Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90PP780SQ67ETRXTJ26J40

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy, rhythmic thud against the wood vibrated through the floorboards, rattling the mismatched tea mugs on the small kitchen table. Aurora swung the door open, her breath hitching in a throat tight with irritation. The irritation died instantly. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim, narrow corridor, looking entirely too expensive for a Tuesday night in East London. The sickly yellow light of the hallway caught the sharp, platinum blond edges of his hair. He looked polished, dangerous, and utterly out of place against the peeling wallpaper of the apartment block. "You're late." "I wasn't aware we had an appointment, Aurora." His voice was a smooth, dark velvet that seemed to coat the walls of the cramped entrance. He didn't move to enter, but the weight of his presence pushed against her, filling the doorway. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the polished wood gleaming under the flickering bulb. "You shouldn't be here." "And yet, here I am." He stepped forward, not waiting for an invitation. Aurora retreated, her hip hitting the edge of the small bookshelf that lined the hallway. The scent of him arrived a second later, a sharp, sophisticated blend of sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and something metallic, something that smelled like a coming storm. "Get out, Lucien." "The locks on this door are pathetic." He glanced at the three heavy deadbolts she had installed last summer. A ghost of a smile touched his lips, one that didn't reach those unsettling, heterochromatic eyes. The amber one glowed with a predatory warmth, while the black one remained a void, absorbing the light of the room. "I don't need a fixer to tell me how to secure a flat." "No, you need a fixer to tell you when you're being hunted." He closed the door behind him with a soft, deliberate click. The sound felt final, more permanent than the heavy thud that had preceded it. He surveyed the room, his gaze lingering on the stacks of research notes and the scattered scrolls that covered every available surface. "Still playing at being a scholar, I see." "It's called a life. You should try having one." Aurora crossed her arms, her fingers digging into the fabric of her sleeves. She could feel the familiar, unwelcome heat rising in her chest, a mixture of old resentment and a much more dangerous, much more traitorous attraction. "A life is a luxury for those who aren't being watched." He moved further into the room, the rhythmic tap of his cane against the floorboards sounding like a countdown. He stopped just inches from her, invading her personal space with the practiced ease of a man who owned everything he looked at. "What do you want?" "A moment of your time." "I gave you plenty of that in Marseille." The air between them turned brittle. The memory of the salt air and the stinging heat of that summer flickered between them, unsaid and unacknowledged. Lucien reached out, his gloved fingers hovering just near the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. He didn't touch her, but the proximity made her skin prickle. "Marseille was a lifetime ago." "It was a mistake." "Was it?" He leaned down, his face inches from hers. The shadows of the room seemed to lengthen, stretching toward him as if drawn to his gravity. "You left without a word, Aurora. No note. No explanation. Just a cold trail and a broken contract." "The contract was signed in blood, Lucien. I wasn't keen on the fine print." "The fine print was meant to protect you." "It was meant to own me." She refused to flinch. She met that dual-coloured stare with a steady, blue gaze, even as her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "You're not owned," he murmured, his voice dropping to a low, dangerous register. "You are merely... complicated." "I'm finished being your complication." "Then why is your pulse racing?" He moved his hand, his thumb finally brushing the skin of her wrist, just above the scar. The contact felt like an electric shock, a jolt of pure, unadulterated recognition. Aurora gasped, her breath hitching as she instinctively tried to pull away, but his grip was firm, unyielding. "Don't." "You're trembling." "I'm angry." "Anger is a fine mask. It hides the fear quite well." He pulled her closer, the heavy, charcoal wool of his coat pressing against her. The muffled, rhythmic bass from Silas' bar thudded below them, a heartbeat for the building that felt entirely too slow compared to the tension in the room. "I'm not afraid of you." "You should be. Not of me, but of what I've brought with me." He released her wrist, but he didn't step back. Instead, he turned his head toward the window, his expression shifting from predatory charm to something cold and clinical. "Did you hear that?" "Hear what?" "The silence." Aurora frowned, listening. The pub below had gone quiet. The usual muffled chatter, the clink of glasses, the low hum of the city, it all seemed to have vanished, replaced by a vacuum of sound that made her ears ache. "It's just a quiet night, Lucien. Don't start with the theatrics." "The birds stopped singing in the courtyard ten minutes ago." "There are no birds in East London." "Exactly." He reached for the head of his cane, his knuckles whitening against the ivory handle. "Stay behind me." "I don't take orders from—" A sudden, violent crash erupted from the kitchen. The sound of shattering ceramic tore through the silence, followed by the heavy, unmistakable scrape of something large being dragged across the linoleum. Aurora froze, her eyes darting toward the small doorway. "Lucien?" He didn't answer. He was already moving, his silhouette cutting a sharp, dark line against the dim light of the living area. He didn't walk, he glided, the cane striking the floor with a predatory precision. A shadow detached itself from the darkness of the kitchen doorway. It was too tall, too thin, moving with a jerky, unnatural gait that defied the physics of a human frame. It didn't walk so much as it unfolded itself into the room. "Rory, get to the corner," Lucien commanded, his voice devoid of any warmth. "What is that?" "Something that should have stayed in the Avaros pits." The creature stepped into the light. It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin stretched tight over a skull that was far too long. It moved toward them, its limbs twitching in rhythmic, sickening intervals. The heavy, rhythmic thud returned, but it wasn't a knock. It was the sound of something massive slamming against her front door, the wood groaning under the impact. The deadbolts screamed, the metal shearing under a force that didn't belong in this world. "The door!" Aurora yelled, lunging toward the hallway. "Forget the door!" Lucien swung the cane, the ivory handle catching the light as the blade hissed out from the hidden sheath with a lethal, metallic ring. The front door splintered, the heavy wood erupting inward in a spray of shards and splinters. A clawed hand, grey and translucent as smoke, gripped the edge of the frame.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count5
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"practiced ease"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"charm"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"vibrated"
2"velvet"
3"weight"
4"gleaming"
5"warmth"
6"could feel"
7"familiar"
8"practiced ease"
9"flickered"
10"pulse"
11"racing"
12"electric"
13"tension"
14"charm"
15"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1194
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount896
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Tuesday1
East1
London1
Lucien4
Aurora7
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"velvet that seemed to coat the walls of the cramped entrance"
1"smelled like a coming storm"
2"felt like an electric shock, a jolt of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.838
wordCount1194
matches
0"Not of me, but of what I've brought with me"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean16.82
std15.97
cv0.95
sampleLengths
035
14
252
32
48
549
64
75
849
93
107
1149
1213
1312
1447
158
169
1738
1811
1942
204
215
228
2353
245
254
262
2725
2818
2914
308
316
3225
3317
345
356
3648
371
382
392
4011
4141
425
4313
4428
454
462
472
4840
4911
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"being dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was already moving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount602
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03322259136212625
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011627906976744186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.37
std6.9
cv0.607
sampleLengths
021
114
24
319
416
517
62
78
817
917
1015
114
125
138
1415
1526
163
177
1812
1916
2021
2113
2212
2311
2414
2522
268
279
2813
2925
3011
3119
3223
334
345
358
366
3719
3817
3911
405
414
422
438
4417
4518
4614
478
486
494
38.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2761904761904762
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners29
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, he turned his head"
ratio0.016
39.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences62
matches
0"He looked polished, dangerous, and"
1"His voice was a smooth,"
2"He didn't move to enter,"
3"He leaned slightly on his"
4"He stepped forward, not waiting"
5"He glanced at the three"
6"He closed the door behind"
7"He surveyed the room, his"
8"She could feel the familiar,"
9"He moved further into the"
10"He stopped just inches from"
11"He didn't touch her, but"
12"He leaned down, his face"
13"She refused to flinch."
14"She met that dual-coloured stare"
15"he murmured, his voice dropping"
16"He moved his hand, his"
17"He pulled her closer, the"
18"He released her wrist, but"
19"He reached for the head"
ratio0.452
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences62
matches
0"The heavy, rhythmic thud against"
1"Aurora swung the door open,"
2"The irritation died instantly."
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"The sickly yellow light of"
5"He looked polished, dangerous, and"
6"His voice was a smooth,"
7"He didn't move to enter,"
8"He leaned slightly on his"
9"He stepped forward, not waiting"
10"Aurora retreated, her hip hitting"
11"The scent of him arrived"
12"He glanced at the three"
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"The amber one glowed with"
15"He closed the door behind"
16"The sound felt final, more"
17"He surveyed the room, his"
18"Aurora crossed her arms, her"
19"She could feel the familiar,"
ratio0.984
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora retreated, her hip hitting the edge of the small bookshelf that lined the hallway."
1"The scent of him arrived a second later, a sharp, sophisticated blend of sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and something metallic, something that smelled like a co…"
2"The sound felt final, more permanent than the heavy thud that had preceded it."
3"He stopped just inches from her, invading her personal space with the practiced ease of a man who owned everything he looked at."
4"The usual muffled chatter, the clink of glasses, the low hum of the city, it all seemed to have vanished, replaced by a vacuum of sound that made her ears ache."
5"He was already moving, his silhouette cutting a sharp, dark line against the dim light of the living area."
6"It was too tall, too thin, moving with a jerky, unnatural gait that defied the physics of a human frame."
7"It had no face, only a smooth, pale expanse of skin stretched tight over a skull that was far too long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he murmured, his voice dropping to a low, dangerous register"
1"Lucien commanded, his voice devoid of any warmth"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.087
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.087
73.7512%