Run: 2026-05-10-01KR9050R9ZECHQVMD902J742M

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.002864
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door groaned against its three deadbolts, protesting every inch of the slide. Rory stood behind the threshold, a delivery helmet tucked under one arm, blue eyes snapping wide as she registered the figure standing in the narrow hallway of the Brick Lane flat. The light from the stairwell flickered, casting a sickly yellow hue over the platinum hair and tailored charcoal wool of the man standing there. "Three heavy-duty locks, Aurora. You always did have a penchant for fortifying yourself against the inevitable." Lucien traced the wood grain of the door frame with a gloved finger, an amber eye and a pitch-black one studying her with clinical detachment. He adjusted his grip on the ivory-handled cane, the metal tip clicking sharply against the worn floorboards. "You should have sent a raven or a telegram, Lucien. Or better yet, just stayed in whatever shadow you crawled out of this time." Rory pivoted, leaving the door wide open as she retreated into the cramped living space. Piles of research notes teetered on the arm of a velvet sofa, threatening a collapse. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled from a stack of scrolls and let out a disdainful hiss at the visitor before darting under the kitchenette table. Lucien stepped inside, his presence filling the cramped room until the air itself seemed to thrum with the weight of him. He scanned the stacks of books, his nostrils flaring slightly at the smell of dust and old paper. "The place lacks your touch. It feels like a tomb for forgotten history." "It feels like freedom, which is a concept you’ve never grasped. Why are you here?" She dropped her helmet onto a stool, the sharp thud punctuating the quiet. She pulled at the sleeves of her sweater, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she couldn't break whenever the room grew too small. Lucien watched the movement, his gaze darkening. "Information moves quickly in London. People talk about the girl from Cardiff, the one delivering fortune cookies while hoarding secrets that don't belong to her. You’re playing a dangerous game, Rory, and the board is shifting." "Maybe I like the risk. It’s better than dancing to the tune of a broker who thinks everyone has a price tag stapled to their chest." "Is that what you think I see when I look at you?" He stepped closer, closing the distance until the sharp scent of ozone and expensive cologne flooded her senses. The temperature in the room plummeted. He reached out, his hand hovering near her waist before he pulled it back, grounding himself with the cane instead. Rory didn't flinch. She set her jaw, leaning back against the edge of the kitchen counter until the sharp corner bit into her lower back. "I think you see a contract. I think you see a favor you can call in once your luck finally turns sour." "I see the only person left in this city who doesn't bore me to death." He moved to the small coffee table, picking up a leather-bound journal. He flipped through it with an elegance that made the mundane action feel like a performance. "Give that back. It isn't yours to read." "You left this at the club, months ago. You left a lot of things, Rory. You left without a word, without a farewell, after we had reached an understanding." "We never had an understanding. We had a series of long nights and tactical observations that got messy. I chose the mess I could live with." "And yet you still wear that look in your eyes. The one that says you’re waiting for the fall." He stepped toward her, invading her space so completely she had to tilt her head back to look at his mismatched eyes. He leaned down, his face inches from hers, the heat radiating from him a stark contrast to the chill of the unheated flat. "Do you ever think about it? The way we worked? Like a machine, perfect and lethal." "I think about how quickly you’d sharpen that blade in your cane if I deviated from the plan by even a millimeter. You don't have friends, Lucien. You have assets." She pushed off the counter, moving to block him from the rest of the flat. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic rhythm that she hoped he couldn't hear. "I came here to warn you, not to be interrogated at your doorstep." "Then warn me and leave. Your presence is… disruptive." "‘Disruptive.’ Such a clinical word for the havoc you wreak on my composure." He laughed, a dry, humorless sound that lacked his usual vanity. He reached out and caught her wrist, holding it gently but firmly. His thumb brushed over the crescent scar, sending a jolt through her that she tried to hide behind a veil of indifference. "You’re trembling." "It’s the draft. The insulation in this place is garbage." "Liar." He didn't let go. He pulled her a half-step closer, the tip of his cane sliding across the floorboards with a soft scrape. The room felt smaller, the walls constricting as he tracked the rapid pulse at the base of her throat. "If you wanted me gone, you’d have shoved me out that door the second you saw my face. You’re holding onto the past just as tightly as you hold onto these books." "I'm merely waiting for the warning. You said you had one. Spit it out so you can go back to your suits and your secrets." "The syndicate is asking questions about your route. They follow the trail of your deliveries, wondering why you spend so much time in the archives near the bridge. They suspect you aren't just delivering dinner, Rory." She felt a cold sweat prickle along her hairline. The delivery route was her cover, the one thing she thought was ironclad. "Let them ask. I’m just a delivery girl. Everyone overlooks the girl in the jacket, especially the ones who think they run the world." "They aren't overlooking you. They’re watching. They’re waiting for you to slip, and when you do, they won't offer a conversation. They'll offer a grave." "Then why tell me? Why ruin your own leverage over me?" He leaned in further, his breath warm against her temple, the scent of him overwhelming. He let go of her wrist, instead tracing the line of her jaw with the back of his knuckles. "Because I grow weary of finding replacement associates who lack your intelligence. And because I realized, in the silence of the last few months, that I find this particular mess more interesting than any other outcome." Rory shoved him back, the movement sharp and sudden. He stumbled slightly, his cane clattering against the floor, but he didn't pull away. He stood braced, looking at her with an intensity that burned. "I’m not an asset, Lucien. And I’m certainly not a project for you to manage." "Then show me that you have a plan. Show me you have more than just these stacks of paper and a cat that hates me." "My plan is to keep my head down and my secrets safe. And you’re not part of the equation." "I am the only one who can keep you alive when the syndicate finally decides you’ve seen enough." He turned toward the door, his movements fluid and precise, as if the last few minutes had been nothing more than a tactical sparring session. He stopped at the threshold, looking back at her over his shoulder, his eyes catching the moonlight filtering through the window. "Think on it, Aurora. The offer doesn't come with an expiration date, but your safety might." The door swung shut behind him, the latch clicking into place with a final, echoing metallic thud. The room fell into an oppressive silence, broken only by the distant, rhythmic purr of the cat emerging from its hiding spot. Rory pressed her palms against the door, the wood cool beneath her skin, and let out a long, ragged breath that she felt she had been holding since he arrived.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
70.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count2
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"completely"
4"gently"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1355
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"grave"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"traced"
2"velvet"
3"weight"
4"scanned"
5"dancing"
6"stark"
7"chill"
8"perfect"
9"firmly"
10"pulse"
11"grave"
12"tracing"
13"silence"
14"intensity"
15"echoing"
16"oppressive"
17"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences42
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1354
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount717
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Rory5
Lucien3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1354
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean27.08
std15.12
cv0.558
sampleLengths
068
116
242
324
455
539
613
715
849
936
1026
1112
1244
1325
1422
1515
1628
178
1829
1926
2019
2145
2216
2330
2430
2513
269
2713
2845
292
3010
311
3242
3332
3425
3536
3622
3724
3825
3911
4034
4136
4234
4315
4425
4519
4618
4746
4816
4969
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs113
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences75
ratio0.013
matches
0"She pulled at the sleeves of her sweater, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she couldn't break whenever the room grew too small."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount722
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.019390581717451522
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0110803324099723
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean18.05
std7.9
cv0.437
sampleLengths
013
131
224
316
425
517
624
715
815
925
1021
1118
1213
1315
1413
1529
167
1736
1826
1912
2018
216
2220
233
2422
2522
2615
2712
2816
298
3029
3126
3219
3322
3423
3516
3630
3715
3815
3913
409
4113
4211
4312
4422
452
4610
471
484
4919
51.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.38666666666666666
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences42
matches
0"He adjusted his grip on"
1"He scanned the stacks of"
2"She dropped her helmet onto"
3"She pulled at the sleeves"
4"He stepped closer, closing the"
5"He reached out, his hand"
6"She set her jaw, leaning"
7"He moved to the small"
8"He flipped through it with"
9"He stepped toward her, invading"
10"He leaned down, his face"
11"She pushed off the counter,"
12"Her heart hammered against her"
13"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
14"He reached out and caught"
15"His thumb brushed over the"
16"He didn't let go."
17"He pulled her a half-step"
18"She felt a cold sweat"
19"He leaned in further, his"
ratio0.595
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences42
matches
0"The door groaned against its"
1"Rory stood behind the threshold,"
2"The light from the stairwell"
3"Lucien traced the wood grain"
4"He adjusted his grip on"
5"Rory pivoted, leaving the door"
6"Piles of research notes teetered"
7"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, uncurled"
8"Lucien stepped inside, his presence"
9"He scanned the stacks of"
10"She dropped her helmet onto"
11"She pulled at the sleeves"
12"Lucien watched the movement, his"
13"He stepped closer, closing the"
14"The temperature in the room"
15"He reached out, his hand"
16"Rory didn't flinch."
17"She set her jaw, leaning"
18"He moved to the small"
19"He flipped through it with"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He reached out, his hand hovering near her waist before he pulled it back, grounding himself with the cane instead."
1"He laughed, a dry, humorless sound that lacked his usual vanity."
2"He stopped at the threshold, looking back at her over his shoulder, his eyes catching the moonlight filtering through the window."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.1877%