| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "imposing" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "chaotic" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "magnetic" | | 18 | "structure" | | 19 | "velvet" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "standard" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1279 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "This is not a place for breath, Nyx whispered." | | 1 | "You carry the heat of Gluttony into the garden of shadows, Isolde said." | | 2 | "If this is a key, she whispered to herself, what does it unlock?" | | 3 | "The knot is tied, though the rope still strains, Isolde said." | | 4 | "We should go, Nyx whispered, their voice no longer echoing but sounding like a standard breeze." |
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| 95.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1279 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 3 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Veil | 6 | | Dymas | 2 | | You | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.953 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 23.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a physical weight against her" | | 1 | "felt like a heartbeat syncing with her" | | 2 | "runes that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them directly" | | 3 | "looked like beating hearts" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.127 | | wordCount | 1279 | | matches | | 0 | "neither kind nor" | | 1 | "not with the blade, but with her hand" | | 2 | "not as a thin fabric to be mended, but as a wall to be reinforced" | | 3 | "no longer echoing but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.22% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 49.19 | | std | 21.71 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 86 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 86 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 72 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 40 |
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| 92.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "were fixed" | | 2 | "being pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "were testing" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "were trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that hadn't been here a moment before—delicate, bioluminescent petals that pulsed in soft hues of lavender and periwinkle." | | 1 | "The voice didn't come from a throat; it rustled through the canopy above like dry leaves skittering over pavement." | | 2 | "She felt the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itch—a recurring, phantom sensation that always flared when the boundary between worlds grew thin." | | 3 | "The Fae Grove held a strange, dilated sense of time; the sun hung low and amber-hued, caught in an eternal golden hour that shimmered like a heat haze on the horizon." | | 4 | "She gestured toward a cluster of trees near the center of the grove, where the air shimmered with a faint, oily distortion—a localized weakening of the Veil." | | 5 | "Through the shimmering haze, she caught a glimpse of something that turned her stomach—a momentary flash of a sprawling, amber-skied orchard in Dymas, where the trees bore fruit that looked like beating hearts." | | 6 | "It is not just leaking from the other side; it is being pulled from this side." | | 7 | "Instead, she visualized the boundaries—the stern, orderly lines of the law she had once studied, the rigid structure of the world she knew." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1291 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "jagged, moss-slicked oak" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "sprawling, amber-skied orchard" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.030209140201394268 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010844306738962044 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 15.05 | | std | 7.81 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 52.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.35294117647058826 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she visualized the boundaries—the" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 64.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It shifted from the mundane" | | 1 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 2 | "It was warm, a steady," | | 3 | "She felt the small crescent-shaped" | | 4 | "I didn't think it would" | | 5 | "They picked their way forward" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 7 | "She moved with a rhythmic," | | 8 | "You carry the heat of" | | 9 | "Her voice was melodic, threaded" | | 10 | "You walk a tightrope stretched" | | 11 | "My benefactor didn’t give me" | | 12 | "I’m just trying to keep" | | 13 | "She gestured toward a cluster" | | 14 | "She shuddered, pulling her gaze" | | 15 | "They extended a hand, their" | | 16 | "It is a wound, Rory." | | 17 | "It is not just leaking" | | 18 | "You are looking for a" | | 19 | "She looked at the Heartstone" |
| | ratio | 0.388 | |
| 54.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It shifted from the mundane" | | 2 | "Rory paused, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "She reached up instinctively, her" | | 4 | "It was warm, a steady," | | 5 | "The shadow-being’s humanoid silhouette flickered," | | 6 | "Nyx’s violet eyes scanned the" | | 7 | "This is not a place" | | 8 | "The voice didn't come from" | | 9 | "Rory glanced at the Shade." | | 10 | "She felt the small crescent-shaped" | | 11 | "I didn't think it would" | | 12 | "They picked their way forward" | | 13 | "The Fae Grove held a" | | 14 | "Every step they took felt" | | 15 | "The Seer’s silver hair caught" | | 16 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 17 | "She moved with a rhythmic," | | 18 | "You carry the heat of" | | 19 | "Her voice was melodic, threaded" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "To fix a breach in" | | 1 | "If this is a key," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 21.79% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that hadn't been here a moment before—delicate, bioluminescent petals that pulsed in soft hues of la…" | | 1 | "It was warm, a steady, rhythmic thrumming against her collarbone that felt like a heartbeat syncing with her own." | | 2 | "Nyx’s violet eyes scanned the perimeter of the grove, their gaze lingering on the ancient trees that loomed like sentinels, their bark etched with runes that se…" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove held a strange, dilated sense of time; the sun hung low and amber-hued, caught in an eternal golden hour that shimmered like a heat haze on the ho…" | | 4 | "Through the shimmering haze, she caught a glimpse of something that turned her stomach—a momentary flash of a sprawling, amber-skied orchard in Dymas, where the…" | | 5 | "The shadow touched the shimmering edge of the Veil, and the surrounding trees groaned, their branches bowing as if in agony." | | 6 | "The Shade recoiled, shaking, the darkness at their edges swirling into chaotic knots." | | 7 | "She felt a magnetic pull, a sickening vertigo that threatened to drag her spirit out through her fingertips." | | 8 | "She saw a vision of a marketplace in Dymas, of tables laden with wonders that shouldn't exist, and the feeling of absolute, consuming want." | | 9 | "They were trembling, the small crescent scar on her wrist throbbing with a dull heat." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |