| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "oppressive" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "methodical" | | 15 | "tangible" | | 16 | "throb" | | 17 | "dance" | | 18 | "searing" | | 19 | "cacophony" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1157 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Skritch. Skritch. Skritch." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1140 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Aurora | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a heavy weight being dragged" | | 1 | "felt like a needle pressing against her" | | 2 | "whispers that seemed to rise from the very earth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.864 | | wordCount | 1157 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the stones on the ground, but the creature" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 27.55 | | std | 16.88 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 48 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 9 |
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| 98.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "was carved" | | 1 | "being dragged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't coming" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "It no longer matched her own heartbeat; it surged with an independent, frantic energy." | | 1 | "They didn't move with the moonlight; they drifted, creeping across the forest floor like spilled ink." | | 2 | "She caught a glimpse of something tall—too tall to be human—standing just behind the veil of hanging moss." | | 3 | "A soft, wet sound—like a heavy footstep in mud—echoed from the left." | | 4 | "It didn't walk; it unfolded, the limbs lengthening, stretching upward until the crown of its head brushed the lower branches of the oaks." |
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| 98.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1144 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04195804195804196 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008741258741258742 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.02 | | std | 5.64 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 29.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.20952380952380953 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the twisted wood and" | | 1 | "Then another from the right." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 61.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over a gnarled" | | 1 | "She paused, her hand flying" | | 2 | "Her gaze darted toward the" | | 3 | "She waited for the rustle" | | 4 | "She stood motionless." | | 5 | "It no longer matched her" | | 6 | "She turned her head, her" | | 7 | "She took a step forward," | | 8 | "She reached for the pendant" | | 9 | "They didn't move with the" | | 10 | "She stepped wide to avoid" | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "It wasn't a natural rock." | | 13 | "It was carved, a smooth," | | 14 | "She forced her eyes upward," | | 15 | "They were too bright, too" | | 16 | "It wasn't a sound so" | | 17 | "She spun around, searching for" | | 18 | "It came from the direction" | | 19 | "She steadied herself against a" |
| | ratio | 0.396 | |
| 12.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "She stepped over a gnarled" | | 2 | "The transition from the manicured" | | 3 | "The air thickened, turning heavy" | | 4 | "She paused, her hand flying" | | 5 | "The stone radiated a rhythmic" | | 6 | "The words felt thin, swallowed" | | 7 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 8 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 9 | "The trees here grew too" | | 10 | "A sharp snap echoed from" | | 11 | "Her gaze darted toward the" | | 12 | "The silence rushed back in," | | 13 | "She waited for the rustle" | | 14 | "She stood motionless." | | 15 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" | | 16 | "It no longer matched her" | | 17 | "A movement flickered at the" | | 18 | "A dark shape slipped behind" | | 19 | "She turned her head, her" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over a gnarled root, her boot sinking into moss that felt more like velvet flesh than vegetation." | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed in the moonlight, their bark etched with deep, twisting grooves that looked less like natural growth and more like franti…" | | 2 | "The scent of the flowers intensified, turning from sweet to cloying, a saccharine heaviness that sat at the back of her throat." | | 3 | "It wasn't a sound so much as a sensation, a deep, resonant frequency that rattled her teeth." | | 4 | "The oak stones, which should have been behind her, now stood directly in her path, forming a grim, circular barricade." | | 5 | "It tilted its head, a slow, inquisitive gesture that sent a chill of pure, primal dread down her spine." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |