| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1376 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "mechanical" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "dancing" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "porcelain" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "etching" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1373 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 967 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Quinn | 1 | | Harlow | 15 | | Eva | 9 | | Morris | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.724 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like cracked porcelain, etched dee" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.185 | | wordCount | 1373 | | matches | | 0 | "not a body, but a pile of ash, perfectly circular" | | 1 | "Not a sound, but a vibration" | | 2 | "not Morris,\" Harlow grit through her teeth, drawing her weapon but keeping it lowered, searching for a target" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 40.38 | | std | 17.77 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 55 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 33 |
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| 95.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "were carved" | | 1 | "being squeezed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 46.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound, but a vibration—a low-frequency hum that turned her teeth ache." | | 1 | "The pattern shifted under her weight, revealing a secondary layer underneath—a name, written in a script that looked like cracked porcelain, etched deep into the concrete." | | 2 | "Only the satchel remained, discarded on the platform edge, its contents splayed open—a collection of books bound in human leather, their pages fluttering in the phantom wind." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 974 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.017453798767967144 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009240246406570842 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 15.43 | | std | 8.34 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 46.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34831460674157305 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the satchel remained, discarded" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 97.78% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 1 | "It was not a body," | | 2 | "She peered through her round" | | 3 | "She ignored the younger woman’s" | | 4 | "She knelt at the perimeter" | | 5 | "She paced the length of" | | 6 | "She stopped where the tunnel" | | 7 | "She ignored the cold dampness" | | 8 | "She looked for the impossible." | | 9 | "They were too thin for" | | 10 | "They were carved, a series" | | 11 | "She pulled a small brass" | | 12 | "It resembled a compass, the" | | 13 | "It spun in a lazy," | | 14 | "She tracked the needle, her" | | 15 | "She heard it then." | | 16 | "She stepped toward the tracks," | | 17 | "It was a name she" | | 18 | "She tightened her stance, her" | | 19 | "It wore a tattered Metropolitan" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 1.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The rusted iron gate groaned," | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn stepped over a" | | 2 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 3 | "The crime scene occupied the" | | 4 | "A single yellow floodlight illuminated" | | 5 | "It was not a body," | | 6 | "Eva stood near the edge," | | 7 | "She peered through her round" | | 8 | "A worn leather satchel slumped" | | 9 | "Eva said, her green eyes" | | 10 | "Harlow swept the beam of" | | 11 | "She ignored the younger woman’s" | | 12 | "She knelt at the perimeter" | | 13 | "Eva tapped the glass of" | | 14 | "Harlow stood, her coat swirling" | | 15 | "She paced the length of" | | 16 | "She stopped where the tunnel" | | 17 | "A flash of brass caught" | | 18 | "Eva shook her head, the" | | 19 | "She ignored the cold dampness" |
| | ratio | 0.917 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It resembled a compass, the casing worn to a verdigris patina, the face etched with protective sigils that matched the ones scraped into the floor." | | 1 | "Not a sound, but a vibration—a low-frequency hum that turned her teeth ache." | | 2 | "The air in the station grew heavy, pressurized, as if the oxygen were being squeezed from the room by an invisible hand." | | 3 | "The pattern shifted under her weight, revealing a secondary layer underneath—a name, written in a script that looked like cracked porcelain, etched deep into th…" | | 4 | "The face was familiar, the jagged scar across the left cheek marking the man who had been her mentor, but the eyes were hollow, filled with the same shifting, o…" |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow said, her voice hard enough to fracture stone" | | 1 | "Eva adjusted, the reflection of the floodlight hiding her expression" | | 2 | "Harlow commanded, her hand hovering over her weapon" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "the apparition spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.259 | | leniency | 0.519 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |