| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.048 | | leniency | 0.095 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1567 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1567 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "surreal" | | 8 | "grave" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "stark" | | 13 | "electric" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1566 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1024 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.2 | | worstName | "Brick" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Brick" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | English | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a betrayal of my own principl" | | 1 | "felt like an electric shock" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1566 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 94 | | mean | 16.66 | | std | 15.7 | | cv | 0.943 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 56 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 63 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "were piled" | | 1 | "were lost" | | 2 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "I could smell him—sandalwood, expensive gin, and something metallic, like the ozone before a thunderstorm." | | 1 | "The door didn't just open; it exploded inward, the wood splintering into a thousand jagged teeth." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1030 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03300970873786408 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008737864077669903 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 11.19 | | std | 7.66 | | cv | 0.685 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 35.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it made my stomach" | | 1 | "Instead, I leaned into it." | | 2 | "Just a fraction." | | 3 | "Just enough to be a" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "I hadn't expected anyone at" | | 1 | "I pulled the door open," | | 2 | "His tailored charcoal suit remained" | | 3 | "His voice carried that low," | | 4 | "He stepped forward, a movement" | | 5 | "I didn't move back, though" | | 6 | "I planted my feet on" | | 7 | "He looked tired." | | 8 | "It was a minute detail," | | 9 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 10 | "I could smell him—sandalwood, expensive" | | 11 | "It was a scent that" | | 12 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 13 | "His fingers tightened on the" | | 14 | "He leaned in closer, breaching" | | 15 | "My skin prickled." | | 16 | "He didn't flinch." | | 17 | "He simply watched me, his" | | 18 | "I glanced past him into" | | 19 | "I stepped aside, a silent" |
| | ratio | 0.654 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy iron bolt screeched" | | 1 | "I hadn't expected anyone at" | | 2 | "I pulled the door open," | | 3 | "The words died." | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 5 | "His tailored charcoal suit remained" | | 6 | "His voice carried that low," | | 7 | "He stepped forward, a movement" | | 8 | "I didn't move back, though" | | 9 | "I planted my feet on" | | 10 | "He looked tired." | | 11 | "It was a minute detail," | | 12 | "The amber eye seemed to" | | 13 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 14 | "I could smell him—sandalwood, expensive" | | 15 | "It was a scent that" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight, and" | | 17 | "His fingers tightened on the" | | 18 | "He leaned in closer, breaching" | | 19 | "The air between us grew" |
| | ratio | 0.936 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a scent that had haunted my pillows and my dreams for half a year." | | 1 | "The scent of stale curry wafted up from the restaurant below, grounding me in a reality that felt increasingly surreal." | | 2 | "I stepped aside, a silent invitation that felt like a betrayal of my own principles." | | 3 | "He noted the stacks of research notes on the coffee table, the single lamp casting long, distorted shadows against the walls, and the tabby cat, Ptolemy, who ha…" | | 4 | "His eyes darkened, the amber and the black swirling together in a way that made my head spin." | | 5 | "Lucien stiffened, his eyes snapping toward the door, the warmth vanishing instantly, replaced by a cold, lethal precision." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "a voice barked (bark)" | | 2 | "I screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.048 | | leniency | 0.095 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |