Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90JWME4KQ830H6JACEPTEK

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4.3
Duration:
26.1s
Cost:
$0.006280
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of the Raven's Nest, her shoulder bag bumping against her hip as she stepped into the dim glow of the green neon sign outside. She dropped her delivery receipts on the counter and slid onto a worn stool, fingers tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist while she waited for Silas to notice. The bar smelled of old wood and spilled whisky, the walls heavy with maps and faded photos that watched in silence. Silas looked up from the register, his hazel eyes narrowing for a split second before recognition pulled at the corners of his mouth. "Never expected to see that face in here before closing," he said, voice low and even. She met his gaze without a smile. "Same old place. You still keep the good stuff behind the bar or did you sell it off with the rest of us?" Silas poured two fingers into a glass and set it in front of her. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light as he moved. "Came through a few nights ago. Kept thinking the city might chew you up the way it does most who run north." Rory traced the rim of the glass. "Cardiff chewed me first. London just finished what was left." He limped around the bar, the hitch in his left leg more pronounced after standing all evening. He lowered himself onto the stool beside her instead of staying behind the counter. "Last I heard you were still with that lawyer girl. Eva, was it? The one who used to drag you out of lectures." "She dragged me out of more than lectures," Rory said. Her straight black hair fell forward, brushing the collar of her jacket. "Evan took the rest." Silas nodded once, the movement slow. "Never liked the sound of him, even across a phone call." He tapped the bar top once. "He still around?" "Not in any way that matters." They sat with that for a long moment. The jazz record on the turntable behind the counter popped and crackled, filling the space where neither reached for the obvious words. Rory finally lifted the glass and sipped. The burn steadied her. "You look older than I remember. Not in a bad way, just... settled in the lines around your eyes. Like you finally stopped running from whatever sent you here." Silas leaned his elbows on the bar. His grey-streaked auburn hair fell across his forehead before he smoothed it back with the hand that still wore the signet ring. "Prague sent me here. The knee sent me the rest of the way. I opened this place because the rooms upstairs needed a roof and the people I used to know still needed somewhere to land." He paused. "You flew north without saying goodbye. I kept waiting for the letter that never came." She set the glass down harder than she meant to. "You could have followed. You had the resources. Or the people." "I had the injury report and a pension that bought this lease." Silas's voice stayed calm, but the quiet authority in it carried the same weight it once had when he pulled her out of a scrape seven years earlier. "You were twenty-two and furious with everyone who knew your name. I figured you needed distance more than advice." Rory laughed once, a short sound with no warmth. "Distance came free. Regret cost extra." She rubbed the scar on her wrist absently. "Evan left bruises in places that don't show on camera. I walked out with a suitcase and the clothes on my back. Eva got me the flat above this bar and the job at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei doesn't ask questions. Just hands me the receipts and the scooter keys." Silas watched her hands. "Still quick with the routes. I remember you once found a shortcut through the city that cut twenty minutes off a job I needed done. Thought you'd end up running something bigger than deliveries." "I did," she said. "Ran straight into the same mistakes I swore I'd leave in Cardiff." The door at the far end of the bar creaked open and a lone customer paid and left, the squeak of his shoes on the floorboards the only sound once the latch clicked shut. Silas stood slowly, favouring the bad knee, and locked the door behind him. He flipped the sign to closed but left the lights down low. When he returned he poured himself a small glass and sat again. "You used to lecture me about staying too long in one place," Rory said. "Now you own the one place that never moves." Silas turned the glass between his palms. "Ownership buys a kind of silence I never paid for before. The network still works out of the back room. Bookshelf still slides aside when the right people knock. But the days of running across borders are finished." He met her eyes directly. "You ran. I anchored. Both of us called it freedom at the time." She looked past him at the old black-and-white photographs on the wall. One showed a younger Silas in a raincoat, a cigarette between his fingers, standing in front of a Prague street that looked colder than any London winter. "We said we'd check in every six months. I lasted one phone call after crossing the border." "Time eats those promises faster than I expected," Silas answered. "I kept the line open anyway. When Eva rang three years ago to ask if I had space above the bar, I gave it without asking her why. Figured you would turn up when you needed it." Rory shifted on the stool. Her bright blue eyes stayed fixed on the glass between them rather than on him. "I needed it sooner. Kept thinking any day I'd walk out the door and head back south without telling anyone. Show up at your old flat with a bottle and an apology. But the scooter routes pay the rent and the flat pays for the silence. Apologies got expensive." Silas set the glass aside without drinking from it. "You still have the Irish accent when you're angry. Your father would have liked that." "She still teaches in Cardiff," Rory said. "Mother writes every month. I open the envelopes and never post back. Brendan stopped calling after the third time I changed my number." The records crackled again. A saxophone solo filled the pause. Rory finally looked at him. "You changed more than I thought you would. The limp shows when you forget to hide it. Your hair's gone grey at the temples. I used to tease you about looking like a spy who retired too early." "I retired when the agency decided the knee made me a liability in the field," he said. "They offered a desk. I took the lease on this place instead." He turned his right hand palm up, the signet ring catching the light. "This ring still opens doors they don't know about anymore. Keeps the ones who do in line." Rory reached out and touched the edge of the ring briefly before pulling her hand back. "You used to talk about leaving the service and buying a cottage somewhere quiet. I pictured it with books and no neon. Not this." "This keeps the network alive," Silas said. "Cottage would have left them exposed." She finished the whisky and set the glass down with both hands wrapped around it. "I wanted Pre-Law to finish the fight my father started against people like Evan. Instead I deliver dumplings and pretend the address on the receipt is temporary." "You could still finish it," Silas said. Rory shook her head. "The fight costs more now than it did when I was twenty. The bruises heal. The questions at the courthouse don't." Silas stood and walked to the back of the bar. He reached behind the counter and produced a small package wrapped in brown paper. He set it between them. "Eva left this for you last week. Said if you ever showed up in one piece I'd know where to send you." Rory did not open it. She kept her hands flat on the bar. "She still worries. I keep telling her London is safe now." "Is it?" Silas asked. The question sat between them like the unopened package. Rory studied the maps on the walls instead of answering. One showed the old MI6 routes he used to trace with a pen when they met in this same bar years ago. "I changed my name for a while, you know," she said quietly. "Laila on all the paperwork for the flat. Switched back when the delivery job required a signature. Malphora was the one I picked during the worst week. Felt like armour until the first time someone called it out loud." Silas's mouth tightened once, then eased. "Names are cheap to change. Harder to carry once the reasons fade." Rory stood and slung the bag over her shoulder. "I should take this upstairs before the rain starts again." He did not stand to walk her to the door. "They say the back room is still available any night you need it. The shelf still moves for you." She paused with her hand on the latch. "Been a long time since I needed a hidden door. Longer since I had one offered." The door opened with a low creak. Cold air from the street swept in, carrying the smell of wet pavement. Rory stepped out under the green neon. She did not look back. Silas remained seated at the bar, thumb turning the signet ring once before he reached for the record needle and lifted it clear. The silence that followed felt heavier than the music had.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.549
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.039
96.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1639
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1639
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"weight"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount757
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.38
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas18
Rory15
Prague1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Prague"
1"London"
globalScore0.311
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean38.12
std20.18
cv0.529
sampleLengths
083
139
230
351
417
554
626
726
86
930
1040
1182
1221
1359
1473
1538
1616
1771
1823
1963
2056
2147
2269
2324
2430
2553
2659
2740
2813
2942
307
3125
3251
3324
344
3541
3651
3718
3819
3929
4024
4132
4233
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount760
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.035526315789473684
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean15.04
std10.42
cv0.693
sampleLengths
031
131
221
323
416
57
623
714
815
922
107
1110
1217
1314
1423
1510
1612
174
186
1911
206
213
226
238
2422
257
264
2729
287
2922
3038
3115
3210
3311
3440
3519
369
376
388
3950
404
4134
424
4312
4434
4513
4612
4712
4814
499
52.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3394495412844037
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences62
matches
0"She dropped her delivery receipts"
1"he said, voice low and"
2"She met his gaze without"
3"He limped around the bar,"
4"He lowered himself onto the"
5"Her straight black hair fell"
6"He tapped the bar top"
7"They sat with that for"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair fell"
9"She set the glass down"
10"She rubbed the scar on"
11"He flipped the sign to"
12"He met her eyes directly"
13"She looked past him at"
14"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
15"He turned his right hand"
16"She finished the whisky and"
17"He reached behind the counter"
18"He set it between them."
19"She kept her hands flat"
ratio0.387
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rory pushed through the heavy"
1"She dropped her delivery receipts"
2"The bar smelled of old"
3"Silas looked up from the"
4"he said, voice low and"
5"She met his gaze without"
6"Silas poured two fingers into"
7"The silver signet ring on"
8"Rory traced the rim of"
9"He limped around the bar,"
10"He lowered himself onto the"
11"Her straight black hair fell"
12"Silas nodded once, the movement"
13"He tapped the bar top"
14"They sat with that for"
15"The jazz record on the"
16"Rory finally lifted the glass"
17"The burn steadied her."
18"Silas leaned his elbows on"
19"His grey-streaked auburn hair fell"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"One showed a younger Silas in a raincoat, a cigarette between his fingers, standing in front of a Prague street that looked colder than any London winter."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low and even"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.7002%