Run: 2026-05-10-01KR901HAYHRCS449YAYC2MKRW

Run Details

Duration:
3m 38s
Cost:
$0.001315
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest hummed, casting a sickly emerald pallor over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside, the air tasted of stale tobacco and expensive gin. Aurora leaned against the mahogany bar, her shoulder-length black hair clinging to the nape of her neck from the drizzle. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the skin there pale and thin. Silas moved behind the counter with a measured, heavy gait. His left leg dragged slightly, a rhythmic scuff that punctuated the low murmur of the few patrons scattered among the dim booths. He polished a highball glass with a linen cloth, his hazel eyes scanning the room with a habit that never truly died. The door creaked open. A gust of damp night air swept in, bringing with it the scent of ozone and wet wool. A man stepped inside, pausing to shake a charcoal umbrella. He wore a tailored navy overcoat that cost more than Rory’s annual rent in the flat upstairs. His frame had filled out, the lanky awkwardness of his youth replaced by a rigid, corporate posture. Rory froze. The glass in her hand tilted. Julian didn't see her at first. He squinted through the gloom, his gaze lingering on the old maps pinned to the walls. When his eyes finally landed on her, he stopped mid-stride. The umbrella slipped from his grip, clattering onto the hardwood floor. "Aurora." The name sounded foreign in his mouth, stripped of the familiarity it once held in the lecture halls of Cardiff. "Julian." He approached the bar, his polished Oxfords clicking. He stopped three feet away, the distance a physical manifestation of the years between them. His face had sharpened, the soft jawline of his twenties now a hard, sculpted edge. Silas set the glass down. He didn't speak, but his presence shifted, a subtle narrowing of his shoulders that signaled he was watching. "I heard you went to London." Rory shifted her weight, her sneakers squeaking on the floor. "I did." "I didn't know you were here. Not really here. I mean, I knew you left, but the trail just... ended." "It was supposed to." Julian looked around the bar, his lip curling in a way that wasn't quite a sneer but lacked any warmth. He looked at the peeling wallpaper and the dim amber lamps. "This is where you ended up? Delivering food and hanging out in Soho dives?" Rory felt the old heat rise in her chest, the familiar spark of defiance. "It's a living." "We were supposed to be the ones who changed the system, Rory. We spent three years debating the ethics of the Crown Prosecution Service. You were the smartest person in every room we entered." "The system doesn't want to be changed. It wants to be fed." Julian signaled Silas for a drink with a sharp flick of his wrist. He didn't look at the menu. "Double scotch. Neat." As Silas moved toward the bottle, Julian stepped closer. He smelled of sandalwood and something sterile, like a hospital corridor. "Why did you disappear? No letter. No call. Just a vacant apartment and a landlord wondering where the deposit went." "I couldn't stay." "For a job? A better firm? I spent six months looking for you in every legal directory in the country. I thought maybe you'd gone back to Wales." Rory looked away, her gaze landing on a black-and-white photograph of a foggy pier from the 1940s. "I wasn't looking for a firm." Julian's expression softened, a ghost of the boy who used to share coffee and handwritten notes in the library. He reached out, his fingers hovering near her arm, but he didn't make contact. "You were terrified. Even then. I could see it in the way you looked at the door during the winter gala. I thought it was just the pressure of the degree." "The pressure was coming from inside the house." The silence that followed was heavy, thick as the smog outside. Julian withdrew his hand, his fingers curling into a fist. He looked at her wrist, at the small scar, then back to her eyes. "Evan." Rory didn't flinch, but her breath hitched. "He found out you were talking to me." "He didn't have to find out. He just knew." Julian took the scotch from Silas, the glass clicking against the mahogany. He downed half of it in one swallow, his throat working. "I tried to call him. After you left. I wanted to know what happened." "And what did you want from him? A confession? A settlement?" "I wanted to protect you." Rory let out a short, sharp laugh that lacked any mirth. "You were a second-year law student with a trust fund and a penchant for Latin phrases. You couldn't protect a goldfish in a bowl." Julian's jaw tightened. He set the glass down with a controlled thud. "I became a partner at Sterling & Hunt. I have the resources now. I could have helped you. I could have handled the legalities, the restraining orders, the transition." "I didn't need a lawyer. I needed to breathe." "And you're breathing now? In a place that smells like a basement?" Rory stepped toward him, her blue eyes hard. "I'm alive. I don't wake up wondering if the door is locked. I don't check my phone every five minutes to see if I've been tracked. That's a kind of breathing you wouldn't understand from the top floor of a glass tower." Julian looked at her, really looked at her, and for a moment the corporate mask slipped. There was a hollow look in his eyes, a vacancy that mirrored her own isolation. "I still think about that night in the rain. The night we decided we'd leave Cardiff together." "We were children." "We were adults. We just didn't know how to be." "Some of us learned faster than others." Julian picked up his glass again, swirling the amber liquid. "I spent three years hating you for leaving. Then I spent another three wondering if I should have followed you. I stayed in the track. I did everything right. I played the game, I won the cases, I bought the house in Richmond." "Sounds like a dream." "It's a gilded cage, Rory. The only difference is I chose the bars." Silas cleared his throat, the sound a low rumble. He didn't move from his position, but his presence reminded them both that they were in a public space. "You look tired," Julian whispered. "I work twelve hours a day on a bike in the London rain. I'm exhausted." "Come back with me. Not to Cardiff. Just... let me help you get back into the field. I can pull strings. A clerkship, a research position. You're wasting a mind that could dismantle an empire." Rory looked at the green neon light reflecting in the mirror behind the bar. She thought of the quiet of her flat, the safety of the anonymity she had built, and the way Silas never asked her about her past. "I don't want to dismantle an empire." "Then what do you want?" "To be forgotten." Julian stared at her, the regret finally surfacing in the slump of his shoulders. He looked like he wanted to say something—something about the letters he’d written and never sent, or the way he still checked the guest lists of every legal seminar for her name. Instead, he drained the rest of his scotch. "You always were the most stubborn person I ever knew." "And you always loved the sound of your own voice." He managed a small, tight smile. It didn't reach his eyes. "Some things never change." "Some things are better left unchanged." Julian reached into his overcoat and pulled out a heavy cream business card. He laid it on the bar, sliding it toward her with one finger. "If the rain gets too cold." Rory didn't touch the card. She watched as he picked up his umbrella and turned toward the door. He paused at the threshold, the green light bathing his silhouette. "I missed you, Rory." He stepped out into the night, the door clicking shut behind him. The hum of the neon sign returned, filling the silence. Rory looked at the card. She didn't pick it up. She looked at Silas. "He's still a prick." Silas didn't smile, but the corners of his eyes crinkled. He picked up the card with a pair of tongs and dropped it into the wastebin.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:08:20.966Z" 5/10/2026, 1:08:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.042
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"traced"
1"measured"
2"rhythmic"
3"scanning"
4"gloom"
5"weight"
6"warmth"
7"familiar"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1419
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount850
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory11
Cardiff1
Oxfords1
Silas9
Julian13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Oxfords"
4"Silas"
5"Julian"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.5
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite a sneer but lacked any warmth"
1"looked like he wanted to say something—so"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1419
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean17.52
std14.72
cv0.84
sampleLengths
065
154
266
38
443
51
620
71
838
923
106
1110
122
1320
144
1531
1614
1714
183
1934
2012
2119
223
2320
2420
253
2628
2717
286
2933
3031
318
3235
331
347
358
369
3723
3814
3911
405
4111
4224
4312
4429
459
4612
478
4842
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences117
ratio0.009
matches
0"He looked like he wanted to say something—something about the letters he’d written and never sent, or the way he still checked the guest lists of every legal seminar for her name."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount857
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.021003500583430573
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007001166861143524
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean12.13
std8.23
cv0.679
sampleLengths
020
110
220
315
410
522
622
74
818
910
1017
1117
122
136
146
1516
1610
1711
181
1920
201
218
2215
2315
245
2518
266
2710
282
2920
304
3120
3211
3314
3414
353
3634
3712
3813
396
403
419
4211
4320
443
4528
4617
476
4819
4914
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2564102564102564
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners30
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Instead, he drained the rest"
ratio0.015
49.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences68
matches
0"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
1"His left leg dragged slightly,"
2"He polished a highball glass"
3"He wore a tailored navy"
4"His frame had filled out,"
5"He squinted through the gloom,"
6"He approached the bar, his"
7"He stopped three feet away,"
8"His face had sharpened, the"
9"He didn't speak, but his"
10"He looked at the peeling"
11"He didn't look at the"
12"He smelled of sandalwood and"
13"He reached out, his fingers"
14"He looked at her wrist,"
15"He downed half of it"
16"He set the glass down"
17"He didn't move from his"
18"She thought of the quiet"
19"He looked like he wanted"
ratio0.426
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences68
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora leaned against the mahogany"
2"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
3"Silas moved behind the counter"
4"His left leg dragged slightly,"
5"He polished a highball glass"
6"The door creaked open."
7"A gust of damp night"
8"A man stepped inside, pausing"
9"He wore a tailored navy"
10"His frame had filled out,"
11"The glass in her hand"
12"Julian didn't see her at"
13"He squinted through the gloom,"
14"The umbrella slipped from his"
15"The name sounded foreign in"
16"He approached the bar, his"
17"He stopped three feet away,"
18"His face had sharpened, the"
19"Silas set the glass down."
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His left leg dragged slightly, a rhythmic scuff that punctuated the low murmur of the few patrons scattered among the dim booths."
1"He didn't speak, but his presence shifted, a subtle narrowing of his shoulders that signaled he was watching."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Julian whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.042
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.042
83.6037%