| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1076 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "navigating" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "electric" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1072 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 864 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Rory | 19 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Leading | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Blade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.4 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb the very light of the grove" |
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| 13.43% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.866 | | wordCount | 1072 | | matches | | 0 | "not a door, but a dissolution" | | 1 | "not the chill of ice, but the absolute absence of heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 41.23 | | std | 18.19 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 62 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 27 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "were absorbing" | | 1 | "was pulsing" | | 2 | "was solving" | | 3 | "was still learning" | | 4 | "wasn't running" | | 5 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory watched the ground as Isolde walked; the lush grass bent beneath the woman's weight, but no footprints remained." | | 1 | "The deep crimson gemstone was pulsing—a rhythmic, warm thrum that mirrored her own heartbeat." | | 2 | "The water didn't flow; it spiraled in suspended ribbons of liquid sapphire, drifting upward toward the canopy in slow, lazy coils." | | 3 | "The touch was cold—not the chill of ice, but the absolute absence of heat." | | 4 | "She felt a strange kinship with the weapon; it was precise, cold, and designed for a purpose she was still learning to accept." | | 5 | "Beyond the mist, Rory saw a flicker—a distortion in the air like heat rising from asphalt." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 874 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger." |
| | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.020594965675057208 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003432494279176201 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 16.49 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.451 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 54.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.35384615384615387 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her boots sinking" | | 1 | "It was a small, unsettling" | | 2 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 3 | "She spoke in that rhythmic," | | 4 | "She was too distracted by" | | 5 | "She stepped back into line" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes seemed" | | 7 | "She felt a strange kinship" | | 8 | "It was a shimmering ripple," | | 9 | "She was walking toward something." |
| | ratio | 0.182 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was not a" | | 1 | "She paused, her boots sinking" | | 2 | "a voice whispered, sounding less" | | 3 | "Rory glanced to her side." | | 4 | "Nyx shifted beside her, a" | | 5 | "The Shade’s violet eyes glowed" | | 6 | "Nyx didn't walk so much" | | 7 | "Rory asked, her voice sounding" | | 8 | "The Half-Fae moved with a" | | 9 | "Rory watched the ground as" | | 10 | "It was a small, unsettling" | | 11 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 12 | "Rory felt a sudden, sharp" | | 13 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 14 | "The deep crimson gemstone was" | | 15 | "Isolde said, not looking back" | | 16 | "She spoke in that rhythmic," | | 17 | "Rory muttered, though there was" | | 18 | "She was too distracted by" | | 19 | "The water didn't flow; it" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "As Aurora stepped past the final oak standing stone, the humid air of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a stillness that felt heavy and ancient." | | 1 | "She paused, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible shades of iridescent teal and violent gold, despite the biting chill of th…" | | 2 | "Nyx didn't walk so much as glide, their form flickering at the edges, blurring into the deep purples of the undergrowth." | | 3 | "The Half-Fae moved with a haunting grace, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet's tail, reaching down to her waist." | | 4 | "It was a small, unsettling detail that reminded Rory she was no longer in a world governed by the laws she’d studied in her Pre-Law textbooks." | | 5 | "The deep crimson gemstone was pulsing—a rhythmic, warm thrum that mirrored her own heartbeat." | | 6 | "The wildflowers gave way to towering fungi that glowed with a soft, bioluminescent pulse, casting long, dancing shadows." | | 7 | "Waterfalls cascaded from the islands, but instead of falling, the water turned into mist halfway down, forming a shimmering veil that obscured the valley floor." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not looking back" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.6 | |