Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZPHYBDTT7A5JRM2CP1GTG

Run Details

Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.002826
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the standing stones tasted like crushed mint and old ozone. Aurora stepped through the boundary, her boots finding purchase on moss that felt more like velvet than plant life. Behind her, the roar of London traffic evaporated, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated in the marrow of her teeth. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket flared against her collarbone, a sharp, pulsing heat that mirrored the rhythmic thrum. This place is not Richmond, is it. Nyx drifted alongside her, feet hovering an inch above the iridescent ground. The shade’s violet eyes scanned the towering canopy where trees spiraled like corkscrews, their bark translucent and veined with glowing sap. The space between breaths is what you usually find here, Rory. Do not touch the sap. It leaves stains that last for lifetimes. A few paces ahead, Isolde walked with a fluid, unnatural grace, her waist-length silver hair trailing behind her like moonlight caught in a breeze. She stopped at the edge of a stream that flowed upward, the water defying gravity to curl into delicate, crystalline arcs before splashing into floating basins of stone. Seek the path where the gravity bows to the intent, not the foot. The Veil holds its breath in this grove, but the hunger of Dymas creeps close to the cracks. Aurora gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, the moonsilver metal humming a freezing protest against the humid, perfumed air. She watched a cluster of blue-petaled flowers bloom and wither in the space of a heartbeat, their cycle dictated by the erratic pulse of the amber sky above. Everything here feels like it is waiting for a signal. Keep your eyes on the shadows, Nyx. If the Veil is thin enough to let this place bleed into the park, what else might be watching from the other side? Nyx narrowed their eyes, the darkness of their silhouette deepening until it seemed to swallow the ambient light of the grove. The shade drifted toward an ancient oak, fingers trailing along the bark, the wood shying away from the touch. The Wardens are blind to this sector. They monitor the rifts, but they ignore the slow rot. Someone opened a door, Aurora. Your Heartstone is not just a trinket. It is a beacon. Aurora felt the heavy weight of the pendant. She remembered the delivery shift, the rainy alley behind Golden Empress, and the way the stone had felt dead in her hand until she stepped into this hidden pocket. The warmth intensified now, pulling her toward a cluster of obsidian pillars at the center of the clearing. Between the columns, the air shimmered with that familiar, sickening distortion she had learned to recognize as a tear—a jagged wound in reality. The scent hit her first—something cloyingly sweet, like rotting peaches and burnt sugar. That is the smell of a Dymasian kitchen. Prince Belphegor does not invite guests because he is charitable. He invites them to fill the menu. Isolde turned, her expression unreadable, eyes clouded with a frantic, shifting lilac haze. The mouth of the feast opens wide today, and the silver blade must find its hunger. To close the gate, you must sever the tether, not the spirit. Choose your strike before the flavor of your own soul becomes the main course. Aurora stepped forward, the ground beneath her shifting from soft moss to hardened, black glass. She saw the reflection of the grove in the floor, but it was inverted, showing a landscape of scorched orange vineyards and sky-high, burning ovens. A figure moved on the other side of the glass, tall and gaunt, skin the color of bruised plums, reaching a clawed hand toward the shimmering seam. The creature’s eyes locked onto hers, burning with the familiar, gluttonous hunger of a predator that had tasted too much and felt too little. It looks like a chef. How domestic. Nyx coalesced into a more solid form, the shadows wrapping around them like armor. They moved to flank the pillars, their presence causing the air to chill until frost coated the obsidian. Do not let it speak, Rory. The Dymasian tongue is a poison that weaves into your logic. Keep your mind on the cold steel. The creature’s hand pressed against the Veil, the barrier rippling under the pressure. A voice, slick and syrupy, slithered through the gap, bypassing her ears to resonate directly inside her skull. Why settle for the scraps of the mortal realm? The vintage here is older than your history, and the indulgence is infinite. Just a touch. Just a taste of the excess. Aurora felt the blade in her hand grow colder, the moonsilver glowing with a fierce, pale light that forced the creeping shadows of the grove to retreat. She tightened her grip until her knuckles ached, the crescent scar on her wrist tingling with the familiar sting of a warning. She didn’t look at the creature’s face. She looked at the tether—a thin, glowing strand of golden thread that anchored the rip to the obsidian pillar. The tether is the connection. If I cut it, the rift snaps back? Isolde stood perfectly still, her silver hair unmoving despite the rising wind. A Fae blade severs existence, not just space. Once the cord is frayed, the feast ends for both sides. The ground shuddered. The creature on the other side threw its weight against the distortion, the gap widening with a sound like tearing parchment. A clawed finger poked through, the skin sizzling as it touched the oxygen of the grove. The smell of burning sugar spiked, turning sharp and metallic. Aurora didn't hesitate. She didn't let the temptation of the voice settle. She lunged, her boots clattering against the glass floor, the blade arcing in a wide, shimmering white trail. Her movement was quick, a sharp pivot that caught the creature off guard. She didn't aim for the beast; she aimed for the light between the pillars. The moonsilver sung a high, piercing note as it collided with the golden thread. The impact didn't feel like cutting something physical. It felt like snapping a taut wire inside her own chest. A shockwave of air threw her backward, slamming her into the cooling bark of an oak. The world tilted violently. She heard a shriek that sounded like grinding metal, and then silence—a sudden, absolute, crushing silence that swallowed the humming of the grove. The sky above faded from shifting amber to the dull, overcast grey of a London afternoon. The obsidian pillars crumbled into fine, black sand. Aurora pushed herself up, her breath hitching in her chest. The Heartstone pendant hung against her skin, no longer hot, but cold as a winter morning. She looked down at the blade in her hand; the luminescent glow had vanished, leaving only a dull, tarnished strip of metal. Isolde stood in the center of the clearing, the space around her showing no signs of the chaos. She plucked a single, dying wildflower from the dirt and held it toward the sun. The bill is paid. For now. But the kitchen never truly cools, and the guest who survives the first course is always invited back for the second. Nyx dissolved into a wisp of darkness, circling Aurora once before settling into her shadow. Their voice echoed in her mind, tired and jagged. We have a minute before the Wardens notice the surge. Move, Rory. The park rangers do not appreciate people who collapse the fabric of reality during their lunch hour.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:02:21.587Z" 5/10/2026, 1:02:21 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1261
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1261
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"crystalline"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"beacon"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count3
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"predator"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"rhythmic"
2"vibrated"
3"scanned"
4"crystalline"
5"pulse"
6"beacon"
7"weight"
8"warmth"
9"shimmered"
10"familiar"
11"unreadable"
12"predator"
13"chill"
14"silence"
15"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1257
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1257
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London2
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Richmond1
Rory3
Isolde4
Veil3
Dymas1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx5
Wardens2
Aurora9
Golden1
Empress1
Dymasian2
Belphegor1
Fae2
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Veil"
4"Dymas"
5"Blade"
6"Nyx"
7"Wardens"
8"Aurora"
9"Belphegor"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like crushed mint and old ozone"
1"felt like snapping a taut wire inside h"
2"sounded like grinding metal, and then sile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1257
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.08
std17.44
cv0.527
sampleLengths
013
160
27
333
423
552
631
751
840
940
1033
1178
1213
1325
1413
1542
1667
1724
187
1932
2024
2131
2231
2375
2413
2512
2619
2750
2830
2941
3019
3143
3224
3348
3433
3527
3624
3729
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"was inverted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences94
ratio0.064
matches
0"Between the columns, the air shimmered with that familiar, sickening distortion she had learned to recognize as a tear—a jagged wound in reality."
1"The scent hit her first—something cloyingly sweet, like rotting peaches and burnt sugar."
2"She looked at the tether—a thin, glowing strand of golden thread that anchored the rip to the obsidian pillar."
3"She didn't aim for the beast; she aimed for the light between the pillars."
4"She heard a shriek that sounded like grinding metal, and then silence—a sudden, absolute, crushing silence that swallowed the humming of the grove."
5"She looked down at the blade in her hand; the luminescent glow had vanished, leaving only a dull, tarnished strip of metal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02766798418972332
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005533596837944664
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.37
std6.96
cv0.521
sampleLengths
013
119
222
319
47
512
621
711
85
97
1024
1128
1213
1318
1423
1528
1610
177
1823
1921
2019
217
2210
235
247
254
268
2729
2818
2923
3013
318
3210
337
3413
3516
3612
3714
3815
3925
4027
4124
425
432
4414
4518
466
4711
487
4913
48.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35106382978723405
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just a touch."
1"Just a taste of the"
2"Once the cord is frayed,"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences91
matches
0"It leaves stains that last"
1"She stopped at the edge"
2"She watched a cluster of"
3"They monitor the rifts, but"
4"Your Heartstone is not just"
5"It is a beacon."
6"She remembered the delivery shift,"
7"He invites them to fill"
8"She saw the reflection of"
9"It looks like a chef."
10"They moved to flank the"
11"She tightened her grip until"
12"She didn’t look at the"
13"She looked at the tether—a"
14"She didn't let the temptation"
15"She lunged, her boots clattering"
16"Her movement was quick, a"
17"She didn't aim for the"
18"It felt like snapping a"
19"She heard a shriek that"
ratio0.264
53.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air inside the standing"
1"Aurora stepped through the boundary,"
2"The Heartstone Pendant beneath her"
3"This place is not Richmond,"
4"Nyx drifted alongside her, feet"
5"The shade’s violet eyes scanned"
6"The space between breaths is"
7"It leaves stains that last"
8"She stopped at the edge"
9"The Veil holds its breath"
10"Aurora gripped the hilt of"
11"She watched a cluster of"
12"Everything here feels like it"
13"Nyx narrowed their eyes, the"
14"The shade drifted toward an"
15"The Wardens are blind to"
16"They monitor the rifts, but"
17"Someone opened a door, Aurora."
18"Your Heartstone is not just"
19"It is a beacon."
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences91
matches
0"If the Veil is thin"
1"To close the gate, you"
2"If I cut it, the"
ratio0.033
16.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the boundary, her boots finding purchase on moss that felt more like velvet than plant life."
1"Behind her, the roar of London traffic evaporated, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that vibrated in the marrow of her teeth."
2"The Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket flared against her collarbone, a sharp, pulsing heat that mirrored the rhythmic thrum."
3"She stopped at the edge of a stream that flowed upward, the water defying gravity to curl into delicate, crystalline arcs before splashing into floating basins …"
4"The creature’s eyes locked onto hers, burning with the familiar, gluttonous hunger of a predator that had tasted too much and felt too little."
5"The Dymasian tongue is a poison that weaves into your logic."
6"Aurora felt the blade in her hand grow colder, the moonsilver glowing with a fierce, pale light that forced the creeping shadows of the grove to retreat."
7"She lunged, her boots clattering against the glass floor, the blade arcing in a wide, shimmering white trail."
8"Her movement was quick, a sharp pivot that caught the creature off guard."
9"She heard a shriek that sounded like grinding metal, and then silence—a sudden, absolute, crushing silence that swallowed the humming of the grove."
10"The park rangers do not appreciate people who collapse the fabric of reality during their lunch hour."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.1561%