | "was unwritten" |
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| 30.80% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "was biting" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was flickering" | | 3 | "was waiting" | | 4 | "were already beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The voice didn't come from a throat; it seemed to vibrate out of the very air around Rory’s ears." | | 1 | "It looked like oil on water—a shimmering, iridescent distortion that warped the view of the trees beyond." | | 2 | "The sky above wasn't the charcoal gray of a London night; it was a swirling expanse of twilight purples and bruised golds, as if a sunset had been trapped in a jar and shaken." | | 3 | "The light didn't seem to come from a sun or moon, but from everything at once—the glowing veins in the leaves, the translucent petals of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible colors, and the very air itself, which hung heavy with a soft, bioluminescent haze." | | 4 | "Every step felt strange; the ground was springy, almost sentient, as if the earth were breathing beneath her feet." | | 5 | "As the group approached, Rory noticed that the water didn't ripple when a breeze caught it; it moved in slow, hypnotic swirls, like cream stirred into coffee." | | 6 | "She looked at her watch—the digital display was flickering wildly, the numbers dancing in a nonsensical sequence before the screen went dark." | | 7 | "She wasn't a warrior, and she wasn't a seer; she was a girl from Cardiff who delivered food to survive." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1198 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03672787979966611 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010851419031719533 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 16.32 | | std | 6.95 | | cv | 0.426 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 44 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 53.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.39285714285714285 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint, violet glow" | | 1 | "Suddenly, the Heartstone pendant against" | | 2 | "Then, gravity returned with a" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It was quiet in this" | | 2 | "She felt a strange, creeping" | | 3 | "It wasn't a vibration, but" | | 4 | "It wasn't a gradual opening" | | 5 | "It looked like oil on" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, crossing the" | | 7 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 8 | "She gasped, the air rushing" | | 9 | "They were in the Fae" | | 10 | "It wasn't the absence of" | | 11 | "It wasn't quite birdsong, and" | | 12 | "It was the sound of" | | 13 | "Their branches were made of" | | 14 | "She looked at her watch—the" | | 15 | "She looked at Isolde, who" | | 16 | "She wasn't a warrior, and" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 53.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, heavy air of" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It was quiet in this" | | 3 | "The distant, rhythmic hum of" | | 4 | "The Half-Fae didn't so much" | | 5 | "Rory watched her feet, half-expecting" | | 6 | "Isolde passed over the twigs" | | 7 | "Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes" | | 8 | "Rory asked, though her voice" | | 9 | "She felt a strange, creeping" | | 10 | "Isolde replied, a small, cryptic" | | 11 | "A low, melodic murmur, like" | | 12 | "Nyx was there, though was" | | 13 | "The Shade was a silhouette" | | 14 | "The voice didn't come from" | | 15 | "Rory reached down, her hand" | | 16 | "The moonsilver was biting cold" | | 17 | "It wasn't a vibration, but" | | 18 | "The deep crimson gem began" | | 19 | "Rory said, her voice dropping" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, heavy air of a London evening clung to Aurora’s skin, the kind of humidity that made her black hair curl slightly at the nape of her neck." | | 1 | "Beside her, Isolde moved with a grace that felt fundamentally wrong to Rory’s practical, logical mind." | | 2 | "The Shade was a silhouette of shifting, ink-black void, a humanoid shape that seemed to drink the little light that remained." | | 3 | "Only the faint, violet glow of their eyes gave them a presence that wasn't merely an absence of light." | | 4 | "The moonsilver was biting cold against her palm, a grounding, sharp sensation that reminded her she was still tethered to reality." | | 5 | "It wasn't a vibration, but a rhythmic pulse of heat, a steady *thump-thump* that mirrored a heartbeat." | | 6 | "It looked like oil on water—a shimmering, iridescent distortion that warped the view of the trees beyond." | | 7 | "For a heartbeat, Rory felt weightless, as if her bones had been replaced by hollow glass." | | 8 | "She stumbled, her boots sinking into grass that felt less like vegetation and more like velvet." | | 9 | "The sky above wasn't the charcoal gray of a London night; it was a swirling expanse of twilight purples and bruised golds, as if a sunset had been trapped in a …" | | 10 | "The light didn't seem to come from a sun or moon, but from everything at once—the glowing veins in the leaves, the translucent petals of wildflowers that bloome…" | | 11 | "Every step felt strange; the ground was springy, almost sentient, as if the earth were breathing beneath her feet." | | 12 | "There was a low, melodic hum that seemed to vibrate in her teeth, accompanied by the distant, crystalline tinkling of something like glass wind chimes." | | 13 | "Their branches were made of spun silver, cascading down into a pool of water that glowed with a pale, moonlight blue." | | 14 | "She looked at Isolde, who stood motionless by the glowing pool, and then at Nyx, a creature of nothingness in a world of too much." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her lavender eyes scanning the canopy" | | 1 | "Rory asked, though her voice lacked its usual sharp edge" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice dropping" | | 3 | "Rory whispered, the word feeling inadequate" | | 4 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding strangely loud in the heavy air" | | 5 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the glowing pool" | | 6 | "Rory said, her hand tightening on the Fae-Forged blade" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "Rory noted (note)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.462 | |