Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90NAXF8A1DNB8Y2H335HF5

Run Details

Duration:
11.4s
Cost:
$0.002733
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the asphalt, turning the alleyways of Camden into slick, ink-black mirrors. Harlow Quinn planted her heels, breath hitching into a steady rhythm. Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against her forehead, droplets tracing the sharp line of her jaw. Ahead, a figure in a heavy rain slicker darted past a stack of rusted dumpsters, boots clattering against loose cobblestones. She recognized the frantic gait, the slight hitch in the left shoulder. Tomás Herrera wasn’t just running; he was fleeing. Keep your distance, Detective. You have no idea what’s buried under these tracks. Harlow didn't respond, her hand hovering near her service weapon. She vaulted a low brick wall, the grit of the mortar biting into her palms. She ignored the warning. Three years of dead ends, of files redacted in ink thicker than her blood, led back to this man. She watched him slide through a heavy metal grate, a gap barely wide enough for a shoulder-width frame, tucked behind a pillar of the defunct Northern Line ventilation shaft. She vaulted the railing, ignoring the warning signage flickering beneath the grime. Her boots struck metal stairs, echoing like gunshots in the hollow throat of the earth. The air shifted down here, growing heavy with the smell of wet ozone and copper. Cold seeped through her trench coat, a stark contrast to the humid, suffocating heat of the street above. She descended past the reach of the city’s electric hum, the darkness swallowing her peripheral vision. Wait there, or you’ll lose your soul before you find your truth. Tomás stood at the mouth of a tunnel that groaned under the weight of the city. He clawed at a heavy iron door embedded in the brickwork, his movements erratic, frantic. He pressed a smooth, ivory-colored object into a hollow indentation in the frame—a bone token. The metal door hissed, vibrating against the foundation as it slid open just enough to reveal a sliver of pulsing, violet light. Harlow pulled her watch from her wrist, clutching the worn leather strap. She caught a glimpse of him—the Saint Christopher medallion catching the dim light, swinging wildly against his chest. He vanished into the light, leaving the metallic tang of the threshold behind. The Veil Market. The urban legends held weight, then. She stood at the precipice of a subterranean gullet. Beyond that door, the sounds of voices—too many, too fluid, layered like a choir gargling shards—drifted up. It pulled at her. It felt like the night DS Morris vanished, the same hum of static that raised the hair on her arms. If she turned back, she could call for backup, wait for the tactical teams, play the law-abiding detective. If she stayed, she entered a jurisdiction that didn't recognize her badge, her laws, or her life. Look at the perimeter. Check for traps, Quinn. That’s how you stayed alive this long. She knelt, pressing her fingers to the floor. The dust here felt different—gritty, like crushed gemstones mixed with ash. She spotted a smear of dried blood near the door’s threshold. Tomás had been injured recently, likely patching up some freak or monster for cash. She followed the blood trail, her heartbeat settling into a methodical staccato. She checked her weapon; the slide clicked back, smooth and reliable. The violet light spilled further into the tunnel as the door hesitated, its magic hungry. She stood, staring into the abyss of the ancient Tube station. Shadows danced against the curved walls, elongated and jagged, moving with a rhythm that defied the flicker of the lanterns lining the platform. Beyond, stalls constructed of driftwood and bone held glass canisters of swirling fog. Creatures with too many limbs haggled over jars of bioluminescent liquids. You walk through that door, you don’t come back the same. She stepped inside. The sensation was immediate, a pressure building behind her eyes like a diving bell descending too fast. The air tasted of rot and lavender. She kept her back to the wall, maneuvering through the press of bodies. Most didn't look human; they wore shadows like garments, their faces obscured by shifting geometry. She saw Tomás near a stall draped in moth-eaten curtains, hunched over a spread of rusted surgical instruments. He was bartering, his posture desperate, shoulders hunched against the encroaching silence of the observers. You’re playing a game you don't understand, Detective. Harlow tapped a thick wooden beam, her hand brushing against a strange, humming inscription carved into the wood. Her skin tingled. She pulled a breath in, steadying her vision. She watched Tomás trade a small vial of blue liquid for a roll of heavy, silver-threaded bandages. The man behind the stall hissed, his skin rippling like troubled water. Don't let them see your focus, Tomás. Focus is a beacon. She eased closer, ducking behind a pillar wrapped in thick, pulsating vines. Every instinct screamed at her to retreat, to run until her lungs burned and the sun broke the horizon. This wasn't the police beat. This was an ecosystem of predators and scavengers. She saw the way the market slowed as she moved, the whispers trailing behind her like scent. They sensed the scent of humanity on her, the smell of sterile paper and rigid rules. I can end this here, Tomás. Tell me about the partner. Tell me what happened at the docks. She didn't speak the words aloud. She projected them, her will hardening into a weapon she hadn't known she possessed until this very moment. Tomás froze. He turned his head slowly, his warm brown eyes wide, fixed directly on the pillar she occupied. He didn't look surprised. He looked resigned. He started to turn, but a massive shape—a shadow detached from the tunnel wall—slithered between them. The figure reached for him, its hand resembling a cluster of dry twigs. Get out of the way. I need answers. Harlow stepped from behind the pillar, the light hitting her face. The market went silent. The haggling ceased. A hundred pairs of eyes—some yellow, some slit-pupiled, some nothing more than voids—turned toward her. They saw the badge clipped to her belt. They saw the leather watch. The atmosphere grew dense, heavy with the weight of scrutiny. Tomás’s face paled, the scar on his forearm flushing a deep, angry red. He took a single step toward her, then stopped as a low, rumbling growl echoed from beneath the platform. You have no authority here, Quinn. Leave while you can still walk. She held her position, her fingers resting on the grip of her weapon. She didn't look at the monstrosities circling her. Her focus remained locked on the medic. She saw the pulse jumping in his neck, the way he clutched the silver bandages to his chest. He was terrified, not of her, but of what she had allowed into the room with her presence. The shadows were waking up, sensing the rupture she had created by breaching the threshold. If you don't talk, I lock this place down. I pull the police force into this hole and I burn every layer of it to the ground. She wasn't lying. She didn't know how she would achieve it, but the resolve in her chest felt like lead. She stood in the center of the forgotten station, a lone human in a sea of shifting, hungry things. She watched Tomás's shoulders slump. He knew the cost of talking, and he knew the cost of staying quiet. He looked at the creature beside him, then back at her, his lips parting in a silent plea. The market surged, a wave of cold air rushing through the tunnel, extinguishing half the lanterns. They were losing patience.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"methodical"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"echoing"
2"stark"
3"electric"
4"weight"
5"methodical"
6"flicker"
7"constructed"
8"silence"
9"beacon"
10"echoed"
11"pulse"
12"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences110
matches
0"was terrified"
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1278
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn3
Herrera1
Detective2
Northern1
Line1
Saint1
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
Tube1
Tomás10
Harlow5
You4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"Tomás"
7"Harlow"
8"You"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the night DS Morris vanished"
1"felt like lead"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.782
wordCount1278
matches
0"not of her, but of what she had allowed into the room with her presence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean49.15
std32.5
cv0.661
sampleLengths
080
113
277
376
412
568
643
79
885
915
1067
1173
1211
1388
148
1558
1611
1777
1818
1979
208
2188
2212
2379
2427
2596
95.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences110
matches
0"buried"
1"been injured"
2"was terrified"
24.56% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs228
matches
0"was fleeing"
1"wasn’t just running"
2"was bartering"
3"were waking"
4"wasn't lying"
5"were losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences110
ratio0.082
matches
0"Tomás Herrera wasn’t just running; he was fleeing."
1"He pressed a smooth, ivory-colored object into a hollow indentation in the frame—a bone token."
2"She caught a glimpse of him—the Saint Christopher medallion catching the dim light, swinging wildly against his chest."
3"Beyond that door, the sounds of voices—too many, too fluid, layered like a choir gargling shards—drifted up."
4"The dust here felt different—gritty, like crushed gemstones mixed with ash."
5"She checked her weapon; the slide clicked back, smooth and reliable."
6"Most didn't look human; they wore shadows like garments, their faces obscured by shifting geometry."
7"He started to turn, but a massive shape—a shadow detached from the tunnel wall—slithered between them."
8"A hundred pairs of eyes—some yellow, some slit-pupiled, some nothing more than voids—turned toward her."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1296
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"slick, ink-black mirrors."
1"heavy, silver-threaded bandages."
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.020833333333333332
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004629629629629629
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.62
std5.64
cv0.485
sampleLengths
014
111
215
320
412
58
64
79
810
915
104
1119
1229
1312
1415
1515
1618
1716
1812
1916
2015
2115
2222
2312
2418
2513
263
276
289
2917
304
3120
3218
3317
344
354
367
378
3811
3911
4014
4112
4211
4315
4411
4523
4613
4711
4811
493
30.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2909090909090909
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against"
1"She recognized the frantic gait,"
2"You have no idea what’s"
3"She vaulted a low brick"
4"She ignored the warning."
5"She watched him slide through"
6"She vaulted the railing, ignoring"
7"Her boots struck metal stairs,"
8"She descended past the reach"
9"He clawed at a heavy"
10"He pressed a smooth, ivory-colored"
11"She caught a glimpse of"
12"He vanished into the light,"
13"She stood at the precipice"
14"It pulled at her."
15"It felt like the night"
16"She knelt, pressing her fingers"
17"She spotted a smear of"
18"She followed the blood trail,"
19"She checked her weapon; the"
ratio0.532
47.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences109
matches
0"Harlow Quinn planted her heels,"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against"
2"She recognized the frantic gait,"
3"Tomás Herrera wasn’t just running;"
4"You have no idea what’s"
5"Harlow didn't respond, her hand"
6"She vaulted a low brick"
7"She ignored the warning."
8"She watched him slide through"
9"She vaulted the railing, ignoring"
10"Her boots struck metal stairs,"
11"The air shifted down here,"
12"She descended past the reach"
13"Tomás stood at the mouth"
14"He clawed at a heavy"
15"He pressed a smooth, ivory-colored"
16"The metal door hissed, vibrating"
17"Harlow pulled her watch from"
18"She caught a glimpse of"
19"He vanished into the light,"
ratio0.826
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"If she turned back, she"
1"If she stayed, she entered"
2"If you don't talk, I"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It felt like the night DS Morris vanished, the same hum of static that raised the hair on her arms."
1"If she stayed, she entered a jurisdiction that didn't recognize her badge, her laws, or her life."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.3538%