Run: 2026-05-10-01KR9111NQS7QRKK01N0S8NZ67

Run Details

Duration:
46.8s
Cost:
$0.000674
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pulled the door open, her mind still looping through the logistics of the dinner rush at Golden Empress. She was exhausted, her shoulders aching from a day of hauling heavy thermal bags across the rain-slicked pavement of East London. She expected a neighbor complaining about the noise or perhaps Eva returning early from her archives. She did not expect Lucien Moreau. He stood in the dim hallway of the Brick Lane tenement, looking entirely out of place against the peeling floral wallpaper and the smell of frying garlic drifting up from the curry house below. He wore a charcoal suit tailored with a precision that bordered on the obsessive, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand daring to defy gravity. In his right hand, he gripped the ivory handle of his cane. Rory froze, her hand still gripping the heavy iron of the three deadbolts. For a heartbeat, the noise of the street faded, replaced by the sudden, rhythmic thrum of her own pulse in her ears. "Hello, Aurora," he said. His voice was a low, melodic rasp that vibrated in the small space between them. It was a voice that had whispered promises in the dark and delivered cold truths in the light. He didn't move to enter, but his presence seemed to fill the doorway, crowding her air. Rory didn't step back, though every instinct told her to. She tightened her grip on the door, her knuckles whitening. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here, Lucien." He tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes scanning her face. The amber one glowed with a faint, predatory intensity, while the black one remained an inscrutable void. He looked at her with a clinical sort of hunger, noting the smudge of soy sauce on her apron and the tired shadows beneath her bright blue eyes. "I imagine I do," he conceded. "But necessity is a powerful motivator." "I'm sure. And I imagine you've exhausted every other resource in the underworld before deciding to haunt my doorstep." "You were the only one I trusted to keep a secret," he replied softly. The sincerity in his tone was a weapon. Rory knew how he worked; Lucien Moreau dealt in information, leverage, and the carefully curated performance of vulnerability. She stepped aside, not because she wanted him there, but because the tension of standing in the doorway felt like a wire stretched to the breaking point. If she didn't let him in, she might actually hit him, and if she hit him, she might find she wanted to kiss him. Lucien stepped inside, his cane clicking softly on the hardwood. He paused, glancing around the cramped flat. Eva’s place was a chaotic sanctuary of scrolls, leather-bound grimoires, and precarious stacks of research notes that threatened to collapse at a sneeze. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerged from beneath a mountain of parchment and let out a loud, judgmental meow before weaving between Lucien’s polished shoes. "Still living in a library of madness, I see," Lucien remarked, though there was a ghost of a smile on his lips. "It's called a home," Rory snapped. She closed the door, the heavy thud of the bolts echoing in the silence. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. "Why are you here, Luc? And don't give me the 'broker's pitch.' Give me the truth." Lucien leaned his cane against a stack of books on the occult and stepped closer. He moved with a fluid, predatory grace that reminded her he wasn't entirely human. The air around him smelled of sandalwood and expensive tobacco, a scent that instantly triggered a memory of a rain-drenched night in a hidden cellar in Soho, two years ago, where they had discovered that their attraction was as dangerous as the secrets they kept. "I am being hunted," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "Not by the usual rivals. Someone has found a way to track the Avaros bloodline through the veil. I needed a place that was spiritually shielded. Eva’s wards are the strongest in the East End." "So I'm just a convenient shield?" Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering just inches from her jaw. He didn't make contact, but Rory could feel the heat radiating from him. "You know that isn't true." "I know that you left," she whispered, her voice cracking. "I know that when things got complicated, you decided the safest thing for me was to be forgotten." The expression in his amber eye shifted—something akin to grief, or perhaps regret. "I thought I was protecting you. You were already fleeing a ghost, Aurora. I didn't want to become another monster in your history." "I can handle monsters," she said, her gaze hardening. She subconsciously rubbed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. "I've spent my whole life learning how to outrun them. I didn't need you to decide what I could handle." The silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. The distance between them was barely a few inches now. Rory could see the fine pores of his skin and the way his pupils dilated. The anger was still there, but it was being drowned out by a magnetic pull she had spent twenty-four months trying to ignore. Lucien closed the gap, his hand finally landing on the curve of her neck. His palm was warm, his touch surprisingly gentle for a man who dealt in blades and betrayal. He leaned in, his forehead resting against hers. "I have missed you with a violence that is nearly unbearable," he murmured. Rory let out a shaky breath, her resolve crumbling. She reached up, grabbing the lapels of his charcoal suit and pulling him down. When their lips met, it wasn't a gentle reunion; it was a collision. It tasted of old wounds and desperate longing. It was a conversation they hadn't known how to have, a confession written in teeth and tongue. Lucien groaned low in his throat, his arms wrapping around her waist and lifting her off her feet. He backed her into the nearest wall, sending a stack of research notes sliding to the floor with a chaotic flutter. Rory didn't care. She wrapped her legs around his hips, her fingers digging into the platinum blond hair at the nape of his neck. He pulled back for a second, his breath hitching, his mismatched eyes searching hers. "I shouldn't have come. This is a mistake. I am bringing danger to your door." "I've always liked a mistake," Rory whispered, pulling him back down to her. As they sank to the floor amidst the scattered scrolls and the scent of old paper, the world outside Brick Lane ceased to exist. There were debts to be paid, enemies to be fought, and a history of hurt that wouldn't disappear overnight. But in the dim light of the flat, with the tabby cat watching with detached curiosity, there was only the heat of his skin and the knowledge that some fires, no matter how carefully extinguished, never truly go out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he replied softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.095
78.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1185
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count2
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"magnetic"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"pulse"
2"vibrated"
3"scanning"
4"intensity"
5"tension"
6"chaotic"
7"sanctuary"
8"echoing"
9"silence"
10"could feel"
11"magnetic"
12"resolve"
13"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount952
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
East1
London1
Eva2
Lucien9
Moreau2
Brick2
Lane2
Rory10
Soho1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"East"
2"London"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.975
windowScore0.833
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a wire stretched to the break"
1"something akin to grief, or perhaps regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"discovered that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40.83
std22.58
cv0.553
sampleLengths
062
174
235
34
449
530
655
712
819
914
1077
1164
1222
1347
1474
1546
166
1729
1828
1936
2045
2156
2239
2313
2461
2563
2629
2713
2882
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"was exhausted"
1"being drowned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences75
ratio0.04
matches
0"Rory knew how he worked; Lucien Moreau dealt in information, leverage, and the carefully curated performance of vulnerability."
1"The expression in his amber eye shifted—something akin to grief, or perhaps regret."
2"When their lips met, it wasn't a gentle reunion; it was a collision."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.030271398747390398
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015657620041753653
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.79
std8
cv0.507
sampleLengths
019
121
216
36
434
528
612
713
822
94
1015
1118
1216
1310
1410
1510
1610
1717
1828
196
206
2119
2214
238
2418
2527
2624
2710
287
2923
3024
3122
326
3314
3411
3516
3615
3714
3845
3911
4035
416
4211
4313
445
4510
4618
4713
4823
499
39.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences60
matches
0"She was exhausted, her shoulders"
1"She expected a neighbor complaining"
2"She did not expect Lucien"
3"He stood in the dim"
4"He wore a charcoal suit"
5"His voice was a low,"
6"It was a voice that"
7"He didn't move to enter,"
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"He tilted his head, his"
10"He looked at her with"
11"he replied softly"
12"She stepped aside, not because"
13"He paused, glancing around the"
14"She closed the door, the"
15"She turned to face him,"
16"He moved with a fluid,"
17"he said, his voice dropping"
18"He didn't make contact, but"
19"she whispered, her voice cracking"
ratio0.5
18.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rory pulled the door open,"
1"She was exhausted, her shoulders"
2"She expected a neighbor complaining"
3"She did not expect Lucien"
4"He stood in the dim"
5"He wore a charcoal suit"
6"Rory froze, her hand still"
7"His voice was a low,"
8"It was a voice that"
9"He didn't move to enter,"
10"Rory didn't step back, though"
11"She tightened her grip on"
12"He tilted his head, his"
13"The amber one glowed with"
14"He looked at her with"
15"he replied softly"
16"The sincerity in his tone"
17"Rory knew how he worked;"
18"She stepped aside, not because"
19"Lucien stepped inside, his cane"
ratio0.883
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"If she didn't let him"
ratio0.017
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She was exhausted, her shoulders aching from a day of hauling heavy thermal bags across the rain-slicked pavement of East London."
1"He wore a charcoal suit tailored with a precision that bordered on the obsessive, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a single strand daring to defy gr…"
2"He pulled back for a second, his breath hitching, his mismatched eyes searching hers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"she whispered, her voice cracking"
2"she said, her gaze hardening"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he conceded (concede)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.476
74.3120%