| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1502 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "amidst" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "dancing" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "comforting" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "vibrated" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "searing" | | 19 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 145 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1501 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Scritch. Scritch. Scritch." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1481 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Two | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Two" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the stems" | | 1 | "sounded like a tongue licking teeth" | | 2 | "felt like they were leaning inward, con" | | 3 | "felt like lead" | | 4 | "something like wet parchment, translucent an" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1501 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 21.75 | | std | 16.47 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 56 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "been, stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 247 | | matches | | |
| 9.52% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence didn't just fall; it crashed." | | 1 | "The words didn't travel; they dropped straight to the dirt." | | 2 | "It caught a patch of moss, a cluster of ferns, and then—" | | 3 | "The light caught the edge of a hem—a scrap of fabric, dark and tattered, disappearing into the tall grass." | | 4 | "It didn't come from a mouth; it seemed to vibrate out of the very air around her head." | | 5 | "It wasn't one voice; it was dozens, all mimicking the same cheerful melody, layered over one another until the sound became a physical pressure." | | 6 | "They didn't behave like light deprivation; they behaved like liquid, thick and ink-black, creeping across the moss toward her ankles." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1485 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.03569023569023569 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010101010101010102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 10.01 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.61 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 26.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 35 | | diversityRatio | 0.2 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 49.38% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a soft, wet sound." | | 1 | "Only a shallow depression in" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 57.04% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It felt intrusive here, amidst" | | 2 | "They marked the threshold." | | 3 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 4 | "She stopped the bike near" | | 5 | "They glowed with a sickly," | | 6 | "It grew harder, more insistent," | | 7 | "Her voice sounded thin." | | 8 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 9 | "It wasn't the light crack" | | 10 | "It was the heavy, deliberate" | | 11 | "She held her breath until" | | 12 | "They pulsed in time with" | | 13 | "She gripped the handlebars, her" | | 14 | "She rubbed it reflexively, her" | | 15 | "It was a flicker, a" | | 16 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 17 | "She forced the words out," | | 18 | "Her voice trembled." | | 19 | "It sounded like a tongue" |
| | ratio | 0.407 | |
| 8.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 122 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora gripped the handlebars of" | | 2 | "The streetlights of London sat" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "The scent of steamed ginger" | | 5 | "It felt intrusive here, amidst" | | 6 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 7 | "They marked the threshold." | | 8 | "Aurora pedaled toward the boundary." | | 9 | "The silence didn't just fall;" | | 10 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 11 | "She stopped the bike near" | | 12 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 13 | "Wildflowers, vibrant and impossible for" | | 14 | "They glowed with a sickly," | | 15 | "The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against" | | 16 | "The warmth seeped through her" | | 17 | "It grew harder, more insistent," | | 18 | "Her voice sounded thin." | | 19 | "The words didn't travel; they" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "They glowed with a sickly, pale luminescence, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the stems." | | 1 | "The warmth seeped through her shirt, a steady, rhythmic pulse that mirrored her own heartbeat." | | 2 | "They were narrow, deep indentations in the dirt, spaced far apart as if the creature moved in long, predatory strides." | | 3 | "The flashlight rolled away, its beam sweeping across the grass before settling on a patch of darkness beneath a willow tree." | | 4 | "It rose from the darkness like a shadow reclaiming its substance, tall and spindly, its limbs moving with the jerky, unnatural cadence of a broken marionette." | | 5 | "It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where features should have been, stretched tight over a skull that was far too large." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |