Run: 2026-05-10-01KR914Z61GQ260ZC0W33YA1QQ

Run Details

Duration:
6.8s
Cost:
$0.002508
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed, casting a sickly pallor over the Soho pavement. Inside, the air tasted of stale ale and lemon polish. Aurora wiped her forehead, the heat of the humid London night clinging to her skin. She pushed through the heavy oak door, her boots echoing against the floorboards. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a crystal tumbler, his movements rhythmic and steady. He glanced up, his hazel eyes flickering toward the street before settling on her, the faint glint of his silver signet ring catching the dim amber light. You’re late. The noodles will be cold, and the customer is already pacing. She set the insulated delivery bag onto the scarred wood. The Crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed—a phantom ache from a childhood that felt like another woman’s biography. Silas gestured toward a corner booth with a slight nod, his left knee locking with that familiar, hitching limp. She didn't move. A man sat in the shadows of the farthest booth, his face obscured by the brim of a leather hat. He nursed a whiskey, the amber liquid catching the low light as he swirled the glass. The man turned his head. The movement was slow, deliberate. His face was a map of hard living, far removed from the boy Rory remembered from the Cardiff summers. Sunlight hit his features as he stood. A jagged line of scar tissue ran from his temple down to his jaw, shattering the symmetry she once traced with her eyes. Rory. It’s been a lifetime. She gripped the strap of her bag until her knuckles blanched. The breath left her lungs in a sharp, jagged rush. Evan stood there, the boy who once promised the moon, now wearing a coat that looked like it had seen enough wars to settle the world. He didn't look like an abuser; he looked like a ghost. I thought the city was big enough to hide a mistake like you. She stepped back, the leather of her bag groaning under her fingers. Silas stopped his polishing, the rag draped motionless over his hand. The bar went quiet, save for the low thrum of the radiator. Evan stepped into the light, his presence heavy, suffocating. He didn't carry the arrogance of the Cardiff years. He carried a cold, hollow steel-edged stillness. Some mistakes don’t stay buried. They find their way back through the cracks in your life, seeking a bit of heat. She moved to the bar, sliding between Silas and the open space. The smell of cedar and gun oil clung to Evan. It wasn’t the scent of the boy who stole her father’s car in the dead of night. It was the scent of something finished. I’m not the girl who sits in the hallway waiting for the front door to open, Evan. Silas, tell him he’s trespassing. Silas didn't move. He rested his hands on the bar, his gaze drifting from Rory to the man in the corner. His signet ring shone like a threat. This establishment has rules, and your guest hasn't broken them yet. But if there’s a flicker of a problem, he’ll be on the sidewalk before the ice melts in that glass. Evan chuckled, a dry, rasping sound that failed to reach his eyes. He stopped a few feet from her, close enough that she could see the gray hairs peppering his temples. Time hadn't just passed; it had carved him out, leaving only the sharp edges. I didn't come here to cause a scene. I came to see if you were still running. You always had that look, didn't you, Rory? The one where you’re already halfway out the window before the argument even starts. She felt the weight of her choice to leave—the abandoned law school, the flight to London, the nights she spent shivering in the back room of this bar while Silas taught her how to hold her own. The regret wasn't in leaving; it was in the years she spent pretending he didn't dictate the rhythm of her pulse. I stopped running the moment I reached the train station three years ago. You’re just a ghost in a bar, Evan. Nothing more. She didn't look at him. She looked at the old, framed map of the London Underground on the wall behind him. The edges were cracking, yellowed by smoke. She touched the cool surface of a coin on the bar, spinning it. You changed your name. Laila. I heard it in the circles I travel in. You’re playing at something much bigger than the law clerk from Cardiff. He took another step, but she jabbed a finger toward the door, her eyes bright and dangerous as an incoming tide. Keep my name off your tongue. You don't have the stomach for the life I live now. You think you’re a predator because you can find a room, but you don't know the first thing about survival. You’re just a man with a bad reputation and a worse coat. Evan’s smile faltered. The facade of the hardened traveler slipped, revealing the flickering, insecure boy who had terrified her for so long. He reached out, his hand hovering, but she flinched, the motion instinctive and sharp. Did you come here to apologize? Because if you did, you’re in the wrong place. We don’t deal in pardons at The Raven’s Nest. Silas cleared his throat, the sound like gravel under a boot. He leaned in, his voice drops of lead in the thick air. The delivery is supposed to be at the embassy by midnight. You have twenty minutes, Rory. Don’t waste them on the dead. She grabbed the handle of her delivery bag. The leather felt firm, solid, a tether to the life she had built. She looked at Evan, really looked at him, and saw the utter insignificance of the past. He was a story that had already been told. I used to dream about you at night, hoping you’d show up just so I could see your face and realize you weren't the monster under the bed. You’re just a man. A pathetic, tired man. He blinked, stunned by the coldness in her voice. It wasn't hatred anymore; it was worse. It was indifference. She turned toward the exit, ignoring the way he stood paralyzed in the center of the bar. Don't let him out the back way, Silas. I don't want him knowing where I sleep. She pushed past him, the back of her coat brushing his sleeve. She felt nothing—no fear, no longing, just the steady, measured beat of her own heart. The night air hit her cold and damp, a relief against the stagnant warmth of the bar. She didn't look back to see him watching her go, to see the way he wilted under the heavy, watchful gaze of the spymaster behind the counter. She pulled her coat tighter, her steps rhythmic, purposeful, toward the neon blur of London.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"crystal"
2"rhythmic"
3"glint"
4"pulsed"
5"familiar"
6"traced"
7"flicker"
8"weight"
9"pulse"
10"stomach"
11"predator"
12"facade"
13"measured"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1167
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
London4
Crescent1
Rory5
Cardiff3
Silas9
Evan8
Underground1
You10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like another woman’s biography"
1"looked like it had seen enough wars to se"
2"looked like a ghost"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1167
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"had that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.9
std22.4
cv0.576
sampleLengths
097
113
287
359
45
558
613
760
821
946
1022
1128
1231
1345
1439
1558
1623
1741
1826
1921
2049
2136
2224
2323
2422
2546
2636
2736
2816
2986
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"is supposed"
1"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were still running"
1"were cracking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"The Crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed—a phantom ache from a childhood that felt like another woman’s biography."
1"He didn't look like an abuser; he looked like a ghost."
2"Time hadn't just passed; it had carved him out, leaving only the sharp edges."
3"She felt the weight of her choice to leave—the abandoned law school, the flight to London, the nights she spent shivering in the back room of this bar while Silas taught her how to hold her own."
4"The regret wasn't in leaving; it was in the years she spent pretending he didn't dictate the rhythm of her pulse."
5"It wasn't hatred anymore; it was worse."
6"She felt nothing—no fear, no longing, just the steady, measured beat of her own heart."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1171
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold, hollow steel-edged stillness."
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02305721605465414
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0025619128949615714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.79
std6.58
cv0.558
sampleLengths
017
110
215
313
415
527
62
711
810
919
1019
113
1220
1316
145
155
1619
177
1823
191
204
2111
2210
2326
2411
2513
2612
2711
2812
299
309
317
325
3316
3412
3510
3617
377
3817
395
403
4118
427
4311
4420
4512
4619
4714
488
499
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.26262626262626265
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences95
matches
0"She pushed through the heavy"
1"He glanced up, his hazel"
2"She set the insulated delivery"
3"She didn't move."
4"He nursed a whiskey, the"
5"His face was a map"
6"It’s been a lifetime."
7"She gripped the strap of"
8"He didn't look like an"
9"I thought the city was"
10"She stepped back, the leather"
11"He didn't carry the arrogance"
12"He carried a cold, hollow"
13"They find their way back"
14"She moved to the bar,"
15"It wasn’t the scent of"
16"It was the scent of"
17"I’m not the girl who"
18"He rested his hands on"
19"His signet ring shone like"
ratio0.579
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences95
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora wiped her forehead, the"
2"She pushed through the heavy"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"He glanced up, his hazel"
5"The noodles will be cold,"
6"She set the insulated delivery"
7"The Crescent scar on her"
8"Silas gestured toward a corner"
9"She didn't move."
10"A man sat in the"
11"He nursed a whiskey, the"
12"The man turned his head."
13"The movement was slow, deliberate."
14"His face was a map"
15"Sunlight hit his features as"
16"A jagged line of scar"
17"It’s been a lifetime."
18"She gripped the strap of"
19"The breath left her lungs"
ratio0.926
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Because if you did, you’re"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed—a phantom ache from a childhood that felt like another woman’s biography."
1"The facade of the hardened traveler slipped, revealing the flickering, insecure boy who had terrified her for so long."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8373%