| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "sentinel" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "throb" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "cacophony" | | 18 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1121 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1099 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 4 | | Aurora | 9 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 58.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a heavy branch breaking, or a" | | 1 | "felt like it was trying to rewrite her" | | 2 | "sounded like a hundred insects vibrating i" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 24.91 | | std | 17.76 | | cv | 0.713 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 62 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 16 |
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| 98.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "were flattened" | | 1 | "being plunged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | |
| 40.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't come from any one direction; it sounded as if it originated from inside her own skull." | | 1 | "It didn't crash or rustle; it glided with a sickening, lubricated sound." | | 2 | "To her left, a pale hand—too long, with too many knuckles—gripped the edge of an oak trunk." | | 3 | "The fingers didn't have nails; they ended in hard, blackened points." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1103 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.029918404351767906 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008159564823209429 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 10.01 | | std | 5.54 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 28.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 24 | | diversityRatio | 0.23214285714285715 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped between the ancient" | | 1 | "They didn't belong in any" | | 2 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 3 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 4 | "She walked toward the center" | | 5 | "It beat like a second" | | 6 | "It sounded like a heavy" | | 7 | "She spun around, her blue" | | 8 | "She turned back toward the" | | 9 | "She reached up to touch" | | 10 | "It didn't come from any" | | 11 | "It was a sequence of" | | 12 | "She backed away from the" | | 13 | "They didn't sway with the" | | 14 | "They tilted, their petals turning" | | 15 | "It didn't crash or rustle;" | | 16 | "She looked toward the standing" | | 17 | "She jumped back, her heart" | | 18 | "She forced her legs to" | | 19 | "It was a high, thin" |
| | ratio | 0.359 | |
| 3.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "She stepped between the ancient" | | 2 | "The transition hit her like" | | 3 | "The humidity of the London" | | 4 | "Moonlight drenched the clearing, casting" | | 5 | "These blooms didn't belong in" | | 6 | "They didn't belong in any" | | 7 | "They swayed in a breeze" | | 8 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 9 | "The air lacked the usual" | | 10 | "The silence had a weight" | | 11 | "She walked toward the center" | | 12 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 13 | "Every step left a deep," | | 14 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed." | | 15 | "A faint, crimson glow bled" | | 16 | "It beat like a second" | | 17 | "A sound echoed from the" | | 18 | "A sharp, wet snap." | | 19 | "It sounded like a heavy" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 38.96% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The humidity of the London night vanished, replaced by a crisp, unnatural chill that smelled of crushed mint and old copper." | | 1 | "The silence had a weight to it, a pressure that pushed against her eardrums." | | 2 | "Every step left a deep, dark indentation that filled with a shimmering, iridescent fluid instead of water." | | 3 | "It didn't come from any one direction; it sounded as if it originated from inside her own skull." | | 4 | "They were flattened, as if something heavy had just sprinted across them in a straight line from the trees to the spot where she stood." | | 5 | "It was spindly, its limbs folded in angles that defied human anatomy." | | 6 | "The clicking sound erupted, a deafening cacophony that vibrated through Aurora's teeth." | | 7 | "She collapsed onto the grass, gasping for air, her chest heaving." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |