| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1160 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "the last thing" | | 16 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1155 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 1052 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them indirectly" | | 1 | "felt like leaden weights buried in the" | | 2 | "sounded like dead leaves skittering over p" | | 3 | "as if reaching for the surface just to touch the sole of her boot" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.866 | | wordCount | 1155 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the dry crack of a twig, but the wet, sickening crunch of knuckles snapping out of place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.5 | | std | 24.85 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 82 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 50 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was textured" | | 1 | "being pinched" | | 2 | "were held" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "A figure stood near the tallest oak—the one etched with symbols that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them indirectly." | | 1 | "They were small, pulsing organs—hearts and lungs embedded in the moss, rhythmically inflating and deflating in time with the stone." | | 2 | "The ground was not dirt; it was textured with fingers, thousands of them, pressing upward from the loam as if reaching for the surface just to touch the sole of her boot." | | 3 | "The plastic didn't rip; it simply ceased to exist, absorbed into the folds of the shimmering rags." | | 4 | "The contents—the containers of food—vanished into the void of the creature's garments, silent and gone." | | 5 | "They circled her, whispering names she hadn't heard in years—names of people she had left behind, names she had screamed in the dark when everything fell apart." | | 6 | "It didn't splinter; it cleaved, dragging her backward into the dark heart of the tree." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1059 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thick, viscous black sap" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.023607176581680833 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0066100094428706326 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 12.83 | | std | 7.63 | | cv | 0.595 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 34.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.24444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "It tasted of ozone and" | | 1 | "She stepped over the threshold." | | 2 | "Her breath hitched." | | 3 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 4 | "It dropped dead a few" | | 5 | "She checked the digital display" | | 6 | "She fumbled with the metal" | | 7 | "It didn't cast enough light" | | 8 | "They elongated, twisting against the" | | 9 | "Her shadow’s fingers lengthened into" | | 10 | "Its head tapered into a" | | 11 | "She took one step, then" | | 12 | "She spun around, the pendant" | | 13 | "Her breath manifested in thick," | | 14 | "She squinted into the gloom." | | 15 | "It was lanky, unnaturally tall," | | 16 | "It didn't breathe." | | 17 | "It didn't sway." | | 18 | "Its face lacked features, save" | | 19 | "She didn't run." |
| | ratio | 0.513 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood like" | | 1 | "Aurora tightened the leather strap" | | 2 | "It tasted of ozone and" | | 3 | "She stepped over the threshold." | | 4 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 5 | "Her breath hitched." | | 6 | "The air inside the grove" | | 7 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 8 | "It dropped dead a few" | | 9 | "She checked the digital display" | | 10 | "The screen flickered, the light" | | 11 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 12 | "She fumbled with the metal" | | 13 | "The crimson gem flared, a" | | 14 | "It didn't cast enough light" | | 15 | "They elongated, twisting against the" | | 16 | "Her shadow’s fingers lengthened into" | | 17 | "Its head tapered into a" | | 18 | "She took one step, then" | | 19 | "A snap echoed to her" |
| | ratio | 0.925 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a dull, rhythmic ache that kept time with the faint, crimson pulsation emanating from the Heartstone pendant benea…" | | 1 | "Nothing moved in the dark, but the air felt displaced, as if something large had just vacated the space she occupied a second before." | | 2 | "Her breath manifested in thick, grey plumes that drifted toward the center of the trees, congregating there like a phantom swarm." | | 3 | "It was lanky, unnaturally tall, draped in rags that shimmered like spilled oil in the moonlight." | | 4 | "She clutched the Heartstone, its warmth now searing against her palm, vibrating with a frantic, bird-like heartbeat." | | 5 | "They leaned inward, their jagged edges dripping a thick, viscous black sap that smelled of iron and scorched hair." | | 6 | "She backed away, one boot catching on a root, her spine slamming into the cold surface of an oak." | | 7 | "The Heartstone fell from her neck, hitting the ground with a dull thud, its glowing light fading as the darkness in the grove surged forward to claim the space …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |