Run: 2026-05-10-01KR918NPNVBHC65Z4DNPRH25R

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.001137
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped between the two jagged oak standing stones. The humid air of Richmond Park vanished. A sudden, biting chill clamped onto her skin, smelling of crushed mint and oxidized iron. She paused, the gravel of the park path replaced by a carpet of iridescent moss that dampened the sound of her boots. Moonlight bathed the clearing in a bruised purple hue. Wildflowers, vibrant and fleshy, pulsed with a rhythmic light. They bloomed in shades of neon gold and bruised crimson, their petals curling and uncurling like breathing lungs. The Heartstone Pendant pressed against her collarbone. The deep crimson gem radiated a steady, thrumming warmth. Its glow synced with the beat of her heart. "Right. You want me to go deeper." She tightened the strap of her bag and moved toward the center of the grove. The silence held a physical weight. No crickets chirped. No wind stirred the heavy, silver-leaved branches of the surrounding canopy. The world felt vacuum-sealed. Rory checked her watch. The second hand shuddered, ticked backward twice, then spun in a frantic circle before snapping still. She frowned and shook her wrist. The watch remained frozen. A sharp snap echoed from the thicket to her left. She froze. Her blue eyes scanned the underbrush. The iridescent moss shimmered, reflecting a light that didn't come from the moon. A shape shifted behind a cluster of translucent ferns—a sliver of something pale and elongated. "Who's there?" The silence returned, heavier than before. Rory shifted her weight, and the pendant flared. The warmth turned into a searing heat, signaling a proximity she didn't understand. She looked back at the standing stones. The boundary markers looked distant now, the gap between them narrowed to a sliver. The geometry of the grove had shifted. She turned away from the exit and pushed through a wall of weeping willow branches. The leaves felt like damp skin against her cheeks. Another sound. A wet, sliding noise, like a heavy piece of meat being dragged over stone. It came from above. Rory tilted her head back. The canopy of silver leaves knit together, blocking out the stars. In the gaps between the foliage, something pale clung to the branches. It lacked a face, possessing only a smooth, porcelain surface where features should be. It mirrored her posture, tilting its head at the exact angle she did. She leaped back, her boot catching on a protruding root. She hit the moss with a thud that sounded too loud, like a hammer striking an anvil. The creature didn't drop. It slid. It moved with a fluid, boneless grace, flowing down the trunk of the tree. It didn't make a sound as it hit the ground. "What do you want?" The entity stopped ten feet away. It stood seven feet tall, its limbs spindly and translucent. Through its skin, Rory could see a network of pulsing, black veins that mirrored the root system of the grove. The creature opened a slit in its porcelain face. No voice emerged, but the air vibrated. It produced a sound—a perfect, distorted recording of her own voice from seconds ago. "Who's there?" Rory scrambled to her feet. She gripped the silver chain of the pendant. The gem pulsed violently now, casting long, dancing shadows across the moss. The creature stepped forward. It didn't walk; it glided, its feet never fully leaving the ground. As it moved, the flowers beneath its path withered instantly, turning into gray ash. "Stay back." "Stay back." The mimicry was flawless, but the pitch shifted, dropping an octave into a guttural growl. Rory backed away, her eyes darting for an escape. The weeping willows had closed ranks behind her. The path she had taken vanished, replaced by a wall of thorny, obsidian-colored vines. The creature tilted its head again. It began to stretch. Its arms elongated, the joints popping with the sound of dry wood snapping. It reached out, its fingers tapering into needles. She felt a vibration in the ground. To her right, another pale shape emerged from the iridescent ferns. Then another from the shadows of the standing stones. Three of them. They didn't attack. They simply circled, maintaining a precise distance, their porcelain faces blank and expectant. The Heartstone Pendant grew hot enough to blister. Rory ripped it from her neck, the silver chain snapping. She held the crimson gem aloft. The light it emitted pushed back the purple gloom, carving a sphere of sanctuary around her. The creatures hissed. The sound wasn't vocal; it was the sound of steam escaping a valve. They recoiled from the red light, their translucent skin bubbling where the glow touched them. "You don't like the stone." "You don't like the stone." One of the entities lunged. It moved faster than a human eye could track, a blur of white and black veins. Rory swung the pendant. The gem collided with the creature's chest. A shockwave of heat blasted outward, throwing the entity backward into a cluster of glowing lilies. The flowers erupted in a flash of white fire, consuming the creature in a silent, heatless flame. The other two stopped. They didn't flee. They began to vibrate. The vibration grew into a hum that rattled Rory's teeth and made her vision blur. She looked down at the pendant. The crimson light was fading, the warmth receding into a dull lukewarm temperature. The gem was dimming. The creatures resumed their glide. Their movements were synchronized now, a choreographed dance of predation. They closed the circle, inch by inch. Rory turned and sprinted toward the remaining gap in the vines. The obsidian thorns tore at her clothes, slicing thin lines into her arms. She didn't slow down. Behind her, the humming grew louder, merging into a single, deafening note. She reached the standing stones, but they were no longer stones. They had grown, twisting into towering pillars of calcified bone. The exit to Richmond Park was a pinprick of light, a mile away across a landscape that had stretched and warped. A pale hand clamped onto her shoulder. The grip was ice-cold, freezing the fabric of her jacket. Rory spun, swinging her bag. The heavy contents slammed into the creature's face, cracking the porcelain. A thick, black liquid leaked from the fracture, smelling of old graves. The creature didn't flinch. It leaned in, its faceless head inches from hers. The slit in its face opened wide. "Who's there?" The voice wasn't hers anymore. It was the voice of someone she hadn't heard in years. It was Evan.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count4
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"flawless"
count1
15
word"gloom"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
17
word"synchronized"
count1
18
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulsed"
2"rhythmic"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"scanned"
8"shimmered"
9"searing"
10"porcelain"
11"vibrated"
12"perfect"
13"dancing"
14"flawless"
15"gloom"
16"sanctuary"
17"synchronized"
18"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1088
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1057
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Rory12
Evan1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.932
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like damp skin against her cheeks"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1088
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.18
std14.59
cv0.603
sampleLengths
053
136
225
37
439
530
610
736
82
96
1049
1124
1220
1355
1427
1530
164
1736
1830
192
2025
2130
222
232
2415
2531
2631
2746
2840
2931
305
315
3221
3344
3426
3523
3622
3728
3812
3942
4017
4128
4220
432
4419
99.05% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"being dragged"
1"were synchronized"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was fading"
1"was dimming"
49.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences122
ratio0.033
matches
0"A shape shifted behind a cluster of translucent ferns—a sliver of something pale and elongated."
1"It produced a sound—a perfect, distorted recording of her own voice from seconds ago."
2"It didn't walk; it glided, its feet never fully leaving the ground."
3"The sound wasn't vocal; it was the sound of steam escaping a valve."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1063
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavy, silver-leaved branches"
1"thorny, obsidian-colored vines."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.022577610536218252
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005644402634054563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean8.92
std4.69
cv0.526
sampleLengths
09
17
215
322
49
59
618
77
89
99
107
1115
126
133
1411
154
164
1716
186
194
2010
212
226
2313
2415
252
266
278
2813
297
3014
317
3215
339
342
3514
364
375
3811
3912
4014
4113
4210
4317
444
452
4614
4710
484
496
33.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.21311475409836064
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners26
30.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then another from the shadows"
ratio0.009
78.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences110
matches
0"She paused, the gravel of"
1"They bloomed in shades of"
2"Its glow synced with the"
3"She tightened the strap of"
4"She frowned and shook her"
5"Her blue eyes scanned the"
6"She looked back at the"
7"She turned away from the"
8"It came from above."
9"It lacked a face, possessing"
10"It mirrored her posture, tilting"
11"She leaped back, her boot"
12"She hit the moss with"
13"It moved with a fluid,"
14"It didn't make a sound"
15"It stood seven feet tall,"
16"It produced a sound—a perfect,"
17"She gripped the silver chain"
18"It didn't walk; it glided,"
19"It began to stretch."
ratio0.355
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences110
matches
0"Rory stepped between the two"
1"The humid air of Richmond"
2"A sudden, biting chill clamped"
3"She paused, the gravel of"
4"Moonlight bathed the clearing in"
5"Wildflowers, vibrant and fleshy, pulsed"
6"They bloomed in shades of"
7"The Heartstone Pendant pressed against"
8"The deep crimson gem radiated"
9"Its glow synced with the"
10"She tightened the strap of"
11"The silence held a physical"
12"The world felt vacuum-sealed."
13"Rory checked her watch."
14"The second hand shuddered, ticked"
15"She frowned and shook her"
16"The watch remained frozen."
17"A sharp snap echoed from"
18"Her blue eyes scanned the"
19"The iridescent moss shimmered, reflecting"
ratio0.9
45.45% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"To her right, another pale"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She paused, the gravel of the park path replaced by a carpet of iridescent moss that dampened the sound of her boots."
1"The iridescent moss shimmered, reflecting a light that didn't come from the moon."
2"The vibration grew into a hum that rattled Rory's teeth and made her vision blur."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2338%