Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90EB3D6R62YSG7P9NRAENK

Run Details

Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.003070
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The triple locks shifted in a discordant sequence of clicks. Aurora pulled the door open, her hand lingering on the crescent-shaped scar at her wrist, a reflex born of long-dormant nerves. She expected Eva, or perhaps the persistent landlord demanding rent, but the hallway light caught the sheen of platinum hair instead. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his charcoal suit absorbing the dim amber glow of the corridor. He didn't offer a greeting. One amber eye tracked the movement of her throat, while the pitch-black void of the other scanned the chaotic clutter behind her—the stacks of vellum, the half-empty mugs, the tabby cat weaving between her ankles. "You changed the locks again. Three deadbolts for a space this size feels like an admission of guilt." Aurora stepped back, the smell of rain and expensive cologne rolling into the flat to collide with the scent of old paper and stale curry rising from the street below. She caught herself leaning back against a bookshelf, the sharp edge of a spine digging into her shoulder. "Guilt implies I have something left worth stealing, Lucien. You must be lost. The underworld offices are a few miles west, unless you finally burned those bridges too." He stepped inside, his ivory-handled cane tapping rhythmically against the hardwood. He stopped only when the tip hit the edge of her rug. He looked around, eyes lingering on a scroll spread across the kitchen table, before finally settling on her face. He didn't blink. The silence between them stretched, thick as industrial smog, vibrating with the ghost of a thousand arguments left unresolved in a different city, a different life. "I found your current path interesting. Delivering dumplings for a woman who deals more in rumors than rice. You were always better at hiding in plain sight than your father ever was." She moved toward the small kitchenette, keeping the table between them like a barricade. Her hands stayed busy, fiddling with a crooked kettle. "My father is a barrister in Cardiff. He deals in facts, not the kind of filth you peddle. If you came here to offer me work, the answer remains the same as it was in Marseille. I have no interest in your brand of leverage." Lucien circled the table, his movements fluid, predator-like. He ignored the lack of invitation and pulled out a rickety chair. He sat, the expensive fabric of his trousers pulled taut across his thighs. He tapped his fingers on the ivory handle of the cane. "Marseille was three years ago, Aurora. You look tired." "I look like someone who works for a living. Something you wouldn't understand, surrounded by the debris of everyone else’s misery." She turned, crossing her arms, her bright blue eyes cold. She caught the slight tension in his jaw, the way his fingers whitened against the white handle. It was the only tell he left, a singular flicker of the man she had once walked through the rain with, the man who had promised her everything and given her only questions. "I didn't come for an interview. I came because the last time we spoke, you forgot your watch on my nightstand. A small thing. Irrelevant, perhaps, but it has been gathering dust." "Throw it away. It’s stopped ticking anyway." He reached into his breast pocket, his movements deliberate. He produced a narrow silver timepiece, placing it on the table. It sat there, a tiny monument to the time they had stolen from one another. He didn't pull his hand away. He left his fingers splayed on the wood, inches from her own. "It kept perfect time until the moment you walked out. When you left, the mechanism failed. I thought that meaningful." "I think you’re a romantic fool who enjoys the sound of his own poetic drivel." She moved around the table, intent on scooping up the watch and ushering him out, but the moment she reached for the silver metal, his hand moved faster. He caught her palm. His skin felt unnaturally cool, a sharp contrast to the feverish heat rising in her own veins. The crescent scar on her wrist pulsed beneath his thumb. "You still shake when I touch you. That isn't anger, Rory. You were never good at lying to me, even when the truth threatened to unravel both of us." She pulled back, but he didn't let go. He stood, towering over her, his presence suffocating. The space between them vanished. The room felt suddenly too small, the towering piles of books pressing inward. She could see the faint speckling of gold in his black eye, a reminder of the demon blood that kept him anchored in the shadows. "I learned how to lie in London. I learned how to be someone else entirely. You’re ghost-chasing, Lucien. The woman you’re looking for doesn't live here anymore." "Then who is this? The one who leaves the light on in the hallway? The one who still drinks her tea with too much honey? I see the way you look at the door every time the floorboards creak above the bar. You aren't waiting for a delivery." He closed the distance until his chest brushed hers. She felt the sharp steel frame of the cane pressed against her hip, a reminder of the weapon he carried, a symbol of the danger that defined him. She tilted her head, her breath hitching, a sound she despised the moment it escaped. "What do you want, Lucien? Say it. Stop circling." "I want the watch back, yes. But I mostly want to know if you've healed, or if you're just better at dressing the wounds." His hand moved from her wrist, tracing the line of her jaw with a thumb that felt like a blade. She leaned into it instinctively, a betrayal of every wall she had spent years building. The blue of her eyes burned into his, searching for the crack, for a hint of the vulnerability he had buried under tailored suits and cold ambition. "You left me in the dark," she whispered, her voice barely audible over the hum of the city outside. "You made a choice. You chose the information, the power, the connections. You chose the game." "I chose to keep you alive. You know that. The life you carry now, the little flat above a bar, the deliveries, the anonymity—it’s a cage. You think it’s safety because you’ve never seen the predator outside the bars." He shifted his weight, his eyes darkening. He brought his face closer, his nose brushing against her temple. She could feel the static electricity crackling in the air between them, a byproduct of his heritage, a heat that made her skin prickle. "I don't need your protection. I never did." "No. You needed my company. You just refused to admit it." He leaned down, his lips ghosting over the shell of her ear. She caught her breath, her hand clenching into a fist at his chest, gripping the lapel of his jacket. The world outside the flat—the noise of Brick Lane, the restaurant, the research—ceased to exist. There was only the scent of him, the firm press of his body, and the realization that the distance she maintained was merely a temporary postponement of the inevitable. "Why tonight, Lucien? Why now?" "Because the silence stopped being enough. And because I realized that even if I own every secret in London, I don't own a single thing that matters." He pulled back just enough to look at her, his expression stripping away the facade of the cold fixer. For a heartbeat, he looked exactly like the man she had run from—conflicted, desperate, and tethered to her by a thousand invisible threads. "Get out," she said, though the command lacked any sting, lacking the weight of a true dismissal. He didn't move. He only raised his hand, tucking a lock of her black hair behind her ear, his fingers lingering there, warm against the shell of her neck. "I’m not going back to the bar, Rory. And I know you don't intend to let me walk out that door empty-handed." She stared at him, her pulse thudding a jagged rhythm in her neck. She dropped her gaze to the silver watch on the table, then back to the heterochromatic eyes that had haunted every dream she had tried to bargain away. She let out a breath she hadn't realized she was holding, the tension snapping like a frayed rope. "If you stay," she said, her voice dropping to a low, rough edge, "we leave the work at the door. No secrets. No games. Just for tonight." Lucien smiled, a sharp, dangerous curving of his lips that held no mirth, only a grim, starving recognition. "I have no interest in secrets tonight."
created_at"2026-05-10T13:15:20.568Z" 5/10/2026, 1:15:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"predator"
count2
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"unravel"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"clenching"
count1
14
word"facade"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"chaotic"
2"silence"
3"predator"
4"tension"
5"flicker"
6"perfect"
7"pulsed"
8"unravel"
9"reminder"
10"tracing"
11"weight"
12"could feel"
13"clenching"
14"facade"
15"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1466
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions6
wordCount942
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a blade"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1466
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean34.09
std19.01
cv0.557
sampleLengths
052
156
218
348
428
571
632
723
845
944
109
1121
1260
1332
147
1553
1620
1715
1859
1929
2059
2127
2248
2352
249
2524
2662
2735
2839
2942
308
3111
3275
335
3427
3542
3617
3729
3822
3959
4027
4118
427
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was holding"
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"One amber eye tracked the movement of her throat, while the pitch-black void of the other scanned the chaotic clutter behind her—the stacks of vellum, the half-empty mugs, the tabby cat weaving between her ankles."
1"The world outside the flat—the noise of Brick Lane, the restaurant, the research—ceased to exist."
2"For a heartbeat, he looked exactly like the man she had run from—conflicted, desperate, and tethered to her by a thousand invisible threads."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03259726603575184
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014721345951629864
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean17.66
std9.57
cv0.542
sampleLengths
010
121
221
316
45
535
618
730
818
928
1011
1112
1219
133
1426
1532
1614
179
1845
198
2012
2113
2211
239
2421
2510
2617
2733
2832
297
309
3111
3215
336
3412
3520
3615
3728
384
3917
4010
4129
428
438
445
4513
4625
4727
4848
499
31.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2891566265060241
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences60
matches
0"She expected Eva, or perhaps"
1"He didn't offer a greeting."
2"She caught herself leaning back"
3"He stepped inside, his ivory-handled"
4"He stopped only when the"
5"He looked around, eyes lingering"
6"He didn't blink."
7"She moved toward the small"
8"Her hands stayed busy, fiddling"
9"He ignored the lack of"
10"He sat, the expensive fabric"
11"He tapped his fingers on"
12"She turned, crossing her arms,"
13"She caught the slight tension"
14"It was the only tell"
15"He reached into his breast"
16"He produced a narrow silver"
17"It sat there, a tiny"
18"He didn't pull his hand"
19"He left his fingers splayed"
ratio0.75
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences60
matches
0"The triple locks shifted in"
1"Aurora pulled the door open,"
2"She expected Eva, or perhaps"
3"Lucien leaned against the doorframe,"
4"He didn't offer a greeting."
5"Aurora stepped back, the smell"
6"She caught herself leaning back"
7"He stepped inside, his ivory-handled"
8"He stopped only when the"
9"He looked around, eyes lingering"
10"He didn't blink."
11"The silence between them stretched,"
12"She moved toward the small"
13"Her hands stayed busy, fiddling"
14"Lucien circled the table, his"
15"He ignored the lack of"
16"He sat, the expensive fabric"
17"He tapped his fingers on"
18"She turned, crossing her arms,"
19"She caught the slight tension"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"His hand moved from her wrist, tracing the line of her jaw with a thumb that felt like a blade."
1"She could feel the static electricity crackling in the air between them, a byproduct of his heritage, a heat that made her skin prickle."
2"She caught her breath, her hand clenching into a fist at his chest, gripping the lapel of his jacket."
3"He only raised his hand, tucking a lock of her black hair behind her ear, his fingers lingering there, warm against the shell of her neck."
4"Lucien smiled, a sharp, dangerous curving of his lips that held no mirth, only a grim, starving recognition."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, though the command lacked any sting, lacking the weight of a true dismissal"
1"she said, her voice dropping to a low, rough edge,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.077
75.2808%