Run: 2026-05-10-01KR902Z4RN4P7ENEEJDW8P24M

Run Details

Duration:
36.0s
Cost:
$0.000702
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park groaned against the wind, a sound like teeth grinding together. Aurora gripped the handlebars of her bicycle, the metal cold enough to bite through her gloves. The streetlights of London sat far behind her, a hazy amber smudge against the black sky. Ahead, the darkness swallowed the gravel path whole. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag. The scent of steamed ginger and soy sauce clung to the nylon, a mundane reminder of the shift she had just finished. It felt intrusive here, amidst the damp breath of the night. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their silhouettes jagged against the starlight. They marked the threshold. According to the frantic, illegible notes Eva had scrawled in her journal, the path through the stones led to a place where the air tasted of copper and old magic. Aurora pedaled toward the boundary. As the wheels crossed the line between the stones, the hum of the city died. The silence didn't just fall; it crashed. It pressed against her eardrums, heavy and suffocating. She stopped the bike near the base of a gnarled oak. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, unnatural. Wildflowers, vibrant and impossible for this season, bloomed in the shadows. They glowed with a sickly, pale luminescence, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the stems. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her collarbone. The warmth seeped through her shirt, a steady, rhythmic pulse that mirrored her own heartbeat. It grew harder, more insistent, as she stared into the thicket of the Fae Grove. "Eva?" Her voice sounded thin. The words didn't travel; they dropped straight to the dirt. She reached up, her fingers brushing the deep crimson gemstone. The stone felt hot, almost feverish. The glow from the pendant bled through her thin jacket, painting her hands in a bloody hue. A twig snapped. The sound came from the thicket to her left. It wasn't the light crack of a falling branch. It was the heavy, deliberate crunch of something stepping on dry wood. Aurora froze. She held her breath until her lungs burned. Nothing moved. The wildflowers swayed, but there was no wind to move them. They pulsed in time with the pendant, a slow, hypnotic undulation. She gripped the handlebars, her knuckles white. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched. She rubbed it reflexively, her eyes scanning the periphery of the clearing. A shape shifted behind a cedar tree. It was a flicker, a smudge of darkness darker than the surrounding night. It moved with a fluid, sickening grace, sliding behind the trunk before her mind could even register its form. "I know someone's there." She forced the words out, trying to find the cool-headedness that usually served her in the chaos of London streets. Her voice trembled. Silence reclaimed the grove. Then, a soft, wet sound. It sounded like a tongue licking teeth. Aurora swung her flashlight toward the sound. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating the silver bark of the trees and the tangled web of roots. The light hit the wildflowers, making them shimmer with a greasy, iridescent sheen. The beam swept across the clearing, searching. It caught a patch of moss, a cluster of ferns, and then— Two eyes. They didn't reflect the light like an animal's. They didn't flash white or yellow. They absorbed it. They were two hollow pits of absolute void, set wide apart in the darkness between two oaks. She jerked the light away, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs. The eyes vanished. "Just a deer," she whispered. "Just a deer and the shadows." She turned back to her bicycle, intending to flee, to ride until the trees gave way to pavement and the comforting roar of traffic. But the bike was gone. The space where she had leaned the frame against the oak stood empty. Only a shallow depression in the dirt marked where it had been. The pendant flared. The heat became a sear, a stinging sensation against her skin. A low whistle drifted through the trees. It was a melodic, lilting tune, the kind a person might use to call a dog or a child. It was too cheerful. It carried a weight of mockery that made the hair on her arms stand up. The whistle stopped. A soft rustle came from directly behind her. Aurora spun around, the flashlight beam dancing wildly. The light caught the edge of a hem—a scrap of fabric, dark and tattered, disappearing into the tall grass. "Stop it!" She swung the light in a wide arc. The trees seemed closer now. The standing stones felt like they were leaning inward, constricting the clearing. The boundary felt less like a gateway and more like a cage. A smell hit her then. It wasn't the ginger of her delivery bag. It was the cloying, sweet scent of lilies left too long in a vase, mixed with the metallic tang of old blood. The heartbeat of the pendant grew erratic. It skipped beats, then thudded with a violent, jarring force that vibrated in her teeth. She backed away from the cedar tree, her boots thudding on the soft earth. Her eyes remained fixed on the darkness. *Scritch. Scritch. Scritch.* The sound of something long and sharp dragging against bark echoed from above. Aurora tilted the flashlight upward. The beam climbed the trunk of a towering oak, illuminating the rough texture of the wood. Near the top, a pale, elongated limb retreated into the canopy. It wasn't a branch. The movement had been too rhythmic, too intentional. The limb had been thin, multi-jointed, and lacked the texture of bark. She dropped the flashlight. The beam hit the ground, pointing toward the thicket. In the slanted light, she saw them. Footprints. They weren't human. They were narrow, deep indentations in the dirt, spaced far apart as if the creature moved in long, predatory strides. They led from the edge of the clearing directly toward where she stood. The footprints stopped an inch from her boots. The air grew cold, a sudden, biting frost that turned her breath into white plumes. The wildflowers ceased their swaying. They stood perfectly still, their pale light dimming to a dull, bruised purple. A voice drifted from the darkness, inches from her ear. It didn't come from a mouth; it seemed to vibrate out of the very air around her head. "Lost, little bird?" Aurora lunged to the side, stumbling over a protruding root. She hit the ground hard, the breath leaving her lungs in a sharp gasp. The flashlight rolled away, its beam sweeping across the grass before settling on a patch of darkness beneath a willow tree. In the fringe of the light, she saw a hand. It gripped the edge of the willow trunk. The fingers were impossibly long, the skin the color of a drowned man, stretched tight over bone. There were no nails, only sharp, blackened points at the ends of the digits. The hand retreated. She scrambled backward on her hands and knees, her breath coming in ragged, shallow sobs. The pendant was burning now, a searing coal against her chest. The crimson light from the gem bled through her clothes, casting her own shadow in long, distorted shapes against the trees. The whistling started again. This time, it came from every direction at once. A chorus of discordant, jaunty notes that seemed to weave through the trees, encircling her. It wasn't one voice; it was dozens, all mimicking the same cheerful melody, layered over one another until the sound became a physical pressure. She tried to stand, but her legs felt like lead. The ground seemed to shift beneath her, the roots undulating like snakes. The shadows began to pool around her feet. They didn't behave like light deprivation; they behaved like liquid, thick and ink-black, creeping across the moss toward her ankles. "Help!" she screamed. The word died in the heavy air. No echo followed. No distant siren answered. The grove swallowed the sound instantly, leaving only the frantic, rhythmic thud of the Heartstone. A shape emerged from the willow tree. It didn't walk. It unfolded. It rose from the darkness like a shadow reclaiming its substance, tall and spindly, its limbs moving with the jerky, unnatural cadence of a broken marionette. It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where features should have been, stretched tight over a skull that was far too large. It stopped five feet away. The whistling ceased. The creature leaned forward. The movement was slow, agonizingly deliberate. As it moved into the dim light of the pulsing pendant, Aurora saw the texture of its skin. It wasn't skin at all. It was something like wet parchment, translucent and mapped with a network of black veins. The pendant gave one final, violent pulse of heat, then went cold. The darkness of the grove rushed in to fill the void.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"amidst"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"dancing"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"gloom"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"searing"
count1
19
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"amidst"
2"loomed"
3"silence"
4"dancing"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulse"
9"pulsed"
10"scanning"
11"flicker"
12"trembled"
13"gloom"
14"comforting"
15"weight"
16"vibrated"
17"echoed"
18"searing"
19"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
83.74% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1501
ratio0.002
matches
0"Scritch. Scritch. Scritch."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1481
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Eva1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae1
Grove1
Two1
Aurora8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Pendant"
2"Two"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
32.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the stems"
1"sounded like a tongue licking teeth"
2"felt like they were leaning inward, con"
3"felt like lead"
4"something like wet parchment, translucent an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1501
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean21.75
std16.47
cv0.757
sampleLengths
056
141
247
335
449
57
630
71
814
933
103
1130
1210
1324
1427
157
1632
174
1823
199
207
2139
2219
232
2434
2514
263
2711
2829
2925
3014
3145
323
338
3427
352
3637
3735
3822
3921
403
4113
4256
434
4416
451
4636
478
4833
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences145
matches
0"was gone"
1"been, stretched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs247
matches
0"was burning"
9.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences150
ratio0.047
matches
0"The silence didn't just fall; it crashed."
1"The words didn't travel; they dropped straight to the dirt."
2"It caught a patch of moss, a cluster of ferns, and then—"
3"The light caught the edge of a hem—a scrap of fabric, dark and tattered, disappearing into the tall grass."
4"It didn't come from a mouth; it seemed to vibrate out of the very air around her head."
5"It wasn't one voice; it was dozens, all mimicking the same cheerful melody, layered over one another until the sound became a physical pressure."
6"They didn't behave like light deprivation; they behaved like liquid, thick and ink-black, creeping across the moss toward her ankles."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1485
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.03569023569023569
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010101010101010102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.01
std6.11
cv0.61
sampleLengths
016
116
216
38
48
522
611
713
84
930
105
1115
127
138
1411
158
1611
1719
187
1915
2015
211
224
2310
2410
256
2617
273
289
299
3012
312
328
332
3411
3511
367
378
3812
397
4013
4119
424
4320
443
454
465
477
487
4919
26.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.2
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners30
49.38% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"Then, a soft, wet sound."
1"Only a shallow depression in"
ratio0.015
57.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences135
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It felt intrusive here, amidst"
2"They marked the threshold."
3"It pressed against her eardrums,"
4"She stopped the bike near"
5"They glowed with a sickly,"
6"It grew harder, more insistent,"
7"Her voice sounded thin."
8"She reached up, her fingers"
9"It wasn't the light crack"
10"It was the heavy, deliberate"
11"She held her breath until"
12"They pulsed in time with"
13"She gripped the handlebars, her"
14"She rubbed it reflexively, her"
15"It was a flicker, a"
16"It moved with a fluid,"
17"She forced the words out,"
18"Her voice trembled."
19"It sounded like a tongue"
ratio0.407
8.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences135
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Aurora gripped the handlebars of"
2"The streetlights of London sat"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"The scent of steamed ginger"
5"It felt intrusive here, amidst"
6"The ancient oak standing stones"
7"They marked the threshold."
8"Aurora pedaled toward the boundary."
9"The silence didn't just fall;"
10"It pressed against her eardrums,"
11"She stopped the bike near"
12"The ground beneath her feet"
13"Wildflowers, vibrant and impossible for"
14"They glowed with a sickly,"
15"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against"
16"The warmth seeped through her"
17"It grew harder, more insistent,"
18"Her voice sounded thin."
19"The words didn't travel; they"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"They glowed with a sickly, pale luminescence, casting long, dancing shadows that seemed to detach themselves from the stems."
1"The warmth seeped through her shirt, a steady, rhythmic pulse that mirrored her own heartbeat."
2"They were narrow, deep indentations in the dirt, spaced far apart as if the creature moved in long, predatory strides."
3"The flashlight rolled away, its beam sweeping across the grass before settling on a patch of darkness beneath a willow tree."
4"It rose from the darkness like a shadow reclaiming its substance, tall and spindly, its limbs moving with the jerky, unnatural cadence of a broken marionette."
5"It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where features should have been, stretched tight over a skull that was far too large."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.571
75.3064%