Run: 2026-05-10-01KR904PJ5NPSTCKMMW1KJDA3T

Run Details

Duration:
59.8s
Cost:
$0.001108
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door cast a rhythmic, sickly pulse across the damp cobblestones of the Soho alley. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air tasted of spilled bourbon and the musty scent of old paper. Maps of forgotten territories clung to the walls, their edges curling like dried skin under the dim amber lamps. Aurora leaned against the mahogany bar, the weight of the day settling into the marrow of her bones. Her fingers traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a mindless habit born of long shifts and quiet nights. The heavy delivery bags from the Golden Empress still seemed to pull at her shoulders. Silas moved behind the bar, his gait uneven. The slight limp in his left leg creaked against the floorboards as he reached for a glass. His silver signet ring caught the light, a solitary spark against his weathered hand. "You look like you've carried the whole of London on your back today, Rory." Silas set a coaster down. He didn't look up, his focus remained on the amber liquid swirling into a tumbler. "Just the heavy portions of the menu." Rory took a slow breath, watching the condensation bead on the glass. "The city takes its toll. Even on the ones who know how to hide in its shadows." A sudden gust of wind swept through the entrance, bringing the scent of rain and expensive perfume—something floral and sharp that sliced through the bar's musk. The heavy oak door thudded shut. Rory didn't turn immediately. She watched the reflection in the mirror behind the bar, amidst the rows of half-empty bottles and the framed black-and-white photographs of strangers. A woman stood in the doorway. She wore a camel-hair coat that looked like it had never known a speck of London grit. Her hair, once a chaotic nest of curls, was pulled back into a sleek, unforgiving knot. The woman’s gaze swept the room, settling on the bar. Her eyes widened, the light catching the polished perfection of her skin. "Rory?" The voice was a ghost. It sounded like Cardiff summers and cheap cider, but the cadence had been scrubbed clean, smoothed over by years of higher education and polished vowels. Rory straightened. The ache in her shoulders sharpened into a sudden, biting chill. "Eva." The name felt heavy, a stone she hadn't carried in years. Eva took several steps toward the bar, her heels clicking with a rhythmic, predatory precision against the wood. She stopped a few feet away, her hands clutching a designer clutch as if it were a shield. "I heard you were in London. I didn't think... I didn't think you'd be here." Eva gestured vaguely to the dim, cluttered interior of the Nest. She looked at the maps on the wall as if they were relics of a primitive age. "It's a good place to disappear." Rory reached for her drink, her movements deliberate. She watched Eva’s eyes drop to her hands—to the blunt, working-class nails and the faint stain of grease that wouldn't wash off. "You look different." Eva's voice lacked the warmth Rory remembered. It held the cool detachment of a woman used to being heard and never questioned. "The city has a way of doing that." Rory tilted her head. "You look like you belong in a boardroom, not a dive in Soho. Did you ever finish that degree?" Eva stiffened. She smoothed the front of her coat, a gesture so practiced it looked automatic. "I did. I’m with a firm in Mayfair now. Strategy and litigation." A silence stretched between them, filled only by the low hum of the refrigerator and the distant muffled roar of the London streets. "Strategy." Rory echoed the word, testing the weight of it. "It’s a long way from the terraced houses in Cardiff." Eva stepped closer, the scent of her perfume thickening. She leaned against the bar, but she didn't settle. She hovered, poised to flee. "I thought about writing. After the first year." Rory watched a bead of sweat roll down the side of her glass. "But you didn't." "Life happened. Things got complicated." Eva’s eyes flickered to the scar on Rory's wrist. She didn't look away, but her expression tightened into something that resembled pity. "I heard about Evan. I was so sorry, Rory. I wanted to reach out, but I didn't know what to say." Rory gripped the edge of the mahogany. The wood bit into her palms. "You didn't have to say anything. You just had to stay." Eva flinched, a microscopic tremor in her chin. "I couldn't stay. I had to move forward. I had to become someone else." "And you did." Rory's voice remained flat, devoid of the anger Eva likely expected. Anger required energy, and Rory was running on empty. "Is this it, then? You're just a delivery girl in a basement?" Eva's question wasn't cruel, but it possessed a terrifying lack of empathy. It was the question of someone who viewed struggle as a choice rather than a condition. Rory leaned in, her bright blue eyes locking onto Eva's manicured face. "I'm someone who lives in the real world, Eva. Not the one you've curated for yourself." Eva pulled back, her composure fracturing. She looked around the room, her gaze landing on Silas, who was watching them with the stillness of a predator. "This place... it's so dark. How do you breathe in here?" "I don't need much air." Rory took a long swallow of her drink, the burn of the whiskey a welcome distraction. "You should go. The rain is picking up." Eva opened her mouth, perhaps to offer a hollow apology or a forced invitation to coffee, but the words died in her throat. She looked at Rory—really looked at her—and saw the distance that no amount of conversation could bridge. "I'll see you around, then." Eva turned, her coat swirling behind her. The door opened and closed, leaving a vacuum of silence in her wake. Rory stared at the door. The green neon light pulsed once, twice, casting her shadow long and jagged across the floor. "She's not the girl you knew." Silas spoke softly, wiping the bar with a clean cloth. He didn't look up, but his presence felt like a heavy anchor in the shifting room. "I know." Rory turned her gaze back to the mirror. She watched the way the light played over the cracks in the glass, distorting the world behind her. "She's a stranger." "We all are, eventually." Silas set the cloth down and moved toward the back, his limp echoing the steady, hollow rhythm of the rain against the window.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"solitary"
count1
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"predator"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"solitary"
5"amidst"
6"chaotic"
7"chill"
8"warmth"
9"silence"
10"echoed"
11"flickered"
12"predator"
13"pulsed"
14"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1111
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount860
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
London2
Cardiff1
Eva14
Rory17
Silas5
persons
0"Empress"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Golden"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.512
windowScore0.167
22.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it had never known a speck of"
1"sounded like Cardiff summers and cheap cid"
2"felt like a heavy anchor in the shiftin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1111
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean17.09
std13.34
cv0.78
sampleLengths
056
154
239
314
420
57
612
717
832
966
1022
111
1230
1313
141
1511
1636
1715
1828
196
2030
213
2222
238
244
2519
2616
2712
2823
291
309
3110
3223
338
3413
353
365
3722
3821
3913
4011
418
4214
433
4420
4512
4628
4712
4816
4926
89.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been scrubbed"
2"being heard"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was running"
1"was watching"
54.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences97
ratio0.031
matches
0"A sudden gust of wind swept through the entrance, bringing the scent of rain and expensive perfume—something floral and sharp that sliced through the bar's musk."
1"She watched Eva’s eyes drop to her hands—to the blunt, working-class nails and the faint stain of grease that wouldn't wash off."
2"She looked at Rory—really looked at her—and saw the distance that no amount of conversation could bridge."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02528735632183908
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008045977011494253
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.45
std6.23
cv0.544
sampleLengths
020
117
219
318
421
515
68
717
814
914
105
1115
127
1312
1417
1526
166
174
1823
196
2017
2116
2210
2312
241
255
2625
272
2811
291
3011
3118
3218
3315
3411
3517
366
378
3822
393
407
4115
428
434
4419
452
4614
4712
4823
491
47.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.24742268041237114
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her fingers traced the small,"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He didn't look up, his"
3"She watched the reflection in"
4"She wore a camel-hair coat"
5"Her hair, once a chaotic"
6"Her eyes widened, the light"
7"It sounded like Cardiff summers"
8"She stopped a few feet"
9"She looked at the maps"
10"She watched Eva’s eyes drop"
11"It held the cool detachment"
12"She smoothed the front of"
13"She leaned against the bar,"
14"She hovered, poised to flee."
15"She didn't look away, but"
16"It was the question of"
17"She looked around the room,"
18"She looked at Rory—really looked"
19"He didn't look up, but"
ratio0.323
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences65
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps of forgotten territories clung"
2"Aurora leaned against the mahogany"
3"Her fingers traced the small,"
4"The heavy delivery bags from"
5"Silas moved behind the bar,"
6"The slight limp in his"
7"His silver signet ring caught"
8"Silas set a coaster down."
9"He didn't look up, his"
10"Rory took a slow breath,"
11"A sudden gust of wind"
12"The heavy oak door thudded"
13"Rory didn't turn immediately."
14"She watched the reflection in"
15"A woman stood in the"
16"She wore a camel-hair coat"
17"Her hair, once a chaotic"
18"The woman’s gaze swept the"
19"Her eyes widened, the light"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She wore a camel-hair coat that looked like it had never known a speck of London grit."
1"She stopped a few feet away, her hands clutching a designer clutch as if it were a shield."
2"She watched Eva’s eyes drop to her hands—to the blunt, working-class nails and the faint stain of grease that wouldn't wash off."
3"She didn't look away, but her expression tightened into something that resembled pity."
4"She looked around the room, her gaze landing on Silas, who was watching them with the stillness of a predator."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.2138%