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Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90BK7RAWKNJAT1CY5EQKN6
Run Details
Model:
Grok 4.3
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
22.2s
Cost:
$0.008338
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
34.21%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
93.74%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
63.70%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
77.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
69.44%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
87.50%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.2162%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
Feeble yellow light bled through the transom above Eva's door.
Rory jammed the key into
the second lock and froze when the brass shifted without resistance under her fingers. Her breath caught. The third bolt remained. Footsteps approached, deliberate and even.
Her shoulders squared as the
handle turned. The door opened six inches.
Lucien leaned against the frame
in a charcoal suit that clung to his frame without a single wrinkle.
The platinum hair stayed untouched
despite the late hour.
His heterochromatic eyes fixed on
her, one amber and one black, unblinking. "Surprise ruined itself."
She stared at the small
curve of his mouth, the way his hand rested on the ivory handle of the cane.
Silence stretched between them until
the curry house below released the scent of cardamom and garlic into the corridor. "You picked the locks." "Three deadbolts hardly constitute security when the occupant vanishes for weeks. Ptolemy misses his schedule."
The tabby brushed Lucien's polished
shoe before disappearing down the hallway. "And so do certain parties whose patience wears thinner than
silk
." Rory pushed inside without invitation.
The flat smelled of books
and dust, the air thick with paper.
Her gaze swept the cluttered
surfaces, stacks of scrolls threatening collapse. Nothing had changed. Except everything.
Her fingers found the crescent
scar on her wrist beneath her jacket sleeve. "You shouldn't be here." "Neither should she. Yet Eva left a note about an urgent matter in the archives. You know how she enjoys her little mysteries."
Lucien's cane tapped once against
the floorboards. "I came to
ensure
no one else found the message first." "You gain nothing by waiting in her flat." "I gain everything by knowing who else waits."
He straightened from the doorframe
and closed it behind him.
The locks clicked back into
place. "The delivery routes remain the same, I see. Golden Empress still pays on Thursdays." Rory dropped her bag on the nearest stack of books. Paper shifted beneath the
weight
.
She faced him fully, shoulder-length
hair swinging against her jaw. The scent of his cologne cut through the must, something dark and spiced that pulled memory forward like a hook. Marseille nights and markets, the way his voice sounded in French when he forgot English. "Stop pretending this concerns Eva." "Everything concerns Eva when she buries half a library in one room. Someone searched through the notes last night. Pages out of sequence. Candle wax on the floor."
He moved past her toward
the kitchenette, movements controlled. "I tracked the scent here. Yours and another's. Older. Familiar."
She watched him lift the
kettle as if he owned the space. The platinum hair caught the light from the single lamp.
She hated how easily he
filled the room, how the air thinned whenever he chose
silence
. "Evan tracked me once before. He won't this time." "Evan." Lucien laughed, short and without
warmth
. The sound scraped along her spine. "Your former barrister plaything carries no such scent. This one smells of sulfur and iron. The kind that lingers in bone." Water poured into ceramic. The kettle clicked against the counter. Rory crossed to him and shoved the kettle aside before it boiled. "Tell me what you actually want." "Information. The same arrangement we had in Marseille."
His good eye, the amber
one, held hers. "You gain quiet. I receive details before they become problems." She shook her head once. The space between them contracted. "That arrangement ended when you chose your supplier over my safety." "You chose geography over loyalty." The cane rested against the counter now. His hands stayed free. "Distance never erased the hours you spent beneath my roof." Heat rose beneath her collar.
She refused to let it
reach her face. "The roof was a cage with
velvet
curtains. Nothing more." "Yet you stayed six months. Enough time for language lessons and trust. Enough to learn French well enough to curse my parentage when you left."
His fingers brushed the edge
of a scroll. "I kept the notes you wrote. The ones in your careful hand, every line unsigned." Rory stepped back.
Her hip met the table
edge, solid and unyielding. The flat
seemed smaller now, every open book another wall
.
She smelled the curry rising
again through the vents, the cat's faint fur on her sleeve. "Eva needs the archives quiet because she found a reference. Something about Avaros. She never finished the translation. The page ends mid-sentence." "Convenient. The demon realm rarely provides tidy conclusions." Lucien's hand lifted the cane again, the blade concealed in polished ivory. He turned it once. "I could assist her. The research. The language barriers. You already suspect I hold keys others lack." "Because you hunger for the same answers. Your father's realm leaves no one untouched. Not even the humans who claim it." Footsteps sounded from the stairwell outside. Heavy soles, two sets. Whispers followed, urgent and clipped. Rory grabbed the first heavy tome from the table and held it low. The spine cracked. Lucien heard movement too.
His stance shifted, weight balanced
on the balls of his feet. They stood side by side behind the door. The cat slipped between their ankles and vanished beneath the sofa. The lock scraping started from the outside, deliberate metal on metal. Someone else had the combination for one bolt. "The scent," she whispered. "It matches what you described." Lucien nodded once. His cane blade slid free with a
whisper
of steel, the edge catching dim light. He held the cane as naturally as before, though the ivory now revealed its purpose. His free hand brushed her shoulder briefly, grounding contact that lingered half a second too long. "Stay behind me." The door shuddered once. The remaining bolts held for now. Rory adjusted her grip on the book and kept her breathing even. The air tasted metallic. Her fingers tightened on the scar at her wrist again, the
familiar
ridge against her skin. Another scrape. The first bolt gave way with a soft click. Footsteps shifted closer to the threshold. The scent of sulfur crawled beneath the doorframe, sharper than any spice rising from below. Lucien raised the blade two inches higher, ready. His amber eye stayed locked on the wood while the black one tracked sound in the corridor. Rory held position at his side, book raised, every muscle ready. They waited together for the door to open fully.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Lucien's cane tapped once [once]"
dialogueSentences
32
tagDensity
0.281
leniency
0.563
rawRatio
0.111
effectiveRatio
0.063
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
34.21%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1064
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"footsteps"
count
3
1
word
"silence"
count
2
2
word
"silk"
count
1
3
word
"ensure"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
2
5
word
"familiar"
count
2
6
word
"warmth"
count
1
7
word
"velvet"
count
1
8
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"footsteps"
1
"silence"
2
"silk"
3
"ensure"
4
"weight"
5
"familiar"
6
"warmth"
7
"velvet"
8
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
79
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
79
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
101
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
37
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1064
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
93.74%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
22
wordCount
711
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
1.13
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva
1
Lucien
8
Rory
8
French
1
English
1
Footsteps
3
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Rory"
3
"Footsteps"
places
0
"French"
globalScore
0.937
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
55
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"seemed smaller now, every open book another wall"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1064
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
101
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
28.76
std
15.29
cv
0.532
sampleLengths
0
36
1
17
2
39
3
3
4
40
5
4
6
37
7
33
8
17
9
41
10
8
11
38
12
60
13
5
14
47
15
38
16
9
17
34
18
22
19
6
20
26
21
21
22
26
23
23
24
48
25
38
26
22
27
41
28
21
29
46
30
38
31
9
32
49
33
3
34
42
35
32
36
45
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
79
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
101
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
712
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.025280898876404494
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.007022471910112359
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
101
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
101
mean
10.53
std
6.77
cv
0.642
sampleLengths
0
10
1
19
2
3
3
4
4
5
5
7
6
5
7
18
8
9
9
12
10
3
11
21
12
19
13
4
14
26
15
11
16
5
17
12
18
11
19
3
20
2
21
13
22
4
23
30
24
11
25
8
26
18
27
6
28
14
29
10
30
5
31
10
32
20
33
15
34
5
35
37
36
10
37
12
38
10
39
16
40
9
41
7
42
6
43
21
44
4
45
6
46
12
47
6
48
16
49
10
63.70%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.40594059405940597
totalSentences
101
uniqueOpeners
41
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
76
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
77.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
27
totalSentences
76
matches
0
"Her breath caught."
1
"Her shoulders squared as the"
2
"His heterochromatic eyes fixed on"
3
"She stared at the small"
4
"Her gaze swept the cluttered"
5
"Her fingers found the crescent"
6
"He straightened from the doorframe"
7
"She faced him fully, shoulder-length"
8
"He moved past her toward"
9
"She watched him lift the"
10
"She hated how easily he"
11
"His good eye, the amber"
12
"She shook her head once."
13
"His hands stayed free."
14
"She refused to let it"
15
"His fingers brushed the edge"
16
"Her hip met the table"
17
"She smelled the curry rising"
18
"He turned it once."
19
"His stance shifted, weight balanced"
ratio
0.355
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
74
totalSentences
76
matches
0
"Rory jammed the key into"
1
"Her breath caught."
2
"The third bolt remained."
3
"Footsteps approached, deliberate and even."
4
"Her shoulders squared as the"
5
"The door opened six inches."
6
"Lucien leaned against the frame"
7
"The platinum hair stayed untouched"
8
"His heterochromatic eyes fixed on"
9
"She stared at the small"
10
"Silence stretched between them until"
11
"The tabby brushed Lucien's polished"
12
"Rory pushed inside without invitation."
13
"The flat smelled of books"
14
"Her gaze swept the cluttered"
15
"Nothing had changed."
16
"Her fingers found the crescent"
17
"Lucien's cane tapped once against"
18
"He straightened from the doorframe"
19
"The locks clicked back into"
ratio
0.974
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
76
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
31
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"His free hand brushed her shoulder briefly, grounding contact that lingered half a second too long."
69.44%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
9
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien's hand lifted, the blade concealed in polished ivory"
87.50%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"Lucien laughed (laugh)"
1
"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
32
tagDensity
0.063
leniency
0.125
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.125
84.2162%