Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91769Y5TSV5Y03ER1PV5F0

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.002872
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The triple deadbolts slid back with a metallic screech, each tumblr protesting the hour. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles white, bracing against the draft of the Brick Lane stairwell. When the heavy slab of oak swung inward, she did not find Eva. Lucien stood in the shadows of the landing. He leaned on the ivory handle of his cane, his charcoal suit absorbing what little light filtered from the hallway. One amber eye tracked the movement of her throat while the pitch-black void of the other seemed to drain the color from the room. He smelled of rain, expensive tobacco, and the ozone scent of a rift recently sealed. You hold your doors like a fortress, Aurora. Rory blocked the threshold, her shoulder pressed against the jamb. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the skin itching in his presence. The hallway light flickered, casting long, fractured shadows across the stacks of research notes piled near the door. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound between her ankles, letting out a sharp, inquisitive trill before recoiling from the cold aura Lucien brought with him. The neighborhood has standards, Lucien. I prefer mine locked. He stepped forward, forcing her to retreat into the cramped space. He moved with a predatory grace that turned the living room into a cage. He bypassed the sofa choked with scrolls and stopped by a waist-high stacks of books, leaning his cane against the edge of a mahogany desk. He looked at her, really looked at her, his expression a mask of bored calculation that failed to hide the tension in his jaw. I heard you were avoiding the underground circuit. It makes business difficult when the best courier in London develops a sudden distaste for employment. She shoved a stray pile of parchment off a chair and sat, crossing her legs to hide the trembling of her hands. The room felt smaller now, suffocated by the heat radiating from him. Every breath she took felt thick with his scent. I’m on sabbatical. Or maybe I just grew tired of delivering packages that leak ichor onto my boots. Lucien paced the length of the galley kitchen, his silhouette sharp against the wall of books. He stopped by the sink, tracing the rim of a chipped ceramic mug with a gloved finger. His movements were precise, infuriating in their confidence. He turned back, the amber eye catching the lamplight, turning liquid and gold. Sabbaticals are for people who have the luxury of time, yet here you are, living in a shoebox above a curry house, counting pennies. You left the firm in Marseille without a word, Aurora. You stopped answering the encrypted channels. Do you have any idea how much chaos one silent courier can cause in the trade? Rory picked up a fountain pen from the desk and snapped the cap on and off. The rhythm echoed the frantic beating of her heart. She glared at him, cataloging the silver threads in his platinum hair, the way he looked entirely out of place amidst her chaotic, messy life. I didn't leave because of the trade. I left because you decided my life was a casualty buffer for your latest information dump. Does your conscience ever prick you, or is that part of your heritage that was conveniently scrubbed away? He crossed the distance in two strides, looming over her chair. He didn't touch her, but the air between them vibrated with a static charge that made the hair on her arms stand up. He leaned down, placing a palm on the wall behind her head. He was close enough now that she could see the flecks of gold in his obsidian-dark eye. My conscience is a vestigial organ, as you are well aware. But the silence—that was calculated. It felt like an indictment. She looked up, pinning him with a gaze that refused to waver. She thought of the months in Cardiff, the stifling weight of her father’s expectations, and the subsequent ruin of her life in London when the past caught up to her. He had been a sharp, jagged edge in her world, providing the only clarity she had known before she realized that clarity came at a cost she could not afford to pay. You think too highly of your influence on my internal monologue. I just wanted to breathe for once without smelling fire and brimstone. He let out a short, hollow laugh that didn't reach his eyes. He leaned closer, his chin inches from her shoulder. The heat of him burned through her sweater, a steady, pulsing warmth that demanded a response. You breathe differently when I am near. Your pulse is a frantic thing, Aurora. It always has been. Even now, you are fighting the urge to tell me exactly how much you missed the friction of my presence. He reached out, his gloved fingers trailing along her jawline, barely brushing the skin. A jolt of electricity rippled through her, a memory of nights spent in the back of his study, the taste of wine and dangerous secrets. She leaned into the touch for a fraction of a heartbeat before wrenching her face away. She stood up, knocking the chair back, and paced toward the window, throwing it open to let the cool air of Brick Lane fill the room. We are finished with that, Lucien. You come here to talk shop, or you leave. I won't have you dredging up the past for your own amusement while you wait for your next contract. He moved to the window, his presence blocking out the streetlights below. He leaned his back against the frame, watching her with a mixture of irritation and sudden, raw hunger. The mask of the information broker slipped, exposing the jagged, messy edges of the man beneath. I don't come for contracts. I have a hundred couriers at my beck and call. I come because I find the silence of your absence deafening. He didn't wait for her to answer. He reached out and grabbed her wrist, his grip firm but careful of the scar near her pulse point. He pulled her toward him, the proximity stealing the air from her lungs. She looked up at him, caught between the urge to shove him out the door and the need to collapse against his chest. Tell me, Aurora. Was it worth it? The silence? The hiding? She opened her mouth to retort, to find some sharp defense that would slice through his arrogance, but the words died in her throat. His expression had shifted, the cold indifference replaced by an agonizing vulnerability she hadn't realized he was capable of showing. She lifted her free hand, pressing her palm against the stiff fabric of his lapel, feeling the steady, heavy thrum of his heart beneath the charcoal wool. It was lonely, she whispered, the confession tasting like ash on her tongue. It was the longest, coldest year of my life. He let out a sharp breath, his fingers sliding from her wrist to clasp her hand, drawing it closer to his chest. He stood perfectly still, his eyes searching hers with a intensity that felt like a physical weight. Then stop hiding. The world is coming for the artifacts in this flat, whether you want to believe it or not. Stay with me. Let me be the wall between you and the mess you’ve made. Rory looked at the books everywhere, the research that had become her entire existence. She looked at the man who had been both her ruin and her sanctuary. The tension snapped, leaving behind a hollow ache that only he could fill. I never needed a wall, Lucien. I needed you to stop treating me like an asset. He pressed his forehead against hers, the touch light, grounding. He was waiting, the usual bravado gone, replaced by the quiet, dangerous expectation of a man who knew he had crossed a boundary he couldn't retreat from. Consider me retired, then. I am merely a man standing in your parlor, looking for a way back in. She let out a shaky breath, looking at the door, the triple deadbolts standing silent guard against a world that suddenly felt too far away to matter. She turned back to him, her fingers curling into his coat. You're a fool. He smiled then, a genuine, crooked line that barely touched the corners of his mouth. I’ve been told that before, usually by you. But I’m a persistent one.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1424
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"amidst"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"looming"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count2
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"flickered"
2"fractured"
3"tension"
4"tracing"
5"echoed"
6"amidst"
7"chaotic"
8"looming"
9"vibrated"
10"silence"
11"calculated"
12"weight"
13"warmth"
14"pulse"
15"intensity"
16"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"was lonely"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1423
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It was lonely, she whispered, the confession tasting like ash on her tongue."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1423
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Aurora4
Lucien6
London2
Marseille1
Cardiff1
Rory4
You7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical weight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1423
matches(empty)
71.43% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"packages that leak"
1"is that part"
2"realized that clarity"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean38.46
std21.13
cv0.55
sampleLengths
046
167
28
367
49
574
624
743
818
954
1056
1150
1241
1363
1421
1574
1623
1737
1838
1981
2034
2146
2226
2362
2411
2571
2622
2739
2836
2941
3016
3137
3219
3338
343
3515
3613
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs249
matches
0"were avoiding"
1"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences105
ratio0.01
matches
0"But the silence—that was calculated."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1427
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02592852137351086
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.011212333566923615
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.55
std7.06
cv0.521
sampleLengths
014
119
213
38
420
524
615
78
810
915
1018
1124
125
134
1411
1514
1625
1724
188
1916
2022
2112
229
233
2415
2516
2617
278
2813
2924
3010
316
3216
3316
349
3525
367
3716
3818
3911
4023
4112
4217
4311
445
455
4612
4730
4832
4911
29.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.2761904761904762
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners29
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Then stop hiding."
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences103
matches
0"He leaned on the ivory"
1"He smelled of rain, expensive"
2"You hold your doors like"
3"She traced the crescent scar"
4"I prefer mine locked."
5"He stepped forward, forcing her"
6"He moved with a predatory"
7"He bypassed the sofa choked"
8"He looked at her, really"
9"I heard you were avoiding"
10"It makes business difficult when"
11"She shoved a stray pile"
12"I’m on sabbatical."
13"He stopped by the sink,"
14"His movements were precise, infuriating"
15"He turned back, the amber"
16"You left the firm in"
17"You stopped answering the encrypted"
18"She glared at him, cataloging"
19"I didn't leave because of"
ratio0.68
27.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences103
matches
0"The triple deadbolts slid back"
1"Rory gripped the edge of"
2"Lucien stood in the shadows"
3"He leaned on the ivory"
4"He smelled of rain, expensive"
5"You hold your doors like"
6"Rory blocked the threshold, her"
7"She traced the crescent scar"
8"The hallway light flickered, casting"
9"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
10"The neighborhood has standards, Lucien."
11"I prefer mine locked."
12"He stepped forward, forcing her"
13"He moved with a predatory"
14"He bypassed the sofa choked"
15"He looked at her, really"
16"I heard you were avoiding"
17"It makes business difficult when"
18"She shoved a stray pile"
19"The room felt smaller now,"
ratio0.864
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Even now, you are fighting"
ratio0.01
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound between her ankles, letting out a sharp, inquisitive trill before recoiling from the cold aura Lucien brought with him."
1"Sabbaticals are for people who have the luxury of time, yet here you are, living in a shoebox above a curry house, counting pennies."
2"The heat of him burned through her sweater, a steady, pulsing warmth that demanded a response."
3"She lifted her free hand, pressing her palm against the stiff fabric of his lapel, feeling the steady, heavy thrum of his heart beneath the charcoal wool."
4"He let out a sharp breath, his fingers sliding from her wrist to clasp her hand, drawing it closer to his chest."
5"He stood perfectly still, his eyes searching hers with a intensity that felt like a physical weight."
6"She looked at the man who had been both her ruin and her sanctuary."
7"He was waiting, the usual bravado gone, replaced by the quiet, dangerous expectation of a man who knew he had crossed a boundary he couldn't retreat from."
8"I am merely a man standing in your parlor, looking for a way back in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.5600%