| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1090 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1090 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "porcelain" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "dancing" | | 14 | "flawless" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "sanctuary" | | 17 | "synchronized" | | 18 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1088 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 1057 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.932 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like damp skin against her cheeks" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1088 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 24.18 | | std | 14.59 | | cv | 0.603 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 19 |
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| 99.05% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "were synchronized" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "was fading" | | 1 | "was dimming" |
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| 49.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "A shape shifted behind a cluster of translucent ferns—a sliver of something pale and elongated." | | 1 | "It produced a sound—a perfect, distorted recording of her own voice from seconds ago." | | 2 | "It didn't walk; it glided, its feet never fully leaving the ground." | | 3 | "The sound wasn't vocal; it was the sound of steam escaping a valve." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1063 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, silver-leaved branches" | | 1 | "thorny, obsidian-colored vines." |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.022577610536218252 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005644402634054563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 8.92 | | std | 4.69 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 33.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.21311475409836064 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 30.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Then another from the shadows" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 78.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the gravel of" | | 1 | "They bloomed in shades of" | | 2 | "Its glow synced with the" | | 3 | "She tightened the strap of" | | 4 | "She frowned and shook her" | | 5 | "Her blue eyes scanned the" | | 6 | "She looked back at the" | | 7 | "She turned away from the" | | 8 | "It came from above." | | 9 | "It lacked a face, possessing" | | 10 | "It mirrored her posture, tilting" | | 11 | "She leaped back, her boot" | | 12 | "She hit the moss with" | | 13 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 14 | "It didn't make a sound" | | 15 | "It stood seven feet tall," | | 16 | "It produced a sound—a perfect," | | 17 | "She gripped the silver chain" | | 18 | "It didn't walk; it glided," | | 19 | "It began to stretch." |
| | ratio | 0.355 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between the two" | | 1 | "The humid air of Richmond" | | 2 | "A sudden, biting chill clamped" | | 3 | "She paused, the gravel of" | | 4 | "Moonlight bathed the clearing in" | | 5 | "Wildflowers, vibrant and fleshy, pulsed" | | 6 | "They bloomed in shades of" | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant pressed against" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem radiated" | | 9 | "Its glow synced with the" | | 10 | "She tightened the strap of" | | 11 | "The silence held a physical" | | 12 | "The world felt vacuum-sealed." | | 13 | "Rory checked her watch." | | 14 | "The second hand shuddered, ticked" | | 15 | "She frowned and shook her" | | 16 | "The watch remained frozen." | | 17 | "A sharp snap echoed from" | | 18 | "Her blue eyes scanned the" | | 19 | "The iridescent moss shimmered, reflecting" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "To her right, another pale" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the gravel of the park path replaced by a carpet of iridescent moss that dampened the sound of her boots." | | 1 | "The iridescent moss shimmered, reflecting a light that didn't come from the moon." | | 2 | "The vibration grew into a hum that rattled Rory's teeth and made her vision blur." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |