Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90A4EYMJP7GFGKX6QTW3KB

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4.3
Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.005823
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed open the heavy door of The Raven's Nest and the scent of aged wood and spilled ale hit her at once. Neon from the green sign outside cast a faint glow over the threshold, yet inside the place held to its usual dimness, maps curling at the edges along the walls and photographs of strangers frozen in black and white. She carried a takeout bag from the Golden Empress in one hand, the faint spice of ginger and chili still clinging to the paper, and her flat on the floor above waited quiet as always. She set the order on the bar counter. "Silas, the usual delivery for table four." A voice answered from further down the counter, low and measured, a voice pulled from years past. "Rory Carter. After all this time." She turned. Sitting on a worn stool sat Evan Driscoll, the man she had left in Cardiff. The Evan she remembered kept his hair short and neat, his shoulders square from hours at the gym, his grin quick and sharp as a blade. This one wore his hair longer, threaded with early silver at the temples, and the lines around his eyes had deepened into something heavier. He still carried his height, but a softness settled around his middle, and his fingers traced the rim of his glass without lifting it. "People call me Aurora now," she said. The words came out even, the way they did when she delivered packages on time and collected cash without fuss. Evan lifted his glass at last and took a slow drink. "Aurora. Fits you better than Laila ever did. That was just a nickname Eva stuck you with back when we all thought we’d stay forever." Rory slid onto the next stool, her coat brushing the scarred wood. "What brings you to London?" "Work transferred me here six months ago. Some corporate thing that swallowed my old route." He glanced at her delivery uniform, the brass buttons dull under the low lights. "You run packages now?" "Part time. Rent above this place comes easier when the bar owner lets the flat go cheap. I study the rest of the time." Evan set his glass down. His hand closed around it again, knuckles whitening once, then loosening. "Pre-law still?" "The same." She nodded toward the rack of printed menus behind the bar. "Silas keeps the summer rolls fresh, if that’s what you’re after tonight." He gave a short sound that might have been a laugh. "Always knew you’d land on your feet. I wasn’t sure I would." Glass clinked somewhere down the line. The bartender, an older man with hazel eyes and a neat beard threaded in auburn and grey, moved between bottles without hurry. He slid a fresh coaster toward Evan and turned away, his slight limp visible only when he reached for the upper shelf. Rory traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the faint line pale against her skin from the childhood fall she rarely mentioned. "You look different." "So do you." Evan’s gaze held on her shoulder-length black hair, now cut straighter than the curls she once wore. "Quieter inside. Like the noise cleared out." "It did." She let her fingers rest flat on the bar. "After everything, quiet became necessary." Evan shifted on his stool. The fabric of his jacket pulled across his chest with the movement. "I kept telling myself I’d write. Or call. Each month the distance grew and the words got smaller." Rory lifted her chin a fraction. "Words would have changed nothing once the door closed." "True." He looked down at the signet ring on his right hand, the silver catching a shard of light from the overhead fixture before he covered it again with his palm. "I still have the photograph Eva took of us at the pier. You wearing that red coat, me trying to look serious. I kept it in a drawer until last year. Then one night it felt heavier than paper." The bartender poured two waters without being asked and set the glasses between them. He met Rory’s eyes for a moment, a brief acknowledgment, then moved on to polish a spot that did not need polishing. Rory wrapped her hands around one glass. The condensation chilled her palms. "I left because the shouting never stopped. You remember that last night?" "I remember every line on your face that night." Evan’s shoulders dropped a fraction. "The way you packed in silence after." "Silence felt safer than any argument." He nodded. The movement stirred the grey at his temples. "After you moved here I tried going out again. The first woman I met smiled too wide. Said all the right things. I kept waiting for her to ask about the scar on my forearm instead of my job." Rory’s thumb pressed a single drop of water from the glass rim. "You have a scar I don’t remember." "Accident at the new site. Concrete fell wrong." He rolled up his sleeve enough to show the thin white line across his inner arm. "It healed faster than anything else did." They sat with that. Sound from the main room filtered in, the low murmur of two patrons over maps, the occasional scrape of stool legs. Evan exhaled and the breath carried the scent of whisky. "You ever wonder what would have happened if I’d gone to therapy when you asked?" he said. "I wondered once." Rory’s voice stayed level. "Then I stopped counting the ways we could have bent different." Evan turned the glass in a slow circle. "I still carry the old keys to the Cardiff flat. Stupid habit. Found them the week I got the transfer notice and almost threw them out. Kept them like proof that the version of me who could lose you existed at all." Rory looked at her takeout bag, the grease spot spreading through the paper. "Keys are easier to replace than people." The bartender passed again, his limp lighter now as he adjusted his stance behind the taps. He wiped a spill without speaking, the silver ring on his hand glinting once more before vanishing into the towel. Evan leaned forward on his elbows. "I didn’t plan to walk in here tonight. Meant to catch the last train back to my place in Hackney. Then the rain started and the sign outside pulled me in." Rory’s bright blue eyes fixed on his profile. "The Nest pulls in all sorts." "Seems it does." He reached into his jacket and placed a small folded paper on the bar between them. The creases were deep. "Found this in an old notebook last week. Address I wrote for you the month you left. Never mailed it." She did not touch the paper. "What does it say?" "Same words I should have said then. That I was wrong. That the anger wasn’t about you." He sat back, the motion slow. "That missing you felt like breathing through wet wool every single morning." Rory’s hands stayed around the glass. Outside, a bus passed, its lights sliding across the photographs on the wall, momentary color over old black and white faces. She counted the seconds until the lights faded, then spoke. "I kept the letter Eva wrote me the day I arrived here. She told me to rebuild from the ground up. New name at first, new habits. The flat came next. Then the route with the restaurant." Evan’s mouth tightened at one corner. "Eva always knew how to cut straight to the bone." "She still does. She calls every third Sunday." They both watched the bartender move to the far end and sort through receipts. The quiet held between them, the weight of the years settling like dust on the maps. "I changed jobs three times since Cardiff," Evan said. "Never lasted. Each place asked less of me than the next. I started wondering if the problem followed me or stayed in the version of myself I left behind." Rory released the glass and folded her hands on the bar top. "You asked me once if I regretted leaving. The answer never changed." "Still no?" "Still no." Her tone carried no edge, only the flat certainty of someone who measured distance in deliveries completed rather than miles travelled. Evan picked up the folded paper and returned it to his pocket. The motion left his hand empty on the counter. He traced the wood grain with one fingertip. "This place feels like it remembers things people forget." Rory stood. She gathered the takeout bag, the contents shifting with a soft rustle. "Some bars do that." She crossed to the door. The green neon outside waited, casting its steady color over the threshold. Evan remained seated, his shoulders squared the way they used to be when arguments began, yet his eyes followed the scar on her wrist as she pushed the handle. The door closed behind her with a low thud that blended into the room’s constant low sounds. Evan turned his glass once more, the liquid catching what light remained.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.549
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.039
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1515
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1515
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"measured"
count2
1
word"traced"
count3
2
word"chilled"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"traced"
2"chilled"
3"silence"
4"glinting"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1515
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount923
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan16
Driscoll1
Cardiff1
Rory13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Evan"
2"Driscoll"
3"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.633
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1515
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean29.71
std18.14
cv0.611
sampleLengths
097
115
223
391
427
536
617
733
824
918
1025
1123
1250
1326
1427
1516
1635
1715
1870
1936
2024
2121
226
2349
2419
2531
2635
2717
2818
2950
3020
3136
3237
3314
3443
3510
3635
3737
3837
3916
408
4130
4238
4324
442
4523
4621
4717
4818
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.032467532467532464
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004329004329004329
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.9
std9.43
cv0.678
sampleLengths
023
139
235
38
47
517
66
72
815
926
1024
1124
127
1320
1411
1525
1612
175
1829
194
2024
215
2211
232
2413
2512
2611
2712
286
2922
3022
3123
323
3320
347
3511
365
375
3812
3918
406
419
4231
4339
4414
4522
467
475
4812
4914
61.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3853211009174312
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences66
matches
0"She carried a takeout bag"
1"She set the order on"
2"He still carried his height,"
3"He glanced at her delivery"
4"His hand closed around it"
5"She nodded toward the rack"
6"He gave a short sound"
7"He slid a fresh coaster"
8"She let her fingers rest"
9"He looked down at the"
10"He met Rory’s eyes for"
11"He rolled up his sleeve"
12"They sat with that."
13"He wiped a spill without"
14"He reached into his jacket"
15"She did not touch the"
16"He sat back, the motion"
17"She counted the seconds until"
18"They both watched the bartender"
19"Her tone carried no edge,"
ratio0.348
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences66
matches
0"Rory pushed open the heavy"
1"Neon from the green sign"
2"She carried a takeout bag"
3"She set the order on"
4"A voice answered from further"
5"The Evan she remembered kept"
6"This one wore his hair"
7"He still carried his height,"
8"The words came out even,"
9"Evan lifted his glass at"
10"Rory slid onto the next"
11"He glanced at her delivery"
12"Evan set his glass down."
13"His hand closed around it"
14"She nodded toward the rack"
15"He gave a short sound"
16"Glass clinked somewhere down the"
17"The bartender, an older man"
18"He slid a fresh coaster"
19"Rory traced the crescent scar"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He met Rory’s eyes for a moment, a brief acknowledgment, then moved on to polish a spot that did not need polishing."
1"He wiped a spill without speaking, the silver ring on his hand glinting once more before vanishing into the towel."
2"The door closed behind her with a low thud that blended into the room’s constant low sounds."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.1910%