Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90H583TG3W86WDJN5GWZ7M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 33s
Cost:
$0.001121
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant bit into the nape of Aurora’s neck. She stepped between the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary of the Fae Grove. The transition hit her like a physical wall. The humidity of the London night vanished, replaced by a crisp, unnatural chill that smelled of crushed mint and old copper. Moonlight drenched the clearing, casting the wildflowers in a ghostly, neon pallor. These blooms didn't belong in Richmond Park. They didn't belong in any season. They swayed in a breeze Aurora couldn't feel on her skin. "Just a quick check." Her voice sounded flat, swallowed by the dense silence of the grove. The air lacked the usual hum of insects. No crickets chirped. No owls called. The silence had a weight to it, a pressure that pushed against her eardrums. She walked toward the center of the clearing. The grass beneath her boots felt too thick, like walking on a layer of wet velvet. Every step left a deep, dark indentation that filled with a shimmering, iridescent fluid instead of water. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed. A faint, crimson glow bled through the fabric of her shirt, warming her chest. It beat like a second heart, slow and rhythmic. "You're humming. We're close." Aurora stopped. A sound echoed from the edge of the tree line. A sharp, wet snap. It sounded like a heavy branch breaking, or a large bone splintering. She spun around, her blue eyes scanning the perimeter. The ancient oaks stood like sentinel giants, their gnarled limbs frozen against the starless sky. Nothing moved. She turned back toward the center of the grove, but a flicker of movement caught her eye. A pale shape, thin as a needle, vanished behind the trunk of a wide oak. "Who's there?" The silence returned, heavier than before. Aurora shifted her weight, her boots squelching in the iridescent loam. She reached up to touch the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit that grounded her. The pendant’s pulse quickened. The warmth grew into a searing heat. A soft whisper drifted through the air. It didn't come from any one direction; it sounded as if it originated from inside her own skull. The voice didn't use words. It was a sequence of clicks and melodic hums, a language that felt like it was trying to rewrite her thoughts. "Not tonight. I'm not staying." She backed away from the center of the clearing, her gaze fixed on the shadows between the trees. The wildflowers began to lean. They didn't sway with the wind. They tilted, their petals turning in unison to follow her movement. Thousands of small, pale heads tracked her across the grass. Another snap. Closer this time. Something slid through the underbrush. It didn't crash or rustle; it glided with a sickening, lubricated sound. Aurora stepped faster, her breath coming in short, jagged bursts. The air grew cloying, the scent of mint twisting into the smell of something long-dead and preserved in sugar. She looked toward the standing stones, her exit. The gap between the oaks seemed further away than it had been minutes ago. The distance stretched. The grass between her and the boundary elongated, the iridescent fluid bubbling up around her ankles. A branch dipped low, nearly brushing her shoulder. She jumped back, her heart hammering against her ribs. The branch was bare, but a translucent film clung to the wood, dripping a thick, clear syrup onto the ground. "Get it together, Rory." She forced her legs to move. The Heartstone Pendant was now a frantic throb against her skin, the crimson glow pulsing in time with her racing pulse. A giggle echoed. It was a high, thin sound, like glass rubbing against glass. It came from directly behind her. Aurora whirled around. The clearing was empty. But the wildflowers were no longer leaning toward her. They were flattened, as if something heavy had just sprinted across them in a straight line from the trees to the spot where she stood. The flattened grass formed a path of crushed petals and broken stems, ending exactly three inches from her boots. The air temperature plummeted. Her breath bloomed in the air in white, frozen plumes. She backed away, her eyes darting. To her left, a pale hand—too long, with too many knuckles—gripped the edge of an oak trunk. The skin was the color of a drowned fish, stretched tight over bone. The fingers didn't have nails; they ended in hard, blackened points. The hand slowly retreated, sliding back behind the bark with a wet, suction-like noise. "I see you." The clicking voice returned, louder now. It sounded like a hundred insects vibrating in unison. Aurora turned to run for the stones. As she sprinted, the environment shifted. The ground beneath her became spongy, absorbing the impact of her strides. The trees seemed to lean inward, their canopy weaving together to block out the moonlight. The silver light vanished. The grove plunged into a bruised purple twilight. The pendant flared a violent red. The heat was nearly unbearable, scorching her skin through the cloth. Something leaped from the canopy. It landed with a thud behind her, the weight of it shaking the ground. Aurora didn't look back. She lunged forward, her boots slipping on the iridescent slime. A cold, damp wind whipped past her ear, carrying the scent of old copper and wet fur. She reached the first standing stone and slammed her shoulder against the rough granite. She looked back over her shoulder. In the dim light, a figure crouched at the edge of the tree line. It was spindly, its limbs folded in angles that defied human anatomy. It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin where eyes and a mouth should be. It didn't move. It simply existed in the shadows, its long, blackened fingers twitching in a rhythmic pattern. The creature tilted its head. The clicking sound erupted, a deafening cacophony that vibrated through Aurora's teeth. She threw herself through the gap between the stones. The sudden shift back to the Richmond Park air was like being plunged into warm water. The smell of damp earth and city smog rushed back. She collapsed onto the grass, gasping for air, her chest heaving. She lay still for a moment, listening to the distant sound of a car horn on a far-off road. The world felt solid again. She reached up to touch the Heartstone Pendant. The gemstone was cold. But as she pulled it from beneath her shirt, she saw a thin, translucent film of clear syrup clinging to the silver chain. A soft, clicking sound echoed from the bushes just a few feet away, inside the park.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count3
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"sentinel"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"cacophony"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"velvet"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"echoed"
7"scanning"
8"sentinel"
9"flicker"
10"pulse"
11"quickened"
12"warmth"
13"searing"
14"whisper"
15"throb"
16"racing"
17"cacophony"
18"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1099
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Pendant4
Aurora9
Fae1
Grove1
London1
Richmond2
Park2
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a heavy branch breaking, or a"
1"felt like it was trying to rewrite her"
2"sounded like a hundred insects vibrating i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1121
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.91
std17.76
cv0.713
sampleLengths
057
136
24
340
441
527
64
752
82
932
102
1135
1211
1351
145
1550
165
1746
1841
1937
204
2127
2220
233
2457
2514
2647
2714
283
2915
3040
3112
3217
3333
3417
3520
3662
375
3812
399
4037
4124
428
4327
4416
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"were flattened"
1"being plunged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was trying"
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences112
ratio0.036
matches
0"It didn't come from any one direction; it sounded as if it originated from inside her own skull."
1"It didn't crash or rustle; it glided with a sickening, lubricated sound."
2"To her left, a pale hand—too long, with too many knuckles—gripped the edge of an oak trunk."
3"The fingers didn't have nails; they ended in hard, blackened points."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.029918404351767906
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008159564823209429
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean10.01
std5.54
cv0.553
sampleLengths
014
114
28
321
412
57
66
711
84
912
108
113
123
1314
148
1516
1617
174
1814
199
204
212
2210
234
2412
259
2615
272
2817
2915
302
316
3211
3318
344
357
367
3718
385
3921
405
4118
425
436
4411
4510
462
473
485
4912
28.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.23214285714285715
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences103
matches
0"She stepped between the ancient"
1"They didn't belong in any"
2"They swayed in a breeze"
3"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
4"She walked toward the center"
5"It beat like a second"
6"It sounded like a heavy"
7"She spun around, her blue"
8"She turned back toward the"
9"She reached up to touch"
10"It didn't come from any"
11"It was a sequence of"
12"She backed away from the"
13"They didn't sway with the"
14"They tilted, their petals turning"
15"It didn't crash or rustle;"
16"She looked toward the standing"
17"She jumped back, her heart"
18"She forced her legs to"
19"It was a high, thin"
ratio0.359
3.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences103
matches
0"The silver chain of the"
1"She stepped between the ancient"
2"The transition hit her like"
3"The humidity of the London"
4"Moonlight drenched the clearing, casting"
5"These blooms didn't belong in"
6"They didn't belong in any"
7"They swayed in a breeze"
8"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
9"The air lacked the usual"
10"The silence had a weight"
11"She walked toward the center"
12"The grass beneath her boots"
13"Every step left a deep,"
14"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed."
15"A faint, crimson glow bled"
16"It beat like a second"
17"A sound echoed from the"
18"A sharp, wet snap."
19"It sounded like a heavy"
ratio0.913
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"To her left, a pale"
ratio0.01
38.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The humidity of the London night vanished, replaced by a crisp, unnatural chill that smelled of crushed mint and old copper."
1"The silence had a weight to it, a pressure that pushed against her eardrums."
2"Every step left a deep, dark indentation that filled with a shimmering, iridescent fluid instead of water."
3"It didn't come from any one direction; it sounded as if it originated from inside her own skull."
4"They were flattened, as if something heavy had just sprinted across them in a straight line from the trees to the spot where she stood."
5"It was spindly, its limbs folded in angles that defied human anatomy."
6"The clicking sound erupted, a deafening cacophony that vibrated through Aurora's teeth."
7"She collapsed onto the grass, gasping for air, her chest heaving."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.6540%