| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1212 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "electric" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "carried the weight" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "tapestry" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "mechanical" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "comforting" | | 13 | "synthetic" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 8 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "look" | | 1 | "see" | | 2 | "hear" | | 3 | "see see see" | | 4 | "think" |
| | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1210 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "You" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Silas | 10 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Prague | 1 | | You | 17 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Cheung" | | 6 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Prague" |
| | globalScore | 0.798 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like she had to win every argument" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.33 | | std | 23.83 | | cv | 0.591 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 69 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 130 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "He reached up and adjusted one of the framed photographs—a grainy image of a street corner in Prague." | | 1 | "He didn't look like a bar owner anymore; the authority was back, etched into the set of his shoulders." | | 2 | "He looked down at the empty glass she’d left behind, a faint lipstick smudge on the rim, and then up at the maps on the wall—places where he had once been, places he would never reach again in a body that had long since forgotten the grace of youth." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1213 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.031327287716405604 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00247320692497939 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 13.44 | | std | 8.57 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 31.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.32222222222222224 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe I just like the" | | 1 | "Then maybe it’s time you" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoulder-length black hair caught" | | 1 | "She carried the weight of" | | 2 | "Her left wrist, marked by" | | 3 | "He looked at her then," | | 4 | "It grinds the edges off," | | 5 | "She took a long pull" | | 6 | "I left Cardiff to outrun" | | 7 | "He moved to the far" | | 8 | "You look like you're memorizing" | | 9 | "He reached for a rag" | | 10 | "You talk about Cardiff like" | | 11 | "You still carry that tension" | | 12 | "You haven't changed the core" | | 13 | "You just changed the scenery." | | 14 | "She slammed the glass down," | | 15 | "I left Evan." | | 16 | "I left the firm." | | 17 | "I wake up in a" | | 18 | "He stopped polishing, his gaze" | | 19 | "He leaned over the wood," |
| | ratio | 0.581 | |
| 29.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "Silas leaned his weight against" | | 2 | "The door moaned on its" | | 3 | "A gust of fog curled" | | 4 | "Rory emerged from the shadows" | | 5 | "Her shoulder-length black hair caught" | | 6 | "She carried the weight of" | | 7 | "The bar stool groaned as" | | 8 | "Her left wrist, marked by" | | 9 | "Silas didn't look up, instead" | | 10 | "He looked at her then," | | 11 | "The city wears you down," | | 12 | "It grinds the edges off," | | 13 | "She took a long pull" | | 14 | "The maps behind Silas shifted" | | 15 | "I left Cardiff to outrun" | | 16 | "Cardiff was a script written" | | 17 | "Here, the noise is my" | | 18 | "A man pushed through the" | | 19 | "He moved to the far" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "If I have to be" | | 1 | "Because there’s nothing left to" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 90.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked at her then, his hazel eyes tracking the lines around her mouth, the subtle shift in her posture that hadn't been there when she first arrived in Lond…" | | 1 | "She was suffocating under the weight of her father’s expectations and the cruelty of a man who thought possession was the same thing as love." | | 2 | "Silas stood alone in the dim light, his hand resting on the silver ring, the silence of the bar pressing in on him like the walls of a room that was far too sma…" | | 3 | "He looked down at the empty glass she’d left behind, a faint lipstick smudge on the rim, and then up at the maps on the wall—places where he had once been, plac…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |