Run: 2026-05-10-01KR91HK3H1EBQ9W2HXJJR6E6S

Run Details

Duration:
7.0s
Cost:
$0.002377
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in London did not fall so much as it materialized, a freezing, microscopic mist that clung to Harlow Quinn’s coat and turned the pavement into a slick, obsidian mirror. She kept her head down, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered against her scalp, her eyes tracking the rhythmic slap of soft-soled shoes against wet concrete. She kept her distance, an easy fifty yards, moving with the practiced, predatory grace of a woman who had spent nearly two decades navigating the city’s concrete veins. Ahead of her, Tomás Herrera rounded the corner onto a side street that bled away from the main thoroughfare. He was moving with a frantic, uneven urgency that pricked at the back of Quinn’s neck. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. It was just past two in the morning, and the shadow she was tailing was supposed to be in a flat in Brixton, not skulking toward the disused sprawl of the Northern Line tracks beneath Camden. Quinn rounded the corner and saw him pause. Tomás reached up to touch the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat, a nervous habit she had cataloged weeks ago during her surveillance. He looked over his shoulder, his olive-toned features sharpened by the sickly orange glow of a streetlight. He saw her. He didn't run like a common crook; he bolted. Quinn surged forward, the soles of her boots finding purchase on the slick grime of the back alley. "Herrera! Stop!" she barked, her voice cutting through the hiss of the rain with military precision. He gave no reply, ducking into the maw of an alleyway that led toward the industrial dereliction of the old Tube entrance. Quinn pivoted, her sharp jaw set, her breath coming in steady, controlled bursts despite the exertion. She reached into her coat pocket, her hand closing around her heavy service pistol, though she kept it holstered. She wanted him alive, specifically because of the things he knew about the things she refused to believe. She thought of DS Morris—of the way he had just ceased to exist, stripped away from reality in a heartbeat of impossible cold. She remembered the official report, the clinical dismissal of the event as a gas leak complication, and the way the higher-ups had looked through her rather than at her whenever she brought it up. If Tomás was connected to the same necrotic shadow that had taken her partner, she wasn't letting him disappear into the dark without a fight. The entrance to the abandoned station was a cavernous wound in the earth, boarded up with rotted plywood and rusted iron sheeting. Tomás didn't hesitate; he tore a jagged, pale object from his satchel—a bone token—and jammed it into a narrow slot near a graffiti-stained doorway. The metal grunted in protest, a sound of heavy gears grinding behind the brickwork, and the barrier swung inward just enough for a slip of a man to squeeze through. Quinn reached the gate seconds later. The air here smelled of ozone and wet hair, a metallic tang that made the hair on her arms stand up. She pressed her face to the gap. Beyond, a descending staircase spiraled down into a humid, amber-lit haze. The sounds of the city—the distant sirens, the hum of traffic—were severed as if by a blade. In their place came a rhythmic, low-frequency thrum that vibrated in her marrow. This was the Veil Market. She had seen the files, the whispered rumors in the station basement, the redacted mentions of this place in cold cases that had gone wrong. It was a tumor of the supernatural festering under the city. Tomás was already descending the stairs, his silhouette dancing against the flickering bioluminescent lichen that clung to the tunnel walls. He moved toward a hive of activity where the shadows seemed to fold inward, populated by figures that didn't move quite right—heads turning too slowly, limbs shifting with the disjointed cadence of broken clocks. Peddlers sat on overturned crates, their stalls laden with jars filled with swirling, opalescent liquids and objects that defied the laws of physics, hovering an inch above the grimy tiles. Quinn pulled her pistol, the weight of it a phantom comfort. She stood at the threshold, her boot hovering over the first step of the descent. A cold panic, sharp and irrational, flared in her chest. Her training yelled at her to retreat, to call for backup, to contain the sector. But there was no backup for this. The police—her police—would look at the maps of the Northern Line and see empty tunnels. They wouldn't see the sprawling, impossible bazaar that pulsed with a life force that felt like a parasite wrapped around the city’s heart. She thought of the day Morris vanished. The same smell—that ozone, the ozone of a blown fuse and crushed flowers. She took the first step. The air grew significantly warmer, heavy with the scent of dried blood and old, burnt parchment. Halfway down, a vendor with eyes like polished obsidian looked up, his face wrapped in bandages that moved like a cocoon. He seemed to recognize her, or perhaps he simply recognized the scent of a human soul that had wandered too far from the light. He tapped a glass vial that rattled with human teeth. The market stretched out like an infinite, rotting lung. Quinn caught sight of Tomás again near a cluster of velvet-draped stalls. He was pleading with someone, his hands gesturing wildly, the scar on his left forearm gleaming in the harsh, flickering lamplight. He looked desperate, cornered, and deeply terrified. Quinn stepped onto the station platform, the concrete crumbling beneath her feet. She was an intruder in a world that didn't obey the laws of the Metropolitan Police. Every instinct she possessed, every year of disciplined, decorated service, warned her that she was walking into a trap, or worse, an exit from which there was no return. She looked toward the deep tunnels, where the darkness was literal, alive, and hungry. Tomás was moving toward the platform edge, intent on vanishing into the deep dark. For a flicker of an instant, she saw the silhouette of a man standing near the edge—a shape that shifted and blurred, a man who might have been Morris, if death hadn't claimed him three years ago. The figure raised a hand, pointing toward the tunnels, then dissolved into a plume of gray ash that drifted upward into the stagnant air. Quinn’s heart hammered against her ribs, a violent, uneven tempo. She didn't turn back. She leveled her gaze at the path Tomás had taken and started to run, the sound of her own heartbeat deafening in the silence of the underground. She didn't know what she was chasing, or if she was already the one being hunted, but she was going to have her answers, even if they required her to burn down the entire world to get them.
created_at"2026-05-10T13:34:35.643Z" 5/10/2026, 1:34:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1167
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"cataloged"
count1
3
word"maw"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"navigating"
2"cataloged"
3"maw"
4"vibrated"
5"dancing"
6"weight"
7"pulsed"
8"velvet"
9"gleaming"
10"flicker"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"looked desperate"
54.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1157
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1155
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Tomás8
Herrera1
Brixton1
Northern2
Line2
Camden1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Morris3
Veil1
Market1
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Line"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
8"Market"
9"Police"
places
0"London"
1"Brixton"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a parasite wrapped around the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1157
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
72.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean57.85
std23.44
cv0.405
sampleLengths
083
181
251
39
434
575
682
776
875
941
1084
1126
1270
1320
1476
1549
1657
1728
1861
1979
83.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences65
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was connected"
2"were severed"
3"being hunted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was tailing"
1"wasn't letting"
2"was already descending"
3"was pleading"
4"was walking"
5"was chasing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences65
ratio0.123
matches
0"He didn't run like a common crook; he bolted."
1"She thought of DS Morris—of the way he had just ceased to exist, stripped away from reality in a heartbeat of impossible cold."
2"Tomás didn't hesitate; he tore a jagged, pale object from his satchel—a bone token—and jammed it into a narrow slot near a graffiti-stained doorway."
3"The sounds of the city—the distant sirens, the hum of traffic—were severed as if by a blade."
4"He moved toward a hive of activity where the shadows seemed to fold inward, populated by figures that didn't move quite right—heads turning too slowly, limbs shifting with the disjointed cadence of broken clocks."
5"The police—her police—would look at the maps of the Northern Line and see empty tunnels."
6"The same smell—that ozone, the ozone of a blown fuse and crushed flowers."
7"For a flicker of an instant, she saw the silhouette of a man standing near the edge—a shape that shifted and blurred, a man who might have been Morris, if death hadn't claimed him three years ago."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1174
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"humid, amber-lit haze."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.027257240204429302
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007666098807495741
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean17.8
std8.76
cv0.492
sampleLengths
031
124
228
319
416
510
636
78
823
917
103
119
1218
1316
1422
1516
1619
1718
1823
1934
2025
2122
2224
2330
246
2521
267
2711
2817
2913
305
3125
3211
3320
3434
3530
3611
3715
3810
3915
407
4115
4223
437
4413
455
4616
4721
4824
4910
35.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences65
matches
0"She kept her head down,"
1"She kept her distance, an"
2"He was moving with a"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"It was just past two"
5"He looked over his shoulder,"
6"He saw her."
7"He didn't run like a"
8"she barked, her voice cutting"
9"He gave no reply, ducking"
10"She reached into her coat"
11"She wanted him alive, specifically"
12"She thought of DS Morris—of"
13"She remembered the official report,"
14"She pressed her face to"
15"She had seen the files,"
16"It was a tumor of"
17"He moved toward a hive"
18"She stood at the threshold,"
19"Her training yelled at her"
ratio0.492
6.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain in London did"
1"She kept her head down,"
2"She kept her distance, an"
3"He was moving with a"
4"She checked the worn leather"
5"It was just past two"
6"Quinn rounded the corner and"
7"Tomás reached up to touch"
8"He looked over his shoulder,"
9"He saw her."
10"He didn't run like a"
11"Quinn surged forward, the soles"
12"she barked, her voice cutting"
13"He gave no reply, ducking"
14"Quinn pivoted, her sharp jaw"
15"She reached into her coat"
16"She wanted him alive, specifically"
17"She thought of DS Morris—of"
18"She remembered the official report,"
19"The entrance to the abandoned"
ratio0.908
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"If Tomás was connected to"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The rain in London did not fall so much as it materialized, a freezing, microscopic mist that clung to Harlow Quinn’s coat and turned the pavement into a slick,…"
1"She kept her distance, an easy fifty yards, moving with the practiced, predatory grace of a woman who had spent nearly two decades navigating the city’s concret…"
2"He gave no reply, ducking into the maw of an alleyway that led toward the industrial dereliction of the old Tube entrance."
3"If Tomás was connected to the same necrotic shadow that had taken her partner, she wasn't letting him disappear into the dark without a fight."
4"In their place came a rhythmic, low-frequency thrum that vibrated in her marrow."
5"Tomás was already descending the stairs, his silhouette dancing against the flickering bioluminescent lichen that clung to the tunnel walls."
6"He moved toward a hive of activity where the shadows seemed to fold inward, populated by figures that didn't move quite right—heads turning too slowly, limbs sh…"
7"They wouldn't see the sprawling, impossible bazaar that pulsed with a life force that felt like a parasite wrapped around the city’s heart."
8"He tapped a glass vial that rattled with human teeth."
9"He was pleading with someone, his hands gesturing wildly, the scar on his left forearm gleaming in the harsh, flickering lamplight."
10"For a flicker of an instant, she saw the silhouette of a man standing near the edge—a shape that shifted and blurred, a man who might have been Morris, if death…"
11"The figure raised a hand, pointing toward the tunnels, then dissolved into a plume of gray ash that drifted upward into the stagnant air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
69.5868%