Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8ZWT43M074NDE934SBTZP2

Run Details

Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.002390
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed a frantic rhythm against the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest, the buzzing light casting a sickly, bioluminescent glow over the slick Soho cobblestones. Aurora wiped a bead of cold condensation from her forehead, the familiar weight of the delivery bag dragging at her shoulder. She pushed the heavy oak door open, the scent of stale ale and old floorboards greeting her like a ghost. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, his silver signet ring flashing as he wiped a glass with a linen cloth. He caught her eye, a ghost of a smirk pulling at his neatly trimmed beard. The bar was mostly empty, save for a solitary figure hunched over a tumbler near the far wall. The man wore a tailored charcoal wool coat that looked entirely out of place in this gloom, a stark contrast to the dust-moted atmosphere. Aurora navigated past a wobbly stool, her boots making no sound on the threadbare carpet. As she neared the bar to offload her keys, the stranger turned on a swivel. His face, once defined by the softness of reckless ambition, now carried the sharp, unforgiving edges of a life lived in executive boardrooms. "Laila? I haven't heard that name since the Cardiff days." The man’s voice rasped, carrying the clinical precision of a man who traded currency for souls. He pushed his chair back, the screech of wood against wood echoing through the quiet space. "Evan. I thought the trail went cold somewhere between a corporate takeover and a prison sentence." Aurora let her delivery bag slide to the floor with a dull thud. She didn't move toward him, keeping the bar’s perimeter between them. She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist with her thumb, a reflexive, grounding motion. "It’s amazing what a change of scenery does for reputation. I’m an analyst now. Wealth management. Very quiet, very respectable." "You always did know how to package a lie until it looked like the truth." "People change, Aurora. We grow out of the things that once felt like skin. Look at you. Working for a takeout joint? You had the top score in Pre-Law. Your father surely keeps your portrait in the study, right next to the trophy cabinet." "My father is a memory I stopped visiting years ago." Silas ceased his polishing and set the glass down with finality, his hazel eyes flickering between them. He leaned forward, the slight limp in his left leg barely perceptible as he adjusted his weight. He didn't interrupt, simply watched the air between them thicken. "Does she know what you’re doing here? The little friend who dragged you off to London? Does she know who you really are when the lights go out?" "Eva knows exactly who I am. She knows the version that doesn't need to check over its shoulder every time a door opens. You wouldn't recognize that version. It doesn't thrive on control or the fear in someone else's pulse." Evan stood, smoothing the front of his coat. He took a single, deliberate step forward, his eyes scanning the walls of the bar, lingering on the faded maps and sepia-toned photos of men who had long since vanished into the ether. He looked back at her, his expression a mask of manufactured calm. "I found your old journals, the ones left in the flat in Cardiff. The ones you thought you burned. You wrote about the water, about how it looked different from the bridge, like it expected more from you than you could ever provide." "That girl died in Cardiff. You killed her the same night you broke that glass against the wall, the same night you told me I was nothing but a cautionary tale in the making." "I was young. We were both terrified. I just had a louder way of showing it." "You had a cruel way of showing it. Don't frame your malice as survival." Silas walked around the end of the bar, his hand resting casually on the wood, a silent barrier he had erected a hundred times before. He looked at Evan with a detached, professional scrutiny that made the man’s stiff shoulders drop an inch. "Your drink is empty, friend. Time to find a place that appreciates the quality of your suit. This isn't the venue for ghosts to haunt the staff." "I’m not looking to stir the pot, Silas. I just wanted to see if the rumors were true. Whether she was still hiding in the dark, or if she’d finally turned the light on." "Laila isn't here. There is only Aurora. And the next time you bring up Cardiff, I’ll personally ensure the door hits you hard enough to take your memory with it." Evan looked at Aurora, his gaze softening into something that might have been regret, though it held all the warmth of a morgue slab. He smoothed his tie, pulled a few notes from his pocket, and dropped them onto the bar with a sharp, rhythmic sound. "You look well, Aurora. Even if you are playing at being someone else." "I’m not playing. I’m surviving. There is a difference, even if you can’t see it from that ivory tower of yours." Evan turned and walked toward the entrance, his boots clicking with rhythmic, hollow precision against the floor. He paused at the door, the cold night air swirling into the bar, ruffling Aurora’s straight black hair. He didn't look back. The door swung shut, the mechanical chime signaling his departure. Aurora turned to the bar, her hands trembling where they gripped the edge of the wood. She looked at the abandoned stool, then to Silas. He didn't offer comfort or platitudes; he simply slid a fresh glass toward her, filled with clear water. "He wasn't the one who haunted you, Rory. He was just the one who provided the mask you learned to wear. You’re done hiding now." "I don't know if I’m done. I think I’m just tired of carrying the weight of a person I don't recognize." "The weight was only ever yours because you held onto it. Everything else is just geography." Aurora took the glass, the cool liquid steadying the erratic beat of her heart. She stared at her wrist, the white, crescent-shaped scar catching the dim light of the bar. It was a map of a different life, a border between what she had been and the silence she had managed to cultivate. She set the glass down, the condensation leaving a ring on the wood, and looked up at the maps on the wall, seeing them not as places she had been, but as walls she had eventually walked through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"solitary"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"ensure"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count2
12
word"mechanical"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"solitary"
3"gloom"
4"stark"
5"navigated"
6"echoing"
7"pulse"
8"scanning"
9"ensure"
10"warmth"
11"rhythmic"
12"mechanical"
13"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences36
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount638
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Evan4
Aurora7
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Evan"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.897
wordCount1115
matches
0"not as places she had been, but as walls she had eventually walked through"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean34.84
std19.26
cv0.553
sampleLengths
068
177
253
310
432
516
639
720
815
944
1010
1144
1228
1340
1453
1543
1634
1716
1814
1943
2027
2134
2230
2346
2413
2521
2649
2743
2825
2921
3016
3191
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
91.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences56
ratio0.018
matches
0"He didn't offer comfort or platitudes; he simply slid a fresh glass toward her, filled with clear water."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount642
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.018691588785046728
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01557632398753894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean19.91
std8.74
cv0.439
sampleLengths
027
121
220
320
415
518
624
715
815
923
1010
1116
1216
1316
1413
1511
1615
1720
1815
1944
2010
2117
2217
2310
2428
2540
268
2733
2812
2943
3034
3116
3214
3325
3418
3527
3634
3730
3824
3922
4013
4121
4217
4318
444
4510
4616
479
4818
4925
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3392857142857143
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences36
matches
0"She pushed the heavy oak"
1"He caught her eye, a"
2"His face, once defined by"
3"He pushed his chair back,"
4"She didn't move toward him,"
5"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
6"He leaned forward, the slight"
7"He didn't interrupt, simply watched"
8"He took a single, deliberate"
9"He looked back at her,"
10"He looked at Evan with"
11"He smoothed his tie, pulled"
12"He paused at the door,"
13"He didn't look back."
14"She looked at the abandoned"
15"He didn't offer comfort or"
16"She stared at her wrist,"
17"It was a map of"
18"She set the glass down,"
ratio0.528
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences36
matches
0"Rain drummed a frantic rhythm"
1"Aurora wiped a bead of"
2"She pushed the heavy oak"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"He caught her eye, a"
5"The bar was mostly empty,"
6"The man wore a tailored"
7"Aurora navigated past a wobbly"
8"His face, once defined by"
9"The man’s voice rasped, carrying"
10"He pushed his chair back,"
11"Aurora let her delivery bag"
12"She didn't move toward him,"
13"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
14"Silas ceased his polishing and"
15"He leaned forward, the slight"
16"He didn't interrupt, simply watched"
17"Evan stood, smoothing the front"
18"He took a single, deliberate"
19"He looked back at her,"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The man wore a tailored charcoal wool coat that looked entirely out of place in this gloom, a stark contrast to the dust-moted atmosphere."
1"He took a single, deliberate step forward, his eyes scanning the walls of the bar, lingering on the faded maps and sepia-toned photos of men who had long since …"
2"He looked at Evan with a detached, professional scrutiny that made the man’s stiff shoulders drop an inch."
3"Evan looked at Aurora, his gaze softening into something that might have been regret, though it held all the warmth of a morgue slab."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.9269%