Run: 2026-05-10-01KR918APDTSB0KT8Z2QYYGYFX

Run Details

Model:: Gemini 3.1 Flash Lite
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:: 6.6s
Cost:: $0.002496
Provider:: Google AI Studio

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
100.00%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
95.43%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
17.81%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
81.63%	Filter word density	(details)
100.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
83.33%	Name drop frequency	(details)
0.00%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
100.00%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
100.00%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
95.24%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
100.00%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
60.00%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
0.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
82.86%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
38.57%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
71.43%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Technical jargon density	(details)
100.00%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
100.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
77.5434%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert fiction writer.

Always keep the following rules in mind:
- Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang.
- Write in active voice
- Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle.
- Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
- Convey events and story through dialogue.
- Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety.
- Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech
- Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself.
- Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
- Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"

When writing text:
- NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely.
- NEVER end with foreshadowing.
- NEVER write further than what I prompt you with.
- AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions.
- STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card">
  <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor>
  <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height>
  <age>ageless</age>
  <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form>
  <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice>
  <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description>
  <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle">
  <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor>
  <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair>
  <height>5'5"</height>
  <age>300 years old</age>
  <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance>
  <speech>speaks in riddles</speech>
  <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints>
  <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion>
  <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description>
  <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony">
  <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler>
  <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor>
  <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description>
</location>

<location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)">
  <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation>
  <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones>
  <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior>
  <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora>
  <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description>
</location>

<item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas">
  <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor>
  <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial>
  <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size>
  <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior>
  <glow>faint inner glow</glow>
  <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description>
</item>

<item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts">
  <material>moonsilver</material>
  <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape>
  <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature>
  <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow>
  <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power>
  <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo>
  <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description>
</item>

<lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology">
  <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect>
  <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance>
  <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring>
  <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description>
</lore>
</codex>

Continue the story using the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre.

A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

Aurora brushed a stray lock of black hair behind her ear, her left hand coming to rest instinctively over the pulse point of her wrist. The crescent scar prickled, a phantom heat blooming beneath the skin. Beside her, the shadow that was Nyx pulled itself together from a nebulous smear into a towering, jagged silhouette. The violet glow of their eyes cut through the oppressive, thick air of the threshold. They stood at the edge of the Dymasian expanse, a realm that smelled aggressively of overripe fruit, roasted spices, and cloying, caramelized nectar.

We need to keep moving. The air here tastes like a fever dream and my lungs are already beginning to protest.

Rory loosened her collar, the amber-hued sky above casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to crawl across the landscape of their own volition. The ground beneath their boots felt spongy, covered in a moss that pulsed with a faint, rhythmic heartbeat. Every step sent up tiny, shimmering spores that drifted like embers, illuminating the path ahead.

The barrier between worlds is thin here, almost brittle. Do not touch the flora unless you want to lose your grip on your own form.

Nyx gestured toward a grove of trees that bled thick, golden sap from gashes in their bark. The scent grew sharper, saccharine enough to make Rory’s teeth ache. She reached for the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her shirt, feeling a familiar, steady thrum against her chest. It provided a grounding weight, a sharp contrast to the dizzying decadence of the atmosphere. 

They pushed deeper into the overgrown corridor, where vines heavy with fruit the size of dinner plates hung low, dripping juice that hissed as it struck the dark soil. Rory sidestepped a patch of iridescent mushrooms that chattered with tiny, clicking teeth as she passed. She kept the Fae-forged blade drawn. The moonsilver metal bit into the humid air, trailing a ribbon of frost that resisted the warmth of the Dymasian sky.

Look at the canopy. That is not sunlight filtering through the leaves.

Rory shielded her eyes, squinting at the amber radiance. High above, suspended in the tangled branches, hung pulsating orbs of liquid light, swaying in a wind that Rory could not feel. The entire forest hummed. It was a low, guttural vibration that vibrated through the marrow of her bones, stripping away the silence of the mundane world.

It sounds like a dinner party held in a cathedral. Everything is consuming everything else, even the light. 

Nyx glided over the uneven ground, their feet never quite making contact with the pulsating moss. They stopped before a clearing dominated by a slab of black volcanic rock, etched with deep, glowing runes that seemed to shift and reform every time Rory blinked. 

Isolde never mentioned the architecture. She only spoke of the hunger.

Rory stepped closer to the slab, the heat from the stone radiating outward like a furnace door left ajar. She caught her reflection in the dark, glassy surface of the table. Her eyes appeared unnaturally bright, her face a pale mask against the rich, decadent backdrop of the gluttonous realm. She felt the sudden, irrational urge to reach out and peel a piece of fruit from a nearby branch, to taste the cloying sweetness that promised to satisfy a craving she did not know she possessed. 

The pendant jolted against her skin, a sharp, searing bite that shattered the trance. She staggered back, the blade of her dagger flared with sudden, brilliant luminescence.

Don't look too long at the geometry of the stone. It catches the mind like a hook.

Nyx raised a hand, weaving a protective shroud of darkness that dampened the oppressive hum of the clearing. The shadows pulled tight against Rory’s shoulders, a cold blanket that helped settle the frantic thumping of her heart. She gripped the pommel of her weapon firmer, her knuckles white. The environment reacted to the display of power; the chattering mushrooms went silent, and the golden sap climbing the trees halted its downward sluggish drip.

This place is waiting for something. It’s not just an ecosystem; it’s an invitation. 

She turned a slow circle, scanning the perimeters of the clearing. Exotic flowers with petals that resembled raw, marbled meat unfolded in the amber light, offering up scents of ginger and scorched sugar. It was beautiful, sickeningly so, a masterwork of excess that sought to drown the senses in pleasure until the spirit simply withered away. 

I was told the Prince of this realm values a good guest, but I have no intention of becoming the main course. 

Nyx drifted toward the edge of an orchard where the trees were laden with translucent, pulsing globes of fruit. They reached out a shadowy claw, stopping just inches from a sphere that glowed like a dying ember. The moment the Shade’s presence touched the fruit, the entire tree shivered, its leaves turning a bruised, sickly purple. 

The path forward is behind the cascade of sap. We have to move before the master of this house notices the imbalance we bring.

Rory followed their gaze toward a waterfall of golden fluid tumbling from a high ridge, defying gravity as it flowed upward into the amber sky. Beyond the curtain of liquid, a shimmering distortion betrayed the presence of another doorway, a rift point that looked like a jagged tear in the fabric of the atmosphere. The Veil here was frayed, worn thin by the sheer weight of indulgence that permeated every inch of Dymas.

If I walk through that, will I still be walking on Earth?

Rory adjusted her grip, her eyes locked on the distortion. The air chilled significantly, the scent of spice replaced by the sharp, metallic tang of ozone. She realized the Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it had become a rock of ice against her chest, drawing heat from the very environment. 

There is only one way to find out. Keep your blade ready; the Wardens don't watch these borders because they are empty. 

Rory took the first step toward the liquid wall, her boots crunching on the remnants of fallen, crystallized petals. The forest seemed to lean in, the trees pressing their heavy, fruit-laden branches closer as if trying to bar their passage. The humming returned, louder now, a dissonant chord that resonated with the blade in her hand. She ignored the encroaching vines, focused entirely on the shimmering tear in the air, pushing past the sensory overload of the realm. 

Hold the line, Nyx. Whatever is on the other side, we walk through it together.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

100.00%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags

95.43%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount

1095

totalAiIsmAdverbs

found

adverb	"very"
count	1

highlights

"very"

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

17.81%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

1095

totalAiIsms

found

word	"pulse"
count	1

word	"oppressive"
count	2

word	"pulsed"
count	1

word	"rhythmic"
count	1

word	"familiar"
count	1

word	"weight"
count	2

word	"warmth"
count	1

word	"vibrated"
count	1

word	"silence"
count	1

word	"etched"
count	1

word	"searing"
count	1

word	"shattered"
count	1

word	"scanning"
count	1

word	"chilled"
count	1

word	"crystallized"
count	1

word	"resonated"
count	1

highlights

0	"pulse"
1	"oppressive"
2	"pulsed"
3	"rhythmic"
4	"familiar"
5	"weight"
6	"warmth"
7	"vibrated"
8	"silence"
9	"etched"
10	"searing"
11	"shattered"
12	"scanning"
13	"chilled"
14	"crystallized"
15	"resonated"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches	0
maxInWindow	0
found	(empty)
highlights	(empty)

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells	0
narrationSentences	70
matches	(empty)

81.63%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"seemed to"

100.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences	70
gibberishSentences	0
adjustedGibberishSentences	0
longSentenceCount	0
runOnParagraphCount	0
giantParagraphCount	0
wordSaladCount	0
repetitionLoopCount	0
controlTokenCount	0
repeatedSegmentCount	0
maxSentenceWordsSeen	36
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans	0
markdownWords	0
totalWords	1095
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	0
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

83.33%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

wordCount

1095

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

worstName

"Rory"

maxWindowNameDensity

2.5

worstWindowName

"Rory"

discoveredNames

Nyx	6
Dymasian	2
Rory	11
Heartstone	2
Fae-forged	1
Prince	1
Shade	1
Veil	1
Dymas	1
Earth	1
Wardens	1

persons

0	"Nyx"
1	"Rory"
2	"Shade"
3	"Wardens"

places

(empty)

globalScore

0.998

windowScore

0.833

0.00%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"shadows that seemed to crawl across the landscape of their own volition"
1	"appeared unnaturally bright her face a pale mask against the rich, decadent backdrop of the gluttonous realm"
2	"looked like a jagged tear in the fabric o"
3	"as if trying to bar their passage"

100.00%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches	0
per1kWords	0
wordCount	1095
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount	0
totalSentences	70
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

42.12

std

25.91

0.615

sampleLengths

0	93
1	21
2	56
3	25
4	61
5	72
6	12
7	57
8	18
9	44
10	11
11	86
12	27
13	17
14	73
15	14
16	56
17	22
18	56
19	24
20	73
21	12
22	50
23	22
24	78
25	15

95.24%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"was told"
1	"was frayed"

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount	0
totalVerbs	184
matches	(empty)

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.057

matches

0	"The environment reacted to the display of power; the chattering mushrooms went silent, and the golden sap climbing the trees halted its downward sluggish drip."
1	"It’s not just an ecosystem; it’s an invitation."
2	"She realized the Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it had become a rock of ice against her chest, drawing heat from the very environment."
3	"Keep your blade ready; the Wardens don't watch these borders because they are empty."

100.00%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount	1098
adjectiveStacks	0
stackExamples	(empty)
adverbCount	30
adverbRatio	0.0273224043715847
lyAdverbCount	10
lyAdverbRatio	0.009107468123861567

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	70
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

15.64

std

6.96

0.445

sampleLengths

0	25
1	11
2	19
3	15
4	23
5	5
6	16
7	23
8	18
9	15
10	9
11	16
12	17
13	11
14	18
15	15
16	29
17	16
18	6
19	21
20	4
21	8
22	9
23	22
24	4
25	22
26	10
27	8
28	16
29	28
30	5
31	6
32	19
33	12
34	19
35	36
36	14
37	13
38	10
39	7
40	18
41	19
42	11
43	25
44	6
45	8
46	11
47	22
48	23
49	22

60.00%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	3
diversityRatio	0.38571428571428573
totalSentences	70
uniqueOpeners	27

0.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount	0
totalSentences	70
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

82.86%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"They stood at the edge"
1	"We need to keep moving."
2	"She reached for the Heartstone"
3	"It provided a grounding weight,"
4	"They pushed deeper into the"
5	"She kept the Fae-forged blade"
6	"It was a low, guttural"
7	"It sounds like a dinner"
8	"They stopped before a clearing"
9	"She only spoke of the"
10	"She caught her reflection in"
11	"Her eyes appeared unnaturally bright,"
12	"She felt the sudden, irrational"
13	"She staggered back, the blade"
14	"It catches the mind like"
15	"She gripped the pommel of"
16	"It’s not just an ecosystem;"
17	"She turned a slow circle,"
18	"It was beautiful, sickeningly so,"
19	"I was told the Prince"

ratio

0.343

38.57%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Aurora brushed a stray lock"
1	"The crescent scar prickled, a"
2	"The violet glow of their"
3	"They stood at the edge"
4	"We need to keep moving."
5	"The air here tastes like"
6	"Rory loosened her collar, the"
7	"The ground beneath their boots"
8	"Every step sent up tiny,"
9	"The barrier between worlds is"
10	"Nyx gestured toward a grove"
11	"The scent grew sharper, saccharine"
12	"She reached for the Heartstone"
13	"It provided a grounding weight,"
14	"They pushed deeper into the"
15	"Rory sidestepped a patch of"
16	"She kept the Fae-forged blade"
17	"The moonsilver metal bit into"
18	"That is not sunlight filtering"
19	"Rory shielded her eyes, squinting"

ratio

0.843

71.43%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"If I walk through that,"

ratio

0.014

0.00%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"Beside her, the shadow that was Nyx pulled itself together from a nebulous smear into a towering, jagged silhouette."
1	"They stood at the edge of the Dymasian expanse, a realm that smelled aggressively of overripe fruit, roasted spices, and cloying, caramelized nectar."
2	"Rory loosened her collar, the amber-hued sky above casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to crawl across the landscape of their own volition."
3	"Every step sent up tiny, shimmering spores that drifted like embers, illuminating the path ahead."
4	"They pushed deeper into the overgrown corridor, where vines heavy with fruit the size of dinner plates hung low, dripping juice that hissed as it struck the dar…"
5	"Rory sidestepped a patch of iridescent mushrooms that chattered with tiny, clicking teeth as she passed."
6	"It was a low, guttural vibration that vibrated through the marrow of her bones, stripping away the silence of the mundane world."
7	"She felt the sudden, irrational urge to reach out and peel a piece of fruit from a nearby branch, to taste the cloying sweetness that promised to satisfy a crav…"
8	"The pendant jolted against her skin, a sharp, searing bite that shattered the trance."
9	"Nyx raised a hand, weaving a protective shroud of darkness that dampened the oppressive hum of the clearing."
10	"The shadows pulled tight against Rory’s shoulders, a cold blanket that helped settle the frantic thumping of her heart."
11	"Exotic flowers with petals that resembled raw, marbled meat unfolded in the amber light, offering up scents of ginger and scorched sugar."
12	"It was beautiful, sickeningly so, a masterwork of excess that sought to drown the senses in pleasure until the spirit simply withered away."
13	"Beyond the curtain of liquid, a shimmering distortion betrayed the presence of another doorway, a rift point that looked like a jagged tear in the fabric of the…"
14	"The Veil here was frayed, worn thin by the sheer weight of indulgence that permeated every inch of Dymas."
15	"She realized the Heartstone was no longer pulsing; it had become a rock of ice against her chest, drawing heat from the very environment."
16	"The forest seemed to lean in, the trees pressing their heavy, fruit-laden branches closer as if trying to bar their passage."
17	"The humming returned, louder now, a dissonant chord that resonated with the blade in her hand."

100.00%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags	0
uselessAdditionCount	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

77.5434%