| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 966 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 966 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "intensity" | | 7 | "navigate" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "calculated" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "throb" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 962 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 629 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Eva | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Chinese | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.705 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a ghost carved from charcoal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 962 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 20.04 | | std | 17.55 | | cv | 0.876 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 57 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 99 | | matches | | |
| 30.08% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a void of black—tracking the slight tremor in Rory's grip." | | 1 | "The smell of him hit her—expensive sandalwood and the faint, metallic tang of something old and demonic." | | 2 | "She saw the flicker of something raw behind the polished mask of the information broker—a hunger that mirrored her own, a desperation that defied his calculated poise." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 635 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.01732283464566929 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004724409448818898 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 12.66 | | std | 6.94 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 47.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.35526315789473684 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked like a ghost" | | 1 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 2 | "She didn't move to take" | | 3 | "He moved through the room" | | 4 | "His focus remained locked on" | | 5 | "She felt the familiar, electric" | | 6 | "He turned his head, the" | | 7 | "It was a scent that" | | 8 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 9 | "He didn't squeeze, but the" | | 10 | "He pulled her closer, the" | | 11 | "He leaned in, his breath" | | 12 | "She saw the flicker of" | | 13 | "She wrenched her wrist away," | | 14 | "He stepped back, the tension" | | 15 | "He reached into his inner" | | 16 | "He slid it across the" | | 17 | "It wasn't a knock." | | 18 | "It was the sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.442 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked back" | | 1 | "Rory swung the door open," | | 2 | "Lucien stood in the dim" | | 3 | "He looked like a ghost" | | 4 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 5 | "Lucien stepped forward, not waiting" | | 6 | "Rory retreated, the door swinging" | | 7 | "She didn't move to take" | | 8 | "The flat felt smaller the" | | 9 | "Every surface of the room" | | 10 | "He moved through the room" | | 11 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched" | | 12 | "Lucien didn't glance at the" | | 13 | "His focus remained locked on" | | 14 | "Rory set the takeout bag" | | 15 | "She felt the familiar, electric" | | 16 | "The last time they had" | | 17 | "He turned his head, the" | | 18 | "Rory stepped toward him, her" | | 19 | "The smell of him hit" |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 43 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached out, her fingers grazing the lapel of his charcoal jacket, then clenched into a fist, bunching the fine fabric." | | 1 | "She saw the flicker of something raw behind the polished mask of the information broker—a hunger that mirrored her own, a desperation that defied his calculated…" | | 2 | "The ink was a deep, bruised purple, the symbols shifting and undulating as if they were alive." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien stepped, not waiting for an invitation" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.029 | | leniency | 0.059 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |