Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91DBJ7TB84FC4BW5DRVS5X

Run Details

Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.003064
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park possessed a density that pressed against Aurora’s eardrums, a thick, stagnant quality that turned the simple act of breathing into a chore. She adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Heartstone Pendant resting against her sternum like a live coal. Even through the layers of her wool coat, the stone burned. Its faint, crimson rhythm accelerated, syncing with the frantic hammer of her own heart. She stood before the ancient oak standing stones. They loomed as black, jagged teeth against the bruised purple of the night sky, biting into the horizon line. Inside the perimeter, the wildflowers stood unnaturally tall, their petals shimmering with a phosphorescence that mocked the dim glow of the London outskirts. "Silas said this place didn't exist for the maps." The silence that followed her voice wasn't natural. It contained a hollow, ringing quality, as if the grove itself swallowed sound to study it. A cluster of brambles nearby rustled, far too heavy for the slight breeze. She narrowed her eyes, straining against the shadows that seemed to congregate around the base of the stones. Motion flickered at the periphery of her vision—a jagged shift in the geometry of the oaks—but when she snapped her head toward the disturbance, nothing remained except for the swaying of dark, spindly branches. She stepped over the threshold. The temperature plummeted. Her breath bloomed in a jagged white cloud before her face. Beneath her boots, the earth felt spongy and wrong, giving way with a wet, sucking sound that echoed far too loudly in the stillness. She tightened her grip on the strap of her bag and moved toward the center of the clearing. The Heartstone pulse intensified, a rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through her teeth. She pulled it from underneath her collar. The crimson surface bled light into the dark, casting long, distorted shadows that danced like marionettes against the ancient rock. "I am only here for the boundary markings." A low, guttural vibration emanated from the ground, shivering up through the soles of her shoes and settling into the marrow of her bones. It wasn't quite a growl; it resembled the groan of tectonic plates shifting miles beneath the surface. Aurora froze. The air grew heavy with the sharp, metallic tang of ozone. The shadows cast by the standing stones elongated, thinning out, stretching toward her feet like grasping fingers. She scanned the perimeter. The grove was no longer a simple clearing. The oak trees seemed to have migrated, closing the gap behind her, tightening the circle of stone until the sky appeared through a constricted, jagged aperture. "Who is there?" The wind kicked up, violent and sudden, whipping her black hair across her vision. It didn't howl through the trees; it whistled, a shrill, melodic tone that rose and fell like a funeral dirge. She reached for the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, rubbing the skin as she often did when her logic faltered. Her mind ticked through the possibilities. A trick of the, a shift in the local magnetic field, a hallucination brought on by dehydration. None of it eased the prickle of static climbing the back of her neck. She took another step, and the ground hummed in response, a discordant note that made her drop the pendant. It didn't land in the dirt. It hovered an inch above the soil, its light spinning, painting the ground in concentric circles of deep, bruised red. "I don't play these games." From the darkness between two stones, a shape condensed. It possessed the suggestion of a bipedal form, yet its edges frayed into smoke and vine. It stood seven feet tall, its movements jerky and uncoordinated, the way a spider skitters across a ceiling. It didn't have a face, only a smooth, pale surface where features should be. It tilted its head, a rhythmic cracking of wood on wood sounding as the neck moved. Aurora backed away, her boots scraping over dry leaves that crunched with the sound of snapping bone. She didn't turn. To turn was to acknowledge the terror. She kept her eyes on the thing, watching it shift and blur. It didn't rush. It simply existed in the space she vacated, consuming the air behind her as she moved. The temperature dropped further, forming a thin crust of frost over her knuckles. "Leave me be." The entity didn't speak, but a sound erupted from its chest—a wet, bubbling rasp that sounded remarkably like her own voice, stripped of its inflection. It mimicked the cadence of her earlier question, layering the output over a chorus of distant, weeping whispers. The sound didn't come from the entity alone; it seemed to leach out of the stones themselves, vibrating from the very atmosphere. The Heartstone pulsed, turning a blinding violet that forced her to shield her eyes. The light caught the entity, exposing the impossible reality underneath its surface. Inside the shifting smoke, thousands of tiny, lidless eyes blinked in unison, a shimmering field of white spheres buried within the dark substance. They swiveled toward her simultaneously, an overwhelming focus that stripped away her defenses. She stumbled, her back finding the cold, moss-covered grit of a standing stone. The stone felt warm to the touch, alive with a faint, throbbing rhythm that matched the Heartstone’s frantic heartbeat. The entity stepped closer, its height distorting, shrinking and expanding as it navigated the space. It exuded an aroma of rotted lilies and ozone, a scent so thick it coated the back of her throat with a film of oil. "Why are you following me?" The entity reached out. Its hand was a cluster of gnarled, blackened roots that ended in sharp, obsidian points. They didn't touch her skin. They hovered inches away, cold and hungry. She could feel the draft radiating from them, a freezing vacuum that threatened to draw the moisture right out of her pores. She stood perfectly still, her ribs aching from the pressure of the surrounding darkness. The entity’s features began to cycle through familiar faces: the sharp, angular jaw of her father; the soft, worried brow of her mother; the cruel smirk of the man who had driven her to London. Each visage held the same expression—a look of profound, hollow despair. They didn't blink. They stared through her, as if she were a ghost haunting their reality. "I see what you are doing." The entity mimicked her tone again, but this time, the volume increased, the sound slamming into the standing stones until they creaked. A crack raced down the center of the stone behind her, hairline and white, spilling a strange, golden ichor that hissed as it hit the grass. The ground pitched beneath her. She felt the gravity shifting, pulling her toward the center of the clearing, toward the hovering, violent light of the Heartstone. Everything in the grove moved toward the center. The wildflowers leaned inward, their stems snapping under the tension. The tall, ancient oaks bent until their crowns touched, forming a roof of tangled canopy that blotted out the last of the stars. She wasn't standing on the ground anymore; she was standing on the threshold of something impossibly deep. She grabbed the Heartstone, its heat searing her palm, and slammed it into her bag. The sudden darkness was absolute, a heavy, velvet void that surged against her eyes. She felt the entity’s presence mere inches from her ear, a freezing breath that whispered a name she didn't recognize, though it vibrated with the weight of long-forgotten history. "You have no claim here." The entity let out a sound like a shattered mirror. It didn't lunge. It retracted, dissolving back into the shadows of the oaks, its eyes lingering for an extra second, a constellation of white pinpricks hanging in the blackness. The grove groaned once more, a long, subsiding sigh that stirred the dead leaves into a cyclone. She turned and sprinted, her lungs burning, the mud slicking her boots. Every shadow looked like an extended, grasping limb. She didn't look back at the stones, even when the wind took on the distinct, mocking cadence of a laugh. She pushed through the boundary line, the air transitioning from the thick, frozen rot of the grove back to the damp, cool drizzle of a London night. She skidded to a halt on the pavement of the park. The streetlights flickered ahead, casting long, normal shadows that held no hidden eyes. She pressed her hand to her chest, her palm blistering where the Heartstone brushed against it through the fabric. She didn't stop until the row of houses near the bar came into view, the familiar neon sign humming an electric, grounded tune. Even then, she didn't look over her shoulder. She walked fast, her ears ringing with the phantom sound of a hundred voices whispering in her own throat.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:32:16.846Z" 5/10/2026, 1:32:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"vibrated"
count2
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"magnetic"
count1
10
word"output"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"navigated"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count2
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"raced"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"searing"
count1
19
word"velvet"
count1
20
word"shattered"
count1
21
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"loomed"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"rhythmic"
7"vibrated"
8"scanned"
9"magnetic"
10"output"
11"pulsed"
12"navigated"
13"could feel"
14"familiar"
15"profound"
16"raced"
17"tension"
18"searing"
19"velvet"
20"shattered"
21"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
82.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1481
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1437
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora3
Heartstone7
Pendant1
London3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shadows that seemed to congregate around the base of the stones"
1"quite a growl; it resembled the groan of tectonic plates shifting miles beneath the surface"
2"looked like an extended, grasping limb"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1481
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean49.37
std31.39
cv0.636
sampleLengths
073
150
29
389
45
595
68
771
838
93
1093
1145
125
1373
1471
153
1665
1762
1872
195
2067
2162
226
2374
2458
2558
265
2756
2867
2993
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was standing"
1"wasn't standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences103
ratio0.078
matches
0"Motion flickered at the periphery of her vision—a jagged shift in the geometry of the oaks—but when she snapped her head toward the disturbance, nothing remained except for the swaying of dark, spindly branches."
1"It wasn't quite a growl; it resembled the groan of tectonic plates shifting miles beneath the surface."
2"It didn't howl through the trees; it whistled, a shrill, melodic tone that rose and fell like a funeral dirge."
3"The entity didn't speak, but a sound erupted from its chest—a wet, bubbling rasp that sounded remarkably like her own voice, stripped of its inflection."
4"The sound didn't come from the entity alone; it seemed to leach out of the stones themselves, vibrating from the very atmosphere."
5"The entity’s features began to cycle through familiar faces: the sharp, angular jaw of her father; the soft, worried brow of her mother; the cruel smirk of the man who had driven her to London."
6"Each visage held the same expression—a look of profound, hollow despair."
7"She wasn't standing on the ground anymore; she was standing on the threshold of something impossibly deep."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1444
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"cold, moss-covered grit"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.0221606648199446
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006232686980609419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean14.38
std7.48
cv0.52
sampleLengths
027
121
211
314
48
519
623
79
88
916
1013
1118
1234
135
143
1511
1624
1718
1812
197
2020
218
2224
2317
242
2511
2617
274
288
2926
303
3114
3220
3322
346
3517
3614
3719
386
3920
405
419
4216
4318
4414
4516
4617
473
487
4912
31.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.23300970873786409
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences94
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Its faint, crimson rhythm accelerated,"
2"She stood before the ancient"
3"They loomed as black, jagged"
4"It contained a hollow, ringing"
5"She narrowed her eyes, straining"
6"She stepped over the threshold."
7"Her breath bloomed in a"
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"She pulled it from underneath"
10"It wasn't quite a growl;"
11"She scanned the perimeter."
12"It didn't howl through the"
13"She reached for the small"
14"Her mind ticked through the"
15"She took another step, and"
16"It didn't land in the"
17"It hovered an inch above"
18"It possessed the suggestion of"
19"It stood seven feet tall,"
ratio0.532
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences94
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"Its faint, crimson rhythm accelerated,"
3"She stood before the ancient"
4"They loomed as black, jagged"
5"The silence that followed her"
6"It contained a hollow, ringing"
7"A cluster of brambles nearby"
8"She narrowed her eyes, straining"
9"Motion flickered at the periphery"
10"She stepped over the threshold."
11"The temperature plummeted."
12"Her breath bloomed in a"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"The Heartstone pulse intensified, a"
15"She pulled it from underneath"
16"The crimson surface bled light"
17"A low, guttural vibration emanated"
18"It wasn't quite a growl;"
19"The air grew heavy with"
ratio0.926
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Even through the layers of"
1"To turn was to acknowledge"
2"Even then, she didn't look"
ratio0.032
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount25
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park possessed a density that pressed against Aurora’s eardrums, a thick, stagnant quality that turned the simple act of breathing into a ch…"
1"Inside the perimeter, the wildflowers stood unnaturally tall, their petals shimmering with a phosphorescence that mocked the dim glow of the London outskirts."
2"It contained a hollow, ringing quality, as if the grove itself swallowed sound to study it."
3"She narrowed her eyes, straining against the shadows that seemed to congregate around the base of the stones."
4"Beneath her boots, the earth felt spongy and wrong, giving way with a wet, sucking sound that echoed far too loudly in the stillness."
5"The Heartstone pulse intensified, a rhythmic thrumming that vibrated through her teeth."
6"The crimson surface bled light into the dark, casting long, distorted shadows that danced like marionettes against the ancient rock."
7"She took another step, and the ground hummed in response, a discordant note that made her drop the pendant."
8"It hovered an inch above the soil, its light spinning, painting the ground in concentric circles of deep, bruised red."
9"Aurora backed away, her boots scraping over dry leaves that crunched with the sound of snapping bone."
10"The entity didn't speak, but a sound erupted from its chest—a wet, bubbling rasp that sounded remarkably like her own voice, stripped of its inflection."
11"The Heartstone pulsed, turning a blinding violet that forced her to shield her eyes."
12"The stone felt warm to the touch, alive with a faint, throbbing rhythm that matched the Heartstone’s frantic heartbeat."
13"The entity stepped closer, its height distorting, shrinking and expanding as it navigated the space."
14"Its hand was a cluster of gnarled, blackened roots that ended in sharp, obsidian points."
15"She could feel the draft radiating from them, a freezing vacuum that threatened to draw the moisture right out of her pores."
16"The entity’s features began to cycle through familiar faces: the sharp, angular jaw of her father; the soft, worried brow of her mother; the cruel smirk of the …"
17"They stared through her, as if she were a ghost haunting their reality."
18"A crack raced down the center of the stone behind her, hairline and white, spilling a strange, golden ichor that hissed as it hit the grass."
19"The tall, ancient oaks bent until their crowns touched, forming a roof of tangled canopy that blotted out the last of the stars."
20"The sudden darkness was absolute, a heavy, velvet void that surged against her eyes."
21"She felt the entity’s presence mere inches from her ear, a freezing breath that whispered a name she didn't recognize, though it vibrated with the weight of lon…"
22"It retracted, dissolving back into the shadows of the oaks, its eyes lingering for an extra second, a constellation of white pinpricks hanging in the blackness."
23"She turned and sprinted, her lungs burning, the mud slicking her boots."
24"The streetlights flickered ahead, casting long, normal shadows that held no hidden eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.7522%