Run: 2026-05-10-01KR9123AB33VZRET0BZEYNBRM

Run Details

Duration:
2m
Cost:
$0.001434
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed, casting a sickly emerald glow over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside, the air tasted of stale tobacco and expensive gin. Maps of forgotten borders clung to the walls, their edges curling into yellowed scrolls. Silas Blackwood stood behind the mahogany bar, the silver signet ring on his right hand clicking a rhythmic beat against a crystal tumbler. The bell above the door chimed. Aurora stepped in, the scent of ginger and soy clinging to her windbreaker. She carried a brown paper bag from the Golden Empress, the grease spotting the bottom of the package. "Yu-Fei sent the special," Rory noted, sliding the bag onto the counter. Silas didn't look up. His hazel eyes remained fixed on the door. He shifted his weight, his left knee popping with a dry, audible click. "Put it in the back, Rory." She paused, noticing the rigidity in his shoulders. She glanced at the entrance. A man stood in the doorway, silhouetted against the streetlights. He wore a trench coat that had seen better decades, the fabric frayed at the cuffs and stained with salt streaks. The stranger stepped forward. The emerald light hit his face, revealing deep hollows carved around his eyes and a jawline that had lost its edge to a series of tremors. "The Nest," the man whispered. "You always did have a penchant for the theatrical, Silas." Silas froze. The tumbler stopped its clicking. He straightened his spine, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light. "Julian." The name sounded like a sentence. Julian Vane moved toward the bar with a gait that lacked the predatory grace he had possessed fifteen years ago. He didn't walk; he shuffled. He stopped a few feet from Silas, his hands buried deep in his pockets. "I heard you retired to the hospitality trade. A bit quiet for a man who used to set fires in embassies." Silas reached for a bottle of rye, his movements precise and devoid of warmth. He poured two fingers into a glass and slid it across the polished wood. "The quiet is earned, Julian. Some of us know when to stop." Julian stared at the amber liquid. He didn't pick up the glass. His gaze drifted to the maps on the wall, lingering on a black-and-white photograph of the Charles Bridge in Prague. "I spent three years looking for the man who left me in that cellar." Silas leaned his palms on the bar, his signet ring pressing into the wood. "You weren't left. You were compromised. There is a difference." "Is there?" Julian finally looked up. His eyes were bloodshot, the pupils dilated. "I spent a decade in a hole in the ground because you decided the asset was more valuable than the agent." Rory shifted her weight, the delivery bag forgotten. She looked between the two men, the air between them thickening like cooling wax. "I didn't decide," Silas countered. "The agency decided. I just delivered the news." Julian let out a sharp, jagged laugh that turned into a cough. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a crumpled pack of cigarettes. His fingers shook, the tremors visible even in the low light. He struggled to flick the lighter, the spark failing three times before a flame caught. "The great Spymaster. Always the messenger. Never the architect." Silas watched the smoke curl toward the ceiling. He didn't offer a gesture of comfort. He didn't move to close the gap. "You look like hell, Julian." "Prague has a way of lingering. It stays in the marrow." Julian leaned over the bar, the smell of cheap vodka and desperation wafting off him. He stared at Silas's left leg, the one that held the permanent reminder of their shared failure. "Does it still ache when it rains?" "Every single day." "Good." Julian finally took a sip of the rye. He winced as the alcohol hit his throat, his face contorting into a mask of grief. He set the glass down with a heavy thud, a small splash of liquor staining the mahogany. "I lost everything, Silas. The house in Surrey. The girl. The sense that the world makes any kind of sense." "We all lost something in that city." "You lost a knee. I lost a soul." Silas reached under the bar and produced a thick envelope. He didn't hand it over immediately. He held it just out of reach, a tether and a lure. "I kept a file. For years. I tracked the payments. I knew where they moved you." Julian's expression shifted. The tremor in his hand stilled. "Why now?" "Because the people who put you in that cellar are dead. Or they've been erased. There's no one left to fear." Julian stared at the envelope. He didn't reach for it. He looked at his own reflection in the mirrored back-bar—a ghost of the man who had once been the top field operative in the European theater. "I can't go back to being that person." "You can't go back to being anything, Julian. You only go forward." Rory stepped closer, her voice cutting through the tension. "Is he staying?" Silas looked at Rory, then back to the broken man in the trench coat. "He's deciding if he exists." Julian reached out, his fingers brushing the paper of the envelope. He didn't take it. He pulled his hand back, clutching his wrist. "I don't want the money, Silas." "It's not money. It's the names of the people who lied to you." Julian's eyes flared. For a second, the old Julian returned—the cold, calculating killer who could vanish into a crowd in three seconds. The mask slipped, revealing a hunger for retribution that outweighed the exhaustion. "All of them?" "Everyone who signed the order." Julian gripped the edge of the bar, his knuckles turning white. He looked at the green neon light flickering outside, the rhythmic pulse of the city continuing regardless of the ruins inside the bar. "I don't even remember how to hold a gun." Silas reached beneath the counter and produced a heavy, black semi-automatic. He laid it silently on the wood next to the envelope. "Muscle memory is a stubborn thing."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1037
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"crystal"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"reminder"
5"tension"
6"calculating"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1036
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount742
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas12
Vane1
Charles1
Bridge1
Prague1
Julian12
European1
Rory4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Vane"
5"Julian"
6"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Charles"
3"Bridge"
4"Prague"
5"European"
globalScore0.691
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a sentence"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1036
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean17.86
std13.84
cv0.775
sampleLengths
067
16
231
312
425
56
644
730
815
919
101
116
1239
1321
1428
1512
1632
1714
1814
1910
2034
2122
2213
2351
249
2522
265
2711
2832
297
303
311
3241
3320
347
358
3628
3716
389
392
4021
4136
428
4312
449
453
4614
475
4823
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
85.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences99
ratio0.02
matches
0"He didn't walk; he shuffled."
1"For a second, the old Julian returned—the cold, calculating killer who could vanish into a crowd in three seconds."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.012
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006666666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.46
std5.87
cv0.561
sampleLengths
020
110
214
323
46
513
618
712
84
98
1013
116
128
135
1410
1521
164
1726
185
1910
202
215
2212
231
246
2520
265
2714
2821
2914
3014
3112
326
336
3420
3514
3614
3710
386
397
4021
418
4214
435
448
4512
4613
4711
4815
499
40.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2828282828282828
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences66
matches
0"She carried a brown paper"
1"His hazel eyes remained fixed"
2"He shifted his weight, his"
3"She paused, noticing the rigidity"
4"She glanced at the entrance."
5"He wore a trench coat"
6"He straightened his spine, his"
7"He didn't walk; he shuffled."
8"He stopped a few feet"
9"He poured two fingers into"
10"He didn't pick up the"
11"His gaze drifted to the"
12"His eyes were bloodshot, the"
13"She looked between the two"
14"He reached into his pocket"
15"His fingers shook, the tremors"
16"He struggled to flick the"
17"He didn't offer a gesture"
18"He didn't move to close"
19"He stared at Silas's left"
ratio0.455
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences66
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Maps of forgotten borders clung"
2"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
3"The bell above the door"
4"Aurora stepped in, the scent"
5"She carried a brown paper"
6"Rory noted, sliding the bag"
7"Silas didn't look up."
8"His hazel eyes remained fixed"
9"He shifted his weight, his"
10"She paused, noticing the rigidity"
11"She glanced at the entrance."
12"A man stood in the"
13"He wore a trench coat"
14"The stranger stepped forward."
15"The emerald light hit his"
16"the man whispered"
17"The tumbler stopped its clicking."
18"He straightened his spine, his"
19"The name sounded like a"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The emerald light hit his face, revealing deep hollows carved around his eyes and a jawline that had lost its edge to a series of tremors."
1"He looked at his own reflection in the mirrored back-bar—a ghost of the man who had once been the top field operative in the European theater."
2"The mask slipped, revealing a hunger for retribution that outweighed the exhaustion."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory noted (note)"
1"the man whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.114
81.4604%