| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1282 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "navigating" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "crystalline" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "scanning" | | 15 | "intensity" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "begin to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1278 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "You are walking too loudly, Nyx whispered." | | 1 | "You bring the scent of burned sugar and stale regret, little mortal, Isolde said." | | 2 | "We are not in Richmond anymore, Nyx breathed, the whisper trembling with a dark, ancient hunger." | | 3 | "Keep your shadow close, she said, her voice steadying." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | London | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 3 | | Rory | 12 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Shade | 2 | | Dymas | 3 | | Earth | 2 | | Aldric | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | You | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if struggling with the density of this pocket realm" | | 1 | "felt like a surgical probe" | | 2 | "runes that seemed to crawl across the stone surfaces, shifting whenever she blinked" | | 3 | "felt like it was closing in on her befo" | | 4 | "looked like twisted, calcified bone" | | 5 | "felt like a sleeve—and lunged toward th" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.347 | | wordCount | 1278 | | matches | | 0 | "not on dirt but on a thick carpet of moss" | | 1 | "neither here nor" | | 2 | "not of falling, but of being pulled inside out" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.30% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 47.33 | | std | 18.41 | | cv | 0.389 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 15 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were etched" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "was replaced" |
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| 73.62% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was closing" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was shaking" | | 3 | "was glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.101 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove did not just feel different; it tasted different." | | 1 | "Her lungs expanded with air that smelled of crushed ozone, ancient damp earth, and a sweetness so cloying it was almost sharp—the scent of flowers that had no business blooming in a park as tired as Richmond." | | 2 | "Their presence was a vacuum in the light; the violet glow of their eyes cast no beam, but instead seemed to pull the ambient illumination inward." | | 3 | "She felt the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt begin to pulse; it had grown warm against her skin the moment they breached the Veil." | | 4 | "For a heartbeat, the atmosphere of the grove shifted; the wildflowers darkened to a bruised, unhealthy gray, and the temperature plummeted until Rory’s breath turned to frost." | | 5 | "The tear is not a wound in the sky; it is a seed, planted in the soil of your own memories." | | 6 | "The violet sky cracked, showing a glimpse of something darker—a swirling, amber-hued expanse filled with grand, horrific tables laden with steaming, rot-sweet feasts." | | 7 | "It didn't look like an oak or a willow; it looked like twisted, calcified bone." | | 8 | "Rory grabbed Nyx's sleeve—or what felt like a sleeve—and lunged toward the sapling." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 250 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.04 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.36 | | std | 8.02 | | cv | 0.559 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 46.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34831460674157305 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe if you didn't look" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 43.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Her lungs expanded with air" | | 1 | "She glanced back, but the" | | 2 | "She gripped the strap of" | | 3 | "Their presence was a vacuum" | | 4 | "You are walking too loudly," | | 5 | "It vibrated directly against the" | | 6 | "She had spent enough time" | | 7 | "She lowered her voice to" | | 8 | "They did not respond, their" | | 9 | "She was a statue of" | | 10 | "She did not look at" | | 11 | "You bring the scent of" | | 12 | "Her voice held the melodic" | | 13 | "You have tethered yourself to" | | 14 | "They were etched with runes" | | 15 | "She felt the Heartstone pendant" | | 16 | "It was a rhythmic, frantic" | | 17 | "I’m not here for a" | | 18 | "I’m here because the Veil" | | 19 | "She circled the human and" |
| | ratio | 0.442 | |
| 64.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "Her lungs expanded with air" | | 2 | "Rory stepped over the threshold," | | 3 | "She glanced back, but the" | | 4 | "She gripped the strap of" | | 5 | "Their presence was a vacuum" | | 6 | "You are walking too loudly," | | 7 | "The sound wasn't auditory in" | | 8 | "It vibrated directly against the" | | 9 | "Rory didn't flinch." | | 10 | "She had spent enough time" | | 11 | "She lowered her voice to" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted a fraction of" | | 13 | "They did not respond, their" | | 14 | "She was a statue of" | | 15 | "She did not look at" | | 16 | "The Seer turned, her lavender" | | 17 | "You bring the scent of" | | 18 | "Her voice held the melodic" | | 19 | "You have tethered yourself to" |
| | ratio | 0.791 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "To Aurora, the humidity of" | | 1 | "To walk the path, one" | | 2 | "If the information is worth" | | 3 | "If all you have is" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Her lungs expanded with air that smelled of crushed ozone, ancient damp earth, and a sweetness so cloying it was almost sharp—the scent of flowers that had no b…" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the threshold, her boots finding purchase not on dirt but on a thick carpet of moss that rippled under her weight like velvet." | | 2 | "Behind her, the sliver of shadow that had accompanied them from the city bled into existence, coalescing into the lean, towering silhouette of Nyx." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted a fraction of an inch off the ground, their form oscillating as if struggling with the density of this pocket realm." | | 4 | "They did not respond, their violet gaze fixed on the center of the clearing where the standing stones rose like serrated gray teeth against a sky that possessed…" | | 5 | "Rory stepped into the center of the grove, her eyes tracing the ancient oak standing stones." | | 6 | "You are a cage that has forgotten its prisoner, Aldric." | | 7 | "The grove began to sway, the standing stones groaning as if under the weight of an immense, invisible pressure." | | 8 | "The sky above was a swirling, bruised orange, and in the distance, a sprawling orchard of trees laden with crystalline, pulsating fruits stretched toward a hori…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |