Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90C78RH9GAB21EJ0HBYBX0

Run Details

Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.002713
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the corrugated iron rooftops of Camden, turning the alleys into slick, black mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn wiped a cold streak of drizzle from her brow, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. Across the narrow gap between the brick buildings, a fleeting silhouette vaulted a construction barrier. The jump lacked grace, clumsy with frantic adrenaline, but it carried the mark of someone who knew exactly where they were going. "Herrera, stop," she barked, her voice swallowed instantly by the relentless downpour. Tomás did not look back. He shoved past a cluster of industrial bins, his boots spraying grimy water against the masonry. Harlow checked the leather watch on her left wrist; the luminescence of the dial flickered, reacting to the heavy, static air of the district. She lengthened her stride, the military cadence of her gait cutting through the uneven pavement. She knew the medical kit in his pack contained more than gauze and antiseptic. He carried the evidence she needed to break the clique wide open. They rounded a corner, the neon flicker of a nearby shop sign casting them in strobe-like bursts of sickly pink. Tomás skidded at the entrance of an abandoned Tube station, the iron gate hanging off its hinges like a broken jaw. He fumbled with something—a small, white object that glimmered in his palm—and pressed it against a protrusion in the brickwork. The atmosphere shifted. A low, harmonic vibration rose from the bowels of the subterranean labyrinth, vibrating through Harlow’s soles. The air turned metallic, smelling of ozone and copper. "You’re crossing a line you can’t walk back from, Tomás," she called out, reaching for the holster at her hip. The man pivoted, the Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly against his chest. His olive features twisted with a desperate, sharp hunger. The scar on his forearm stood out, a pale streak against his skin. "The law stopped applying down there a long time ago, Detective. You want to save people? Start by admitting you have no idea what’s actually killing them." He dove into the gloom. Harlow didn't hesitate. She plunged into the station, the heat of the surface world replaced immediately by a biting, stale chill. A rusted turnstile stood between her and the descent. She hopped the metal arm, her boots striking the concrete stairs with a resonance that echoed down the long, lightless tunnel below. Gravity seemed to pull harder here, a psychic weight pressing against her chest as she descended past the yellowed tile walls. The darkness held a density that felt almost solid. Flashlight beams cut through the gloom ahead, swirling with dust motes and something that looked suspiciously like embers. She reached the platform. It was not the derelict space she remembered from crime scene photos. The tracks had been covered with reinforced steel plates, and stalls constructed from reclaimed wood and scrap metal lined both sides of the platform. Candles burned in jars, their flames flickering in vibrant, impossible colors—violet, sulfurous green, and a deep, pulsing crimson. "Herrera!" The sound of her shout didn't bounce; it died, soaked up by the thick velvet tapestries draped from the ceiling vaults. Voices hummed in the periphery—a cacophony of whispers in languages that defied phonetic logic. Traders stood behind counters piled high with jars of viscous fluids, polished bones, and rusted daggers that hummed with a low-frequency whine. The Veil Market sat in the guts of the earth, an open wound in the city’s heart where the rules of the Metropolitan Police were nothing more than a bad joke. Harlow moved past a merchant with bandages wrapped around eyes that didn't belong to a human. She kept her right hand steady near her weapon, her eyes scanning the crowd. They weren't all human. Some stood too tall, their joints hinged with excessive, fluid grace. Others sat motionless, skin translucent as vellum. She spotted the back of a dark jacket near a stall overflowing with bundles of aromatic herbs. Tomás was talking to a woman—if she even was a woman—who wore a mask of hammered silver. Harlow pushed through the throng, the crowd parting with a sudden, eerie silence as she approached. She grabbed a heavy iron grate, sliding it along its track to block his exit route. "End of the line, Tomás. Turn around. Slow." Tomás stiffened. He tucked a heavy, leather-bound ledger into his satchel before turning to face her. His expression wasn't one of fear anymore; it was pity. "You followed me all this way just to die, Harlow. Look at your watch. Look at the hand." She glanced down. The watch she had worn for eighteen years, the one that had been her partner’s, was no longer ticking. The second hand vibrated, pinning itself at the twelve, while the hour and minute hands spun at a frantic, blurring speed. The skin beneath the leather strap felt like it was burning, stinging with a localized heat. "This is an investigation," she growled, stepping into his personal space, her sharp jaw set in defiance. "Obstruction of justice carries a heavy sentence." "Justice? In a place where you can buy the memory of a first kiss or the shadow of a man already dead?" Tomás took a step toward her, heedless of the gun she kept leveled at his gut. "I treat the people you ignore. I mend the limbs broken by things that don't cast shadows. You lost something three years ago, Detective. You’ve been chasing ghosts, but you’re staring at the graveyard." A murmuring rose from the nearby shadows. A cluster of hooded figures drifted closer, their movements synchronized, devoid of the natural hesitation of living things. Harlow’s pulse thrummed, a frantic cadence against her throat. Her thumb brushed the safety of her service pistol, but the steel felt strangely warm, vibrating with the same frequency as the market air. "I need that ledger, Tomás. Hand it over, and I testify that you cooperated." "You want to know what happened to Morris?" Tomás reached into his satchel, his fingers brushing the spine of the book. He leaned in close, his scent a mix of sterile antiseptic and the sweet, cloying decay of the market. "Everything you want to know is in here. But once you look, you can't walk back up those stairs as the same woman who walked down." Harlow felt the floor beneath her boots tremor. The overhead lights—the enchanted candles—flared in unison, casting long, monstrous shadows against the tunnel walls. She heard metal scraping metal further down the platform, the sound of a heavy gate being unlatched. "Give it to me," she commanded, ignoring the itch of panic rising in her chest. She looked past his shoulder. At the far end of the station, the tunnel opened into a vast, vaulted chamber that didn't appear on any city map. It was a throat leading deeper into the earth, and something was climbing out of it. It moved with the sound of splintering bone, a wet, dragging gait that made the market-goers scatter like frightened rats. Tomás stepped back, his eyes wide and burning with a desperate, flicking light. "The market doesn't like intruders, Quinn. And it hates the law." He tossed the ledger. It tumbled through the air, hitting her chest with the weight of a stone. As her fingers clamped onto the worn leather, the candles blew out. Total, crushing darkness enveloped the platform, save for the faint, bioluminescent glow creeping from the creature approaching in the distance. Harlow raised her weapon toward the sound, her breathing shallow, the ledger pressed against her ribs like a shield.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"fleeting"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"constructed"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"synchronized"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"fleeting"
1"flickered"
2"flicker"
3"gloom"
4"chill"
5"resonance"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"constructed"
9"velvet"
10"cacophony"
11"scanning"
12"silence"
13"vibrated"
14"synchronized"
15"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1070
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow9
Quinn1
Tomás7
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like it was burning, stinging with"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1266
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean35.17
std22.04
cv0.627
sampleLengths
072
112
286
361
428
520
634
727
85
952
1048
1158
121
1321
1467
1552
1634
1732
188
1926
2018
2159
2224
2372
2458
2514
2621
2719
2826
2940
3015
3163
3213
3311
3450
3519
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"been covered"
1"being unlatched"
48.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs176
matches
0"were going"
1"was talking"
2"was burning"
3"was climbing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"Harlow checked the leather watch on her left wrist; the luminescence of the dial flickered, reacting to the heavy, static air of the district."
1"He fumbled with something—a small, white object that glimmered in his palm—and pressed it against a protrusion in the brickwork."
2"Candles burned in jars, their flames flickering in vibrant, impossible colors—violet, sulfurous green, and a deep, pulsing crimson."
3"The sound of her shout didn't bounce; it died, soaked up by the thick velvet tapestries draped from the ceiling vaults."
4"Voices hummed in the periphery—a cacophony of whispers in languages that defied phonetic logic."
5"Tomás was talking to a woman—if she even was a woman—who wore a mask of hammered silver."
6"His expression wasn't one of fear anymore; it was pity."
7"The overhead lights—the enchanted candles—flared in unison, casting long, monstrous shadows against the tunnel walls."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1083
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, leather-bound ledger"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017543859649122806
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006463527239150508
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean15.07
std7.18
cv0.477
sampleLengths
016
119
215
322
412
55
616
724
815
914
1012
1120
1221
1320
143
1516
169
1720
1812
199
2013
2127
225
233
2418
259
2622
2721
289
2918
304
3112
3224
3318
341
3521
3614
3722
3831
3916
4014
414
4211
437
4417
4517
4616
4716
488
492
56.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38095238095238093
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences74
matches
0"she barked, her voice swallowed"
1"He shoved past a cluster"
2"She lengthened her stride, the"
3"She knew the medical kit"
4"He carried the evidence she"
5"They rounded a corner, the"
6"He fumbled with something—a small,"
7"she called out, reaching for"
8"His olive features twisted with"
9"He dove into the gloom."
10"She plunged into the station,"
11"She hopped the metal arm,"
12"She reached the platform."
13"It was not the derelict"
14"She kept her right hand"
15"They weren't all human."
16"She spotted the back of"
17"She grabbed a heavy iron"
18"He tucked a heavy, leather-bound"
19"His expression wasn't one of"
ratio0.419
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences74
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn wiped a"
1"The jump lacked grace, clumsy"
2"she barked, her voice swallowed"
3"Tomás did not look back."
4"He shoved past a cluster"
5"Harlow checked the leather watch"
6"She lengthened her stride, the"
7"She knew the medical kit"
8"He carried the evidence she"
9"They rounded a corner, the"
10"Tomás skidded at the entrance"
11"He fumbled with something—a small,"
12"The atmosphere shifted."
13"A low, harmonic vibration rose"
14"The air turned metallic, smelling"
15"she called out, reaching for"
16"The man pivoted, the Saint"
17"His olive features twisted with"
18"The scar on his forearm"
19"He dove into the gloom."
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The jump lacked grace, clumsy with frantic adrenaline, but it carried the mark of someone who knew exactly where they were going."
1"He fumbled with something—a small, white object that glimmered in his palm—and pressed it against a protrusion in the brickwork."
2"She hopped the metal arm, her boots striking the concrete stairs with a resonance that echoed down the long, lightless tunnel below."
3"Flashlight beams cut through the gloom ahead, swirling with dust motes and something that looked suspiciously like embers."
4"Voices hummed in the periphery—a cacophony of whispers in languages that defied phonetic logic."
5"Traders stood behind counters piled high with jars of viscous fluids, polished bones, and rusted daggers that hummed with a low-frequency whine."
6"It moved with the sound of splintering bone, a wet, dragging gait that made the market-goers scatter like frightened rats."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Tomás reached, his fingers brushing the spine of the book"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
72.1005%