| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1285 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1285 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "tapestry" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "pang" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "churn" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1285 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1052 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | London | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.74 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "the clearing, seemingly multiplying as it b" | | 1 | "seemed far too large and far too close" | | 2 | "looked like warm, melted honey" | | 3 | "looked like solidified nectar, translucen" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1285 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 24.25 | | std | 17.93 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 62 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.42% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just sound; it was a sensation, a pulse that surged through the soles of her feet." | | 1 | "Trees did not grow straight; they spiraled upward in elegant, DNA-like double helices, their bark shimmering with a pearlescent sheen." | | 2 | "It wasn't a normal craving; it was a gnawing, predatory emptiness that clawed at her stomach." | | 3 | "\"When the Veil thins, the hunger of Dymas seeks a vessel. It does not merely want to leak through; it wants to pour.\"" |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1060 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "massive, silver-barked trunk." | | 1 | "frantic, high-pitched vibration" |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.01981132075471698 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006603773584905661 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.98 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 38.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.29292929292929293 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 88.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of the rough, trampled" | | 1 | "Instead, the surface showed a" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't just sound; it" | | 1 | "She reached beneath her shirt," | | 2 | "She pulled the pendant out," | | 3 | "She broke into a wide" | | 4 | "It looked less like water" | | 5 | "She had heard the whispers" | | 6 | "They reached out a hand" | | 7 | "It wasn't a normal craving;" | | 8 | "She looked at the amber" | | 9 | "It looked like warm, melted" | | 10 | "She shook her head, the" | | 11 | "She gripped the moonsilver blade," | | 12 | "It came from the shadows" | | 13 | "She moved with a grace" | | 14 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 15 | "She left no footprints." | | 16 | "It wasn't made of flesh," | | 17 | "It gripped the edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 20.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora gripped the hilt of" | | 2 | "Nyx’s voice drifted through the" | | 3 | "The shadow stood a head" | | 4 | "Aurora stepped between two weathered" | | 5 | "The transition hit her like" | | 6 | "The familiar scent of damp" | | 7 | "The ground beneath Aurora's boots" | | 8 | "Iridescent petals, shades of bruised" | | 9 | "Aurora paused, tilting her head." | | 10 | "A low-frequency vibration resonated in" | | 11 | "It wasn't just sound; it" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 13 | "The Shade moved without a" | | 14 | "Aurora reached out to touch" | | 15 | "The moment her finger brushed" | | 16 | "The sound echoed through the" | | 17 | "The deeper they ventured, the" | | 18 | "Trees did not grow straight;" | | 19 | "A sudden warmth radiated from" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 2.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar scent of damp earth and city smog vanished, replaced by an intoxicating, floral musk that made her lungs ache." | | 1 | "Iridescent petals, shades of bruised plum and electric teal, bloomed in dense clusters, swaying in a breeze that carried no chill." | | 2 | "A low-frequency vibration resonated in her marrow, a rhythmic thrumming that mimicked a slow, steady heartbeat." | | 3 | "High above, the sky through the leaves wasn't the fading orange of a London dusk, but a swirling tapestry of indigo and violet, lit by stars that seemed far too…" | | 4 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed against her skin, a rhythmic heat that signaled a proximity she hadn't expected." | | 5 | "The air around the pool shimmered with a visible distortion, a greasy ripple in reality that made Aurora’s eyes ache if she stared too long." | | 6 | "It wasn't a normal craving; it was a gnawing, predatory emptiness that clawed at her stomach." | | 7 | "She moved with a grace that felt predatory, her waist-length silver hair flowing behind her like a river of mercury." | | 8 | "Her pale lavender eyes held a stillness that made Aurora’s skin prickle." | | 9 | "The moonsilver hummed against her palm, a frantic, high-pitched vibration that warned of approaching malice." | | 10 | "It wasn't made of flesh, but of something that looked like solidified nectar, translucent and glowing with an internal, sickly warmth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |