Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90FKJVWPT4K1D1RF0DTPD6

Run Details

Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.002461
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood like jagged teeth biting into the night sky of Richmond Park. Aurora tightened the leather strap of her delivery bag against her chest, the weight of the thermal boxes pressing into her ribs. Beyond the perimeter of the ancient trees, the city hummed with the distant, low-frequency vibration of London traffic. Within the circle, the air turned dense. It tasted of ozone and rotting lilies. She stepped over the threshold. The grass beneath her boots felt wrong, too soft, like velvet moss draped over rotting wood. Her breath hitched. The air inside the grove remained perfectly still, yet the leaves of the oaks rattled as if caught in a gale. "I know you're here. The address mentioned the grove." Her voice didn't carry. It dropped dead a few feet from her lips, swallowed by the cloying silence. She checked the digital display on her phone. The screen flickered, the light leaching from the pixels until the device went pitch black. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a dull, rhythmic ache that kept time with the faint, crimson pulsation emanating from the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. She fumbled with the metal chain, pulling the stone from her neckline. The crimson gem flared, a weak, bleeding light that barely illuminated the gnarled roots surrounding her boots. It didn't cast enough light to see the path, but it made her shadows stretch. They elongated, twisting against the bark of the nearest oak into shapes that lacked her own anatomical proportions. Her shadow’s fingers lengthened into needles. Its head tapered into a jagged crown. She took one step, then another, guided by the stone’s heat. "Is anyone at the clearing? I have the order for the name on the ticket." A snap echoed to her left. Not the dry crack of a twig, but the wet, sickening crunch of knuckles snapping out of place. She spun around, the pendant swinging on its silver chain. Nothing moved in the dark, but the air felt displaced, as if something large had just vacated the space she occupied a second before. The temperature plummeted. Her breath manifested in thick, grey plumes that drifted toward the center of the trees, congregating there like a phantom swarm. She squinted into the gloom. A figure stood near the tallest oak—the one etched with symbols that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them indirectly. It was lanky, unnaturally tall, draped in rags that shimmered like spilled oil in the moonlight. It didn't breathe. It didn't sway. "I'm just a courier. I leave the bag and go. That was the request." The figure turned. Its face lacked features, save for a vertical slit that opened down the center of its head. The sound of shearing glass filled the grove. The creature didn't move forward, but the space between them seemed to contract. The distance closed without the entity taking a single step. She didn't run. Her legs felt like leaden weights buried in the earth. She clutched the Heartstone, its warmth now searing against her palm, vibrating with a frantic, bird-like heartbeat. Around her, the silhouettes of the stones shifted. They weren't wood and granite anymore. They leaned inward, their jagged edges dripping a thick, viscous black sap that smelled of iron and scorched hair. "You took your time getting here." The voice didn't come from the entity. It crawled inside her skull, a dry, grating whisper that sounded like dead leaves skittering over pavement. It carried the cadence of a memory she had tried to bury, the sharp, authoritative bite of a courtroom prosecutor mixed with the suffocating silence of her old flat in Cardiff. She backed away, one boot catching on a root, her spine slamming into the cold surface of an oak. The bark felt warm. It pulsed against her back, vein-like ridges rippling under the wood’s surface. "Keep your distance. I’m leaving." "The order is fulfilled only when the payment is accepted." The entity raised an arm. It possessed too many joints. The limb unfolded in segments, elongated and pale as bleached bone, reaching for the bag gripped in her white-knuckled hands. The pendant glowed brighter, bleeding a deep, arterial red that washed over the clearing. In the sudden intensity of the light, the grove changed. The wildflowers were not flowers at all. They were small, pulsing organs—hearts and lungs embedded in the moss, rhythmically inflating and deflating in time with the stone. The ground was not dirt; it was textured with fingers, thousands of them, pressing upward from the loam as if reaching for the surface just to touch the sole of her boot. She threw the thermal bag. It struck the creature’s chest and dissolved. The plastic didn't rip; it simply ceased to exist, absorbed into the folds of the shimmering rags. The contents—the containers of food—vanished into the void of the creature's garments, silent and gone. "Where is the receipt? You have to sign for the delivery." The laughter that followed wasn't a sound. It was the sensation of her internal organs being pinched. Shadows lunged from the corners of her vision, darting like ink in water. They circled her, whispering names she hadn't heard in years—names of people she had left behind, names she had screamed in the dark when everything fell apart. She realized then the stones weren't guarding the grove. They were cages. And the locks were held from the inside. "The payment is your reflection, Rory. You haven't looked into it in a long time." She lowered her gaze. The Heartstone’s glow caught the surface of a nearby puddle, a patch of stagnant black water trapped between the roots. She didn't see her own face. She saw a void, a hole in the fabric of the dark, and in that hole, something pale was pressing its palms against the surface from behind, trying to pull itself out into the garden. The creature’s hand descended, fingers cold as liquid nitrogen, brushing against the nape of her neck. The touch left a trail of frost that stung like a burn. "Just take the shipment. Let me go." "The cargo was never the meal. The cargo was the courier." The oak behind her split open. It didn't splinter; it cleaved, dragging her backward into the dark heart of the tree. The texture of the wood wrapped around her ribs, soft and humid, drinking the heat from her skin. The Heartstone fell from her neck, hitting the ground with a dull thud, its glowing light fading as the darkness in the grove surged forward to claim the space she had just occupied. She opened her mouth to scream, but the air was gone, replaced by the suffocating scent of wet earth and ancient, undisturbed silence. The last thing she saw was the pendant lying in the moss, the crimson light finally extinguishing, leaving the grove to return to its perfect, indifferent stillness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"the last thing"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"velvet"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"throbbed"
5"rhythmic"
6"echoed"
7"gloom"
8"etched"
9"shimmered"
10"warmth"
11"searing"
12"whisper"
13"pulsed"
14"intensity"
15"the last thing"
16"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1155
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount1052
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Heartstone4
Cardiff1
persons
0"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them indirectly"
1"felt like leaden weights buried in the"
2"sounded like dead leaves skittering over p"
3"as if reaching for the surface just to touch the sole of her boot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.866
wordCount1155
matches
0"Not the dry crack of a twig, but the wet, sickening crunch of knuckles snapping out of place"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.5
std24.85
cv0.645
sampleLengths
069
145
29
369
475
511
615
782
848
914
1051
1163
126
1355
1435
155
1610
1754
1859
1944
2011
2157
2220
2315
2465
2528
267
2711
2872
2950
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"was textured"
1"being pinched"
2"were held"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"weren't guarding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences90
ratio0.078
matches
0"A figure stood near the tallest oak—the one etched with symbols that seemed to writhe whenever she looked at them indirectly."
1"They were small, pulsing organs—hearts and lungs embedded in the moss, rhythmically inflating and deflating in time with the stone."
2"The ground was not dirt; it was textured with fingers, thousands of them, pressing upward from the loam as if reaching for the surface just to touch the sole of her boot."
3"The plastic didn't rip; it simply ceased to exist, absorbed into the folds of the shimmering rags."
4"The contents—the containers of food—vanished into the void of the creature's garments, silent and gone."
5"They circled her, whispering names she hadn't heard in years—names of people she had left behind, names she had screamed in the dark when everything fell apart."
6"It didn't splinter; it cleaved, dragging her backward into the dark heart of the tree."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, viscous black sap"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.023607176581680833
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0066100094428706326
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.83
std7.63
cv0.595
sampleLengths
015
122
218
37
47
55
616
73
821
99
104
1114
128
1315
1428
1512
1617
1715
1818
196
207
2111
2215
236
2418
2510
2624
273
2821
295
3021
3116
323
333
3414
353
3617
378
3813
3910
403
4110
4217
438
446
4519
466
477
4817
4931
34.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.24444444444444444
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences80
matches
0"It tasted of ozone and"
1"She stepped over the threshold."
2"Her breath hitched."
3"Her voice didn't carry."
4"It dropped dead a few"
5"She checked the digital display"
6"She fumbled with the metal"
7"It didn't cast enough light"
8"They elongated, twisting against the"
9"Her shadow’s fingers lengthened into"
10"Its head tapered into a"
11"She took one step, then"
12"She spun around, the pendant"
13"Her breath manifested in thick,"
14"She squinted into the gloom."
15"It was lanky, unnaturally tall,"
16"It didn't breathe."
17"It didn't sway."
18"Its face lacked features, save"
19"She didn't run."
ratio0.513
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"The oak stones stood like"
1"Aurora tightened the leather strap"
2"It tasted of ozone and"
3"She stepped over the threshold."
4"The grass beneath her boots"
5"Her breath hitched."
6"The air inside the grove"
7"Her voice didn't carry."
8"It dropped dead a few"
9"She checked the digital display"
10"The screen flickered, the light"
11"The crescent scar on her"
12"She fumbled with the metal"
13"The crimson gem flared, a"
14"It didn't cast enough light"
15"They elongated, twisting against the"
16"Her shadow’s fingers lengthened into"
17"Its head tapered into a"
18"She took one step, then"
19"A snap echoed to her"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a dull, rhythmic ache that kept time with the faint, crimson pulsation emanating from the Heartstone pendant benea…"
1"Nothing moved in the dark, but the air felt displaced, as if something large had just vacated the space she occupied a second before."
2"Her breath manifested in thick, grey plumes that drifted toward the center of the trees, congregating there like a phantom swarm."
3"It was lanky, unnaturally tall, draped in rags that shimmered like spilled oil in the moonlight."
4"She clutched the Heartstone, its warmth now searing against her palm, vibrating with a frantic, bird-like heartbeat."
5"They leaned inward, their jagged edges dripping a thick, viscous black sap that smelled of iron and scorched hair."
6"She backed away, one boot catching on a root, her spine slamming into the cold surface of an oak."
7"The Heartstone fell from her neck, hitting the ground with a dull thud, its glowing light fading as the darkness in the grove surged forward to claim the space …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.9351%