| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "grave" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "predator" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "crystallized" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "standard" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "resolve" | | 14 | "synchronized" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "pulsed" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "rhythmic" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "silence was deafening" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The silence was deafening" | | 1 | "sent a chill through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1339 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1339 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 4 | | Dymas | 3 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Shade | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | English | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Earth" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to burrow back into the plates" | | 1 | "felt like wading through thick, warm sy" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.747 | | wordCount | 1339 | | matches | | 0 | "not for food, but for the sensory overload" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 43.19 | | std | 24.59 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 79 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 95 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the pendant; the crimson gem bled light into the surrounding shadows, matching the heartbeat she felt vibrating through the very soles of her boots." | | 1 | "A thin, hair-like wisp of smoke drifted from their shoulder toward the center of the courtyard, where the air shimmered and buckled—a tear in the reality of the realm." | | 2 | "It wasn't a standard rift; it was a gaping wound, jagged and raw, pulsing with the same rhythm as the Heartstone." | | 3 | "A figure emerged from the shadow of the pavilion—tall, draped in robes that shifted color like rotting meat." | | 4 | "Rory saw her opening—the rift flared between two of the giant, pulsing vines, a jagged seam of cold, blue starlight peeking through the amber haze of Dymas." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1352 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dim, amber-drenched horizon" | | 1 | "over deep, cavernous sockets." |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.015532544378698224 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0022189349112426036 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 15.04 | | std | 7.71 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 38 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 58.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38202247191011235 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the distant, familiar sound" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 65.45% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She avoided a patch of" | | 1 | "It promises satiation but harvests" | | 2 | "She caught her own reflection" | | 3 | "Her blue eyes looked dull," | | 4 | "It is a banquet that" | | 5 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 6 | "She checked the pendant; the" | | 7 | "They carried platters of fruits" | | 8 | "Her lungs burned with every" | | 9 | "She reached for the dagger," | | 10 | "They do not see us," | | 11 | "We are here to find" | | 12 | "It wasn't a standard rift;" | | 13 | "It is a bruise on" | | 14 | "She felt the weight of" | | 15 | "She focused on the cold" | | 16 | "She stepped over a discarded" | | 17 | "Their heads snapped as one," | | 18 | "They had no eyes, only" | | 19 | "You brought something, little thief." |
| | ratio | 0.386 | |
| 39.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "The transition hit like a" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized a few steps" | | 3 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 5 | "Flowers the size of carriage" | | 6 | "Everything here existed in a" | | 7 | "The ground shifted beneath Rory’s" | | 8 | "She avoided a patch of" | | 9 | "The nectar lures." | | 10 | "It promises satiation but harvests" | | 11 | "Rory looked down at her" | | 12 | "She caught her own reflection" | | 13 | "Her blue eyes looked dull," | | 14 | "The hunger is not for" | | 15 | "It is a banquet that" | | 16 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 17 | "The terrain leveled into a" | | 18 | "Each pulse of the Heartstone" | | 19 | "She checked the pendant; the" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 4.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pressed her palm against the jagged grain of the ancient oak standing stone, her breath hitching as the wood felt less like bark and more like vibrating, c…" | | 1 | "Rory tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade, the moonsilver hilt biting into her palm with an unrelenting, icy chill that grounded her pulse." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her throat thrummed rhythmically, a rapid, frantic heartbeat against her breastbone that mirrored the frantic thrum of the realm itsel…" | | 3 | "Flowers the size of carriage wheels unfolded in the dim light, exhaling heavy, intoxicating perfume that smelled of overripe peaches and grave soil." | | 4 | "She avoided a patch of mushrooms that resembled weeping human ears, their surfaces slick with a bioluminescent sap." | | 5 | "Tables groaned under the weight of feasts that defied logic, mountains of impossible delicacies steaming with vapors that swirled in iridescent ribbons." | | 6 | "They carried platters of fruits that moved on their own, squirming as if trying to burrow back into the plates." | | 7 | "She focused on the cold of the dagger, pushing away the phantom aromas of the banquet that clawed at her resolve, promising peace, promising rest, promising an …" | | 8 | "The servants recoiled, their puppet-strings snapping, their focus fracturing as they sensed the predator in their midst." | | 9 | "The sugar-glass spires cracked, raining down shards that disappeared before they hit the ground, dissolving into golden mist." | | 10 | "She sprinted, her boots kicking up dust that tasted of cinnamon and ash." | | 11 | "The banquet tables collapsed under the weight of their own excess, the food turning into black, writhing sludge that sought to entangle her heels." | | 12 | "It sat innocuous and weathered in the quiet park, a slab of ancient, grey rock, unresponsive to the touch of her hand, showing no sign of the nightmare pulsing …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |