Run: 2026-05-10-01KR900MB133WTNAKVYBDGRPTD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.001785
Provider:
Io Net

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the Soho pavement, turning the streets into a fractured mirror of neon greens and bruised purples. Each drop struck the asphalt with the force of buckshot. Detective Harlow Quinn wiped a smear of grit from her sharp jaw, her breath hitching in the freezing air. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her skull, clung to her skin like wet wool. Fifty yards ahead, the suspect vaulted over a stack of sodden crates. He moved with a frantic, liquid grace that defied the uneven terrain. The man’s dark coat whipped behind him, a shadow cutting through the rhythmic strobe of passing headlights. Quinn lunged forward. Her boots skidded on the oil-slicked cobblestones, but she regained her balance with military precision. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The seconds ticked away, indifferent to the adrenaline surging through her veins. "Stop right there!" The command died in the roar of a passing bus. The suspect didn't look back. He ducked into a narrow alleyway choked with the stench of rotting refuse and diesel fumes. Quinn followed, her hand hovering near the holster at her hip. The alley narrowed, the brick walls sweating moisture that felt thicker than rain. The man reached a heavy iron door set into the foundation of a derelict building. He didn't fumble with a key. Instead, he pulled a jagged, yellowed shard from his pocket—a piece of bone carved into a precise geometric shape. He pressed the object against a hidden indentation in the doorframe. A low, subterranean thrum vibrated through the soles of Quinn’s boots. The iron door groaned, sliding upward into the ceiling with a sound like grinding teeth. The suspect vanished into the dark. Quinn skidded to a halt. She pressed her back against the cold brick, listening. The sound of the city—the distant sirens, the splashing tires, the hum of electricity—faded, replaced by a heavy, unnatural silence that pressed against her eardrums. She peered into the threshold. A faint, violet light pulsed from deep within the passage. She stepped inside. The transition hit her like a physical weight. The temperature climbed, turning from the biting London chill to a stagnant, humid warmth that smelled of clove, ozone, and dried blood. The stairs beneath her feet weren't concrete anymore; they were smooth, dark stone, worn down by centuries of footsteps that shouldn't exist in a modern subway system. As she descended, the architecture of the London Underground surrendered to something older. The tiled walls of the station gave way to rough-hewn cavernous arches. The light didn't come from flickering fluorescent tubes but from floating lanterns that drifted through the air like bioluminescent jellyfish. The Veil Market spilled out onto the abandoned platform below. Quinn gripped the handrail, her knuckles white. Below her, a sprawling labyrinth of stalls stretched into the gloom. A man with skin the color of bruised plums sat behind a counter of polished obsidian, rearranging glass vials filled with swirling, iridescent smoke. Beside him, a woman draped in silks that seemed to shift color with every breath hawked necklaces made of teeth and silver wire. The murmurs of the crowd rose in a discordant swell. The voices drifted in fragments of languages Quinn didn't recognize—glottal stops and melodic trills that set her teeth on edge. The suspect reappeared near a stall selling bundles of dried, blackened herbs. He moved through the crowd with ease, his posture relaxed, no longer the hunted animal. He paused to exchange a coin—a heavy, dark metal disk—with a merchant whose face was obscured by a heavy veil of lace. Quinn stayed in the shadows of the staircase, her eyes scanning the perimeter. A massive figure, easily seven feet tall and wrapped in heavy furs, lumbered past her, the scent of wet earth trailing in his wake. She reached for her radio, but the device emitted only a dull, rhythmic static that mimicked a heartbeat. "You shouldn't be down here, Detective." Quinn spun, her hand snapping to her weapon. A man stood a few paces away, leaning against a soot-stained pillar. He wore a clean, white apron over a dark shirt, and his eyes held a warmth that felt entirely out of place in this tomb. He held a tray of small, steaming cups. "Identify yourself." The man offered a small, knowing smile. "Just a vendor of comforts. You look like you've had a long night on the surface." "Where is he going?" The vendor gestured with a chin toward the heart of the market, where the violet light grew most intense. "The currents pull everyone toward the center eventually. Some come to buy, some come to hide. It doesn't matter much once you cross the threshold." Quinn looked back toward the suspect. He was nearing a heavy curtain of velvet that cordoned off a section of the platform draped in heavy shadows. The air grew thick with a metallic tang. A merchant nearby began to chant, a low, guttural vibration that made the very air shimmer. A customer handed over a small, pulsing stone in exchange for a jar of shimmering liquid. The transaction was silent, conducted with a grim, practiced efficiency. Quinn’s mind raced through her training. This wasn't a crime scene; it was a breach of reality. The laws of the Metropolitan Police held no weight in this hollowed-out station. If she went down there, she wasn't just pursuing a suspect. She was entering a world that didn't recognize her authority. The suspect paused at the velvet curtain. He looked back over his shoulder, his eyes catching the violet glow. For a second, his gaze seemed to sweep the stairs, lingering on the shadows where Quinn stood. He didn't stop, but his pace quickened. Quinn looked at the stairs leading back up to the rain, to the sirens, and to the world that made sense. Then she looked at the dark, pulsing heart of the market. She tightened her grip on her service weapon and stepped off the bottom stair.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count2
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"rhythmic"
2"vibrated"
3"silence"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"chill"
7"warmth"
8"footsteps"
9"gloom"
10"scanning"
11"velvet"
12"raced"
13"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1001
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount945
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn13
London2
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Underground"
3"Market"
4"Police"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.812
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"silks that seemed to shift color with every breath hawked necklaces made of teeth and silver wire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1001
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean34.52
std19.66
cv0.57
sampleLengths
063
141
240
33
455
551
632
739
815
93
1057
1145
1210
1365
1430
1549
1655
176
1853
192
2023
214
2244
2326
2450
2551
2643
2732
2814
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was obscured"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was nearing"
1"wasn't just pursuing"
2"was entering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences78
ratio0.077
matches
0"Instead, he pulled a jagged, yellowed shard from his pocket—a piece of bone carved into a precise geometric shape."
1"The sound of the city—the distant sirens, the splashing tires, the hum of electricity—faded, replaced by a heavy, unnatural silence that pressed against her eardrums."
2"The stairs beneath her feet weren't concrete anymore; they were smooth, dark stone, worn down by centuries of footsteps that shouldn't exist in a modern subway system."
3"The voices drifted in fragments of languages Quinn didn't recognize—glottal stops and melodic trills that set her teeth on edge."
4"He paused to exchange a coin—a heavy, dark metal disk—with a merchant whose face was obscured by a heavy veil of lace."
5"This wasn't a crime scene; it was a breach of reality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01567398119122257
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003134796238244514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.83
std6.1
cv0.476
sampleLengths
019
110
219
315
412
512
617
73
815
910
1012
113
1210
135
1416
1511
1613
1715
186
1919
2011
2111
2215
236
245
259
2625
275
2810
293
308
3122
3227
3313
3412
3520
3610
377
3811
3924
4023
4110
4220
4312
4415
4522
4613
4724
4818
496
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.28205128205128205
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners22
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, he pulled a jagged,"
1"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences72
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
1"He moved with a frantic,"
2"Her boots skidded on the"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"He ducked into a narrow"
5"He didn't fumble with a"
6"He pressed the object against"
7"She pressed her back against"
8"She peered into the threshold."
9"She stepped inside."
10"He moved through the crowd"
11"He paused to exchange a"
12"She reached for her radio,"
13"He wore a clean, white"
14"He held a tray of"
15"He was nearing a heavy"
16"She was entering a world"
17"He looked back over his"
18"He didn't stop, but his"
19"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.278
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"The rain hammered the Soho"
1"Each drop struck the asphalt"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn wiped a"
3"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
4"He moved with a frantic,"
5"The man’s dark coat whipped"
6"Quinn lunged forward."
7"Her boots skidded on the"
8"She checked the worn leather"
9"The seconds ticked away, indifferent"
10"The command died in the"
11"The suspect didn't look back."
12"He ducked into a narrow"
13"Quinn followed, her hand hovering"
14"The alley narrowed, the brick"
15"The man reached a heavy"
16"He didn't fumble with a"
17"He pressed the object against"
18"A low, subterranean thrum vibrated"
19"The iron door groaned, sliding"
ratio0.889
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"If she went down there,"
ratio0.014
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The temperature climbed, turning from the biting London chill to a stagnant, humid warmth that smelled of clove, ozone, and dried blood."
1"The stairs beneath her feet weren't concrete anymore; they were smooth, dark stone, worn down by centuries of footsteps that shouldn't exist in a modern subway …"
2"The light didn't come from flickering fluorescent tubes but from floating lanterns that drifted through the air like bioluminescent jellyfish."
3"The voices drifted in fragments of languages Quinn didn't recognize—glottal stops and melodic trills that set her teeth on edge."
4"He wore a clean, white apron over a dark shirt, and his eyes held a warmth that felt entirely out of place in this tomb."
5"A merchant nearby began to chant, a low, guttural vibration that made the very air shimmer."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0485%