Run: 2026-05-10-01KR90S5YBYXVE99W0FKV6ZSKG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000721
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest hummed, casting a rhythmic, sickly light over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside, the air tasted of stale tobacco and expensive rye. Aurora leaned against the mahogany bar, her shoulder-length black hair still damp from the drizzle. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, watching the condensation bead on her glass of sparkling water. Silas moved behind the bar with a measured, heavy gait. His left leg dragged slightly, a ghost of a memory from Prague that manifested in a hitch every third step. He polished a highball glass, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the dim light of the overhead lamps. The bell above the door chimed. A man stepped in, shaking a black umbrella. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than Rory's annual rent in the flat upstairs. His hair was swept back, tight and severe, and his eyes scanned the room with a predatory precision. Rory froze. The glass slipped an inch in her grip. "Evan." The name felt like a stone in her mouth. The man stopped. He turned, his gaze locking onto her. A slow, calculated smile spread across his face, though it didn't reach his eyes. "Aurora. Or is it Rory now?" He walked toward her, the polished leather of his oxfords clicking against the hardwood. He stopped just outside her personal space, the scent of sandalwood and cold ambition clinging to him. "You look... tired." Rory straightened her spine. She didn't recoil. She didn't blink. "I work. Some of us do." Evan chuckled, a dry sound that lacked any real mirth. He gestured to the bar. "Still playing the rebel? I heard you vanished. No note, no phone call. Just a void where a promising law student used to be." "The promise was yours, Evan. I was just the ink." Silas cleared his throat, the sound a low warning. He slid a coaster toward Evan, his hazel eyes narrowed. He didn't speak, but his presence acted as a physical barrier, a silent sentinel between the girl and the ghost. "A drink, then," Evan said, ignoring Silas. He looked at Rory. "I'm in town for a merger. Three days. I thought I might find you hiding in some hole. I didn't expect a dive bar in Soho." "It's called The Raven's Nest. And it's not a hole. It's a sanctuary." Evan signaled the bartender. "Double scotch. Neat." As Silas poured the drink, Evan leaned closer. His voice dropped, shedding the polite veneer. "You could have had everything, Aurora. The firm in Cardiff, the house in the hills. You had a trajectory. Instead, you're delivering takeout for a restaurant that smells like old grease." Rory looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar—the bright blue of her eyes seemed sharper, harder. "I can breathe here." "You're suffocating in poverty. Don't confuse desperation with freedom." "I'm not desperate. I'm absent." Evan took a sip of the scotch, his throat bobbing. He looked around the bar, at the faded maps and the black-and-white photographs of forgotten cities. "You always loved the periphery. The edges of things. I tried to pull you into the center, and you fought me like I was a jailer." "You weren't pulling me, Evan. You were sculpting me. There's a difference." He set the glass down with a sharp clack. "I loved you." Rory laughed, a short, jagged sound. "You loved the version of me that didn't talk back. You loved the girl who looked good on the arm of a junior partner." Evan's expression tightened. A vein pulsed in his temple. He reached out, his fingers grazing the sleeve of her jacket. Rory stepped back, the movement instinctive and fluid. "Still skittish." "I'm cautious. There's a difference." "You were always so fragile," he whispered. "A little wind and you'd shatter. I spent three years trying to reinforce you." "You didn't reinforce me. You sanded me down until there was nothing left but a reflection of what you wanted." Silas leaned forward, his voice a gravelly rumble. "The lady said she's fine, son. Maybe the scotch is hitting you too hard." Evan glanced at Silas, his lip curling. He saw the signet ring, the steady hand, and the eyes of a man who had seen far worse things than a corporate lawyer's tantrum. He withdrew his hand. "I didn't come here to fight, Aurora. I came to see if you'd finally grown up. To see if you'd realized that the world doesn't reward the 'out-of-the-box' thinkers who end up delivering noodles." "I'd rather deliver a thousand meals than spend one hour in that house again." Evan sighed, a sound of genuine disappointment. He finished his drink in one swallow. "You're wasting your intellect. It's a tragedy, really. You were the smartest person in every room we entered. Now, you're just a ghost in a damp city." "I'm not a ghost. I'm the one who got away." Evan reached into his pocket and pulled out a gold embossed card. He slid it across the mahogany surface toward her. "Call me. When the novelty of your 'independence' wears off and the winter gets too cold for that flat, call me. I can still fix this. I can wipe the slate clean." Rory looked at the card. The gold foil shimmered under the neon light. She didn't touch it. "The slate is already clean, Evan. I scrubbed it myself." He stared at her for a long moment, searching for a crack, a tremor, a hint of the girl who used to apologize for breathing too loudly. He found nothing but a wall of blue ice. "You've become cold." "I learned from the best." Evan picked up his umbrella. He didn't look back as he walked toward the door. The bell chimed again, signaling his exit. The silence that followed was heavy, filled with the smell of sandalwood and the fading hum of the neon sign. Rory stared at the card on the bar. Her hand trembled, just a fraction. Silas reached out and swept the card into the wastebin with a single, efficient motion. "You okay, kid?" Rory took a deep breath, the scent of the bar—old wood and rye—filling her lungs. She picked up her water and took a slow, deliberate sip. "I'm great, Si." "You're shaking." "It's just the rain." Silas nodded slowly, his hazel eyes softening. He turned back to his glasses, the silver ring clicking against the rim. "The rain in London does that to people."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1098
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"calculated"
count1
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"traced"
2"measured"
3"scanned"
4"calculated"
5"sentinel"
6"sanctuary"
7"pulsed"
8"shimmered"
9"silence"
10"trembled"
11"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount671
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Prague1
Rory10
Evan11
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.68
windowScore0.333
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a stone in her mouth"
1"seemed sharper harder"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean17.66
std14
cv0.793
sampleLengths
067
151
249
310
41
533
66
731
83
910
106
1115
1224
1310
1439
1537
1613
174
183
1915
2031
2119
224
239
245
2526
2626
2712
289
293
306
3124
3228
332
345
3521
3620
378
3814
3936
4034
4114
4214
4327
4410
4521
4632
4717
4810
4936
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was swept"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
86.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences101
ratio0.02
matches
0"Rory looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bar—the bright blue of her eyes seemed sharper, harder."
1"Rory took a deep breath, the scent of the bar—old wood and rye—filling her lungs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount678
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.025073746312684365
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007374631268436578
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean10.84
std7.54
cv0.696
sampleLengths
020
110
215
322
410
520
621
76
88
917
1018
112
128
131
149
153
167
1714
186
1914
2017
213
224
233
243
256
2610
275
2824
2910
309
3110
3220
337
344
3526
3613
374
383
398
407
4131
4219
434
449
455
4610
4716
4826
4912
41.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.1782178217821782
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences64
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"His left leg dragged slightly,"
2"He polished a highball glass,"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"His hair was swept back,"
5"He turned, his gaze locking"
6"He walked toward her, the"
7"He stopped just outside her"
8"She didn't recoil."
9"She didn't blink."
10"He gestured to the bar."
11"He slid a coaster toward"
12"He didn't speak, but his"
13"He looked at Rory."
14"His voice dropped, shedding the"
15"He looked around the bar,"
16"He set the glass down"
17"He reached out, his fingers"
18"He saw the signet ring,"
19"He withdrew his hand."
ratio0.453
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences64
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora leaned against the mahogany"
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"Silas moved behind the bar"
4"His left leg dragged slightly,"
5"He polished a highball glass,"
6"The bell above the door"
7"A man stepped in, shaking"
8"He wore a tailored charcoal"
9"His hair was swept back,"
10"The glass slipped an inch"
11"The name felt like a"
12"The man stopped."
13"He turned, his gaze locking"
14"A slow, calculated smile spread"
15"He walked toward her, the"
16"He stopped just outside her"
17"Rory straightened her spine."
18"She didn't recoil."
19"She didn't blink."
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He saw the signet ring, the steady hand, and the eyes of a man who had seen far worse things than a corporate lawyer's tantrum."
1"He stared at her for a long moment, searching for a crack, a tremor, a hint of the girl who used to apologize for breathing too loudly."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.054
leniency0.108
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.054
79.1630%