| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "sanctuary" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "calculated" | | 15 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1221 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It knows you are here, Nyx whispered." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1221 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 4 | | Rory | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 3 | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 10 | | Carter | 1 | | Dymas | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Carter" | | 8 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 43.61 | | std | 31.28 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 118 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 100 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 64 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 89 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "The liquid didn’t fall to the ground; it floated upward in slow-motion droplets, pooling in the air to form a swirling vortex—a tear in the Veil." | | 1 | "She didn't press her feet into the grass; she glided, a ghost in her own sanctuary." | | 2 | "She caught a flash of movement within the amber swirl—a tall, spindly shape, all limbs and grinding teeth, pacing near the threshold." | | 3 | "She didn't let the terror take root; she folded it, tucked it away behind the same wall she had built to survive her life in London." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1234 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.018638573743922204 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0032414910858995136 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 12.72 | | std | 6.53 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 43.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3125 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached for the crescent-shaped" | | 1 | "She kept her gaze forward," | | 2 | "She gripped the leather strap" | | 3 | "It smells like a harvest" | | 4 | "It is a pocket of" | | 5 | "They shift to track our" | | 6 | "She stepped back, her pulse" | | 7 | "She checked the Heartstone pendant" | | 8 | "It felt heavy, a coal" | | 9 | "It hummed, a vibration so" | | 10 | "We are close to the" | | 11 | "She moved deeper, pushing aside" | | 12 | "It stood ten feet high," | | 13 | "It smells like wine, scorched" | | 14 | "She drew the moonsilver dagger." | | 15 | "Its blade caught the faint," | | 16 | "She felt the weight of" | | 17 | "She looked toward the obsidian" | | 18 | "I’m here for the truth," | | 19 | "I want to know why" |
| | ratio | 0.432 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the standing" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over the threshold," | | 2 | "She reached for the crescent-shaped" | | 3 | "The violet glow of the" | | 4 | "These roots have hungers that" | | 5 | "Aurora didn’t turn to look" | | 6 | "She kept her gaze forward," | | 7 | "A faint, silver mist swirled" | | 8 | "She gripped the leather strap" | | 9 | "The metal pulsed against her" | | 10 | "It smells like a harvest" | | 11 | "The Shade floated a few" | | 12 | "The violet light in its" | | 13 | "It is a pocket of" | | 14 | "Isolde plays at being a" | | 15 | "They shift to track our" | | 16 | "Aurora paused, squinting at a" | | 17 | "The wood rippled like water" | | 18 | "She stepped back, her pulse" | | 19 | "The wonder of the place," |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "If I go through that" | | 1 | "If I go through, be" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 42.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The violet glow of the Shade’s eyes pulsed in sync with the soft, bioluminescent moss clinging to the ancient oaks that formed the perimeter of the grove." | | 1 | "The metal pulsed against her thigh, a rhythmic chill that whispered of preparation." | | 2 | "As she watched, a cluster of white blossoms unfurled in blooming, erratic spasms, their petals turning toward her face." | | 3 | "It felt heavy, a coal glowing against her skin, throwing off a warmth that cut through the supernatural chill of the grove." | | 4 | "She moved deeper, pushing aside heavy, emerald ferns that felt more like velvet than plant matter." | | 5 | "Through the aperture, she caught glimpses of a sky the color of warm honey and the distant, rolling silhouettes of vineyards that stretched into a horizon of in…" | | 6 | "The gem flared, casting a deep crimson glow that stained the Seer’s translucent skin." | | 7 | "The scent of the other realm grew stronger, a cloying, saccharine sweetness that made her stomach revolt." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |