Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90RF2GG89T45QR3BMPWZWS

Run Details

Duration:
9.1s
Cost:
$0.002792
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the standing stones tasted of static and crushed violets. Aurora stepped over the threshold, her boots finding no resistance in the soil. Behind her, the London humidity and the muffled roar of traffic in Richmond Park evaporated, replaced by a silence so profound it made her teeth ache. She reached for the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, rubbing the skin unconsciously. Beside her, the ink-black silhouette of Nyx shimmered. The violet glow of the Shade’s eyes pulsed in sync with the soft, bioluminescent moss clinging to the ancient oaks that formed the perimeter of the grove. Keep your distance from the foliage, Rory. These roots have hungers that do not align with your biology. Aurora didn’t turn to look at the shadow-form. She kept her gaze forward, where the trees grew too tall and knotted, their branches interlocking to weave a ceiling that blocked out the sky. A faint, silver mist swirled around her ankles. She gripped the leather strap of her delivery bag at her hip, her fingertips brushing the cold, hard outline of the Fae-forged blade concealed within. The metal pulsed against her thigh, a rhythmic chill that whispered of preparation. What kind of place is this, Nyx? It smells like a harvest festival that never ended, but there’s rot underneath the flowers. The Shade floated a few inches above the soft, loam-rich earth. The violet light in its eyes settled into a steady, predatory gaze. It is a pocket of breath caught in the throat of the world. Isolde plays at being a shepherd here, but she keeps wolves behind her gate. Look at the patterns on the bark. They shift to track our heartbeats. Aurora paused, squinting at a massive, gnarled trunk to her left. The wood rippled like water under a breeze. As she watched, a cluster of white blossoms unfurled in blooming, erratic spasms, their petals turning toward her face. She stepped back, her pulse quickening. The wonder of the place, the sheer impossibility of the constant, year-round summer, threatened to pull her in, but the underlying sense of hunger kept her senses sharp. She checked the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It felt heavy, a coal glowing against her skin, throwing off a warmth that cut through the supernatural chill of the grove. It hummed, a vibration so low she felt it in her marrow rather than heard it. The pendant is reacting. We are close to the transition point. She moved deeper, pushing aside heavy, emerald ferns that felt more like velvet than plant matter. The grove opened suddenly into a clearing dominated by a single, central stone of obsidian. It stood ten feet high, carved with grooves that leaked a shimmering, amber liquid. The liquid didn’t fall to the ground; it floated upward in slow-motion droplets, pooling in the air to form a swirling vortex—a tear in the Veil. Through the aperture, she caught glimpses of a sky the color of warm honey and the distant, rolling silhouettes of vineyards that stretched into a horizon of infinite amber. Dymas. The scent is overwhelming. It smells like wine, scorched sugar, and burning copper. She drew the moonsilver dagger. Its blade caught the faint, honeyed light leaking from the rift, throwing iridescent shards of cold onto the ground. She felt the weight of the steel, the edge hungry for the fabric of reality. She looked toward the obsidian stone. Resting at its base sat Isolde, her silver hair spilling over her shoulders like molten moonlight. The Half-Fae did not move, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the twisting rift rather than the intruders. The feast requires a guest who knows how to starve, the Seer murmured, her voice like wind-chimes in a storm. Aurora stepped into the periphery of the amber light. The warmth intensified, drawing sweat to her brow despite the chill emanating from the Fae blade. I’m here for the truth, Isolde. Not for the crumbs of a glutton’s table. I want to know why the pendant pulled me toward a realm of hunger. Isolde stood, her movements liquid and graceful. She didn't press her feet into the grass; she glided, a ghost in her own sanctuary. She tilted her head, her expression unreadable, a mask of ageless indifference. The stone seeks the hand that can hold its weight. You carry a blade forged by my kin, girl. It cuts through lies, but it cannot cut the debt you inherited the moment you walked through those stones. Your father’s barrister tongue never prepared you for the gravity of a divine bargain. Aurora tightened her grip on the moonsilver. She saw the way Nyx watched the Seer, the Shade’s form flickering between solid and mist, ready to tear through the space between them. No more riddles. The pendant burns. If I go through that gate, what remains of me when the wine runs out? Isolde drifted closer, the air around her smelling of ozone and crushed thyme. She reached out, her fingers hovering inches from the Heartstone at Aurora’s throat. The gem flared, casting a deep crimson glow that stained the Seer’s translucent skin. You remain the vessel, Aurora Carter. The gluttons of Dymas do not want your soul. They want what you carry from the world above. The artifact is a key, and keys are meant to open doors, not sit in pockets. Step into the amber, and you see the menu. Fail to step, and the hunger comes to you. Aurora looked at the rift. The scent of the other realm grew stronger, a cloying, saccharine sweetness that made her stomach revolt. She caught a flash of movement within the amber swirl—a tall, spindly shape, all limbs and grinding teeth, pacing near the threshold. It stopped, sensing her presence. It pressed a hand against the shimmering distortion, the surface bulging outward like thin rubber. It knows you are here, Nyx whispered. The Shade drifted to Aurora’s side, the violet light in its eyes flaring bright. It raised a hand, charcoal-colored smoke coiling around its fingers like a whip. Whatever lives on the other side of that tear has not tasted a human soul in centuries. The feast begins, but they lack a main course. Aurora took a shuddering breath. She looked at the dagger, then at the pulsating, amber-drenched rift. The wonder that had pulled her into the grove vanished, replaced by the cold, calculated logic of survival. She didn't let the terror take root; she folded it, tucked it away behind the same wall she had built to survive her life in London. Stay close, Nyx. If I go through, be ready to take us back. She turned directly to Isolde, whose face remained a pale, serene canvas. I don't play the part of a main course. She took a step toward the obsidian stone. The air turned brittle, snapping with the force of the magical wards surrounding the monolith. She leaned in, the heat of the Heartstone turning the pendant into a branding iron against her chest. She pushed the moonsilver blade toward the center of the amber vortex, the metal humming as it bit into the instability of the rift. The world tilted. Colors bled into sounds, and the golden sky of Dymas roared in anticipation, a sound like a thousand winepresses crushing bone.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:20:52.311Z" 5/10/2026, 1:20:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"chill"
count3
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"sanctuary"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"calculated"
count1
15
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"profound"
2"shimmered"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"chill"
6"pulse"
7"sense of"
8"warmth"
9"velvet"
10"weight"
11"sanctuary"
12"unreadable"
13"stomach"
14"calculated"
15"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"d in anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It knows you are here, Nyx whispered."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1221
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx5
Shade4
Rory1
Fae-forged1
Heartstone3
Veil1
Isolde6
Half-Fae1
Seer3
Fae3
Aurora10
Carter1
Dymas3
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Shade"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Half-Fae"
5"Seer"
6"Aurora"
7"Carter"
8"Dymas"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1221
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"through that gate"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean43.61
std31.28
cv0.717
sampleLengths
0100
118
279
322
423
540
6118
711
8100
914
1079
1120
1225
1328
1435
1552
1631
1721
1840
1958
2064
217
2253
2360
2413
2512
269
2789
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"are meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"The liquid didn’t fall to the ground; it floated upward in slow-motion droplets, pooling in the air to form a swirling vortex—a tear in the Veil."
1"She didn't press her feet into the grass; she glided, a ghost in her own sanctuary."
2"She caught a flash of movement within the amber swirl—a tall, spindly shape, all limbs and grinding teeth, pacing near the threshold."
3"She didn't let the terror take root; she folded it, tucked it away behind the same wall she had built to survive her life in London."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1234
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.018638573743922204
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0032414910858995136
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.72
std6.53
cv0.514
sampleLengths
012
113
226
314
48
527
67
711
88
925
108
1125
1213
137
1415
1511
1612
1713
1814
197
206
2111
228
2319
246
2528
268
2722
2816
294
307
3116
3215
3314
3426
3529
361
374
389
395
4019
4115
426
4316
4418
4520
469
4716
486
498
43.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences95
matches
0"She reached for the crescent-shaped"
1"She kept her gaze forward,"
2"She gripped the leather strap"
3"It smells like a harvest"
4"It is a pocket of"
5"They shift to track our"
6"She stepped back, her pulse"
7"She checked the Heartstone pendant"
8"It felt heavy, a coal"
9"It hummed, a vibration so"
10"We are close to the"
11"She moved deeper, pushing aside"
12"It stood ten feet high,"
13"It smells like wine, scorched"
14"She drew the moonsilver dagger."
15"Its blade caught the faint,"
16"She felt the weight of"
17"She looked toward the obsidian"
18"I’m here for the truth,"
19"I want to know why"
ratio0.432
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences95
matches
0"The air inside the standing"
1"Aurora stepped over the threshold,"
2"She reached for the crescent-shaped"
3"The violet glow of the"
4"These roots have hungers that"
5"Aurora didn’t turn to look"
6"She kept her gaze forward,"
7"A faint, silver mist swirled"
8"She gripped the leather strap"
9"The metal pulsed against her"
10"It smells like a harvest"
11"The Shade floated a few"
12"The violet light in its"
13"It is a pocket of"
14"Isolde plays at being a"
15"They shift to track our"
16"Aurora paused, squinting at a"
17"The wood rippled like water"
18"She stepped back, her pulse"
19"The wonder of the place,"
ratio0.842
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"If I go through that"
1"If I go through, be"
ratio0.021
42.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The violet glow of the Shade’s eyes pulsed in sync with the soft, bioluminescent moss clinging to the ancient oaks that formed the perimeter of the grove."
1"The metal pulsed against her thigh, a rhythmic chill that whispered of preparation."
2"As she watched, a cluster of white blossoms unfurled in blooming, erratic spasms, their petals turning toward her face."
3"It felt heavy, a coal glowing against her skin, throwing off a warmth that cut through the supernatural chill of the grove."
4"She moved deeper, pushing aside heavy, emerald ferns that felt more like velvet than plant matter."
5"Through the aperture, she caught glimpses of a sky the color of warm honey and the distant, rolling silhouettes of vineyards that stretched into a horizon of in…"
6"The gem flared, casting a deep crimson glow that stained the Seer’s translucent skin."
7"The scent of the other realm grew stronger, a cloying, saccharine sweetness that made her stomach revolt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9957%