| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1082 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1082 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "depths" | | 5 | "shattered" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "constructed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "synchronized" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| 78.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "was terrified" | | 1 | "d in relief" | | 2 | "filled with fear" | | 3 | "d with fear" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1074 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1073 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 4 | | Quinn | 10 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | London | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Saint" | | 6 | "Christopher" | | 7 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed unnatural almost as if the metal had yielded to him" | | 1 | "tasted like pennies" | | 2 | "jewelry that seemed to pulse with a dim, internal light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1074 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 46.7 | | std | 25.1 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 97 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 75 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 30 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "was terrified" | | 1 | "were cracked" | | 2 | "was slumped" |
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| 87.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was jarring" | | 1 | "was weaving" | | 2 | "was tending" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.139 | | matches | | 0 | "Twenty yards ahead, the suspect—a twitchy man in a soaked trench coat—stumbled over a curb." | | 1 | "She glanced down at her worn leather watch; it was nearly midnight." | | 2 | "The man didn't stop to open the gate; he slid through a gap in the fence with a fluidity that seemed unnatural, almost as if the metal had yielded to him." | | 3 | "A foul, metallic scent wafted up from the depths—copper and old ozone." | | 4 | "She had heard the rumors in the whispers of informants—a black market for things that shouldn't exist, a place that shifted its location with every full moon." | | 5 | "The vendors weren't dressed for London; they wore heavy furs, shimmering silks, and masks carved from bone." | | 6 | "The creatures—for Quinn was no longer certain they were humans—didn't move out of his way; they parted for him with a synchronized, eerie reverence." | | 7 | "The eyes that met hers weren't all human—some were vertical slits, others were milky white, and some were void of pupils entirely." | | 8 | "She looked at the exit—the stairs that led back to the rain, the law, and the safety of the known world." | | 9 | "The truth wasn't on the surface; it was down here, in the rot and the magic and the shadows." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1083 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.028624192059095107 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009233610341643583 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 14.92 | | std | 7.87 | | cv | 0.528 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 37.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3194444444444444 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she looked at Herrera." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her center of" | | 1 | "He didn't look back, but" | | 2 | "He was terrified, and in" | | 3 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 4 | "She had staked this bar" | | 5 | "She glanced down at her" | | 6 | "She lunged into the alley," | | 7 | "It was a smell she" | | 8 | "She wasn't going to let" | | 9 | "She descended the stairs, her" | | 10 | "She had heard the rumors" | | 11 | "They sold vials of swirling," | | 12 | "She was out of her" | | 13 | "He had approached a stall" | | 14 | "He wore a Saint Christopher" | | 15 | "She looked at the exit—the" | | 16 | "His warm brown eyes weren't" | | 17 | "He knew exactly who she" | | 18 | "She thought of Morris." | | 19 | "She thought of the unexplained" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 24.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the pavement" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t run" | | 2 | "She kept her center of" | | 3 | "He didn't look back, but" | | 4 | "He was terrified, and in" | | 5 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 6 | "The Raven's Nest." | | 7 | "She had staked this bar" | | 8 | "The suspect had just emerged" | | 9 | "Quinn’s left wrist felt heavy." | | 10 | "She glanced down at her" | | 11 | "The rain intensified, turning the" | | 12 | "Harlow didn't hesitate." | | 13 | "She lunged into the alley," | | 14 | "The alley ended abruptly at" | | 15 | "The man didn't stop to" | | 16 | "Quinn reached the gate and" | | 17 | "A foul, metallic scent wafted" | | 18 | "It was a smell she" | | 19 | "The memory hit her like" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect had just emerged from the Nest, clutching a leather satchel to his chest as if it contained his own beating heart." | | 1 | "The sound of the city faded, replaced by a low, rhythmic thrumming that felt more like a heartbeat than machinery." | | 2 | "She had heard the rumors in the whispers of informants—a black market for things that shouldn't exist, a place that shifted its location with every full moon." | | 3 | "They sold vials of swirling, iridescent liquids, blackened grimoires bound in skin, and jewelry that seemed to pulse with a dim, internal light." | | 4 | "There was no backup coming, no radio frequency that could reach this place, and no protocol for a market that sold banned alchemical substances." | | 5 | "The patient was slumped in a chair, his arm mangled in a way that defied anatomy, the bone protruding at an impossible angle." | | 6 | "He wore a Saint Christopher medallion around his neck that glinted under the flickering amber lights of the market." | | 7 | "The eyes that met hers weren't all human—some were vertical slits, others were milky white, and some were void of pupils entirely." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |