Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90E4DPWD3MXMEP224VMQ9S

Run Details

Duration:
6.9s
Cost:
$0.002510
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed against the damp Soho air, stitching lines of electric color across the puddles on the pavement. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of spilled stout and the dry, papery smell of aging parchment maps pinned to the walls. Silas leaned his weight against the mahogany bar, his left leg held stiff, his fingers tracing the cool silver band of his signet ring. The door moaned on its hinges. A gust of fog curled into the room, followed by the soft, rhythmic click of heels against wood flooring. Rory emerged from the shadows of the doorway. Her shoulder-length black hair caught the dim light, and she moved with a cautious, lingering stride toward the bar. She carried the weight of the city in the set of her shoulders, her bright blue eyes scanning the room before locking onto the man behind the taps. The bar stool groaned as she climbed onto it, setting a stack of delivery bags on the floor. Her left wrist, marked by the faint crescent scar, brushed the edge of the drink tray. Fancy a refill, or has the world finally stopped demanding your time? Silas didn't look up, instead sliding a glass of amber liquid toward her without a word. He looked at her then, his hazel eyes tracking the lines around her mouth, the subtle shift in her posture that hadn't been there when she first arrived in London. The city wears you down, Rory. It grinds the edges off, makes you look for shadows just to sit in them. She took a long pull of the drink, the burn visible in the way her throat tightened. The maps behind Silas shifted in the draft from the door, a flickering tapestry of places neither of them occupied anymore. I left Cardiff to outrun the grind, not to settle into another one. Cardiff was a script written by someone else, a courtroom drama where I was always the defendant. Here, the noise is my own. A man pushed through the entrance, his coat dripping with rain. He moved to the far end of the bar, avoiding eye contact. Rory watched him through the mirror behind the bottles, her fingers dancing rhythmically against the glass. You look like you're memorizing the exit trajectories of every patron in this room, Silas. Is that how you sit now? Waiting for the snap of a twig? Silas shifted his weight, favoring his bad knee. He reached for a rag and began cleaning an already spotless surface, his movements mechanical and precise. Old habits find the marrow, Rory. You talk about Cardiff like it’s a place you visited in a past life, but I see the way you clutch your bag. You still carry that tension from the law office, that need to map out the defense before the accusation lands. You haven't changed the core of yourself. You just changed the scenery. She slammed the glass down, a sharp crack that echoed against the low ceiling. A few patrons turned, their eyes lingering before they returned to their own hushed conversations. I changed. I left Evan. I left the firm. I wake up in a flat above this tomb and I hear the city breathe, and for the first time, it doesn't sound like a gavel. That isn't scenery, Silas. That’s a migration. He stopped polishing, his gaze sharpening. He leaned over the wood, his shadow stretching long toward her, obscuring the scars on her wrist. Migration implies you’re moving toward something. You aren't. You’re just hovering. You use this bar as a perimeter, moving boxes of food for Cheung like it’s some vital intelligence operation. You treat the delivery route like a patrol. Why? Are you guarding the territory, or are you just hiding from the fact that you have nowhere else to go? Her jaw set. She reached up to push a stray lock of hair behind her ear, her movements sharp, deliberate. Maybe I just like the silence of being invisible. People see the uniform, they see the bag, they see a girl who doesn't exist outside of the transaction. It’s comforting. You should know. You replaced a life of state secrets with a life of tapping kegs and listening to the ghosts on your walls. We’re the same, Silas. We both stopped living for the future and started curating the past. He reached up and adjusted one of the framed photographs—a grainy image of a street corner in Prague. His reflection in the glass was a ghost of the operative he used to be. I didn't choose the ghost life. It was forced upon me by a knee that wouldn't hold a sprint and a mind that wouldn't stop counting threats. You choose this. You choose to act like a courier when you have the mind of a barrister. You curate your own invisibility because you're afraid that if you step out of it, someone will see the person you’re trying to bury. The bar grew quiet. A low, synthetic beat pulsed from a radio tucked somewhere behind the shelves, filling the gaps in their conversation. Rory watched him, her eyes tracing the grey streaks in his beard. I’m burying the girl who felt like she had to win every argument, Silas. That girl was exhausting. She was suffocating under the weight of her father’s expectations and the cruelty of a man who thought possession was the same thing as love. If I have to be invisible to keep from becoming her again, then I’ll take the invisibility. She stood up, pulling the delivery straps over her shoulders. The weight of the bag pulled her back slightly, a physical anchor. You think you're protecting me by picking at these stitches, but all you're doing is proving you haven't moved on either. You’re still the handler, Silas. You’re still trying to debrief a subject who stopped reporting months ago. He stood up straight, ignoring the sharp protest of his knee. He didn't look like a bar owner anymore; the authority was back, etched into the set of his shoulders. I never stop being the handler, Rory. Not for you. She walked to the door, the neon light spilling over her and turning her blue eyes into cold, reflective disks. She paused with her hand on the cold metal handle. Then maybe it’s time you found a new station. Because there’s nothing left to report from here. She was gone before he could respond, leaving the door to swing back and forth, a rhythmic metronome slicing through the stale, heavy air of the Nest. Silas stood alone in the dim light, his hand resting on the silver ring, the silence of the bar pressing in on him like the walls of a room that was far too small. He looked down at the empty glass she’d left behind, a faint lipstick smudge on the rim, and then up at the maps on the wall—places where he had once been, places he would never reach again in a body that had long since forgotten the grace of youth. He tightened his grip on the edge of the bar, feeling the old, familiar ache settle deep into his bones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"rhythmic"
count2
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"tapestry"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"comforting"
count1
13
word"synthetic"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"rhythmic"
4"carried the weight"
5"scanning"
6"tapestry"
7"dancing"
8"mechanical"
9"tension"
10"echoed"
11"silence"
12"comforting"
13"synthetic"
14"pulsed"
15"etched"
16"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"look"
1"see"
2"hear"
3"see see see"
4"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1210
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho1
London1
Rory6
Silas10
Cardiff3
Evan1
Cheung1
Prague1
You17
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Cheung"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.798
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she had to win every argument"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1210
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"carry that tension"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.33
std23.83
cv0.591
sampleLengths
073
125
255
334
412
546
621
738
836
939
1028
1125
1261
1329
1442
1523
1659
1720
1870
1933
2069
2135
2260
2322
2438
2530
2610
2730
2817
29130
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"was forced"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was suffocating"
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences90
ratio0.033
matches
0"He reached up and adjusted one of the framed photographs—a grainy image of a street corner in Prague."
1"He didn't look like a bar owner anymore; the authority was back, etched into the set of his shoulders."
2"He looked down at the empty glass she’d left behind, a faint lipstick smudge on the rim, and then up at the maps on the wall—places where he had once been, places he would never reach again in a body that had long since forgotten the grace of youth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1213
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.031327287716405604
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00247320692497939
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.44
std8.57
cv0.638
sampleLengths
025
124
224
36
419
58
619
728
818
916
1012
1116
1230
136
1415
1517
1621
1713
1817
196
2011
2112
2216
2315
246
257
268
2717
286
2923
3020
317
325
3314
3415
352
363
374
3826
394
403
416
4217
436
442
453
4619
478
481
4920
31.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.32222222222222224
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners29
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Maybe I just like the"
1"Then maybe it’s time you"
ratio0.023
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her shoulder-length black hair caught"
1"She carried the weight of"
2"Her left wrist, marked by"
3"He looked at her then,"
4"It grinds the edges off,"
5"She took a long pull"
6"I left Cardiff to outrun"
7"He moved to the far"
8"You look like you're memorizing"
9"He reached for a rag"
10"You talk about Cardiff like"
11"You still carry that tension"
12"You haven't changed the core"
13"You just changed the scenery."
14"She slammed the glass down,"
15"I left Evan."
16"I left the firm."
17"I wake up in a"
18"He stopped polishing, his gaze"
19"He leaned over the wood,"
ratio0.581
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences86
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Silas leaned his weight against"
2"The door moaned on its"
3"A gust of fog curled"
4"Rory emerged from the shadows"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair caught"
6"She carried the weight of"
7"The bar stool groaned as"
8"Her left wrist, marked by"
9"Silas didn't look up, instead"
10"He looked at her then,"
11"The city wears you down,"
12"It grinds the edges off,"
13"She took a long pull"
14"The maps behind Silas shifted"
15"I left Cardiff to outrun"
16"Cardiff was a script written"
17"Here, the noise is my"
18"A man pushed through the"
19"He moved to the far"
ratio0.86
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"If I have to be"
1"Because there’s nothing left to"
ratio0.023
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He looked at her then, his hazel eyes tracking the lines around her mouth, the subtle shift in her posture that hadn't been there when she first arrived in Lond…"
1"She was suffocating under the weight of her father’s expectations and the cruelty of a man who thought possession was the same thing as love."
2"Silas stood alone in the dim light, his hand resting on the silver ring, the silence of the bar pressing in on him like the walls of a room that was far too sma…"
3"He looked down at the empty glass she’d left behind, a faint lipstick smudge on the rim, and then up at the maps on the wall—places where he had once been, plac…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.8320%