| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1460 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1403 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Aurora" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Belphegor" | | 8 | "Evan" | | 9 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.93 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.37 | | wordCount | 1460 | | matches | | 0 | "not their faces but blurred scenes: a feast table laden with roasted fruits drip" | | 1 | "not the cavern but the original standing stones" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 41.71 | | std | 36.95 | | cv | 0.886 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 92 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 95 | | 14 | 65 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 79 | | 18 | 94 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 112 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 76 | | 28 | 69 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 62 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 262 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from her belt; its moonsilver edge cut pale light across ferns that parted without touch." | | 1 | "Nyx extended a shadowed hand; it plunged through the surface without splash, fingers reappearing from the opposite side whole." | | 2 | "She caught one mote on the dagger tip; it froze into a tiny perfect berry that smelled of summer orchards and decay." | | 3 | "She extended her free hand toward one mushroom; it leaned closer, surface rippling like a living thing." | | 4 | "Her throat worked despite dryness; she swallowed once, twice." | | 5 | "She knocked it aside with the flat of the blade; the legs scattered and reassembled into a new circle behind them." | | 6 | "No footprints marked the path they left; each boot print faded before the next foot fell." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1406 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.02631578947368421 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002844950213371266 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 10.98 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 59.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.38345864661654133 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, palm flat on" | | 1 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 2 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 3 | "She leaned closer and the" | | 4 | "She stepped around the pool" | | 5 | "She caught one mote on" | | 6 | "Her stomach tightened with want" | | 7 | "Their form flickered between substance" | | 8 | "They reached a wider clearing." | | 9 | "She extended her free hand" | | 10 | "It landed in her palm" | | 11 | "She dropped the petal." | | 12 | "It dissolved into light before" | | 13 | "Her throat worked despite dryness;" | | 14 | "She knocked it aside with" | | 15 | "They entered a cavern of" | | 16 | "She licked the residue from" | | 17 | "Her words arrived slow." | | 18 | "She turned deeper into the" | | 19 | "Their hand passed through without" |
| | ratio | 0.192 | |
| 14.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "The group crossed the boundary" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter led first, the" | | 2 | "Nyx followed as incorporeal shadow," | | 3 | "Wildflowers opened underfoot without stepping" | | 4 | "Leaves crunched once under Aurora's" | | 5 | "She crouched, palm flat on" | | 6 | "Moss and vine lifted to" | | 7 | "The pendant grew hotter." | | 8 | "Nyx reformed solid enough to" | | 9 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 10 | "A low humming rose from" | | 11 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 12 | "Petals brushed cheeks and wrists" | | 13 | "Aurora paused at the first" | | 14 | "A pool no wider than" | | 15 | "Reflections showed not their faces" | | 16 | "Heat rolled upward from the" | | 17 | "She leaned closer and the" | | 18 | "Isolde's voice came as soft" | | 19 | "The pool rippled under its" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse hammered in her ears, the small crescent scar on her wrist throbbing as if the childhood cut remembered a knife that never touched it." | | 1 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from her belt; its moonsilver edge cut pale light across ferns that parted without touch." | | 2 | "The wood parted like curtains, exposing hollow interior filled with drifting motes that coalesced into shapes of forks and goblets before scattering." | | 3 | "Isolde smiled without lifting lips, hair lifting as though touched by unseen breath." | | 4 | "Reflections shifted to show her figure holding the Fae blade against a feast hall threshold, shadow figures reaching." | | 5 | "The ground under new boots felt the same living moss yet heavier, denser, as if the world here remembered every footfall and judged its intent." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |