Run: 2026-05-10-01KR914AY8H0NS3VHWGC86EGNT

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Duration:
58.1s
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DekaLLM

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in East London didn't fall so much as it drifted, a fine, grey mist that clung to the brickwork of Brick Lane and turned the streetlights into blurred halos. Inside the cramped flat, the air was heavy with the scent of old parchment and the lingering, spicy warmth of the curry house downstairs. Aurora sat hunched over a stack of Eva’s research notes, the light from a single desk lamp casting long, distorted shadows across the room. Her fingers traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a rhythmic, absent-minded habit that surfaced whenever her mind drifted too far from the task at hand. A heavy, rhythmic knocking thudded against the door. It wasn't the frantic beat of a neighbor or the polite rap of a delivery person. It was deliberate. Intentional. Aurora froze. She knew that cadence. She hadn't heard it in months, yet her heart recognized it before her brain could process the implication. She stood, her legs feeling uncharacteristically heavy, and moved toward the entrance. She glanced at the three deadbolts, the heavy metal security she and Eva had installed to make this tiny sanctuary feel impenetrable. She slid the first bolt back. Then the second. Her hands were steady, a testament to the cool-headedness that had served her through law school and the chaos of London, but her pulse was a frantic drum in her ears. She threw the third bolt and pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, looking as though he had stepped out of a high-end editorial for a magazine that didn't exist in the human world. His tailored charcoal suit was immaculate, save for the slight dampness at the shoulders from the mist. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, though a single stubborn strand had escaped to graze his forehead. Then there were his eyes. Even in the low light of the hallway, the heterochromia was striking—one a warm, glowing amber, the other a deep, bottomless black that seemed to swallow the light around it. "Aurora," he said. His voice was a low, melodic rasp, the accent of Marseille smoothing over the edges of her name. "You shouldn't be here, Lucien." She didn't move to let him in, but she didn't slam the door, either. The space between them felt charged, a physical weight that made the oxygen in the narrow hallway feel thin. "I am aware of the impropriety of my arrival," he replied, his expression unreadable. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, the polished wood gleaming. "But the situation has evolved beyond the realm of polite discretion." "The situation." Aurora let out a sharp, bitter laugh. "Is that what we're calling it now? You disappear for half a year, no word, no sign, and then you show up at Eva’s flat like you’re checking on a business investment?" Lucien’s gaze softened, just for a fraction of a second, a flicker of something that looked dangerously like regret in the amber eye. "I did not intend to leave you in a state of uncertainty. The complexities of my... profession required a period of absolute silence." "Your profession involves shadows and blood, Lucien. I'm a delivery driver. I live in a flat above a curry house and spend my nights reading scrolls about things that shouldn't exist. We were never going to fit." "And yet," he stepped forward, a subtle movement that forced her to either retreat or stand her ground. She chose the latter. He was close enough now that she could smell him—sandalwood, expensive rain, and that faint, metallic ozone scent that always seemed to cling to his skin. "You are the only person I know who can look at a paradox and find the logic within it. I need that logic, Aurora. Now." She felt the pull of him, that old, magnetic attraction that had once made her forget the dangers of his world. It was a gravitational force, steady and terrifying. She wanted to push him back into the hallway; she wanted to pull him into the warmth of the flat and demand to know why he hadn't called. "Is this a job?" she asked, her voice hardening. "Are you here because you need a fixer's assistant, or because you actually missed me?" Lucien reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her face before he seemed to think better of it and dropped it to the silver head of his cane. "Can it not be both?" The honesty of the question caught her off guard. She stepped back, finally opening the door wide enough for him to pass. "Come in. But don't touch anything. Eva’s research is sensitive, and I am not in the mood for your brand of chaos." He entered the room with a grace that felt predatory and elegant all at once. The flat felt even smaller with him in it. The walls, lined with overflowing bookshelves and stacked scrolls, seemed to press inward. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerged from beneath a pile of manuscripts, gave Lucien a wary sniff, and then retreated to a high shelf, eyes wide. Lucien surveyed the room, his eyes lingering on the chaos of notes and maps spread across the dining table. He looked entirely out of place amidst the clutter, a polished diamond dropped into a box of rough stones. "You've been busy," he remarked, gesturing to the research. "Eva's work on the Avarosian ley lines is... ambitious." "She's trying to map the intersections," Aurora said, moving to the small kitchenette to put the kettle on, her back to him. She needed the task to ground her. Her hands were shaking, so she gripped the edge of the counter. "She thinks there's a pattern to the supernatural surges in London. She’s looking for a mathematical constant." "And she hasn't found it." It wasn't a question. "She’s close. But the variables keep shifting." "Because they aren't variables," Lucien said. He had moved closer, standing just behind her. He didn't touch her, but she could feel the heat radiating from him. "They are sentient. They respond to the observer. You are looking for a constant in a world that thrives on flux." Aurora turned around, the kettle forgotten. The steam from the tap hissed in the silence between them. "And I suppose you have the answer? The great information broker has come to provide the missing piece to the puzzle?" "I have a piece of the puzzle," he corrected. He reached into the inner pocket of his charcoal jacket and withdrew a small, weathered piece of vellum. It looked ancient, the edges charred, the ink a dark, shimmering violet. "This was recovered from a contact in Marseille. It describes the fluctuations not as movements of energy, but as breathing. A respiration of the veil." Aurora stared at the parchment. Her mind, trained by years of pre-law rigor and sharpened by the strange realities she had encountered since moving to London, immediately began to process the implications. If the veil breathed, then the surges weren't random. They were cycles. Rhythms. "If it's a cycle," she whispered, stepping toward the table, "then we shouldn't be looking for where the energy hits hardest. We should be looking for the inhale." Lucien watched her, his expression intense. "Exactly." She looked up at him, the realization of her own quickness momentarily eclipsing her anger. For a moment, they were just two intellectuals staring at a problem, the distance between them bridged by a shared spark of understanding. But then the memory of his absence rushed back, cold and sharp. She pulled away, the distance re-establishing itself. "Why me, Lucien? You could have gone to any of your associates. You could have gone to someone in the underworld who speaks your language." Lucien’s expression darkened, the amber in his eye turning deep and honeyed, almost predatory. "Because they look for power, Aurora. They look for leverage. They look for ways to bend the world to their will. You... you look for the truth of how things work. And I find myself unable to trust anyone else's eyes but yours." He took a step closer, breaking the boundary she had tried so hard to maintain. The air between them hummed. "I missed you," he said, the words stripped of their usual polish, leaving them raw and vulnerable. "The silence was not a choice of convenience, but of necessity. But the silence was becoming unbearable." Aurora looked at him—really looked at him. She saw the fatigue behind his impeccable mask, the slight tension in his jaw that spoke of a man who had been fighting battles on two fronts. She saw the man who had once held her in the dark, whispering promises that neither of them had believed. "You can't just show up and say that," she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts. "You can't break a person's life apart and then walk back in because you've decided you're lonely." "I am not lonely," he countered softly, his gaze dropping to her lips before returning to her eyes. "I am haunted. There is a difference." He reached out, and this time, he didn't stop. His fingers, cool through the fabric of his glove, brushed against her cheek. The contact was electric, a jolt that traveled straight to her core, making the crescent scar on her wrist ache with a phantom heat. Aurora should have pulled away. She should have invoked the three deadbolts and the logic of her survival. Instead, she leaned into the touch, a single, traitorous breath escaping her. The rain continued to lash against the window, the curry shop continued to hum below, and the world of shadows and light continued to tilt on its axis, but in the cramped, paper-strewn flat, the only thing that mattered was the terrifying, inevitable pull of the man standing in her light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he countered softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.057
90.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1649
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"implication"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"testament"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"silence"
count4
13
word"magnetic"
count1
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"variables"
count2
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"traced"
2"rhythmic"
3"implication"
4"sanctuary"
5"testament"
6"pulse"
7"charged"
8"weight"
9"unreadable"
10"gleaming"
11"flicker"
12"silence"
13"magnetic"
14"amidst"
15"variables"
16"could feel"
17"tension"
18"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
26.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1646
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1181
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
East1
London3
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien8
Aurora8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
78.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.215
wordCount1646
matches
0"not as movements of energy, but as breathing"
1"not a choice of convenience, but of necessity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"knew that cadence"
1"promises that neither"
88.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean41.15
std18.97
cv0.461
sampleLengths
0107
128
258
350
463
535
621
738
836
941
1046
1137
1273
1357
1424
1533
1644
1762
1838
1918
2058
219
227
2348
2438
2564
2645
2728
287
2938
3044
3157
3220
3334
3454
3534
3625
3746
3830
3951
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were shaking"
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences106
ratio0.038
matches
0"Even in the low light of the hallway, the heterochromia was striking—one a warm, glowing amber, the other a deep, bottomless black that seemed to swallow the light around it."
1"He was close enough now that she could smell him—sandalwood, expensive rain, and that faint, metallic ozone scent that always seemed to cling to his skin."
2"She wanted to push him back into the hallway; she wanted to pull him into the warmth of the flat and demand to know why he hadn't called."
3"Aurora looked at him—really looked at him."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"rhythmic, absent-minded habit"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.031092436974789917
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean15.53
std9.44
cv0.608
sampleLengths
031
124
224
328
48
516
63
71
82
94
1018
1112
1222
136
143
1531
1610
1728
1817
1918
205
2130
223
2318
2419
2519
2614
2711
2811
299
3032
3123
3223
3337
3418
354
3626
3725
3821
398
4028
419
4215
4328
445
459
4613
4722
4815
499
40.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3113207547169811
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then there were his eyes."
2"Instead, she leaned into the"
ratio0.038
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her fingers traced the small,"
1"It wasn't the frantic beat"
2"It was deliberate."
3"She knew that cadence."
4"She hadn't heard it in"
5"She stood, her legs feeling"
6"She glanced at the three"
7"She slid the first bolt"
8"Her hands were steady, a"
9"She threw the third bolt"
10"His tailored charcoal suit was"
11"His platinum blond hair was"
12"His voice was a low,"
13"She didn't move to let"
14"he replied, his expression unreadable"
15"He leaned slightly on his"
16"he stepped forward, a subtle"
17"She chose the latter."
18"He was close enough now"
19"She felt the pull of"
ratio0.6
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"The rain in East London"
1"Aurora sat hunched over a"
2"Her fingers traced the small,"
3"A heavy, rhythmic knocking thudded"
4"It wasn't the frantic beat"
5"It was deliberate."
6"She knew that cadence."
7"She hadn't heard it in"
8"She stood, her legs feeling"
9"She glanced at the three"
10"She slid the first bolt"
11"Her hands were steady, a"
12"She threw the third bolt"
13"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
14"His tailored charcoal suit was"
15"His platinum blond hair was"
16"His voice was a low,"
17"She didn't move to let"
18"The space between them felt"
19"he replied, his expression unreadable"
ratio0.9
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even in the low light"
1"If the veil breathed, then"
ratio0.025
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The rain in East London didn't fall so much as it drifted, a fine, grey mist that clung to the brickwork of Brick Lane and turned the streetlights into blurred …"
1"Her fingers traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a rhythmic, absent-minded habit that surfaced whenever her mind drifted too far from the t…"
2"Her hands were steady, a testament to the cool-headedness that had served her through law school and the chaos of London, but her pulse was a frantic drum in he…"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, looking as though he had stepped out of a high-end editorial for a magazine that didn't exist in the human world."
4"The space between them felt charged, a physical weight that made the oxygen in the narrow hallway feel thin."
5"She felt the pull of him, that old, magnetic attraction that had once made her forget the dangers of his world."
6"He entered the room with a grace that felt predatory and elegant all at once."
7"She saw the fatigue behind his impeccable mask, the slight tension in his jaw that spoke of a man who had been fighting battles on two fronts."
8"The contact was electric, a jolt that traveled straight to her core, making the crescent scar on her wrist ache with a phantom heat."
9"The rain continued to lash against the window, the curry shop continued to hum below, and the world of shadows and light continued to tilt on its axis, but in t…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he replied, his expression unreadable"
1"she asked, her voice hardening"
2"she said, her voice trembling despite her best efforts"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.114
76.4444%